I changed it from "she gets carried away" to "she gets tricked".
I really wanted to make this one shorter but I just get carried away lol. I'll try to fit more panels in each page to compensate.
Anything might get changed.
Hope the way the script is written is not too confusing and you can actually tell what's going on. Also, keep in mind the dialogue is chat convos so there'll be emotes and stuff and it'll feel less dry.