Eirik knew melee was suicide.
That tongue moved faster than anything he'd seen. One touch, and he’d be dust.
He needed to buy time. Leif was coming. He had to be coming.
The monster took a lumbering step forward, shaking the ground.
Its multi-faceted maw opened, emiting a low hum that vibrated in Eirik’s teeth. One massive limb, ending in a claw like black scythes, swept towards him in a deceptively fast arc.
Eirik didn’t try to block. He rolled under the swing, feeling the displaced air tear at his clothes. He came up sprinting, not away, but towards the closest overturned salt barrel near the monster’s flank.
He reached the barrel, flipped it onto its side with a grunt, and kicked it hard. It skidded across the stones directly into the path of the monster’s next stomping footfall.
CRUNCH-SPLINTER!
The heavy oak barrel exploded into shards under the immense weight. Salt crystals sprayed everywhere. A minor annoyance, but it forced the creature to momentarily shift its balance. Eirik used the fraction of a second to dive behind the stumps of the shattered outer wall – not cover, but concealment. He needed distance.
A shadow-tendril thicker than his thigh slammed into the stone where he’d been standing. Rock splintered. The hum intensified, vibrating the very air. It’s probing. Eirik pressed flat against the cold stone.
He needed to observe and find its weakness. Every power had a cost.
He risked a glance. The monster was scanning the courtyard, those crimson eyes sweeping methodically. Its movements, while powerful, weren’t fluid. There was a slight hesitation, a fractional tremor in the massive limbs, especially when shifting direction.
And the core… where Grakk’Thor had stabbed himself… the wounds pulsed with that same dark light. Was that the anchor? The source of the stolen life force?
A choked scream from above drew the monster’s gaze. A young Northman, overwhelmed by terror, had stumbled back from the Skarl hostage he was guarding. He bolted along the battlement towards the nearest staircase leading down.
Fool!
The monster’s crimson eyes fixed on the movement. The shadow-tongue lashed out like a bullwhip. It crossed the thirty-yard distance instantly, wrapping around the man's torso mid-stride.
He didn’t even have time to scream.
One moment he was running; the next, he was a grey, lifeless husk, crumbling to dust even as the tongue retracted. The sheer speed was terrifying.
But Eirik saw it.
As the tongue retracted, feeding the stolen spark back into the pulsating torso-wounds, the entire monstrosity shuddered. A wave of visible strain rippled through its flesh. The dark light flared erratically, and for a second, the humming ceased.
It needs constant replenishment. Draining life fuels it, but the act itself destabilizes it momentarily.
A vulnerability window.
He needed bait. Moving targets. He needed to make the monster work, force it to expend its stolen energy faster than it could replenish it. And he needed Leif to see.
From his hiding place, Eirik cupped his hands around his mouth and roared with all the command he could muster.
It wasn't directed at the monster. It was aimed upwards.
"OLAF! THE WALL! RUN THE GAUNTLET! MAKE THEM MOVE! NOW!"
Olaf, staring at Helga’s body, snapped his head up. He grabbed the nearest Skarl hostage – a grey-bearded elder – and shoved him hard down the walkway.
"YOU HEARD THE COMMANDER! RUN, YE BASTARDS! RUN OR DIE STANDING!" he bellowed, kicking another hostage – a young woman – in the direction of the central tower. He turned and sprinted away from them, drawing a short sword from a fallen guard, making himself a separate, noisy target. "C'MON, YE OVERGROWN LARD-BUCKET! TRY AND SUCK ME DRY!"
The effect was immediate chaos.
The Northmen captors, spurred by Olaf’s raw fury and the immediate threat, began shoving their charges along the battlements. Some Skarl hostages tried to resist, others stumbled, terrified, into motion. The narrow walkway became a scene of panicked movement in multiple directions.
The monster’s head swiveled, letting out a shriek.
Multiple shadow-tendrils snapped out. One impaled a fleeing Skarl woman against a merlon, draining her instantly. Another whipped towards Olaf. The big lieutenant ducked behind a crenellation with a curse, the shadow-tongue scraping sparks off the stone.
But the effort of targeting multiple moving points at once was clearly taxing. The creature hesitated, its limbs trembling slightly. It couldn’t focus.
Eirik used the momentary distraction. He burst from behind the wall stump, sprinting not away, but towards the area littered with dead Skarl warriors near the ice spike trap. He needed ammunition. He scooped up a fallen Skarl war axe.
He poured a jolt of mana into his arm, aiming not at the monster, but at the frozen ground near its massive clawed foot.
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[MANA: 17/50]
[ABILITY: FROST SHAPER ACTIVATED]
The packed snow and ice beneath the claw liquefied into frictionless slush. The monster’s foot slipped sideways with a surprised grunt. It stumbled, one massive limb windmilling for balance, its attention wrenched from the battlements back to its own footing.
Thump. Thump-thump-thump.
The sound cut through the monster’s frustrated shriek and the panicked cries. Hoofbeats. Many, many hooves. Coming fast up the pass approach.
Leif.
A wave of fierce hope surged through Eirik. He saw the monster’s crimson eyes snap towards the main gate. It sensed the new threat. Saw its hesitation deepen into a flicker of… calculation? Or was it strain?
He had to make the weakness clear. Now. Before the monster turned its full fury on the approaching force.
Eirik didn’t retreat. He stood his ground twenty yards from the towering abomination, the war axe held loosely at his side. He raised his voice, pitching it to carry over the din, not to the monster, but towards the approaching thunder outside the gate.
"LEIF! LISTEN! ITS POWER IS UNSTABLE! WHEN IT DRAINS… THAT'S WHEN IT'S VULNERABLE!"
His words were punctuated by the monster’s furious response.
Enraged by the defiance, by the shouting of its weakness, it whipped a shadow-tendril straight at Eirik with blinding speed. He threw himself sideways into a desperate roll, the tendril passing so close he felt the chill of absolute negation.
The tendril slammed into the frozen ground where he’d stood, shattering cobblestones and leaving a smoking, necrotic patch.
CRASH!
A tide of desperate, bloodied men flooded into the courtyard – Talons in their scarred leather, Frostholme guards in makeshift armor, peasants wielding axes and spears. At their head, atop a lathered horse, was Leif Fenrir, the heirloom blade shining in his hand. Bjorn and Harkin flanked him, faces grim.
They stopped dead.
The scene that greeted them was beyond comprehension.
The carnage of the ice spike trap was horrific enough – impaled warriors and ponies frozen in death. The spilled salt and overturned barrels added a layer of surreal decay. The Northmen captives and Skarl hostages on the battlements were a frozen tableau of terror. Olaf stood near the central tower, breathing heavily, a dead Skarl at his feet.
But all of it was dwarfed, dominated, by the thing in the center.
Twelve feet of pulsating, corrupted flesh. Six limbs of nightmare chitin. Eyes like burning coals from Hel’s deepest pit. The lingering stench of ozone and decay. And Helga’s withered body on the stones near the tower base.
The entire force behind them seemed to ripple backwards as one, a wave of pure, primal terror.
“What… in the frozen nine hells…?” Leif breathed.
The distraction was costly.
The monster, seeing the fresh influx of life force – hundreds of potential meals – roared. It wasn’t a sound; it was a physical wave of pressure that staggered the front ranks. The shadow-tongue lashed out, not at Eirik this time, but towards the massed men crowding the gateway.
Panic erupted.
Men shoved backwards, tripping over each other. The tongue retracted, having caught only a Frostholme peasant who had stumbled forward. He withered and crumbled before their eyes.
The sight of a comrade drained to dust shattered any lingering cohesion. Fear turned to rout. Men at the back tried to flee back out the gate, trampling those behind them. The formation dissolved into a terrified mob.
Leif spurred his horse forward, trying to impose order, but the horse reared, eyes rolling white in terror. “HOLD! HOLD YOUR GROUND, DAMN YOU!” His voice was lost in the cacophony.
Eirik saw the disaster unfolding. If the mob broke, the monster would pick them off one by one outside the walls. He needed to be the target. Again.
He snatched up a heavy cobblestone dislodged by the tendril strike.
He hurled the stone. It flew straight, a grey streak against the twilight. It struck the bruised, weeping flesh just below the largest wound where the shadow-tendril had plunged earlier.
THUD-SPLAT!
It wasn’t a killing blow. Barely a sting. But it struck the nexus of its stolen power.
The monster flinched violently, a gout of dark, viscous ichor spurting from the wound. The hum turned into a shriek of agony. Its burning eyes snapped away from the fleeing mob and locked onto Eirik with homicidal intensity.
“THAT’S RIGHT, YOU ROTTEN SACK OF OFFAL!” Eirik bellowed, backing away towards the ice spike trap, deliberately putting himself in the open. “ME! REMEMBER? THE ONE WHO POISONED YOUR SALT! THE ONE WHO TOOK YOUR FORT! THE ONE WHO KILLED YOUR CHAMPION! COME AND TRY YOUR SUCKING TRICK ON ME!”
The taunt worked.
The monster, enraged beyond reason, lumbered towards him, its massive limbs pounding the cobbles, ignoring the chaotic mass of men regrouping near the gate. Its shadow-tongue coiled like a viper ready to strike.
Eirik had its attention. Now he had to survive it. And he had precious little mana left.
He backed towards the edge of the ice spike trap, where the jagged spears of his conjured ice still glistened, some still impaling Skarl corpses. The ground was treacherous, uneven, littered with debris. Perfect.
“LEIF!” Eirik roared, his eyes never leaving the advancing monstrosity. “ITS WEAKNESS IS REAL! WHEN THE TONGUE TOUCHES – WHEN IT DRAINS – IT STAGGERS! FOR ONE… MAYBE TWO SECONDS! THAT’S YOUR WINDOW! AIM FOR THE CORE! THE WOUNDS ON ITS TORSO! MASSED PROJECTILES! NOW, DAMN YOU! COORDINATE YOUR FIRE!”
Leif, finally regaining control of his panicked horse, heard. He saw Eirik luring the monster towards the ice field. He saw the strategic madness. His face hardened. This was the moment Eirik had thrust upon him.
Time to earn the blade.
He wheeled his horse, the Fenrir steel held high.
“CROSSBOWMEN! FORM RANKS! FRONT AND CENTER! AIM FOR THE BIG UGLY’S CHEST! THOSE DARK PULSING SPOTS! YOU SEE THEM? AIM TRUE! WAIT FOR MY COMMAND! SPEARMEN – SHIELD WALL! PROTECT THE SHOOTERS! EVERYONE ELSE, CLEAR THE FLANKS! MOVE! NOW!”
Discipline, beaten into the Talons through hardship, reasserted itself. Veterans shoved recruits into position. The Frostholme men, seeing a plan, however insane, followed suit. Bjorn and Harkin bellowed orders, forming a bristling shield wall in front of the hastily assembling crossbowmen – perhaps forty weapons were leveled, bolts trembling in their grooves.
The monster was ten yards from Eirik. Five. Its shadow-tongue drew back, coiling for the killing strike. Eirik stood poised on the very edge of the ice field. He had nowhere left to run.
"FIRE!" Leif’s command split the air.
THWACK-THWUNK-THWIPP!
