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081 - Start of Book 4

A crowd gathered around Erick’s front door just

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Damn, I always press enter to add more, and I always end up having to write a second comment. Thank you for the chapter! I finally have time to read again ~

Earfallas Blanc

"Bulan smiled." --> Bulgan

Earfallas Blanc

Fixed, thanks!

Arcs

Consistency: Shadelings x 10 vs shadelings x 1. Sugar Cactus x 2 vs sugar cactus x 4. Wayfarer's Guild x 9 vs Wayfarer's guild x 1. West x 1 vs west x 6.

NorkNork

Damn, it's scary how strong the Shades really are. Basically all archmages with extra powers. Still, this seems strange. His location is going to become known to Spur eventually, and probably not TOO far in the future, and I can't imagine them not putting in the resources to nuke Bulgand and his city from orbit with Erik and whatever other archmages they can hire. He's strong, but I can't imagine he will be able to survive 3 archmages who know what they are getting into.

J H

He's a shade so I'd say nuke it with as much magical fire as the attendant archmages of spur are capable of.

Althaelus

Loved it! Thank you for the chapter!

Lessthan

Bulgan wasn't fully a Shade before, right? But now he's fully come into his power? That's cool. I am interested to see how the people of Spur handle the existence of Candlepoint

BigBuckler

all fixed, thanks!

Arcs

'I have seen' -> 'I have not seen'

Corwin Amber

'compost pile redo' -> 'compost pile and redo'

Corwin Amber

'Another part of demanded' -> 'Another part of him demanded' OR 'Another part demanded'

Corwin Amber

'Bulgan made a show of breaking the wall again' Fixed, thanks

Arcs

'Bulgan show of breaking the Wall again' -> sentence needs to be fixed

Corwin Amber

fixed~

Arcs

He's a Shade now!

Arcs

'room, a the air' -> sentence needs to be fixed

Corwin Amber

Damn, was Bulgan always this strong?

Alex Graham

Me too :) thanks for the chapter...going to read it now lol

Corwin Amber

Haven't read it yet. I'm just so excited!

Lessthan


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