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Eileen's DMs WIP

Added 2025-03-31 17:22:38 +0000 UTC

I don't know if this will be the actual title of the comic and the dialogue text is not final.

There will be a title page before this one but I think I'll save that one for last. It will probably be Robin's hand holding the phone which displays the title.

There will be at least 4 message conversations (this one is not over btw) before a scene with Robin and Eileen.

I also still have to think of names for these characters. Feel free to suggest. I think it's better if they're gender-neutral names but it's not really necessary.

EDIT: Page 2 sketch.

EDIT 2: Page 3 sketch.

EDIT 3: Added a disclaimer page I'm gonna include with this comic.

EDIT 4: Page 1 ink.

EDIT 5: Pages 2 and 3 ink. And I added some piercings in the first page.

EDIT 6: "Finished" page 1. The peeking bottom right picture is unfinished because I'll copy paste it from the next page. I'm not sure if I like the name or the way the contact info looks in the top left.

EDIT 7: Page 2's base colors and basic shading.

EDIT 8: Finished page 2 and copy pasted the duplicated picture to the first page. But I'm thinking I might need to make the lineart little bit darker in both pages.

EDIT 9: Page 3 base colors and shading.

EDIT 10: Finished page 3.

EDIT 11: Finished disclaimer page.

EDIT 12: Page 4 sketch. Non final text.

EDIT 13: Page 5 sketch. Non final text.

EDIT 14: Page 6 sketch. Non final text. After this page there's only one more character and then a quick scene with Eileen and Robin.

EDIT 15: Page 4 ink.

EDIT 16: Page 5 ink.

EDIT 17: Page 6 ink.

EDIT 18: Page 4 base colors and basic shading.

EDIT 19: Page 4 done. I haven't revised the dialogue yet though, I'll probably tweak the wording a bit and change a couple of words. Same for the other 2 pages. I also changed the girlfriend's hair to red on page 3.

Edit 20: Page 5 base colors and basic shading. I don't know if I'm feeling the name River, I might end up changing it.

Edit 21: Page 5 done. I think Rain sounds a bit more like a name than River, maybe that's just me not being super used to english names.

Edit 22: Page 6 base colors and basic shading.

Edit 23: Page 6 done.

Edit 24: Page 7 sketch. I'll tweak the dialogue later, as always.

Edit 25: Page 8 sketch.

Edit 26: Page 9 sketch.

Edit 27: Page 10 sketch.

Edit 28: Page 7 ink.

Edit 29: Page 8 ink.

Edit 30: Page 9 ink.

Edit 31: Finished page 7. I also changed a tiny bit of the dialogue.