A ragged volley of crossbow bolts streaked across the courtyard. Not all flew true. Some struck the thick hide of the monster’s limbs, bouncing off or embedding shallowly. One hit a chitinous plate on its head with a ping. But several found their mark.
Three heavy bolts punched into the pulsating, bruised flesh of the monster’s torso near the weeping wounds. Dark ichor sprayed.
The monster whipped toward the source of the attack, its burning eyes fixing on the massed crossbowmen. The shadow-tongue lashed out hungrily toward the formation.
"NO!" A voice cried from the ranks.
A Frostholme peasant—beard streaked with grey, clutching a rusted spear—broke from the shield wall. Not in terror, but in desperate purpose. He sprinted directly into the path of the reaching shadow-tongue.
"FOR MY SONS!"
The tongue wrapped around him instantly. His eyes met Eirik's for one brief moment—calm, resolved. Then he withered, crumbling to dust as the stolen life force coursed back into the monster's pulsating core.
The window!
As the shadow-tongue retracted, the entire monstrosity shuddered violently. The same pattern Eirik had observed before—a wave of visible strain rippled through its flesh. The dark light flared erratically, and for nearly two full seconds, the humming ceased.
Eirik didn’t hesitate.
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[MANA: 10/50]
He focused his will on the jagged remnants of his earlier ice spikes embedded in the ground and the cobbles shattered by the monster’s attacks. He didn’t freeze; he shattered. He amplified the existing fractures, turned solid ice and stone into a field of super-chilled, hyper-brittle shrapnel primed to explode under pressure.
The monster, already staggered by the crossbow hits, took another lumbering step forward, its massive clawed foot landing squarely in the center of the destabilized zone.
The effect was catastrophic.
KRA-KOOM!
The ground didn’t just give way; it detonated. A geyser of razor-sharp ice shards, fractured stone, and frozen earth erupted beneath the monster’s foot. The force was immense, amplified by Eirik’s mana acting as a catalyst. The limb buckled violently sideways with a sickening SNAP of chitin and bone. Dark ichor fountained. The monster screamed, a sound that shook the fortress to its foundations, as it crashed sideways onto the unstable ground.
Its massive torso slammed down hard, crushing a still-twitching Skarl pony beneath it. The impact triggered more localized explosions of frost and stone along its flank. The shadow-tongue whipped wildly, gouging deep furrows in the courtyard stones but finding no target.
Eirik was already moving, having thrown himself flat the moment he triggered the blast. Shrapnel whizzed overhead. He scrambled backwards on hands and knees, lungs burning.
But the monster was down. Crippled. Reeling. And the weakness window wasn’t just open; it was gaping.
Leif Fenrir didn’t need a second command. He saw the colossus fall. He saw Eirik sprawled, vulnerable. He saw the pulsating core exposed.
“SPEARS AND AXES! CHARGE THE TORSO! AIM FOR THE WOUNDS! FOR THE NORTH! FOR ABERCROMBIE! FOR HELGA!” His voice was a clarion call of vengeance.
A roar answered him. Not just from the Talons. From the Frostholme men. From Bjorn. From Harkin. Even the Northmen captives on the wall took up the cry. They charged. Not as a disciplined unit, but as a tidal wave of pent-up fury and horror.
Olaf led the charge from the battlements, leaping down the stairs, howling like a mad wolf, a heavy Skarl axe raised. Bjorn pounded across the courtyard, his war hammer a blur. Spearmen drove their points into the heaving, ichor-slicked flesh near the wounds. Axes hacked at the pulsating core.
The monster thrashed wildly. A shadow-tendril lashed out, catching a Frostholme spearman, draining him instantly. The familiar shudder rippled through the creature's massive form as the stolen life force fed into the pulsating wounds.
Eirik saw his chance.
[MANA EXPENDED: 10]
[MANA: 0/50]
[ABILITY: ICE CONJURATION ACTIVATED]
He slammed his hands onto the ground. Jagged chains of pure, glacial ice erupted, not from the earth, but from the air itself. They snaked around the monster’s lower limbs, its thrashing tendrils, freezing them solid in an instant of absolute zero. The beast’s roar turned into a choked gargle of surprise and fury as its movements were locked for a crucial second.
"NOW, LEIF!" Eirik bellowed.
Leif didn’t need telling twice.
He planted his feet, drew back the Fenrir blade, and thrust with every shred of strength, fury, and Fenrir lineage he possessed. The point punched through the tough hide below the monster’s gaping maw, slid between pulsating sinew, and found the core.
The monstrous roar cut off abruptly, replaced by a wet, gurgling hiss.
The burning crimson eyes flared impossibly bright, then dimmed like dying embers. The shadow-tendrils withered, crumbling to ash. The immense form shuddered violently, the distended flesh collapsing inwards with sickening wet sounds. Bone crunched and snapped as it shrank, the insectoid limbs folding in on themselves like broken sticks. Dark ichor and liquefied gore poured from the collapsing mass.
Where the twelve-foot monstrosity had stood, only a broken figure remained, curled in a pool of steaming offal and melting ice.
Grakk’Thor. His chest and gut were ripped open from his self-inflicted wounds, now gaping grotesquely.
Eirik Stormcrow staggered forward. He looked down at the broken, blasphemous remnant of the shaman. No hesitation. He raised the axe high.
Grakk’Thor’s head rolled free, coming to rest face-up, those dead, milky eyes staring sightlessly at the grey dawn sky over Fort Abercrombie.
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On the battlements above Fort Abercrombie's main gate – stood Eirik Stormcrow.
Below him, the now free Northmen captives held spear-points at the backs of a terrified cluster of Skarl non-combatants: elders, mothers clutching children, the infirm.
But Eirik’s focus was entirely on the high pass beyond the shattered gate.
The sound of massed hooves grew from a tremor in the earth to a thunderous roar. Then they emerged from the tree line and screeched to a chaotic halt on the snow-dusted approach road.
Over thirty Skarl warriors were still alive.
At their head was Borvak, and beside him, swaying precariously on a trembling pony, was Grakk’Thor. The swirling vortex of stolen life-force above him pulsive erratically. Blood stained his hands and furs, fresh from whatever desperate rites had sustained his warriors on their frantic return.
They saw the carnage within the courtyard – the bodies of their warriors, the spilled salt, the overturned barrels. They saw the prisoners held at spear-point. They saw gate, wide-open, as if welcoming them.
And then they looked up.
The ragged battlements were lined with figures.
Eirik stood front and center, flanked by the three most critical pieces on his brutal chessboard. To his left, held firmly by a scar-faced Northman, was Shala, Grakk’Thor’s daughter. To his right, supported by an older Skarl woman trying vainly to shield her, stood Veyla, Borvak’s heavily pregnant wife. Between them, held upright by two Northmen, was the ancient crone, Kethra, Grakk’Thor’s mother. Dren cowered nearby.
Tied along the wall beside them were a dozen more Skarls – young mothers, adolescent boys, respected elders – each with a Northman captor holding a knife or spear at their throat.
The message was devastatingly clear.
A collective snarl ripped from the throats of the Skarl warriors. Ponies stamped and snorted, sensing the rage and terror of their riders. Borvak surged forward half a length as a dozen warriors mirrored him, ready to charge the open gate.
“VOK!” Grakk’Thor raised his bone rattle. “THRAK NA! KHOR VAK DRAS!”
The line wavered. Ponies skittered sideways, held back by reins pulled taut. Warriors strained against their mounts, their eyes fixed on their loved ones on the wall, their fury battling the shaman’s command and the horrifying reality before them. They could storm the gate, but the blades would fall long before they reached the ramparts.
“Dren. Translate. Exactly.” Eirik remained impassive.
Dren flinched. “H-He says… Do not attack.’”
Grakk’Thor screamed.
“UL GASH THUL ZHOG! RELEASE THEM! THE WHITE DEATH WAS YOUR WORK! YOUR UNHOLINESS TARNISHES THE SKY FATHER! RELEASE THEM OR FACE THE WRATH OF VEL MOKTHUL!”
Eirik didn’t blink.
“Tell them there will be no negotiation necessary.Tell them they will watch their kin die, and then they will die. One by one. Starting now.”
He nodded curtly to Olaf.
Olaf stepped forward, his dripping saber raised. He scanned the line of secondary hostages along the wall. His eyes settled on a middle-aged Skarl woman trying to comfort a young boy clinging to her leg. A soldier’s wife, probably.
“Her,” Olaf grunted, pointing with his blade.
The Northman captor holding her yanked her forward, away from the boy, who screamed. Olaf strode towards her. The woman looked up, her eyes wide with incomprehension, then dawning horror. She began to plead in Skarl, her voice rising in a terrified wail.
Borvak roared. Warriors surged again. Grakk’Thor’s rattle shook furiously, the crimson light flaring, holding them back, barely.
Olaf didn’t hesitate. The saber descended in a brutal arc. The pleading cut off mid-word. The sound was a sickening thunk-crunch. The woman crumpled. The boy’s scream turned into a shriek of pure agony that echoed across the pass.
A howl of collective fury and despair erupted from the Skarl warriors. Ponies reared. The unnatural control imposed by Grakk’Thor’s draining vortex was fraying at the edges, unraveling under the weight of primal rage.
“GASH VAK!” Grakk’Thor shrieked, trying to regain control. He raised his free hand, fingers twisting in a complex gesture. Fetishes on his robes began to glow with a sickly purple light. He was gathering power, preparing something – a curse, a blast, a desperate counter.
Helga hadn’t been idle on the wall. She’d confiscated a Skarl hornbow and a handful of arrows from a fallen guard. She’d nocked an arrow the moment Olaf stepped forward. As Grakk’Thor raised his hand and the purple light intensified, she drew smoothly, sighted down the arrow, and loosed.
TWANG!
The arrow hissed through the frigid air. It wasn’t aimed for a killing shot. Helga was too precise for that. It slammed into the thick bone bracer encircling Grakk’Thor’s wrist as he gestured.
CRACK!
The bone splintered. Grakk’Thor screamed as the gathering purple light around his hand fizzled and died in a shower of harmless sparks. The vortex above him flickered violently. His concentration shattered.
Eirik didn’t react to the shaman’s pain. His gaze was fixed on Borvak, who was staring at his injured shaman, then back at the wall.
“Olaf. The old woman.”
Olaf’s jaw clenched. Kethra was still muttering. The Northmen holding her looked uneasy but pushed her forward as Olaf approached. He raised the saber.
“NAAAAA!” The scream tore from Grakk’Thor’s throat. He clutched his broken wrist, his milky eyes wide with a terror beyond the physical pain. “UL! NA!”
Borvak looked from his shaman, broken and screaming for his mother, to his pregnant wife, Veyla, trembling on the wall, her face streaked with tears. The crimson light in his eyes flickered, battling with his own anguish.
Olaf hesitated, the saber poised. He glanced at Eirik.
Eirik met his gaze, then looked back at Borvak. He gave the nod.
The saber fell.
It was a clean blow, severing the ancient woman’s thin neck. Her chanting stopped instantly. Her head tumbled slowly, grotesquely, down the inner face of the battlement before thudding onto the stones below.
