Asking for feedback on this powergirl sequence
Added 2022-04-22 14:27:58 +0000 UTCHi everyone.
I wanted to ask for feedback on this seqence of renders, inspired by Powergirl Issue #9. I've been trying to make it as good as possible, but sadly everyone i ask says it doesnt make sense or that its not clear what is happening. I want to improve that, so I'd like to ask for feedback on what would you suggest i need to include and improve - My own ideas arent enough.
I wont lie, this whole thing has sent me into a bit of a rut. For weeks now, i havent made a single render that's worth a damn and it doesnt matter how hard i try, it still turns out shit. The feeeling of ''everyones getting better and better while i stay the same'' is not helping either.
EDIT: Added a version of all three in one panel-style picture.
Comments
I think that you're doing great and i agree with saxman maybe some more renders in between will help provide a bit more context, from what I've seen from a couple other 3D artists they do a whole bunch of renders with different positions ideas and even types of settings then they put together the ones that look the best in together and then further tweak it once the renders are in the right order and what not else. They even do alternate versions like if they do a female version then they'll usually do a futa version as well for those who like it and sometimes even different skin tones and colours if they are feeling adventurous, so yeah theres lots you can do and i believe that you have what it takes. Take your time with planning it out and with thinking about anything else you wish to add to them it just takes a little bit of patience and an open intrigued mind to look at something, do a little bit of research, ask for feedback and then put something absolutely amazing out so keep up the great work take your time and do your best to have fun and if that doesn't work, step back and take a look at everything you have done so far it might help spark some inspiration π₯°π and sorry for the wall of textπ΅
General Cellron XD
2022-04-23 00:44:39 +0000 UTCi think its dope but tbh i liked that one that you said was a bitch to do the shadows but hey its your time not mine think about it im sure youll figure it out
charlie Horne
2022-04-22 23:09:53 +0000 UTCmaybe you need more renders in between these three to help fill in the action
saxman
2022-04-22 17:55:58 +0000 UTCMaybe have the sinister figure throwing the bag of groceries and have power girl more visibly block/ push it away?
Tannerbot
2022-04-22 14:57:32 +0000 UTC
