[ ZhongChizhu ] "Not just a show" (part 1/3)
Added 2022-05-27 16:44:04 +0000 UTC🔶💧🐍
"Not just a show" ◈ PART 1
◈ PART 2
I'm so ̶n̶e̶r̶v̶o̶u̶s̶ excited to finally show you the first part of the ZhongChizhu comic!! I've been working on this the whole month to make it the best I could (the husbands deserves the highest treatment). I was super enthusiast to be working on a new long comic since the December one and happy of seeing the improvements since then⁓!
I hope you enjoyed it!! ✨
Last but not least, A GALACTIC THANK YOU TO LEADEN MYR who beta read the comic and suggested variations to the dialogues which made it so much better!! Their attention to words and phrasing is fantastic and I'm so grateful for their contribution 💖
Comments
Omg I love everything about this, especially Baizhu's snake fangs and Zhongli's geo markings
LavastormSW
2022-07-21 16:51:13 +0000 UTCAaaah Jay your comments are always so nice! You said you kept re-reading the comic, and so I did with this essay haha 💕💕💕 Thanks for noticing all the little details here and there! And yep, Baizhu bit the brat hehe As for wedding rings: Baizhu and Zhongli are married, but the rings don't show in these panels because they're on the left hand and when their right hands show it's in a position which doesn't show the rings haha buuut the new hc is that Baizhu refuses to marry Childe until he'll stop being so reckless in fights (will it ever happen? lmao), so no ring for him (yet?) 👁
KiraShion
2022-05-29 19:38:23 +0000 UTCI. HAVE NO WORDS i am clutching my chest this is amazing thank you 💕❤️🔥
Moss
2022-05-29 07:31:02 +0000 UTCCan I first and foremost say something not related to this delicious work of art? I’m so glad you opened this Patreon. I feel like you’ve blossomed in confidence, in your art, in so many aspects and it’s been fun to see the journey so far. I know you were nervous/excited (Nervacited. An MLP reference. Go me) about sharing this but I’m so glad you’ve done it. I never thought of the dynamic of this ship before you shared them the first time and now I love them so very much. Each character is so beautifully unique on their own, and together, it's like an incredible explosion of fireworks. Okay here we go. I’m in love with the way you portray Baizhu. The cock ring (WITH THE GEO SYMBOL I SEE THAT), the nipple piercings, the belly one, the ankles, all the body jewelry is *Chef’s kiss*. The forked tongue, the fangies, the look of blissful expression, the need so clearly in his voice and expression. This is someone who knows what he wants and isn’t afraid to ask for it (Greedy too. Good for him. I don’t blame him one bit. Who wouldn’t want to be in his place?) And God if he doesn’t look so beautifully done by his lovers. Ajax is a buffet of delightful cuisine as well (I swear I’m not hungry; well for food anyway). I love the scars and the freckles you give him (And is it my imagination or does he have puncture wound/bites in his neck?). I’m also imagining the nipple piercings you always give him because I like that image in my brain too. The way he holds on to Baizhu as he fucks him (Who wouldn’t want to be in his place?). He’s experienced with Baizhu’s pleasure and enjoys indulging them both, ESPECIALLY if it means putting on a show for their Zhongli. And Zhongli. I LOVE, and I mean LOVE, your Zhongli (Especially love how you give him the Geo arms and dick). I’ve seen the different ships you’ve put him in and I’ve loved them all. And I know this sounds sappy (Because fictional character), but I feel like he blooms the most in the art you’ve done of him with Childe or Baizhu or both. The love he has for his lovers is so damn evident and I’m glad to be a witness. I’d lovingly enjoy the show he’s getting but I’d want to be involved too (Who wouldn’t want to be in his place? Yes I said that about all three. It’s not my fault. I envy them all in the best way lmao). I also love the fact that Childe still has pants and Zhongli is almost completely dressed still. That makes everything even sexier. Hang in there, Baizhu. I think you can manage (We know he can. But it’s fun to hear him struggle). Seriously, I looked at the comic and reread it like eighty times so far. I’m going to go for like 100 by the end of the night and I’m excited to see the next part (But take your time of course. It’s going to be so damn fantastic. Also, I was curious (And you probably have a reason) as to why there weren’t wedding bands in this one. Okay I think I’ve commented long enough again lol. Thank you for always giving us such gourmet meals every time. You really spoil us too much.