A terrible silence followed. Even the wind seemed to hold its breath. The only sounds were Grakk’Thor’s ragged sobs and the whimpers from the captives on the wall.
Then, like a dam bursting, the sound came. A guttural moan of pure, unadulterated grief and fury from the Skarl warriors. It was the sound of a collective heart breaking.
Eirik stepped towards Veyla. The Northman holding her flinched but held his ground.
Eirik placed a hand on her trembling shoulder. He turned her slightly, positioning her directly facing the massed Skarls below, making sure Borvak had a perfect view.
He didn’t need to speak. His hand on Veyla’s shoulder, her swollen belly evident, the silent implication hanging in the frigid air – This is next.
Borvak snapped.
The crimson light in his eyes flared, drowning out the last vestiges of reason. The shaman’s control, already shattered by pain and grief, vanished entirely. Borvak threw his head back and unleashed a roar that shook the very stones of the pass. It wasn’t a command; it was the pure, primal scream of a cornered beast seeing its mate and unborn child threatened.
“KHOOOOOR!” He bellowed, driving his heels into his pony’s flanks. The beast, infused with the same desperate rage, surged forward.
“BORVAK! NA!” Grakk’Thor shrieked, clutching his broken wrist. “THRAK ZHOG! UL GASH!”
But it was too late.
Borvak was beyond reason. Seeing their champion charge, blinded by fury and the need to do something, to save or avenge, dozens of other warriors broke ranks. They ignored Grakk’Thor’s frantic screams, the unnatural control completely gone. With answering roars, they kicked their ponies into a frenzied gallop, following Borvak’s charge forward.
Eirik shoved Veyla back towards her captor. “Hold her!”
The ground before the walls looked like hard-packed snow and frozen earth.
It wasn’t.
As the leading ponies, Borvak’s at the forefront, hit the seemingly solid ground just fifteen yards from the base of the wall, the thin crust Eirik had meticulously reinforced with Frost Mana shattered.
It wasn’t just an ice sheet breaking. It was an entire, brittle plane of reinforced frost giving way beneath concentrated weight. The sound was a sickening, shrieking CRUNCH-SPLINTER-CRACK! like a glacier calving.
The leading ponies plunged downwards as if the earth had opened up. But it wasn’t a pit. It was a forest.
Beneath the deceptive crust, Eirik had spent precious minutes and a significant portion of his remaining mana conjuring not a wall, but a killing field.
Countless jagged spikes of blue-black ice, each as thick as a man's wrist and taller than a spear, were packed densely, angled lethally upwards.
Borvak’s pony hit them first. It shrieked as multiple ice spears punched through its chest and belly, lifting it momentarily off its front legs.
Borvak himself was catapulted forward over its neck. He hit the spikes shoulder-first. There was a wet, tearing sound, a crunch of bone and armor, and his furious charge ended instantly. He was pinned, impaled through the torso and leg. The crimson light in his eyes flickered and died.
The warriors charging close behind him had no time to stop.
Momentum carried them into the gaping maw of the ice trap. Ponies screamed as their legs snapped on the uneven, collapsing surface or were impaled through their chests and flanks. Riders were thrown forward, skewered on the waiting spikes or crushed beneath their falling mounts.
Warriors who had been charging the gate or other sections of the wall tried desperately to rein in, colliding with those behind them who hadn’t yet seen the carnage. Ponies panicked, rearing, biting, kicking. Skarls were thrown from saddles, landing hard on the frozen ground or, worse, stumbling into the expanding perimeter of the ice trap where more hidden spikes waited.
Grakk’Thor stared, his mouth hanging open in silent horror. His champion, his blood-sword, the core of his remaining power, was a bloody ruin pinned on ice. Dozens of his warriors were dying in screams and confusion before his eyes, victims of a trap sprung with cold, terrifying precision.
On the wall, Helga didn’t pause. She nocked another arrow, her eyes scanning the chaotic mass below for specific targets – anyone trying to rally the survivors, anyone looking like they might try another angle of attack. She picked off a warrior attempting to drag a wounded comrade back, the arrow punching through his throat. Another trying to dismount and scout the edge of the trap met the same fate.
The Northman captives holding the hostages stared, their fear momentarily replaced by awe and a fierce, savage satisfaction. They gripped their spears tighter. The Skarl non-combatants in the courtyard below wailed in despair.
Eirik didn't let his guard down.
Grakk’Thor looked broken, but still dangerous. And there were still warriors alive, wounded, panicked, but alive. The fight wasn't over.
His gaze swept over the remaining Skarl force, then back to Veyla, shaking violently, her hands pressed over her mouth, eyes wide with terror as she stared at where her husband lay impaled. Then to the despairing Grakk’Thor beyond the gate.
Eirik’s voice cut through the lingering screams and the moans of the dying on the spikes.
“Shaman. Order your remaining people to lay down their arms. Now. Or I will give the order for the final executions.” He paused. “Starting with the woman carrying Borvak’s child.”
He placed his hand back on Veyla’s shoulder. She flinched as if burned, a choked sob escaping her. Below, amidst the field of icy death and broken bodies, Grakk’Thor lifted his head.
"Ul... zhog... vok drak..."
"Commander..." Helga murmured, her bowstring taut, an arrow nocked and aimed directly at the shaman’s heart. "He's gathering something..."
"GASH!" Grakk’Thor’s voice erupted into a shriek that echoed off the mountainsides.
His broken hand clenched into a fist around the obsidian knife still clutched in his good hand. He raised it high, the blade glinting wetly in the twilight. Not towards the enemy. Towards his own.
"THUL GORRASH VAK! THRAK ZHOG UL! MORVAK! THRAKKA VAK!"
The warriors closest to him – four hardened men whose faces held the desperate resolve of the damned – didn’t hesitate. They understood. They kicked their ponies forward, forming a living shield between Grakk’Thor and Helga’s bow on the wall. Their eyes met their shaman’s, a grim acceptance passing between them.
Helga loosed. The arrow hissed true, aimed for the sliver of space between the warriors’ shoulders. One of the shielding Skarls threw himself sideways with a roar, interposing his body. The arrow slammed into his ribs with a wet crunch. He grunted but stayed mounted, swaying.
Grakk’Thor ignored him. He drove the obsidian knife deep into his own chest, just below the collarbone. Blood, black as pitch in the dim light, pulsed from the wound. He tore the blade free and plunged it again, lower, into his gut.
A strangled cry escaped him, but his chanting intensified.
"GASH! ZHOG! KHEL VAK THUL! DRAS-GUL! VEL MOKTHUL VAK KHOR!"
The vortex above him, which had dimmed to a faint crimson shimmer, erupted.
But it wasn’t sustaining life anymore. It was consuming it.
The swirling mass, shot through with veins of utter blackness, descended and fused with Grakk’Thor. Tendrils, thick as a man’s arm and crackling with crimson energy, plunged into the wounds he’d inflicted upon himself.
He screamed.
His body began to distend. Bones cracked audibly, snapping and reforming beneath his skin. Leather and fur garments strained and ripped as his torso swelled, pushing outwards like over-ripe fruit splitting its skin. The milky film over his eyes burned away, replaced by twin coals of pure, crimson fire.
The warriors shielding him were not spared.
Tendrils lashed out from the burgeoning mass that was Grakk’Thor, spearing into their chests.
They didn't have time to scream.
Their flesh desiccated in seconds, muscles withering, skin mummifying as their life force was violently siphoned away. Their ponies screamed and collapsed, shriveling into leathery sacks of bone. The stolen vitality surged back along the tendrils, pouring into Grakk’Thor, fueling the monstrous transformation.
Where the warriors had stood, only dust and brittle bone remained, held aloft for a moment by the tendrils before crumbling.
The thing that stood before Fort Abercrombie was no longer Grakk’Thor.
Twelve feet tall, its distended torso was a mass of pulsating flesh crisscrossed with thick veins that pulsed with dark light. Six massive, multi-jointed limbs – part insectoid, part bestial – sprouted from its back and sides, ending in obsidian claws that scraped gouges in the frozen earth. Its head was a nightmarish fusion of the shaman’s skull and chitinous plates, dominated by those burning crimson eyes. From its gaping maw, a thick, whip-like tongue of solid shadow lashed, dripping sizzling ichor.
A wave of pure terror washed over the wall. Northmen captors stumbled back from the hostages, their faces white. On the ground, the remaining Skarl warriors recoiled, their terror overcoming even their loyalty. Veyla fainted, slumping in her captor’s grip.
"FROST MOTHER SAVE US..." Olaf breathed.
"GET DOWN!" Eirik roared, shoving Olaf sideways just as a shadow-tendril thicker than a tree trunk lashed out from the monstrosity.
It struck the battlement where they’d stood a split-second before. Stone exploded in a shower of razor-sharp shrapnel. The impact shook the entire wall section. Northmen and hostages alike were thrown to the walkway. Screams rent the air.
The monster’s burning eyes fixed on the wall. On Helga. She had nocked another arrow the moment the transformation began, her face pale but set with terrifying focus. She had a clean shot at the pulsating mass that was the thing’s grotesque chest. She drew, smooth and fast.
Twang!
The arrow flew straight and true.
A shadow-tendril snapped out faster than sight. Not from the monster, but from the mass of writhing appendages around it. It intercepted the arrow inches from its target, shattering the shaft into splinters. The monster didn’t flinch. Its obsidian tongue lashed out like a striking viper, impossibly long and swift.
Helga tried to dodge, throwing herself sideways. The tip of the shadow-tongue, sizzling with dark energy, caught her across the chest plate. It didn't pierce the leather and steel. It sucked.
Helga gasped. Her eyes widened in shock. Colour drained from her face with terrifying speed. The skin on her face and hands visibly withered, turning grey and papery. Her vibrant red hair seemed to bleach white in an instant.
She staggered, her bow clattering from nerveless fingers. She looked down at the spot where the tongue had touched, then up at Eirik.
Her lips moved, forming a silent word: "Commander..."
Then her body hit the stones, drained of... everything.
"HELGA!"
Eirik grabbed Olaf. "Don't! It's death out there!" He felt a block of ice in his chest. Helga. Steady, lethal Helga. Gone. He forced the grief away.
"I go down," Eirik snarled. "The rest of you, HOLD THOSE HOSTAGES! Olaf! If it looks like we’re losing… kill them all!"
He spun, vaulting over the inner edge of the battlement, landing on the courtyard stones below with a jarring thud.
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Outside Fort Abercrombie, Grakk'Thor's sixty warriors, moments ago charging in formation, were now stumbling wrecks.
Men swayed in their saddles, eyes bulged, bloodshot and unfocused, seeing terrors only they could perceive. Ponies fared little better. They trembled, legs buckling without warning, sending riders crashing into the snow.
"Thul zhog vak! Vok na dras!" Grakk'Thor shrieked.
His head snapped towards a commotion nearby. A young warrior had fallen from his pony. He thrashed in the snow, back arched, fingers clawing at his own throat. A guttural sound tore from his chest as muscles locked in a spasm. He went still.
Two warriors nearby stared at their fallen comrade, then at Grakk'Thor.
"NA!" Grakk'Thor's shriek froze them in place. "Gash vak thul! Zhog vak khet!"
He lurched forward.
