081 - Start of Book 4
Added 2020-04-20 00:42:47 +0000 UTCA crowd gathered around Erick’s front door just
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Damn, I always press enter to add more, and I always end up having to write a second comment. Thank you for the chapter! I finally have time to read again ~
Earfallas Blanc
2020-05-06 14:06:23 +0000 UTC"Bulan smiled." --> Bulgan
Earfallas Blanc
2020-05-06 14:04:39 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks!
Arcs
2020-04-22 17:02:19 +0000 UTCConsistency: Shadelings x 10 vs shadelings x 1. Sugar Cactus x 2 vs sugar cactus x 4. Wayfarer's Guild x 9 vs Wayfarer's guild x 1. West x 1 vs west x 6.
NorkNork
2020-04-22 13:28:41 +0000 UTCDamn, it's scary how strong the Shades really are. Basically all archmages with extra powers. Still, this seems strange. His location is going to become known to Spur eventually, and probably not TOO far in the future, and I can't imagine them not putting in the resources to nuke Bulgand and his city from orbit with Erik and whatever other archmages they can hire. He's strong, but I can't imagine he will be able to survive 3 archmages who know what they are getting into.
J H
2020-04-22 00:59:36 +0000 UTCHe's a shade so I'd say nuke it with as much magical fire as the attendant archmages of spur are capable of.
Althaelus
2020-04-20 22:48:27 +0000 UTCLoved it! Thank you for the chapter!
Lessthan
2020-04-20 13:10:35 +0000 UTCBulgan wasn't fully a Shade before, right? But now he's fully come into his power? That's cool. I am interested to see how the people of Spur handle the existence of Candlepoint
BigBuckler
2020-04-20 02:53:25 +0000 UTCall fixed, thanks!
Arcs
2020-04-20 02:16:02 +0000 UTC'I have seen' -> 'I have not seen'
Corwin Amber
2020-04-20 02:14:48 +0000 UTC'compost pile redo' -> 'compost pile and redo'
Corwin Amber
2020-04-20 02:12:37 +0000 UTC'Another part of demanded' -> 'Another part of him demanded' OR 'Another part demanded'
Corwin Amber
2020-04-20 02:06:32 +0000 UTC'Bulgan made a show of breaking the wall again' Fixed, thanks
Arcs
2020-04-20 01:49:29 +0000 UTC'Bulgan show of breaking the Wall again' -> sentence needs to be fixed
Corwin Amber
2020-04-20 01:47:56 +0000 UTCfixed~
Arcs
2020-04-20 01:40:34 +0000 UTCHe's a Shade now!
Arcs
2020-04-20 01:39:35 +0000 UTC'room, a the air' -> sentence needs to be fixed
Corwin Amber
2020-04-20 01:39:18 +0000 UTCDamn, was Bulgan always this strong?
Alex Graham
2020-04-20 01:38:38 +0000 UTCMe too :) thanks for the chapter...going to read it now lol
Corwin Amber
2020-04-20 00:52:47 +0000 UTCHaven't read it yet. I'm just so excited!
Lessthan
2020-04-20 00:49:37 +0000 UTC