Jennoasis
2022-05-29 04:43:55 +0000 UTCKIRA I CAN'T WITH THIS AHHH Spoil him more though, Baizhu deserves it ♥w♥ Get you a man that holds you and looks at you like Ajax be looking and holding Bai-Bai
Antha Itasu
2022-05-28 10:42:51 +0000 UTCI could name a million things I love about this but of all things the one standing out to me at the moment is how cute Ajax looks in the panel where he's saying "you've been spoiling him too much." Cute, messy mop of hair, gorgeous blue eye, freckles spattered everywhere, smirk on his face, possessive full-body grip...that's the good shit right there.
Aewin
2022-05-28 01:51:51 +0000 UTCThank you so much!! And it's been fun to do, finally pouring all my love for them in a long and detailed project aaah 🧡💙💚
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:19:15 +0000 UTCAnd I'll feed you more!! 👏👏👏💕 They're simply perfecttt ooh gods 😩💦
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:17:54 +0000 UTCAnd I can't wait to show youuu!! I'm so close to finishing part 2 😤💙💙
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:16:34 +0000 UTCYESSS Baizhu marked Childe with a bite and Zhongli gave Zhuzhu a Geo infused cock ring, it gotta be clear they belong to each others 💘💦💦💦
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:15:45 +0000 UTCWe love slutty Baizhu, and honestly how could he not be with partners like ✨them✨ 🙏🙏🙏💦
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:13:32 +0000 UTCOoh Myr you're so precious! Lovely and so helpful, I'll never thank you enough 💘💘💘
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:13:19 +0000 UTCHehe a cock ring with that symbol means somebody's a bit possessive huh Mr. Zhongli? 😏😏😏
KiraShion
2022-05-28 00:10:15 +0000 UTCKIRA THIS IS SO PRETTY AND SO HOT HE IS SO PAMPERED I LOVE IT
falling_raine
2022-05-27 21:58:22 +0000 UTCDouble penetration is sooooo good idea, I can't wait for other parts. You did super great job with this one!
Tsuyami
2022-05-27 21:38:03 +0000 UTCThis is the best! I love it😭💖
Bunny
2022-05-27 20:08:54 +0000 UTCIM DECEASED, I NEED MORE. They just look so fucking goooodddd
Gretchen Färgrik
2022-05-27 17:52:15 +0000 UTCThis is so delicious 😋 I can't wait for the whole thing! 🤌🤤
jakthegreenfox
2022-05-27 17:33:33 +0000 UTCThe expressions and marks (freckles, bite marks, zhongli skin) are so beautiful
Unpopular_Onion
2022-05-27 17:31:54 +0000 UTCdkffkgds I love this so much 🥵🥵🥵 and the fang marks on childe, aaaaaah!!!
Keiki
2022-05-27 17:26:56 +0000 UTCTHIS IS SO GOOD OMG
Ray Veski
2022-05-27 17:13:21 +0000 UTCHELLOOOOO YEEESS PLEASEEEE SERVE THAT PRETTY BOY WHAT HE DESERVES ❤️❤️❤️
RexMirax
2022-05-27 16:54:48 +0000 UTCAgdkfkgkkeksshdfsk ❤❤❤❤❤❤ it's so good and I love them so much!!! Thanks to you, dearest Kira, you're the best ✨✨
Mir Ventura
2022-05-27 16:49:05 +0000 UTC"And yet you asked for it darling" Ahhhhhh
James Dibble
2022-05-27 16:48:17 +0000 UTCthe geo symbol on baizhu's cock ring!! 😍😍 baizhu is such an insatiable slut, I love it!!
MiQuerida
2022-05-27 16:46:19 +0000 UTC