The obsidian blade appeared in his free hand. He stood over the body of the fallen warrior and plunged the blade deep into the chest cavity.
Squelch.
He ripped upwards, exposing steaming entrails. Gasps and a few retches sounded from the surrounding warriors. Ignoring it all, Grakk'Thor plunged both hands into the cavity. He tore out the heart. Next came the liver. He held the organs aloft, blood cascading down his arms.
"Zhog! Khet vak thul! Khet vak gorrash! Gash vak dras! Thrak vak Vel Mokthul!"
He flung the organs onto the snow before him and slammed the bloody blade in between. Drawing symbols in spilled blood across his own forehead and sunken cheeks, he began a guttural chant.
The organs on the snow began to steam with a dark red vapor that coiled upwards.
The vapor coalesced above the gore, swirling faster, tighter, eventually became a small vortex centered on Grakk'Thor. It formed a sphere the size of a man's head and pulsed like a diseased heart.
The warriors watched as the sphere throbbed.
Grakk'Thor's chant rose to a shriek. He pointed his rattle at two men barely clinging to their saddles nearby.
"Vok! Vok ul zhog! Vok threk nalak! Grul zhog! Khet vak thurm!"
The warriors he indicated – one adult man coughing black bile, another a youth whose skin had turned grey – barely had time for their eyes to widen in understanding before Grakk'Thor slashed his obsidian knife through the air in their direction.
He didn't touch them.
The blood sphere pulsed. Two thick tendrils, like liquid night, lashed out. They struck the chests of the designated warriors. Their bodies seized immediately.
Their mounts whinnied in terror as life sucked out of them and flowed back along the tendrils, feeding the pulsing sphere. The tendrils retracted, leaving two hollow husks that slumped over their ponies' necks.
The blood sphere swelled, pulsing faster, its dark light casting shadows across the horrified faces of the warband.
Grakk'Thor didn't pause. He pointed again, selecting three more warriors on the brink of collapse. Again, the dark tendrils lashed out. Three more lives were consumed. The orb grew larger still.
Six lives extinguished to fuel it.
Now, the Wise One swept his rattle in a wide arc over the remaining warriors – those still upright.
"Thrakka vak!"
He slammed the butt of his bone rattle onto the frozen ground. A wave of crimson energy pulsed outward and washed over them all.
The effect was instantaneous.
Warriors who had been pale and trembling straightened in their saddles as if pulled by strings. Crimson flooded back into their faces as the glaze of agony in their eyes vanished, replaced by a hard light devoid of anything human.
"Thrak vak ul! Gash vak zhog! Morvak! Gash vak khor! Thul nak vok dras-gul VETH!"
The warriors turned their ponies as one as they kicked their mounts into a gallop.
No more staggering.
———
"Lieutenant?" Bjorn broke the spell. "Orders?"
Leif snapped back to the moonlit pass. He scanned the ragged column stretched along the rocky trail behind him. One hundred and sixty fighting men. Veterans of the Talons as well as green recruits. Frostholme’s desperate, about another hundred or so, trailed the main force.
"FORM UP!" Leif’s voice ripped through the stillness.
Movement erupted.
Thirty of the original Talon veterans who had fought with the trolls formed a double rank just ahead of the main mass. Shields locked, spears lowered at an angle. Leif positioned himself just behind the center of their line with his heirloom blade held point-down.
Behind the Talons came sixty new recruits. They formed four ragged ranks, each man carrying a spear – some proper infantry models, many just sharpened poles or hunting spears. A forest of spear points extended over the heads of the Talons in front.
Following them were sixty men - veterans, new recruits, and peasants - armed with a motley assortment of ranged weapons – some heavy windlasses, some light hunting cranequins, a few arbalests. They stood behind the spearmen, frantically winding.
Behind them, were about hundred men and even a few sturdy women. They formed a ragged semi-circle behind the crossbowmen and extending back along the flanks of the pass. They carried whatever they could find: splintered doors ripped from Frostholme’s abandoned shacks, heavy barrel staves bound together with rope, sections of broken wagon siding.
"Steady!" Leif scanned the terrified faces behind their wooden walls. "Hold the line! Hold for your homes! Hold for Frostholme! HOLD FOR ABERCROMBIE!"
A ragged, uncertain cheer rose, swallowed quickly by the oppressive silence of the snow-laden pines and the distant, growing vibration beneath their feet. The scout hadn’t needed to report the sound. It was coming.
Thud.
A pause.
Thud-thud.
Pause.
Thud-thud-thud.
The rhythm accelerated, a deep, ominous drumbeat resonating through the frozen earth, up through the soles of boots. Faster than any pony should move. Louder than beasts should sound.
"They come," Bjorn stated.
Thunder.
The moonlight gleamed on polished horn helmets and bared teeth. Shaggy ponies surged forward. In the moonlight, their eyes shone with a sickly crimson light.
"CROSSBOWMEN! PRESENT! AIM LOW! AIM AT THE MASS!"
Sixty weapons swung down.
The Skarl line surged closer. A hundred yards. Eighty. They aimed directly at the center of Leif's fragile shield wall.
"LOOSE!"
THWACK! THWACK-THWUNK! ZZZZZING!
Skarl ponies shrieked. Three riders in the front rank tumbled backwards, bolts sprouting from chests or necks, their crimson-lit eyes snapping blank. Two ponies went down screaming, legs snapped. The charge wavered for a split second as the fallen became obstacles.
But it was only a ripple. The Skarls behind simply leapt the thrashing bodies or smashed through. The crimson eyes fixed forward. Fifty yards.
"SECOND RANK! LOOSE IF YOU CAN!" Leif yelled. A ragged second volley flew. More ponies stumbled. Another rider fell. But the Skarl mass didn't slow. It absorbed the losses like water soaking into sand. Forty yards.
Leif could see the individual snarling mouths, the froth on the ponies' bits.
"Hold yer doors, ye daft beggars!" Bjorn screamed at the shield-bearers behind the crossbows. "Get ready to cover!"
Thirty yards.
"SHIELDS UP!" Leif screamed at the peasant wall behind him. "ARROWS! INCOMING!"
The first deadly hiss cut the air. A swarm. Dozens of arrows arced high from the rear ranks of the Skarl charge. They blotted out the moon for a split second before descending like iron rain.
THUD-THUD-THUD! CRACK! THUNK!
The sound was sickening. Arrows slammed into doors, splintering wood. They thudded into barrels, some punching through. They struck the heavy shields of the Talons with dull impacts. But many found softer targets.
A woman shrieked behind Leif as an arrow punched through her barrel lid and into her shoulder. She stumbled back, dropping her shield. A man holding a door section gasped, an arrow buried in his thigh. Another cried out, clutching an arm suddenly pierced. Wood splintered everywhere. The shield line buckled as men instinctively flinched or crumpled. Gaps appeared.
"CLOSE UP! CLOSE UP!" Leif bellowed. "HOLD THOSE SHIELDS!"
Twenty yards. The Skarls lowered their own short spears, wicked points aimed. Their ponies, foam-flecked and eyes rolling wildly, strained forward with unnatural speed.
Ten yards.
The world narrowed to the oncoming wall of fur, horn, and gleaming steel.
"NOW!" Bjorn roared, hefting his hammer.
But the impact never came.
Like water flowing around a boulder, the wave of Skarl riders veered with grace. The eastern flank peeled left, the western right, galloping parallel to Leif’s formation. Not even breaking stride, they flowed past the bristling spear points just feet away.
"FLANKING!" Bjorn bellowed. "THEY’RE HITTING THE REAR!"
Panic ripped through the ranks. Recruits lunged awkwardly but stabbed only empty air. The Talons tried to turn shields towards the flanks, but they were too densely packed. The formation buckled as men stumbled into each other.
Borvak, the shaman's champion, was leading the western flank. He raised his short hornbow, nocked an arrow in one fluid motion, and drew.
Others followed him in unison.
THWIPP-THWIPP-THWIPP!
A swarm of arrows hissed through the twilight air. Thuds, screams, and splintering wood erupted. A peasant holding a splintered door cried out as an arrow punched through the timber and into his hands. Another dropped a barrel stave.
"SHIELDS UP IN THE REAR!" Leif screamed. "CLOSE RANKS! CLOSE—"
But it was chaos. The rear ranks dissolved. Peasants dropped their shields, scrambling for cover behind fallen bodies. Crossbowmen abandoned their heavy weapons, fleeing towards the center. The carefully constructed box formation collapsed inward, men pressing against each other in terror, shields tilting wildly. Gaps appeared like bleeding wounds in their defense.
Borvak wheeled his pony effortlessly, he pointed his nocked arrow towards the collapsing center where recruits milled in panic.
THWIPP!
His arrow took a recruit in the temple. The young man crumpled like a puppet with cut strings.
"GORRASH!"
Another volley lashed the milling crowd. Screams redoubled. The Talon shield wall, trying desperately to reorient, was peppered with arrows clanging off helmets and shields. A veteran grunted, staggering as an arrow punched through his leather greave.
"FORM SQUARE!" Leif bellowed. "FACING OUT! SPEARS LEVEL! SHIELDS OVERLAP! NOW!"
Slowly, shields were overlapped, creating a bristling hedgehog of spear points facing outwards.
Borvak raised his hornbow sideways. This time, instead of another wave of arrows, about twenty riders peeled off. They kicked their ponies into a gallop towards the western edge of the pass where boulders offered cover.
"They’ll get above us!" Bjorn gasped.
Leif’s heart hammered against his ribs. If the Skarls gained the high ground… "Bjorn! Take ten Talons! Stop them!"
Bjorn slammed his hammer onto his shield.
"YOU! YOU! YOU! WITH ME!" He pointed to veterans nearby and bulled his way through the square towards the western rocks, his chosen men following grimly.
Leif realized that he just made a terrible mistake.
As Bjorn’s group broke formation, Borvak gave another sharp command. The main Skarl force surged forward again. Not a direct charge, but a rapid trot, closing the distance rapidly, arrows already nocked.
"BRACE!" Leif yelled.
The Skarls halted fifty yards out. Fifty bows snapped up and loosed as one.
THWIPP!
The arrows slammed into the shields with a sickening drumbeat. Screams echoed as shafts found gaps – that ten men died in this one wave, except for Bjorn. Before the crossbowmen could return the favor, the Skarls wheeled and galloped backwards.
"BASTARD WOLVES!" Harkin spat blood from a split lip. "They’re bleedin’ us dry!"
Leif Fenrir stood behind the shuddering shield wall of the Talons.
Damn. It was worse than anything he'd imagined. Did the poison not work? How did they–
"Lieutenant!" Harkin’s rasp cut through the moans. "Look! The shaman! He’s doing something! Like... like some sort of bloody storm!"
Leif followed his gaze. Past the milling ponies and the glowing-eyed warriors, near a cluster of stunted pines, stood Grakk’Thor.
The shaman was half-crouched on his pony. Above his head pulsed the crimson vortex Harkin had seen. It was the size of a wagon wheel now, swirling like congealed blood shot through with veins of utter blackness.
"He’s holding them up!" Harkin spat. "Like strings on a puppet! That thing… it’s feeding them!"
Leif's eyes snapped to the cluster of crossbowmen huddled behind the shield wall.
