Rabblelaid's Stories

A New Experiment: Serial Rough Draft Updates: Downward Dog 2: Part A!

Hello!

Good news and bad news.

Bad news: I don't think I will be able to work on the promised sequel to "The Cool Mom" for this week, because I really want to focus on Downward Dog part 2. In related news, it had been a month, so "The Cool Mom" will be releasing on Literotica on Wednesday! I quite enjoyed that story, so I hope it does well. Make sure to head over there and show it some love if you don't mind. I think seeing other comments encourages people to comment more.

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Next Short Story: Stand- Alone Sequels!

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At this point, I have five short standalone stories under my belt. Two on Literotica, three on Patreon. For some of them, I have had multiple requests to write a sequel! Here is the chance to make that happen. I have written up a short synopsis, and made some never-before-seen character portraits for all five short stories. If you haven't read one of them before, the synopsis should give you a sense of what the story is about, and I have included a link in case you want to go ch...

Patreon Exclusive: Comfort Zone!

Good Morning!

I am proud to introduce my

Update on Writing and Character Portraits for "Kitty in the Middle"

Hello!

Commission Three is now officially titled "Kitty in the Middle" and the first part has been submitted to Literotica! I'm hard at work editing the other three parts, and I'm not sure how long it will take to work its way through the submissions queue. I've been sending out the rough draft to people who email me at grogstoopid32@gmail.com, so some people have had a chance to read it already.

Again, unfor...

Writing Update and Thinking About Cuckold Stories

Good evening everyone!

I am very nearly finished with commission three (hoping to be done tomorrow). Unfortunately, due to the nature of the commission, it isn't something I can post on Patreon. But... if anyone emails me privately at grogstoopid32@gmail.com, I am always willing to share early drafts in exchange for feedback... wink wink.

Commission three is going to be slightly over 150 pages in length, so I e...

Short Story Pitch Poll

Good Afternoon!

I got a total of six story pitches for the next short story. I will list the story pitches below in the pitchers own words, then you guys select the one you like the best.

Keep in mind that some pitches may need to be tweaked by me to fit in the length limit or to mesh with my personal style, but I will do my best to keep the essence of the pitch in tact.

Here are the Pitches:

Pitch A: Another short about one of Victor Cros...

Patreon Exclusive: "Sharing is Caring"

Good Evening!

I am still finishing up drafting on commission three, but am hoping, with good luck, to be finished with the rough draft some time this week.

For now, I'm proud to present "Sharing is Caring", my story for the tag "Roommate". This one ended up getting longer and more complex than I expected, and maybe strains the definition of "short story" at this point.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy it! Leave a comment and/or a like if you liked it!

For nex...

Inside the writing process: Plotting and Outlining

Hello everyone!

I hope you are all having a great week. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to complete my “roommate” short story this week, because my past weekend was incredibly busy and I want to get a jump on writing for my current main project (still commission 3). I do have a concept that I like though, so hope you enjoy it when I manage to get the story out.

I decided instead to come back to a series of posts that I started over a month ago explaining my writing pro...

Patreon Exclusive: The Cool Mom

I'm proud to present a totally original story for you today, on the theme of "Blackmail" as was selected last time by the poll.

It might be a little cliche, but I had lots of fun writing this one, so I hope you all enjoy it.

I might actually try to improve this a little before posting it to Lit in a month, and maybe even write a sequel at some point, so any feedback on what you think or how this story could be improved would be especially useful this time! Please consider leavi...

Writing Update and Additional Character Portraits

Hello!

I'm currently roughly halfway done with drafting Commission 3, after which I will be finishing Downward Dog.

Wet Witch of the West is currently languishing in the moderation process on Literotica, but hopefully the first part will be out soon.

I have a concept for my "blackmail" short story and I hope to have it finished soon, writing time permitting.

Because people seemed to enjoy my AI generated character portraits, here are a few more for my freelancer series...

Just for fun: Character Portraits

Hello!

I've been messing around with an ai image maker to create character portraits for some of my characters. I though it would be fun to share some of my results.

