Backstory improvements
Added 2018-10-09 15:16:40 +0000 UTCHi people,
I got feedback from some people that they had trouble understanding the backstory between Jenny and Sarah.
So I made a few minor dialogue alterations at the start of the game to provide some additional info.
I uploaded the new version to the front page.
If any of you have a couple of minutes I could use some feedback, if this works better now.
The last change is right before the first sex scene, so you don`t need to play further than that. Unless you want to of course:)
I`ll also put a changelog as an attachment, if you have trouble spotting the new dialogue. The dialogue in () got replaced/changed.
Thx for your help. Bye.
Neverlucky
Comments
Thank you all for your help. I am glad I could make the backstory clearer.
2018-10-10 07:07:46 +0000 UTCthe game has version for android too? I intend to try to give a support with patreon too but before I need to leave my doubts clarified: D
2018-10-09 21:44:34 +0000 UTCI agree, never had any problem with that either. Thank you for making it more clear, for those who had though. Keep up your very good work :-)
TheNetsrac
2018-10-09 21:06:38 +0000 UTCI don't recall having any problems understanding their backstory, but if other people did then it's good that you changed it :)
PeeM
2018-10-09 20:47:09 +0000 UTCWill have a look... OK looks good to me.
MrKnobb
2018-10-09 17:04:57 +0000 UTCThanks
usa93
2018-10-09 15:33:25 +0000 UTC