Demon lord: Latex demon p1-2
Added 2024-10-30 10:41:49 +0000 UTCOkay manage to finished the first two page! Begining of a long journey lol
If you see any mistake please tell me in th comment.
Comments
Love to see the sketch turn into a full colored piece of work. As for Grammar in the first page I'd just put an S at the end of Outsider considering Gilda would mean it plurally.
Corington
2024-10-31 07:00:24 +0000 UTCIt begins!
Arbiter
2024-10-30 20:08:19 +0000 UTCyeah
Stormfries
2024-10-30 16:56:58 +0000 UTCYES ITS HERE! Have you gotten better at coloring? Everything looks so well done, shading and all. I cant wait for more!
Original_Sin
2024-10-30 14:57:04 +0000 UTC@ibenz009 Here are the grammar changes: Page 1: "what is the meaning of this" to "WHAT TREACHERY IS THIS!?" "What is this thing!?" to "WHAT IS THIS FOUL CREATURE!?" "ANSWER ME!" TO "ANSWER ME ..." PAGE 2: "A few weeks later in the Ash Wood" to "A few weeks later in the ASHEN FOREST" "Can you demon hunters hurry up." to "Can you INQUISITORS hurry up?"
Arthur Yeung
2024-10-30 12:23:09 +0000 UTCLookin' good. Some small errors on the first page: "Did you... Did you lure me a trap!?" ↴ "Did you... Did you lure me into a trap!?". "Since you've taken such a good care of this poor refugee, Gilda. How can I not return a favor." ↴ "Since you've taken such good care of this poor refugee, Gilda, how can I not return the favor?" "But some advice from an ex-paladin: You really need to be more wary of an outsider." ↴ “But some advice from an ex-paladin: You really need to be more wary of outsiders.” "Espicailly the cute ones~." ↴ "Especially the cute ones~."
trigger_portal_cleanser
2024-10-30 10:50:12 +0000 UTCAll the more reason why Gilda is such a cute golem gal ^^
StarGazer
2024-10-30 10:44:02 +0000 UTC
