Demon lord chapter 2 p28-29 (end)

I’m looking forward to seeing next story, really.

Safefield

I hope to see a refomed demon lord, I want Aria to break the cycle by making peace between humans and demons!

Keimori

Great art and really well done. I wish I had the time and energy to do something like that.

Jaegar Media

29.1.2 us => you. {add a period at the end} 29.1.3 Gilda , => Gilda, prevailing ? => prevailing? {stray spaces} 29.2.4 it'll => it will {Dunno why exactly, but a contraction feels slightly too informal in this particular instance.} 29.3.1 My my, you have everything all planned out. Is this the wisdom of the Demon Lord hive mind? {Only a couple of minor changes, but it seemed more straightforward to write the whole thing out again for the sake of clarity.} 29.4.1 next my => next, my 29.4.2 Hmm, let's see. Looks like I need to find myself a new weapon. Maybe we can start a cult too while we're at it. 29.4.3 sound... => sounds promising, (my )Goddess. Shall we begin (our conquest )now? 29.4.4 time Gilda there => time, Gilda, there's For now, I think I'd like to rest (and relax )a little bit.

Asani

[] = pick one () = keep or delete 28.1.2 It won't even hurt, I just rearrange a few things in that cute little head of yours, and... {Now that I think about it, "wires" and "crossing them" probably don't make a lot sense in the context of a fantasy world. That ones on me. :P } Also: henchdemon . => henchdemon. {delete extra space} 28.1.3 Either way, you will do what I command. {I think what you had in the sketch works slightly better. It's punchier.} 28.2.1 You can let me decide your fate, 28.3.1 or you can chart your own path. 28.4.1 Sister, are you going to let [a miracle / the goddess] decide the fate of those people? 28.4.2 those people => them {These echoing phrases are an important part of the story, so I took another stab at them. Hopefully this fusion is an improvement.}

Asani

Seriously, buy yourself a nice steak dinner to celebrate, or whatever else you fancy. You deserve it!

Asani

Sure go ahead. Do't forget to credit me thought lol

ibenz009

Will there be a third chapter?I am looking forward to the next work!！！

bobo

Hi. Congratulations to everyone on the end of the second chapter. ibenz009 take a break, take a week off or draw whatever you want. Okay, think about what topic you want to do, a new job, maybe a one-shot?

Alexey Stratulat

I do have a couple questions left right now though. First up Aria’s horse certainly looks cool and modeled after her did the Demon Lord make it for her or did Aria corrupt her own normal horse? Lastly do you know what the Demon Lords next weapon will be yet, that is certainly something I look forward to in the future?

MagicCobra911

Awsome it is finally finished, I will say once more that I am still quite surprised that after 29 pages that you left this as wide open as you have, unlike part 1 I’m not even sure where you will go from here although of course I expect you to take a long hiatus from this series you have definitely earned it.

MagicCobra911

Good luck with that. Last post, he said he's planning a Liquid Mercury reboot comic - with pictures and dialogue!

Arthur Yeung

honestly, one of my favorite series you made, great work!

Evelyn

thanks for all of your hard work

Pascal

You did it! Great work!

ChaosbladeEX

congradulations on completing it. im not the only one that kind of wants to see what would have happened if she took the other choice?

ChaosOverlordZ

@ibenz009 Is it okay if I took the pictures with no text, write a story about the Demon Lord, and put the pictures and story together? Like a light novel?

Arthur Yeung

Awesome comic! Looking forward to more of your content in due course :)

Arbiter

I'm so glad, this story is so good, good job !

Hydeang

And it's done! Another fantastic story, loved how you tried something different instead of the Aria being mind controlled. Like still corrupted, but an anti hero demon. And especially love Gilda, just so expressive and playful for a golem. Overall, another fantastic addition to the Demon Lord series.

StarGazer

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blound pilot

Can't wait for the next part

blound pilot

And now to start planning for a chapter 3 XD