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Added 2020-05-01 19:45:20 +0000 UTCErick stared at the ceiling, waiting for the sk
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fixed, thanks!
Arcs
2020-05-06 23:46:45 +0000 UTCThank you so much!
Arcs
2020-05-06 19:48:55 +0000 UTCDamn it, pressed enter again. Here are some typos: - "you must thread a thin road" --> Tread (unless you can thread a way?) - "What is frick that" --> What the frick is that (I guess that's what you wanted to say)
Earfallas Blanc
2020-05-06 19:37:27 +0000 UTCA lot of important stuff happening this chapter! Thank you as always! I just realized how much I love your way of writing, one of the major parts of why I like your story so much. All the little details, random thoughts from Eric that flesh him out like a relatable person, and how natural everything flows into each other... It's awesome and I love it.
Earfallas Blanc
2020-05-06 19:34:18 +0000 UTCYou are correct! That is a mistake. fixed that whole section
Arcs
2020-05-02 04:49:10 +0000 UTCif that one is correct, then the sentence before is incorrect, since the word 'but' doesn't work. So 'Even still, I suggest you go with Ophiel' should be 'Even still, I suggest you don't go with Ophiel'
Corwin Amber
2020-05-02 04:36:56 +0000 UTCThat one is also correct as written. If Erick goes to the Wasteland Kingdoms with his familiar, he will be looked down upon.
Arcs
2020-05-02 04:26:01 +0000 UTC'But if you go with your [Familiar]' I think you meant to say 'But if you don't go with your [Familiar],'
Corwin Amber
2020-05-02 03:56:35 +0000 UTCThey left the D&D manual in the car!
Lessthan
2020-05-02 03:42:16 +0000 UTC'Geodes' is correct. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Geode as in what Ar'Kendrithyst used to be.
Arcs
2020-05-02 01:34:40 +0000 UTC'anything from the Geodes' Geodes -> Goddess (or whatever you meant)
Corwin Amber
2020-05-02 01:27:26 +0000 UTCYes; a naturally forming diamond would have problems being spherical, but even an unnatural diamond would have problems. They're naturally cubic shaped. But then again, nothing is a natural spherical shape. Not even buckyballs are truly spherical.
Arcs
2020-05-02 00:51:07 +0000 UTCAs a minor aside, I’m not sure it is possible for a diamond to be polished into a sphere. I could be wrong be I think the cleavage and fracture properties of the mineral preclude this.
Obran
2020-05-02 00:36:50 +0000 UTCMy guess would be that Jane could help with the new stats being a thing, from all her time with DnD.
PloofDoodle
2020-05-01 21:37:39 +0000 UTCI like that Eric is struggling with who he was and who he wants to be. I'm intrigued by the new stat. Good chapter
Bloodorange17
2020-05-01 21:26:18 +0000 UTCThere was an almost-backslide, yes, but other people stepped up and shut him down. As for the rest, it is a developing situation~ Thanks for reading!
Arcs
2020-05-01 20:59:35 +0000 UTCThe giving rings to children and trying to disseminate Familiar seems like a return to chapter 30 Erick. And he certainly shouldn't be angry with the lady running the orphanage for telling him that people can and will murder children for those rings. Also, him saying that he's killed all the hunters makes it seem like he thinks hunters are a different species, they're just adventurers who've killed adventurers. Also also, finding out one of those "trustworthy" people have already spread the Familiar spell to a government run mage guild should really put the kibosh on his whole "give magic to specific well intentioned people" scheme.
Gardor
2020-05-01 20:43:58 +0000 UTC