"YOU!" he bellowed. "See the shaman? The figure in furs near the trees with that… that red cloud above him?"
The man's eyes darted towards the distant figure. "Aye, Lieutenant!"
"Put a bolt through him!" Leif’s voice was a whip crack. "Aim true! Nothing else matters! KILL THE SHAMAN!"
The crossbowman's hands shook, but he obeyed. He dropped to one knee, bracing the heavy crossbow against his shoulder. He took a shuddering breath.
It missed.
Borvak, circling on his pony not fifty yards away, saw the movement. He saw the heavy crossbow aimed not at the charging line, but deep into the heart of their formation.
"GASH VAK! THRAK VAK KHOR!"
The effect was instantaneous. The entire Skarl warband, moments before a fluid force playing the long-game, dissolved into a single-minded surge.
Borvak kicked his pony into a dead sprint, leading the mass not around Leif’s formation, but straight at it. Dozens of warriors followed, abandoning bows, drawing curved sabers and war axes.
"HOLD!" Leif screamed. "SHIELDS LOCKED! SPEARS BRACED! FOR THE NORTH! HOLD THEM!"
The impact was thunderous. Shaggy mountain ponies slammed into the overlapping shields. Wood groaned and cracked. Metal shrieked. Men cried out as the shockwave buckled the line. Leif felt the impact jar through his shield arm, threatening to rip his shoulder from its socket.
Spears thrust desperately over the shield rims. A Skarl pony screamed as a spear point plunged into its chest, its rider tumbling forward only to be impaled on a second thrust. But more came. Sabers hacked down at exposed heads and shoulders.
The Talon line bowed inward, but it didn’t break.
"LOOSE! LOOSE AT THE SHAMAN!"
Behind the shield wall, the remaining crossbowmen aimed away from the mass but toward Grakk’Thor.
THWACK-THWUNK-THWIPP!
A ragged volley of arrows arced high over the shield wall. Most fell harmlessly short or sailed overhead. But one, a clumsy shot from a hunter’s short bow, wobbled erratically through the air.
It missed Grakk’Thor’s head by a handspan. Instead, it slammed into the neck of the shaman’s pony just below its jaw.
The animal screamed. It reared violently, hooves lashing the air, before its legs buckled. Grakk’Thor was hurled sideways like a rag doll.
The effect was immediate.
Above his head, the swirling vortex of stolen life-force – the pulsating sphere of crimson shot through with veins of black corruption – flickered violently. It dimmed, shrinking and stuttering like a dying ember.
Borvak, mid-swing aiming his saber at a Talon’s exposed neck, suddenly staggered as if punched. All across the Skarl line, warriors faltered. A wave of weakness washed over them as the poison surging back with vengeful force.
"THEIR POWER’S FAILING!" Leif roared. "PUSH! PUSH THEM!"
"NA... NA!" Grakk’Thorshrieked. His eyes locked onto his thrashing mount, agony contorting its face, hot blood pumping out onto the frozen earth.
Sacrifice.
Scrabbling on his hands and knees, Grakk’Thor lunged for his obsidian knife. He seized it and plunged the blade deep into his dying pony's exposed belly. He ripped upwards, tearing open the cavity. Steam and the stench of ruptured organs filled the air.
He tore the still-thrumming heart free and screamed his incantation.
"THUL ZHOG VAK! KHET! GORRASH VAK! UL THRAK VAK DRAS! MORVAK!"
The vortex pulsed once, violently, and the waves of sustaining power washed back over the Skarl warband.
"GORRASH VAK!" Borvak’s roar shook the pass. "KHOR UL KHET!"
He abandoned his position leading the press against the shield wall. He kicked his pony straight at the seemingly impenetrable mass of overlapping Talon shields and bristling spears. His warriors threw themselves at the shield wall with mindless abandon, sabers hacking wildly, trying to physically climb over it to reach the archers beyond.
Leif shoved through the panicked press. He planted himself directly in Borvak’s path, ten feet from the nearest cowering archer.
Borvak’s crimson eyes snapped to Leif. He saw the fine sword with the wolf-head pommel. Disdain twisted his features. He swung his heavy saber in a brutal, overhead chop meant to cleave Leif from crown to navel.
Leif stepped inside the blow’s arc.
He parried not the blade itself, but the descending wrist guard of Borvak’s forearm with a sharp CLANG of hardened steel. The force was immense, jolting Leif’s entire arm. At the same moment, he thrust upwards with all his strength, aiming the Fenrir point under Borvak’s extended arm, towards the gap in the lamellar armor protecting his armpit.
Borvak reacted with terrifying speed. He twisted his torso, letting the Fenrir blade slide off the hard leather scales covering his ribs with a scrape. His left hand, gripping a heavy war axe Leif hadn’t even seen him draw, slammed towards Leif’s helmeted head.
Leif ducked under the whistling axe, feeling the wind of its passage. He spun with the momentum, the Fenrir blade lashing out horizontally in a backhand slash aimed at Borvak’s hamstring. Borvak kicked out, his boot catching Leif’s shin guard. Leif stumbled back, narrowly avoiding a thrust from Borvak’s saber that snagged and tore the shoulder of his jerkin.
"ARCHERS!" Leif bellowed. "THE SHAMAN! KEEP SHOOTING! DON'T STOP!" He couldn’t afford breaking his focus for even a second. His world narrowed to the blur of Borvak’s weapons.
A scattered volley of bolts hissed towards the fleeing figure. Most thudded into the snow yards short. One whistled past Grakk’Thor’s head, close enough to tear a feather from his fetishes.
He flinched but didn’t break stride, chanting hoarsely, pouring more of himself into the vortex. Its light flickered momentarily with each close call that forced him to momentarily ignore the connection on the move.
Borvak redoubled his assault on Leif, forcing the younger man onto the absolute defensive. Leif blocked a thrust, deflected an axe swipe, felt the wind of another that scraped his helmet, and was forced to leap back over a fallen body, landing off-balance. Borvak pressed the advantage, saber raised for a killing thrust.
A new recruit crashed into Borvak’s side, shoving him off balance. Borvak snarled, ready to strike the fool down.
Then it came.
WooooOOOoooooooo... WooooOOOoooooooo... WooooOOOoooooooo...
The sound froze every Skarl warrior where they stood. It was the Bone Cry. The Sky Father’s Horn. The fortress that held their elders, women and chilren, was under direct threat.
Borvak's head whipped towards Grakk’Thor, who had also stopped dead in his tracks. The vortex pulsed erratically.
"Dras na? VOK THUL!" Borvak roared, gesturing wildly back towards Abercrombie. "Thrak zhog! Gash vak gorrash!"
Grakk’Thor turned.
"NA!" he shrieked back. "GASH VAK THUL! KHOR UL! UL KHET VAK THUL!" He pointed a shaking, blood-stained finger towards the Talon crossbows. "VEL MOKTHUL VAK ZHOG!"
The two Skarl leaders screamed at each other in their guttural tongue, separated by thirty yards of blood-soaked snow. Warriors milled in confusion, the vortex’s control loosened by their leaders’ distraction and the Horn’s command. Some took hesitant steps towards the fight, others looked back towards the distant fort.
WooooOOOoooooooo... WooooOOOoooooooo... WooooOOOoooooooo...
The Horn blasted again.
Borvak looked from Grakk’Thor to the fort, then back to the Talon lines, where Leif had regained his footing, Fenrir blade held ready, breathing hard. To go meant abandoning the kill, leaving these vermin alive, and retreating while poisoned. But to stay meant potentially losing their sacred fortress, their families that were still there, the woman of his heart and the child that would carry his name.
"VORSAK!" Borvak finally bellowed. He slammed his fist against his chest, then pointed sharply towards Fort Abercrombie. "DRAS NA! VORSAK!"
"THRAKKA!" Grakk’Thor screamed incoherently. "NA VORSAK! THRAKKA!"
But he saw the tide turning.
The Skarl warriors responded to their champion’s command, instead of his. The retreat began, even as their spiritual leader barking the opposite order. Warriors helping weakened comrades onto mounts.
Hatred burned in Grakk’Thor's milky eyes as he looked towards the Talons, specifically towards Leif Fenrir and the archers. He raised both hands towards the pulsating vortex above him.
"THUL ZHOG GASH! VAK DRAS-GUL! MORVAK!"
He clenched his fists and slammed them downwards, as if driving a stake into the earth.
The vortex pulsed once, violently, then exploded outwards. A dozen of thick, writhing tendrils of blood-ice lanced towards the ground between the retreating Skarls and the Talon forces. They struck the frozen earth with wet THOOMPS, erupting into jagged walls of crimson-black ice.
The barriers grew into spiked ramparts five feet high, blocking their way forward while tendrils snapped out, splintering shields that got too close.
The Skarls melted back into the darkness as swiftly as they came.
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The celebration devoured the night.
The first sign was subtle. A groan cut through the chanting near one fire. A warrior staggered to his feet. He took a step towards the edge of the firelight pale beneath his war paint, then doubled over, vomiting onto the ground.
Laughter rippled through his comrades, then jarred to a halt.
The warrior convulsed, fingers clawing at his throat as he gasped for air. His eyes rolled back as he collapsed.
Silence fell around his fire. Then another warrior, crouched near a stew pot, let out a cry. He tried to stand but stumbled, then crashed into two others. Then, a pony, tethered nearby began to snort and stamp, and not long after collapsed onto its knees.
More groans erupted.
"Thul zhog!" A warrior near the altar pointed at the convulsing forms.
The feast was rotting into a nightmare. Warriors clutched amuletses darting skyward, then back to their stricken kin. This was too swift.
The shaman emerged from the gloom near his fire. He raised his arms.
"Gash vak thul! Dras na zhog vok!"
He then gestured at a collapsing warrior, who was momentarily dragged by two nearby men to the altar.
The shaman snatched an obsidian knife from his belt and plunged it into the warrior's chest cavity. He tore upwards, spilling entrails onto the stone. Then, he plunged his hands into the gore, scooping up a mass of liver and a still pulsing heart.
Holding the offal aloft, he began chanting.
"Khet vak! Gorrash vak! Thul zhog dras!"
He bellowed while shoving the organs towards the fire. The flames hissed as fat dripped. He pressed his forehead against the altar stone, chanting faster.
A vortex of smoke coalesced above the shaman's head.
"Vok thul zhog!" the shaman shrieked.
The vortex swirled and twisted upon itself, forming shapes that look like some sort of visage.
The shaman recoiled from the as if burned, the offal falling from his hands with a slap.
"Na! Na! Gash vak khet! Zhog... zhog ul thrakka! Vok thul!" He spat the words like venom, pointing a finger at the nearest salt barrel. "Gorrash vak thul! Ul zhog! The White Death!"
A warrior near the barrel screamed and kicked it over, spilling salt onto the ground. Others backed away in horror, staring at their hands as if they were covered in defile. Women shrieked, grabbing children and trying to shield them.
And then, came the sound they feared.
WooooOOOoooooooo... WooooOOOoooooooo...
Skarl war horns. From the high ridges overlooking the pass approach.
The shaman whirled. His eyes swept over the courtyard, taking in the chaos: warriors retching, staggering, horses down, women screaming, children crying. Yet, some were still on their feet.
