Unnecessarily long porn intro
Added 2024-04-01 05:26:33 +0000 UTCI don't know if the marriage jokes were working too well so I changed them to something else. Hopefully this works better. And hopefully I won't feel like changing it again in a few days when i re-read it.
I might put the 4 pages in this first badge because I feel like people might feel disappointed if there's no nsfw content at all in the badge.
Comments
Thank you! That's nice to hear. The "will you marry me?" in the previous iteration was supposed to be a callback too, but i'm not sure it was ovbious. Was mostly why i changed it. Glad it works better now!
DeprivedArt
2024-04-01 14:46:07 +0000 UTCAhh i'm glad you guys like it!
DeprivedArt
2024-04-01 14:40:58 +0000 UTCThis is great! “Are you supposed to stick your dick in crazy or not? I forget” is soooo good hahaha
Ari
2024-04-01 10:20:51 +0000 UTCYou definitely get a good idea of everybody's personalities with this dialogue, I really like it. Also the talk about gym showers circling back in "so what gym do you go to?" is so funny I almost spit out my drink.
Voidnaught
2024-04-01 07:00:31 +0000 UTC
