It was more dramatic with a different plot and ending.Good job.Looking forward to another story of the nun.
2021-12-04 18:05:06 +0000 UTC
It's good to see a happy ending once in a while. Good job!
remmy82
2021-12-04 07:55:24 +0000 UTC
😍😍
Alvis
2021-12-03 20:55:34 +0000 UTC
Even taking out the accidental redundant segment, I had some difficulty following what was supposed to be happening in this one. Seems like there may be some interesting ideas at play, though.
Lheriss
2021-12-03 19:54:52 +0000 UTC
could be fun if the ring doesnt just do that
like the nun picks it up and puts it on, and shes able to access the moment before it activated. she then uses the fact everyone there is time stopped by the ring to systematically take over each of their bodies, making an ultimate body for herself before returning to the present with another use of the ring
Kurada
2021-12-03 19:20:46 +0000 UTC
I assumed it was time reverse. Ring got used up from it.