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A cool wind blew from the north, curling across

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all fixed, thanks!

Arcs

'system was lasted much longer' -> 'system lasted much longer'

Corwin Amber

'like the rest of the those present' -> 'like the rest of those present'

Corwin Amber

'more less perfect form' this needs to be fixed

Corwin Amber

'as power as' -> 'as powerful as'

Corwin Amber

'Silverite to that she' -> 'Silverite that she'

Corwin Amber

'he was first, bewildered' -> 'he was at first, bewildered'

Corwin Amber

'for had definitely' -> 'for he had definitely'

Corwin Amber

Ha! That's a typo. Fixed~

Arcs

Mood LIGHTNING. Typo, or accidental genius? Also, I feel like when you start casually throwing EF5 tornadoes at your enemies, it's time to pay someone to stand behind you and whisper in your ear "You're only a man." Maybe certain archmages wouldn't be such colossal dickbags if they had a Memento Mori to keep them grounded.

Niraada

Erick needs to hire that band to play all of his larger battles!

Dax

We needed the good old "Song of Storms" Occarina solo for extra damage.

Luis Costa


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