Liquid mercury RE Chapter 2 p3-4
Added 2023-07-13 20:50:04 +0000 UTCAnother 2 page done.
As alway if you find any mistake please feel free to posti it in the comment.
Comments
Brilliant, as usual!
Arbiter
2023-07-14 03:35:16 +0000 UTCPrima's ass is one of the sexys there is. On the other hand, where did June get a knife so fast in her right hand? I think I'm overthinking it.
Adolfo
2023-07-13 22:27:57 +0000 UTCI think you meant “imbecilic” and “you’re in for a surprise”
Canti
2023-07-13 21:42:29 +0000 UTCThe coloring is really well done! A few things: Page 1 You['ve] made me blow him []to bits. You['re] in for a surprise, Ms. June! Page 2 ("Subjugating target." if it's still in process; but it looks here like she could already be restrained here? So "Target subjugated." might be better?)
Nepisa
2023-07-13 21:33:47 +0000 UTCGorgeous work as usual. I saw one minor grammar problem. The second to last word bubble on page 3 reads, "You in for a surprise, Ms. June!" I believe you meant for it to say "You're in for a surprise, Ms. June!"
Violet Wilk (BlueCherryWolf)
2023-07-13 21:15:37 +0000 UTCAlways like the changes you add in the transition from sketch to final draft. It think adds to the scene to see Prima's face up close in p4 before she grabs & subdue June. It makes the action panel in the middle feel like a natural progression to the bottom panel
M
2023-07-13 21:13:05 +0000 UTCHoly cow this is gorgeous
TF-Wizard
2023-07-13 20:53:09 +0000 UTC
