Page 2 Sketch - Crys Comic
Added 2019-01-27 04:28:17 +0000 UTCI really enjoy this first panel with Ash a lot. I'm tempted to redo her hair in the last panel.
As I was drawing this too I was conflicted on the gunner glasses and thought about maybe trying dark circles under her eyes... maybe... May just make her eyes pretty normal. Opinions?
Comments
Yep, those are on-ear headphones. I figure that or in-ear would be easiest for those without round ears, unless there are companies in this world that make custom headsets for those with special ears. Then again, those companies would probably reach out to well-known let's-players to demo for their intended audience.
Buck Caldwell
2019-01-27 04:47:42 +0000 UTCoriginally planned for the first panel to look more like it was a cam thing in the corner, but i like it more as a wide shot vs a square window. makes the panel balance better.
Shio
2019-01-27 04:47:40 +0000 UTCHow do you feel about alliteration? "Headphone hair" rolls off the tongue. She's a livestreamer/let's player, right? Does she include her face in a corner, or just her voice?
Buck Caldwell
2019-01-27 04:40:28 +0000 UTChmmm true, i could always change them to look more like the D.Va headset <a href="https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DRlme_ZVAAAC0Yu.jpg" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">https://pbs.twimg.com/media/DRlme_ZVAAAC0Yu.jpg</a>
Shio
2019-01-27 04:37:43 +0000 UTCi'm trying to figure out how to make that sound more natural in upcoming dialogue. its there, but need to fiddle with it a bit more
Shio
2019-01-27 04:36:42 +0000 UTCAlso, that's definitely the hair of a woman who's been wearing headphones for the last 18 hours or so.
Buck Caldwell
2019-01-27 04:34:14 +0000 UTCI like the bags under her eyes. Just how long has she been playing? Also, this panel raises a question I've never considered before - do they have to use on-the-ear headphones, or do they have around-the-ear headphones with custom cutouts for their eartips?
Buck Caldwell
2019-01-27 04:32:29 +0000 UTC
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