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Liquid mercury RE ch2 p17-18

Get another two page before the end of the month! 

If you find any mistake please feel free to post it in the comment.


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@ibenz009 I almost forgot: Page 2: Ceasefire in Effect.

Arthur Yeung

One minor nitpick: Most radio chatter tends to be minimalist and compact – as such, things like articles (a/an/the) or possessives (his/her/your) would usually be omitted for brevity. "Bird's-eye to Nest: Corporate Security team wiped out. Primary objective impossible. Please advise."

Benjamin Lawton

Those cat ears look great in Secunda, also the metallic reflections on their bodies are amazing.

Adolfo

@ibenz009 Page 1: Establishing link to unit personality fragment. Thank you, Secunda. Page 2: Commencing Personality Modification. Birdseye/Overwatch to Bravo Actual, your security Team One/Alpha Six is compromised/KIA. Primary objective is impossible, Please advise, How Copy? Roger That ... switching to Plan B. "All combat functions are terminated. Please contact your local platoon leader." Also, is Birdseye part of another security team? Or an individual that reports directly to "Iron"?

Arthur Yeung

those reflections are insane, very cool

Dan

Oooh nice, backstory :)

Eddie

SeKitty Cat

ElSalsaRey

Very good! I’m looking forward to more ^^

Arbiter

New pages? You really are spoiling us here!

Lewy60

Ooohhh Lord, where entering the next hot phase--

Proformic2015

And “advise” not “advice”

Canti

Oh loving their kitsune ears

StarGazer

It's primary in page 2

D Banks


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