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What could be improved in my animations? πŸ€”

I've been looking over some of my animations these past couple months and I feel like they could be better. I want to know what I should put more of my time into when working on them. So vote below what you think is most important.

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Pt.2 Also the skin effects. Most of the time the characters models appear..... "unrendered".... and have this plastic-y flat texture on their skin. I think adding some oil, body sweat, and stuff like that would make the bodies feel more "alive" After all, theres a reason why most models use oil on their bodies for photoshoots, its just a flat upgrade. For the male models, having body sweat would really help sell the expereince too, like their so frustrated being unable to cum, trapped in their cages that their drenched in body sweat. Maybe some scratches, claw marks or the like would help sell the BDSM aspect too, like their mistress has been teasing & tormenting them for a while, so they have some light scratches and covered in sweat.

Red Velvet

I think the movements are reasonably realistic and fluid looking. Sure they could be better, but for what it is, and the frequency of updates you give, I think their fine and you should shift your priorities somewhere else. The facial animations are impressive right now, and don't really stand out as needing too much improvement. It helps that most of your characters tend to have an angry or sadistic scowl on their face, which is easier to animate than shock or surprise. Lighting and detailed environment would help, most of the time the animations look like they take place in a black void, or an empty lifeless bedroom. Adding some props would go a long way to making them feel more lifelike. If possible - some heathaze or godray effects, particle effects and dust ya know? Make it feel more "lived in" and not sterile/clean/lifeless. Going hand in hand with this, some more scenarios and foreplay would help, your Ice Queen animation seems to have this, and your Juri one. I know it might seem a waste of time to animate a foreplay section, but sometimes it really adds a lot to the animation. Fluid effects is the big one, figuring out how to add cum shooting out of the chastity cage, staining both characters stomachs, or smearing cum on their fingers, making it look thick and sticky ropes.

Red Velvet


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