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Text placement

Do you think it reads how I intend it to? I don't know if it feels natural/normal to read the "it's not fair" before the "what's that, cutie?".

I don't know, I feel like the curved line the bubbles form is decently easy to see but maybe it's not enough to make you read some bubbles in the oposite order.

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Haha yeah but maybe for this sort of comic is even more important for the reading experience to be smooth and don't take you out of what's going on in the story

DeprivedArt

To be fair.. I don’t think any of us are ever reading these … ONLY once >.>

Yakkish

Thank you. I might end up changing the placement

DeprivedArt

For sure took me a read or two but I liked it

Alexis_Egg


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