I wouldn't consider any of these "spot on", and they certainly aren’t official. They are just something I had fun making messing around for a few minutes.

One particular issue is that the ai wants all female characters to be rail thin for some reason, and it's hard to discourage that without tripping the "in...

Patreon Exclusive: Just Browsing

Hello!

Faria won the big user-choice poll, so here is another Faria short story!

For this one I decided to think outside the box a little. This is story is a prequel. It takes place years before the Freelancer series. I have alluded to the fact that Faria used to use her hypnotic powers for herself, and this story gives a little peek into what she was like back then. I hope you enjoy it! Leave a comment if you do!

For the next story, I thought it would b...

Wet Witch of the West: Full Series Release!

Ladies and Gentlemen, I am thrilled to release to you what has been a labor of love over the last month and a half.

Wet Witch of the West, formerly known as Commission 2!

The five parts of this story will be released over the next couple of weeks on Literotica, but for my patrons, you will find the whole thing attached below.

It's always nervewracking to release a completely new project, so I am desperate for feedback. If you would be able to write a comment about a part you...

Short Story Poll

Good morning everyone!

At this point, I have gotten a good start on commission 3, and I'm very excited for it.

Commission 2 ran into a speed bump when we were almost at the finish line, but I am still hoping to have it out soon.

I got a lot of good responses for who the next character should be that gets a short story! Some real favorites here, as well as some wildcards. Because there are so many choices, I am going to open up the voting so you can choose any ...

Patreon exclusive: Most Likely to Suck Seed

Good morning!

First and foremost, I apologise for the awful pun. I couldn’t resist. This is a short story about Blair Beaumont after the events of "Dollar Swine". Let me know what you think in the comments!

Also: I am going to do things a little differentlythis time for selecting who the next short story will be about. I thought I would open things up a little and let readers have a freer choice.

How it will work is this: write a comment below about which characte...

Cross Contamination Part 11 Alpha Draft

Good Evening!

After far too long without a release, I am pleased to present a new story!

Commission 2 is still in the works, but I have completed my initial draft of Cross Contamination Part 11, which you can find attached below.

Being an alpha draft, this needs some work. There are parts that need jazzing up, and others that need expansion. Everything needs proofreading and editing, so I apologize for the roughness.

I am especially anxious for feedback for this chapte...

Writing update and Crowdsource Request

Here is where my writing is at currently:

Commission 2: Currently working through the feedback and revision process. As soon as I smooth out all the rough edges noted by the commissioner and get the greenlight, I will post the entire series here for your reading pleasure.

Cross Contamination 11: I got a solid amount of writing done on the rough draft the past few days and it is one third to one half complete. Some big character development in this one, and I'm excited for you guys...

An update and a Curiosity

Good evening everyone!

It's been a long time since I released anything, and I can tell people are getting antsy.

I can only apologize sincerely. The reason for how long my next story is taking is its extreme length. In it's final version, it will be about 200 pages long. This is about three to four times the length of one of my typical stories, so you might think about it as if I am releasing an entire series all at once. It will be four or five parts when it finally make...

Patreon Exclusive: Endurance Training Part 2

Good Evening!

Commission 2 has entered the editing process. It won't be long now!

Here is the end to Renee's spin off story. Let me know if you liked it in the comments! The choices for next time's stories are three other targets from my freelancer series. Can't wait to see what people pick!

Corey could feel his breath echoing in his helmet. He could feel the sweat forming on his face and trickling down to sting his eyes. His head swam and floated...

A Tease for my Next Story

Good Morning!

The rough draft of Commission 2 is nearly complete.

To whet your appetite a little, here is a plot synopsis. Spoilers ahead if you would prefer to read blind.

Commission 2

Title: The Wet Witch of the West

Themes: Non-mind-control corruption, humiliation, exhibitionism, female submissive, free use.

Synopsis: When a new pilot program at Carol Moehn's university accidentally places her as an RA at a frat house, she isn't concerned...

A Quick Plug

Afternoon, everyone!

