A few images to give you an idea of the scene I'm currently working on...
I was stuck on the previous chapter for almost a week. It took me forever to get the dialogue, choreography, and tone right. Finally had a breakthrough on Sunday and got through that electric scene. It. Is. INTENSE. One of the most eye-opening, gut-wrenching relationship talks yet.
I would say the whole section I'm on is a cross between that London office chapter and the cabin scene at beginning of Bitter Heat. It's heated. Roth's unraveling, spiraling out of control. It's also sexy as hell... Not sure those typically go together, but you'll see what I mean later! Also, Roth's version of comfort is fucking the crap out of her, so that's what I'll be working on. Toodles!
Mia Knight
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