The Dialogue So far
Added 2022-11-30 17:30:18 +0000 UTCHi everyone.
I'd like to ask for feedback on the dialogue so far of the set. So far, its been very gruelling to write anything decent for this set, so I would like to ask if what I made so far makes sense, or if it could be improved.
Thank you, and I hope to have this set finished soon.
Comments
I like it so far. Given the subject and the general theme, the dialogue makes perfect sense. It's building up to something good. I also like the cartoon bubbles and the font. Looks a lot better than just slapping text over the images.
CP
2022-11-30 23:54:26 +0000 UTC