"Thrakka!" the shaman roared. He pointed his bone rattle towards the main gate. "Thrakka vak! Zhog na dras!"
He began shoving warriors towards the gate, ignoring those who stumbled or vomited. He called out names of warriors, herding them onto the still standing mounts and out the gate, shouting orders to others to drag the gate shut behind the sortie.
They left behind a courtyard filled with the incapacitated, the dying, women, elders, children, the corpses of the poisoned, and the captives.
Dren stood frozen near the overturned salt barrel.
His eyes snapped from the wrenching bodies to the spilled salt, then to the pen where the prisoners huddled. His gaze zeroed in on the three figures separated from the others – the coward who had escaped the altar, the huge one who was also covered in his own filth, and the warrior-woman who suddenly with her moon-blood.
Rage surged through him.
"YOU!" Dren roared to a guard. "Vok thul zhog ul dras na! Gorrash vak THUL ZHOG!"
The guards made way as Dren stormed towards the pen gate. His eyes, burning with hate, locked onto Eirik's slumped form.
"You crawling filth! You did this! This poison! You brought it! In the salt! You knew!" He kicked the timber gate. "Gash vak zhog vak ul!"
He screamed at the remaining guards – youths and older men, paling as they looked from Dren to the convulsing bodies around them.
One guard stepped forward, spear wavering. "Dren... thul vak zhog... vak ul zhog... torg vak?"
"NA!" Dren shrieked. "Vok thul gorrash vak! Ul drak vak thrak zhog! SEE THEM!"
He jabbed his finger towards Eirik, Olaf, and Helga. "They brought the curse! Their salt! They tricked us! THEY ARE THE UNHOLY TURD ON THE ALTAR OF THE SKY FATHER!"
His face could barely hold his fury now.
"Drag them out! Let their blood wash the curse from the stones! Do it NOW, I'll feed THEIR livers to the fire!"
Two more guards shuffled forward. They moved towards the rope holding the pen gate shut. Inside, the captives shrank back.
Eirik didn't move from his slump against the stone. Instead, he scanned the courtyard.
The shaman took away about sixty warriors and ponies. Less than a hundred incapacitated strewn about – men clutching guts, writhing in spasms, gasping for air. No more than ten standing guards remained.
Calm settled over Eirik. Dren's rage was a gift. His focus was on them, not on the bigger picture. The shaman had taken the muscle, and in this shattered remnant of the Skarl warband…
The ropes on the pen gate creaked as a guard began to untie them. Dren paced, screaming obscenities, demanding their torture.
No more playing weak.
Eirik closed his eyes for a fraction of a second. The frost mana within him surged in response to his will.
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Weapons.
With a sharp CRACK-SHING!, a clever, over two feet long, materialized. It jutted from the ground, positioned for his hands. Two foot-long ice daggers formed in the air before Helga, hilts angled towards her hands. Then, a long, curved saber of ice formed within Olaf's grip.
He refocused his will into a needle point materializing through the rawhide binding their wrists. With a SNAP, they are free.
The process took less than ten seconds.
Skarl guards froze mid-shout, their eyes bulging at the sudden conjuration. Dren’s bellowing demand for torture choked off into a strangled gasp. Even some of the writhing.
Eirik wouldn't give them time to react.
His shoulder slammed into the guard who'd been untying the gate rope. The impact drove the man back into the timber barricade with a crunch. Eirik ripped the cleaver free and swung.
It was an executioner's downward chop. The heavy blade of magically frozen water slammed through the guard's leather cap, skull, and deep into the collarbone with a sound like splitting wet firewood. Brains and bone fragments splattered the gate. The man dropped, folding limply.
At the same time, Helga moved. One dagger punched deep into the throat of a guard staring at Eirik's kill. The other flashed sideways, opening the artery in the thigh of another fumbling for his spear. He screamed, clutching the spray of blood, stumbling back into the writhing form of a poisoned warrior.
The guard nearest Olaf raised his spear in a panicked thrust. Olaf stepped into its momentum, letting the spearpoint scrape off his leather jerkin. His ice saber slashed horizontally. It bit deep into the guard's neck, nearly decapitating him. The head lolled before the body collapsed.
Dren's screams turned to strangled terror.
"KILL THEM! Gorrash vak thul!" He scrambled backward. The remaining guards – perhaps six who weren't doubled over in agony – hesitated. They'd just seen three of their own die in the blink of an eye.
Eirik wouldn't give them time to regroup. "Olaf! Gate! Helga! Cover!"
He lunged for the pen gate, the ice cleaver raised. The rope binding it was half-loosened by the dead guard. Two more chops from the heavy ice blade severed it.
He kicked the gate open. "OUT! NOW! IF YOU WANT TO LIVE, GET OUT AND FIGHT!"
The captives inside stared with shock. A few were already sacrificed. But there were still over a dozen others.
"WEAPONS!" Olaf bellowed. He gestured at the fallen Skarl guards with his free hand. "GRAB THEIR SPEARS! CLUBS! ANYTHING! GET ARMED OR DIE HERE LIKE SHEEP!"
His roar shattered the paralysis. A middle-aged man with missing teeth was the first. He scrambled out, snatching up the spear of the guard Helga had knifed in the throat. A younger man grabbed a fallen war club. Then another, and another.
Helga moved quietly among them. She ditched her daggers and scooped up a Skarl short sword and a shield from a fallen guard. She positioned herself between the emerging prisoners and the knot of terrified and poisoned Skarl non-combatants huddled near the overturned salt barrel – elders, women clutching children, a few youths not yet given warrior braids.
Eirik pointed the dripping ice cleaver towards them.
"You," he gestured to the armed prisoners. "Herd them. The old. The women. The children. Into the corner. By the storehouse. Keep them there. Shield wall. Spears out. Anyone tries to run, anyone tries to fight… you put them down. Hard."
The order was clear. The prisoners shuffled forward, spears and clubs trembling but held outwards. They formed a semicircle, herding the crying, wailing Skarl non-combatants back towards the storehouse corner.
That left the fighters.
Five Skarl guards remained upright, weapons clutched in grips, clustered near Dren who was trying to scramble backwards on his hands and heels. Their eyes darted between the three ice-armed fighters and the armed prisoners penning their families. Panic and poison held them rooted.
Olaf solved their indecision.
With a bellow, he charged. His ice saber whistled through the air. A guard raised his axe in a block. The ice blade sheared through the axe haft and bit deep into the man's shoulder. Olaf ripped it free in a spray of blood, pivoted, and drove the pommel into the face of another guard who lunged at his flank. Bone crunched. The man dropped.
Eirik flanked the cluster. He smashed the cleaver into the knees of two guards standing close together. A crack echoed. Both men screamed, collapsing limply, clutching limbs.
The remaining two guards, wild-eyed, attacked Helga together. One swung a club. She caught it on her buckler, the impact jarring up her arm but barely moving her frame. She slipped inside the swing, her short sword stabbing up under the guard's raised arm, piercing deep into the armpit, finding the gap in his leather armor.
He slumped as the other guard thrust his spear. Helga twisted, letting the point scrape past her ribs. She brought her sword down in a chop onto his spear arm, just below the elbow. Tendons parted. The spear clattered to the ground. Before he could react, she slammed her buckler edge-first into his temple. He dropped.
The courtyard fell into silence.
The five guards who had stood were down: two dead, two crippled and writhing, one unconscious. Olaf stood over the man he'd pommel-struck as he drove the tip of his ice saber through the man's throat. A gurgle, then stillness.
He looked at Eirik. "Cleanup?"
Eirik nodded.
Olaf understood. He moved to each man in turn. A single, downward thrust of the ice saber into the chest. The screams cut off.
Dren whimpered.
He'd backed himself against the stone of the keep wall, unable to retreat further. He'd wet himself. The reek of urine and fear joined the miasma of the courtyard. He saw Helga walking towards him.
Dren scrambled onto his knees, hands raised in supplication.
"Mercy! Mercy, lords! Mercy! Please! I beg you! I'm… I'm a Northman! Like you! See? Like you!"
Tears streamed down his face.
"Just… just a Northman! From Frost Pine Village! They… they raided us! Years ago! Took me! I had no choice! NO CHOICE!" He slammed his forehead against the frozen cobbles. "Please! Spare me! I'll serve! I'll tell you everything! Everything about them! Their plans! The shaman! PLEASE!"
Eirik took a single step forward.
"Everything, Dren? You'll tell me everything?"
He tilted his head, the ice cleaver lowering until its point hovered a hair's breadth from Dren's cheek.
"Yes, lord! YES!" Dren sobbed. "Anything! Everything! I swear it! On my mother's soul! Just… just don't kill me! PLEASE!"
"Let’s start with names. The shaman. What do the Skarls call him?"
"Grakk'Thor!" Dren gasped instantly. "His name is Grakk'Thor! Wise One! Hates impurities—"
"Who among these," Eirik gestured the huddle by the storehouse, "does Grakk'Thor hold most dear?"
Dren's eyes darting towards the frightened group.
"He... he has no true wife now. But... his daughter. Shala. She tends his fires. And... his mother. Old Kethra."
"His sons? Brothers?"
"No sons," Dren stammered. "His blood-sword, his champion... that is Borvak. He stands at Grakk'Thor's left shoulder, always. He went out with him. And... and Borvak's woman, Veyla. She is... she is like a daughter to Grakk'Thor too."
"Point them out."
Dren pointed a trembling finger. "Her! Shala! The one with the braided dark hair!"
A young Skarl woman in her early twenties let out a spit that landed squarely on Dren’s boot.
"See?!! See how they treat me! Unclean whore—!"
Eirik waved a hand. "And the mother?"
Dren pointed again. "There. Kethra. The old crone in the grey fox pelt." An ancient woman sat slumped against the stone wall. She seemed oblivious to the chaos, chanting softly under her breath.
"And Borvak's woman?"
"Veyla. The red-haired one, heavy with child." Dren pointed towards a young woman cradling a swollen belly, her face pale with terror and strain, eyes red-rimmed. She flinched as Dren pointed, burying her face in the shoulder of an older woman beside her.
Shala spat again, this time towards Eirik, though it fell short.
Eirik ignored her.
"Get them. Shala, Kethra, Veyla. Separate them from the rest. Bring them here." He gestured to the cleared space near the body of the guard he'd cleaved.
Olaf didn't hesitate. He reached for Shala. She flailed, raking her nails across his forearm. He grunted, grabbed her wrist in a grip like iron, and hauled her forward despite her kicking and screaming curses. Helga moved to the ancient Kethra. There was no resistance. The old woman simply stopped her chanting and let herself be guided.
Helga then turned to Veyla. The pregnant woman whimpered with a despairing sob as she was helped up and steered towards Eirik.
Dren cowered lower, trying to make himself small against the wall, away from Shala’s venomous gaze.
"Good," Eirik said. "You've made yourself useful, Dren. Keep doing so. How does Grakk'Thor call his warriors back? What signal?"
"Horns! The war horns! Three long blasts! Low note, then high, then low again! Like a dying beast's cry! That means 'Return to Stone!' Urgently! He'd only use it if... if the fortress was threatened!" His eyes darted around the courtyard of the dying. "Which... which it is!"
