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Added 2019-12-31 21:23:22 +0000 UTCThe sun hung low on the sky, but still ascendin
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Finally caught up after a while of letting chapters pile up. I love this story so thanks and keep up the good work!
J H
2020-01-03 17:12:59 +0000 UTC... also fixed. thank you. whoopsie, looks like a few more typos than normal
Arcs
2020-01-01 06:00:40 +0000 UTC'If there were hidden in those walls passages' -> If there were hidden passages in those walls
Corwin Amber
2020-01-01 04:57:03 +0000 UTC'The soon discovered' the -> they
Corwin Amber
2020-01-01 04:56:03 +0000 UTCeh, he's an american and he was a social worker. while those are problems. Its a problem of scale and ratio. Bombings are rare in the US as a whole. Violent crime is also not really that high when you compare to a fantacy world with that much power imbalance and monsters running around it makes a really stark contrast. I mean you may be shot in a mugging but no one goes around killing whole cities and physically getting power from it.
A disgruntled nondescript squirrel
2020-01-01 03:47:11 +0000 UTCalso fixed, thanks
Arcs
2020-01-01 03:42:10 +0000 UTC'Looks like this spell' this -> a
Corwin Amber
2020-01-01 03:39:50 +0000 UTCFixed, thanks!
Arcs
2020-01-01 03:39:14 +0000 UTC'Though his guts and further down' though -> through
Corwin Amber
2020-01-01 03:32:35 +0000 UTCYes.
Arcs
2020-01-01 02:30:28 +0000 UTCSo Kirginatharp is Melemizargo grandson?
Call0013
2020-01-01 02:14:23 +0000 UTCI think the MC remembers earth through rose-tinted glasses. Violence is somewhat rare in most nations, but there isn't a day that goes by without a bomb going off somewhere and many times it is a lot of bombs.
Chris
2019-12-31 22:50:13 +0000 UTCSo much doom awaits in "safe" Oceanside!
Conrad Wong
2019-12-31 22:42:18 +0000 UTCBetter than filter but worse than an active chapter.
Seadrake
2019-12-31 22:21:36 +0000 UTCIt was a nice chapter but most of it felt... right, but just not as powerful and invested as your average chapter. Until the last 3-4 sentences. That was some spine tingling great work.
Seadrake
2019-12-31 22:07:43 +0000 UTCHappy new year folks
PloofDoodle
2019-12-31 21:48:27 +0000 UTC
