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Added 2020-03-10 01:16:22 +0000 UTCErick had originally planned to go to Oceanside
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All fixed, thanks!
Arcs
2020-03-10 17:12:53 +0000 UTCnow you're thinking with magic~
Arcs
2020-03-10 17:09:29 +0000 UTCAn emergent coincidence, indeed!
Arcs
2020-03-10 17:09:12 +0000 UTC"Sunny perked up, hearing his name. He flickered five shades of green. " -- her name and She flickered? Consistency - You use "all stat" once and "all-stat" four times. Is Basic Spell capitalized or not? Two references this chapter, one cap'd the other not. Ditto Elemantassi x 2 vs elemantassi x 1. Also Mana Ocean x1 vs mana ocean x 2.
NorkNork
2020-03-10 15:15:03 +0000 UTCWhat a total coincidence that Jane wakes up after the dungeon is mostly done.
Arkeus
2020-03-10 11:56:27 +0000 UTCIs there a shaping equivalent to prismatic ward?
Pixelblade
2020-03-10 09:28:44 +0000 UTCI hope he can get first get the slime forms to max for all elements and then transition to the ooze forms like Jane, with no problems.
PloofDoodle
2020-03-10 09:13:43 +0000 UTCYay cute little dwagon-couatl. ^.^
Conrad Wong
2020-03-10 06:18:24 +0000 UTCfixed, tahnks!
Arcs
2020-03-10 05:21:18 +0000 UTC2 spots that use the word 'refuges' did you mean to use 'refugees'?
Corwin Amber
2020-03-10 05:11:47 +0000 UTCfixed, thanks!
Arcs
2020-03-10 04:56:30 +0000 UTC>academical I think one of these should be "alchemical". Thanks for the chapter.
Roberh Sedes
2020-03-10 04:00:48 +0000 UTCLove, love, love this story. Thank you for the chapter!
Lessthan
2020-03-10 02:05:49 +0000 UTC