The results of the previous poll were nearly unanimous. In light of that, I'm testing the waters by releasing "Industry Ties" (which just turned a month old) on Literotica tomorrow morning! Hopefully the readers there will enjoy it as well.

I don't have as much time as I would like to read stories from others these days, but whenever I do happen to run into something I really like, I can't help but want to share it.

I recently read the ongoing series "Te...

A Format Change and a Question

Good Evening!

Sadly, I've run into a little bit more trouble with the Patreon policies, which apparently I didn't have a good enough understanding of going in.

As it turns out, it isn't allowed to post explicit materials to the general public, they must be members only. I can only assume I have flown under the radar for this long because of the small size of my Patreon. This goes against what I was trying to do with this page, but policies are policies. If I keep posting as I have...

Patreon Exclusive: Endurance Training Part 1!

Hello!

Sorry for the wait on this one!

I'm proud to present part one of a side story featuring Renee Cross: Endurance Training.

One aspect of Renee that I don't get to explore very much in the stories is her sexual satisfaction. She clearly gets off on corrupting people, but does she ever have sex? The answer is yes, but mostly her interactions with Kissy (who she won't have sex with until the time is ripe) and Daren (who she does not want to have sex with) are all that we s...

Feedback requested: Story Length

Hello!

I'm still plugging away at my latest story. This one is a whopper. It's likely to be three parts at least when it comes out.

But that leads me to a question I have been wrestling with.

I'm a little worried that I might be shooting myself in the foot with my story lengths. I have a strong suspicion that some people see a 6-9 page story on literotica and just say "no thanks". I sometimes wonder if I am turning away people who would potentially love my wo...

Brief update

Good afternoon!

I don't normally like to go this long without a story release. Unfortunately I had quite a busy week last week, and I'm still working hard on a quite long (and quite interesting!) commission. I hope that you all can see it before long. After that, I will be drafting Cross Contamination part 11.

In other news, I'm feeling a little antsy about the Hottie in the Mirror part 3 release. It's been two weeks since I submitted the story, but it is still maki...

Random Cross Contamination Ideas

Good Morning!

As part of my process in writing cross contamination, when I think of a hot idea, I make a note of it and try to work it in later. This has resulted in a long list of potential ideas that I'm not certain will end up in the story or not. 

I thought it would be fun to share some of these ideas and see which you guys are most excited to see. I'm leaving out any idea that I know for certain will end up in the story, but these are still potential spoilers if t...

Patreon Exclusive: Desperate Measures!

Good evening everyone!

I'm proud to present a story starring Faria from "The Freelancer" series. Faria is an interesting character to write a side story for. Due to her strict code of conduct, most of the time the only fun she has is when she is working for a client.

So I asked myself, what circumstances would tempt Faria to bend, but not break her rules? The result is this story. I hope you enjoy it! The three choices for the poll this time are three characters from Cross Contami...

Story Pitch in Need of Feedback

Hello everyone!

Today I wanted to hit you with a story pitch, just to test the waters with it. I know, I know, at this point I have too many story ideas and not enough writing time. I wouldn’t put pen to paper on this until I completed Downward Dog and Hottie in the Mirror, but it's kicking around my brain right now, so I wanted to talk about it. 

I've been experimenting with mixing some romantic themes into my stories lately in Hottie in the Mirror, and I tho...

Hottie in the Mirror part 3 Final Draft

Hello everyone.

I'm in the middle of drafting Commission Project 2 right now.

I submitted the final draft of Hottie in the Mirror 3 to literotica several days ago, but the approval process may be backed up again, so I am dropping the final draft here in case anyone is interested.

No big plot changes, but smoothing and grammar/punctuation fixes throughout.

Happy reading!

Patreon Exclusive: A Midnight Snack!

Hello Everyone.

As promised, here is my patreon exclusive short story featuring Lily Uden from "Miss Udders". This one is titled "A Midnight Snack".

Plotwise, the trickiest part was that at the end of Miss Udders, everyone involved lost their memories. So I hope you enjoy this explanation of how Lily Uden got sucked back in to debauchery. This story will only be a one-parter this time, but you will notice that I left the door open for future stories with Lily.

Please ...