"Where are the horns kept?" Eirik pressed.
"Usually... usually the watch posts on the gate towers have them. But... but Grakk'Thor keeps his own great horn! In his hut! The bone of a Frost Giant's horn! Loudest thing in the north!"
Dren pointed towards a squat stone structure built against the inner keep wall. It looked more like a burial cairn than a dwelling, adorned with dried herbs, bones, and fetishes. "In there!"
"Can you blow the signal?" Eirik asked.
"Yes! Yes, Lord! I know the call! I can do it! Three blasts! Low-high-low! Loud and clear! They'll come running!"
"But... Commander?" Olaf couldn't resist interrupting him. "Surely you don't want them to come back? We only have three against their dozens!"
Eirik's eyes remained fixed on the three captive women.
"We have fewer men, yes. But we won't be killing them with ourselves."
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They were hauled off the ponies with efficiency. Hands grabbed Eirik's arms and legs, and he hit the ground hard.
The hood was ripped away, revealing Fort Abercrombie at dusk.
The courtyard teemed with Skarls—warriors passing liquor skins, women stirring iron cauldrons over fires. Children added to the noise with their shrieks.
And dominating everything were the wagons.
The salt wagons. Barrels had been rolled out, lids pried open. Warriors crowded around, thrusting hands into white crystals, scooping handfuls and letting grains run through their fingers.
They shouted, laughed, faces alight with joy. Men rubbed salt onto dried meat, poured it into leather sacks, tasted it with grins. Women gathered portions into pouches. The relief in their movements was palpable.
THUD.
A boot connected with Eirik's ribs. Olaf and Helga were prodded toward the western courtyard, where collapsed wall had been rebuilt with timber and rubble into a crude enclosure. A timber gate stood open.
Inside were other prisoners. Two dozen figures huddled against stone—men in roughspun wool and leather, faces gaunt, eyes hollow. A few wore tattered militia colors. Guards with clubs patrolled the perimeter.
The sacrifices Yorick had mentioned.
As the three were shoved inside, the gate slammed shut, ropes creaking as they were secured.
Olaf spat phlegm onto mud.
"Frost Giants' balls... that shaman smelled worse than a week-dead troll." He glared at the celebrating Skarls. "Enjoy yer feast, ye bastards."
A new sound cut through the Skarl shouts—a nasal voice in accented Common Tongue.
"–disgraceful! You expect the Sky Father to accept this offal?"
A man strode into view, flanked by two Skarl warriors. He was a Northman, but different from the captives. His clothes mixed well-made trousers with a ragged Skarl wolf-pelt vest.
He peered at the new prisoners with contempt.
"Fresh meat for the grinder! Got yourselves painted, did you? What a sorry reeking lot!"
He barked broken Skarl at a guard. The guard chuckled but loosened the bindings.
"Right then, maggots! I am Dren. I speak for the Wise One. You answer me, or answer to Skarl steel." His eyes gleamed. "The Blood-Rite demands purity. So we check."
Eirik kept his head down. Dren was kept alive probably for this vetting process for the shaman.
Dren paced along the captives.
"You!" He pointed at a trembling woodsman. "Any sickness? Wounds?"
"N-no, master," the man stammered.
Dren leaned in, sniffing. "Clean enough. Next!"
He stopped before a youth, maybe eighteen, shivering. "Fevers? Did you soil yourself when caught?"
"N-no, master Dren," the youth whispered.
"Good. Wouldn't want the Sky Father offended by coward-stink." Dren continued his inspection. He seemed more interested in inspiring terror than the answers.
Dren stopped before a young woman, and his sneer deepened into something uglier.
"Ah, a bit of skirt," he leered. He gripped her arms, tilted her head back, ran a hand down her neck. "You ever been with a man, sweetheart?" The woman flinched, trying to pull away.
"What of your woman's courses? Are you clean?"
"I... I am not bleeding now, master," she whispered.
"When last?" Dren pressed.
"Two... two weeks past, master."
"Borderline. We'll see what the Wise One says." He moved on.
Eirik's mind clicked. Unclean. That's what the shaman had hissed.
The ritual demanded purity—no sickness, no corruption, no female bleeding. That's why they were brought back alive instead of butchered. To be vetted. To ensure they were suitable vessels for the ritual.
Dren reached Olaf, looking him up and down with a sneer. "Big one. Lots of blood. You bleeding? Got the wasting?"
Olaf met his gaze, eyes cold. "Only sore here is the one lookin' at yer face, rat."
Dren's face flushed. He drove his fist into Olaf's stomach. Olaf grunted, doubling over, but didn't make another sound.
"Pig! You'll squeal prettier on the stone!" Dren looked to a guard, who shrugged.
He stopped before Helga. His gaze lingered, appraising her frame with a leer.
"A fighter-woman. Rare. Makes for a strong plea to the Earth Mother." His eyes dropped to her hands. "Any sickness? Woman's taint?"
Helga stared through him, jaw clenched. "No sickness. Clean cycles."
"Good. Good." He reached toward her face. Helga's eyes snapped to his. Dren hesitated, withdrew his hand with a cough.
He stood before Eirik, peering at the dried blood. "Look at this mess! Is it yours? Or just filth of those you crawled with?"
Eirik kept his voice low. "Theirs, master Dren. Took a knock fighting... protecting the lady."
Dren sniffed. "Smells old. Caked. Wounds underneath?"
"Just bruises, master. No open cuts. Washed before we rode."
Dren grabbed Eirik's chin, inspecting beneath the grime. Eirik forced himself not to react. Dren grunted, satisfied there was no wound beneath the gore.
"You reek, but it's not sick-reek. Clean enough. We'll see what the Wise One says." He shoved Eirik back and clapped his hands. "Right! These three are passable! Keep them separated! Don't let filth spread!"
He strode out, barking mangled Skarl at guards. The gate ropes were pulled taut. Guards laughed at something Dren said as he walked back toward the celebration.
Darkness deepened. The celebrating Skarls seemed frenzied now. Warriors rubbed salt onto faces, into beards, chanting prayers. Some sprinkled it into the fire, sending up gouts of green and blue flame. They danced around the flames.
Olaf slumped beside Eirik. "Passable. Like we're damn sides of meat at market."
Eirik watched the salt-fueled frenzy through timber gaps. Warriors filled waterskins at troughs, adding salt. Women mixed salt into stew bowls. The poison was dispersing.
"The traitor," Eirik whispered. "Dren's not asking for their sake. He's ensuring we're clean. No sickness, no corruption, no woman's blood. That's the 'unclean' the shaman feared. We weren't killed because they needed sacrifices—pure ones."
Olaf's eyes narrowed. "So bleeding might save the women?"
"Possibly. But it would get them killed immediately. Or singled out for torment. Dren would enjoy that." Eirik nodded toward the terrified woman.
Helga opened her eyes. "He touches me, he dies."
"The ritual's soon," Eirik said, watching the shaman emerge near the fire. "They're preparing. We need to be ready.
The salt barrels were the center of activity now. Warriors dipped hands deep into the crystals, scooping fistfuls, rubbing it into their beards, over their faces, chanting prayers. Others poured it into bubbling stews stirred by women whose eyes held exhaustion and relief.
Children darted between legs, snatching pinches of the commodity, tasting it with wide eyes. The poison, Fisk's sodium nitrite, indistinguishable from common salt, was dispersing through the camp, ingested, dissolved in water, rubbed onto preserved meat.
But it wouldn't save them tonight.
The shaman stood near the largest fire, his frame backlit by the flames. His milky eyes seemed to sweep the courtyard, the bone-and-feather rattle hanging from his belt clicking.
He raised a hand, and the chanting intensified.
The Blood-Rite.
"The traitor marked the girl for his own pleasures later." Eirik murmured. "That made it very dangerous for Helga."
Helga didn't look at him.
"Not if they sacrifice you first," Olaf grunted. “Or me.”
“They won’t, because we’re going to make ourselves unclean. Helga first."
Understanding dawned in Olaf's eyes. "The woman's… taint? You can't mean…"
"It's a disqualifier, Olaf," Eirik stated. "The ritual demands purity. A bleeding woman is considered unclean by their faith. If Dren or the shaman believe she's menstruating, she'd be cast out of the sacrifice pool. Probably killed for being 'unclean,' but spared the altar."
Helga's jaw tightened. "I am not bleeding."
"But you could appear to be." Eirik held her gaze. "Smear blood between your thighs. Make them think you are."
"And how," she asked, "would I achieve that, Commander, trussed like a Midwinter goose? Shall I bite my tongue and hope it drips?"
Eirik scanned the pen. The guards were distracted, watching the celebration, jeering at the captives. The shaman was engrossed in his incantations. Dren was moving near the fire, refilling a horn from a skin.
Now.
He focused inward, on the core of frost mana swirling within him. He needed precision, silence, and concealment. Not a blast, not a shield. A pinpoint conjuration.
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[ABILITY: ICE CONJURATION ACTIVATED]
He willed the conjured ice onto the stone of the wall behind Helga. A sharp shard less than an inch long, angled perfectly.
"Against the wall behind you," Eirik murmured.
Helga shifted her position, pressing her bound wrists against the wall, grinding them against the spot Eirik indicated. Her face remained impassive, but a tightening around her eyes betrayed the effort and pain.
A bead of crimson welled on her forearm, near her wrist. She flung them back, smearing it onto the coarse fabric of her trousers near her thigh, working it in, transferring the evidence.
When she settled back, a dark stain was visible on her inner thigh.
Olaf watched the maneuver.
"Frostbite's balls, Commander… that's… dark." Then the practicality of their situation hit him. “But... What about us? "
"I will think of something," Eirik said, "if it comes to that."
He had no plan. Only the certainty that survival demanded any price. Even the unthinkable.
The drumming from the main fire intensified. The chanting rose to a fever pitch. The shaman threw his arms wide, his cry cutting through the noise. Dren scurried over, bowing. A guttural exchange followed. Dren gestured towards the pen, then nodded.
It was time.
Dren swaggered towards the gate.
"Up! Up, you offal!" he barked. "The Wise One calls! The Sky Father demands sacrifice! Stand and show your worthiness!"
Guards hauled the captives to their feet.
Dren paced, gaze lingering where he pleased. He stopped before the woodsman.
"A fitting plea for strong winds." He nodded to a guard. "This one."
The woodsman let out a sob as he was grabbed and dragged towards the gate. His cries were swallowed by the Skarls' chant.
Dren moved to Helga. His eyes flicked to the dark stain on her trousers.
"Ah. The fighter-woman. Thought you seemed… clean."
He turned and spat towards the shaman, shouting in mangled Skarl, pointing at Helga.
The shaman let out a hiss. "Thrak vak! Ul gash zhog!"
Dren grinned. “She’s rejected! Take her out!”
He gestured to the guards, but there was disappointment in his eyes. He'd hoped for… more. His gaze lingered on her with malice before snapping away.
His eyes settled on Eirik.
“You! You'll do." Dren nodded to the guards. "This one."
Hands seized Eirik, hauling him forward. Olaf lunged, but a guard's spear shaft slammed into his gut, doubling him over with a gasp.
