XaiJu
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Page 10 done!

There's not much to comment on this one. The pose you guys chose was better for visual impact with the perspective thing, so good choice there!

Her thought bubble covers the knocking sounds a bit because she's not fully paying attention to them.

Warmer colors and big panel for the intense moment and cool colors for the bottom one, where she's cooled down.

Not sure if the ending feels a bit sudden but i kinda wanna move on to the next thing.

And yea, I'll start a second poll with the 2 top options since the winner didn't get more than 50% votes. I'll leave this one up one more day since I forgot to pin it and there's a chance someone just didn't see it?

Page 10 done!

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