Is it wrong to Speak in a Dungeon? Chapter 11
Added 2023-03-01 23:42:15 +0000 UTCI do not own Danmachi/Jujutsu Kaisen or
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Thanks for the chapter, really enjoyed it and can’t wait for the next one. 10-15k words in a week is a good productivity, I think there is nothing to apologize for, but of course nobody would be against more chapters (｡•̀ᴗ-)✧
jambas
2023-03-02 19:11:41 +0000 UTCWay to set the scene for a fight. Good chap
Dirk Gent Lee
2023-03-02 15:23:17 +0000 UTCI. CANNOT. WAIT. Thanks for the chapter!
Rhyalys
2023-03-02 11:11:22 +0000 UTCI will go back and review my chapter again, I edited it yesterday at 2 am so that may be the reason, please excuse me and I hope you could still enjoy the chapter nonetheless. And all about Edias, would you hate a lion for following its instincts and killing a sheep? Would you force it to stop and go vegetarian? That’s all. Thank you for your observations! Without them I wouldn’t have known I had excessive run-on sentences in this chapter. I’m happy to hear that my story brightens up your day so much and I hope it continues doing so in the future. Thank you so much.
Anxiety Overlord
2023-03-02 10:36:32 +0000 UTCThank you so much! That means a lot to me and I’m glad you’re enjoying the story this much. I hope you’re well and safe as well!
Anxiety Overlord
2023-03-02 10:33:22 +0000 UTCI really am not sure yet but I’ll do my best to get it ASAP.
Anxiety Overlord
2023-03-02 10:32:30 +0000 UTCSo is the other chapter coming next week or in a couple of days?
Stephen
2023-03-02 04:31:09 +0000 UTCThe long wait was so well worth it. I enjoy the character growth and development shown. From his time with Ryuu prepping, to his talk with Edi. An can I just say thank you for developing Freya? You are one of the only few to do so since they get hung up on her seducing and sleeping with who she wants. Smh. Either way the chapter was well worth the wait and I cannot wait to see more. Your a solid writer dude, I hope you are well and safe!
Stanley Seymour
2023-03-02 00:54:16 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! I’m excited to witness the slaughter! Maybe i am just in a critical mood atm, but it felt like your writing contained far more run-on sentences than usual (it was most noticeable in the dialogue). I was curious about the MC saying he was going to make is familia into heroes. He does know that his girlfriend has the highest kill count in the history of the world, right? I feel like heroism and genocide don’t generally go together. Maybe that was him just talking out of his ass? About Edias, her entire existence revolves around killing adventurers. Is the MC ok with that? The dialogue between the two this chapter suggests that he’s not. Welp, those are all observations I had. Thanks again for posting! It always brightens my day to see another installment. I appreciate the work that you put into the fic.
Boyo
2023-03-02 00:38:13 +0000 UTCEnjoy the new chapter losers!
Anxiety Overlord
2023-03-01 23:42:35 +0000 UTC