"Leave him!" Olaf wheezed.
Eirik didn't resist.
Helga was shoved to the side, away from the sacrifice group, towards the perimeter of the pen. Disqualified, spared the knife for now, but still trapped. Her eyes met Eirik's as he was hauled past. There was no gratitude, only the acknowledgment of a shared nightmare.
He was thrust out of the pen alongside the woodsman. The noise and heat from the central fire was overwhelming. Dozens of Skarl faces turned towards them, eyes reflecting the firelight.
At the edge of the firelight stood a stone slab – the altar. Obsidian black in the flickering light, it absorbed the fire's glow.
The woodsman was first. He was dragged screaming towards the slab. Two warriors held him down while a third, wielding a heavy blade, stepped forward. The shaman raised his rattle, his chant reaching a crescendo. The Skarls roared.
The blade rose and fell.
A wet thunk echoed. The screaming stopped. A cheer erupted. Blood flowed across the stone, running into carved grooves towards the fire. The shaman dipped his fingers in it, painting symbols on his own face, chanting louder.
Eirik watched despite the horror.
Then hands seized him. He was dragged towards the stone. The smell of fresh blood from the woodsman was overwhelming. Hot breath washed over him from the warriors pinning his arms.
The executioner wiped his blade on his furs, raising it again. The shaman turned his eyes towards Eirik, the rattle shaking. The crowd's roar was deafening.
This was it. His moment. He had to make it convincing. He had to be unclean.
He let go.
Every muscle tensed not in resistance, but in surrender to terror. He didn't fight the hands holding him. He sagged. He let his legs buckle, collapsing towards the stone, making himself a dead weight. A whimper escaped his lips.
"NO! PLEASE! NOT ME! PLEASE!" His voice cracked. He thrashed weakly in the spasms of panic. Tears streamed down his face. "I'M NOT WORTHY! I'M NOT PURE! PLEASE! SPARE ME!"
He pissed himself. The warm rush soaked his trousers, the odor cutting through the blood and smoke. The Skarls roared with laughter. Spittle flew. They pointed, jeering at the coward.
"Vok vak gorrash!"
The executioner paused, a look of amusement on his face. He glanced at the shaman.
This… this was pathetic.
Dren pushed forward. "What's this sniveling? Trying to delay the inevitable, filth?" He grabbed Eirik's hair, yanking his head up.
Through the fake tears, Eirik met Dren's eyes with terror. "Please… master… please… I can't… my guts…" He moaned. “I’m foul… unclean!"
Then, as Dren leaned in closer, sneering, Eirik focused all his will. Inwards. Deep into his own core, his lower abdomen. Just enough to trigger a spasm of the smooth muscle lining his bowels.
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He felt it happen. A cramping. A pressure. Then release.
A gurgling, splattering sound erupted from beneath him. The stench that hit was overwhelming, a miasma of digested rations that cut through the blood and smoke. Warmth spread through his already soaked trousers.
Dren recoiled as if struck, gagging.
"FROST CURSE YOU! DISGUSTING WRETCH!"
The warriors holding Eirik released him, jumping back with cries of disgust. He collapsed onto the stone beside the woodsman's corpse, a shivering, weeping, foul-smelling wreck. The crowd's laughter died, replaced by gasps, curses, and retching.
The executioner lowered his blade, his face twisted in revulsion.
The shaman let out a shriek.
"UL! GASH VAK THUL! NA DRAS!"
Dren waved at the guards near the pen. "Get him OUT! Clean him! Throw him back with the other filth! He's spoiled! Utterly spoiled!"
He pointed a finger towards the pen. "Him! The young one! The one who shakes! Bring him! NOW! The Sky Father will not be mocked! He demands pure blood!"
The guards hauled Eirik up, holding him at arm's length, his legs trailing, dripping filth. He kept his head lolled, moaning, playing the utterly broken, fouled creature.
As they dragged him back towards the pen, past Olaf who stood frozen by the gate, Eirik risked a glance. The young boy – barely sixteen – was being pulled screaming from the huddled captives.
Olaf couldn't hold back his horror.
Then, as Eirik passed within a foot of him, Olaf felt it. A tiny, icy spark, like a frozen pinprick, jabbing into his lower abdomen. The faintest tendril of Eirik's frost mana, slipping past the guards, an intrusion.
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A sudden, freezing pressure emerged deep inside. His eyes widened, locking onto Eirik's slumped form.
The same trick.
A moment later, Olaf's own bowels clenched. He doubled over with a grunt, his face flushing, not with anger this time, but with the overwhelming physical necessity forced upon him.
The guards dragging Eirik paused for a second, wrinkling their noses as Olaf fought the losing battle against his own body.
Olaf stared at the form of Eirik Stormcrow, lying in his own filth. A sound escaped his teeth.
"You… fucking… bastard."
———
The air in Lord Varn's hall was very cold.
Moonlight streamed through windows, illuminating dust motes where portraits had once hung. The feasting table shoved against a wall with only a candle. The hearth yawned black and cold.
Lord Dagan Varn hunched in the room's only remaining chair.
"Lord Varn," Leif began. "We come not for silver or food. Only your men. We need your garrison to storm the ruin."
Varn didn't lift his head.
"Storm Abercrombie? With what, boy? Prayers? You saw my hall. That's all that's left."
He looked up.
"You bought a ruin, Fenrir. You didn't buy me."
Isolde stepped forward. "Lord Varn, Commander Stormcrow will break the Skarls. But not alone. This is about reclaiming your land. Your honor."
"Honor?" Varn laughed, then coughed. "Honor buys no grain. Pays no debts. I signed away Abercrombie. Stormcrow gambled and lost." His gaze flickered to the cold hearth. "I've buried too many sons on that mountain. I will not bury more for a bastard's gamble."
Leif clenched his fists. "They're consuming our poisonous bait tonight! If we delay—"
"And what would you have me do?" Varn surged up. "March my small crew up that pass? Into two hundred Skarl horse-archers? In the dark? That's not courage, boy, that's suicide!"
He slumped back.
"My duty is to the remnants clinging to life in these walls. Go. Die for your Commander. Leave me to my peace."
Silence fell. The candle guttered.
Fisk cleared his throat and stepped forward with a bow.
"Beggin' yer pardon, yer Lordship. A moment? Just a demonstration?”
From his belt pouch, he produced a sackcloth bundle and snatched out a rat by the tail. The creature squeaked and writhed.
Varn stared, disgusted. "What in the frozen hells—?"
"A rodent, yer Lordship! Symbol of decay, some say. But also... survivor." Fisk reached into another pouch and produced a pinch of white salt. "Now, see... salt. Lifeblood of the Skarls."
He held the salt near the rat's nose. The creature sniffed, eyes fixed on the crystals.
"The Skarls crave it. We gave 'em a feast. Barrels full!" He winked. “Just look."
He sprinkled the crystals onto the rat's snout. The creature started licking, consuming them.
"Give it a moment, yer Lordship."
They watched. The rat's licking grew intense. Its back legs jerked. Its body arched rigid. A gasp escaped it. Then it hung from Fisk's fingers, eyes glassy.
"See? Full of vigor one moment... peaceful rest the next!" Fisk shook the dead rat. "Quick and quiet. None o' that messy business."
Varn stared, understanding dawning. "You poisoned the salt? The whole shipment?"
Fisk tossed the rat aside. "What needed doin'. Them Skarls right now? They're feastin' on Commander Stormcrow's 'special seasoning'. Stomachs fulla victory... and death."
Varn surged up, trembling. "You fools! If they figure it out... they'll wipe Frostholme off the map! They'll skin every last one of us!"
"Only if they figure it out before it finishes 'em!" Fisk's voice turned hard. "Only if we leave Commander Stormcrow trapped there when they start droppin'. Poisoned Skarls with prisoners? Think they'll go quiet? Stormcrow needs us there! Now! Before dawn!"
"No!" Varn backed away. "This is madness! I want no part of it! Get out! GUARDS!"
Two thin men in mail shuffled in.
"Escort these people out," Varn hissed. "I want them gone."
The guards shuffled them into the courtyard. The doors thudded shut with a final sound.
The moonlit courtyard was silent after the hall. Bjorn, Harkin, Yorick, and the Talon veterans emerged from the shadows near the stables.
"He refused?" Bjorn rumbled.
"Completely," Isolde said. "We are on our own."
"Damn the coward," Harkin spat.
Leif stared at the stars. Eirik, Olaf, Helga... trapped in that ruin, surrounded by Skarls feasting on poison. Time was running out.
"Right. Varn wants no part? Fine. We make it everyone's part. We wake the whole hold. The plaza. At the bell tower. We make them listen, and decide."
Yorick swallowed at Leif’s sudden plan.
"And say what? Beg them to die?"
Fisk clapped him on the shoulder. "Nah, scribe. We give 'em proof. Now, Bjorn! That muster bell on the tower – reckon you can make it sing?"
Bjorn cracked his knuckles. "Been waitin' for an excuse."
He reached the stone bell tower. Wrapping arms around the iron bell itself, he heaved. With a groan, the bell tilted.
Bjorn threw his weight into it.
CLANG! The sound was jarring. He did it again. CLANG! Windows rattled. CLANG! Alarmed faces began to appear at doorways and windows.
Doors creaked open along the narrow streets.
Men stumbled out in hastily-thrown cloaks, women clutching shawls, children peering wide-eyed from behind their mothers' skirts.
"What's that racket?"
"Fire?"
"Skarls?"
But there were no horns from the walls, no sounds of battle. Just that damning bell, over and over, demanding attention. People began moving toward the plaza with the cautious shuffle of the sleep-addled, drawn by the mystery and the growing crowd.
The plaza began to fill with men—and women, and children too. They clustered in small groups, whispering among themselves, eyes darting between the bell tower and the keep where Lord Varn's halls remained stubbornly dark and silent.
Leif stood on the steps of the bell tower. He drew the Fenrir blade. Its wolf-head pommel caught the moonlight.
"People of Frostholme!" He forced his voice deeper. "Look at me! I am Leif Fenrir! Son of Stalwart Arn Fenrir!"
He pointed west, towards the peaks.
"Out there, right now, Fort Abercrombie is held by Skarls. Skarls who killed your sons! Your husbands! Your brothers! Skarls who starve your children! Block your trade! Make every step outside these walls a death sentence!"
Mutters rose.
"Varn sits in his hall!" Leif gestured towards the keep. "He says Abercrombie is lost! He speaks false! Abercrombie was lost because men like Varn forgot how to FIGHT FOR IT!"
He saw heads began to nod.
"Commander Stormcrow hasn't forgotten!" Leif shouted. "He staked everything so that Abercrombie can be reclaimed!"
He took a breath. The crowd was silent now. "But I know many of you still fear Skarls! Yet, you no longer have to, at least for tonight! For they are being poisoned at this very moment." Leif slammed the flat of his blade against his chestplate. "With the salt they stole from us!"
A murmur. Salt?
Fisk dipped his hand into the sack and pulled out a handful of white crystals. They gleamed in the moonlight.
"Look familiar? Frostholme salt!" He held it high.
He gestured, and a talon brought him a black gelding. Fisk murmured something soothing, stroking its neck. Then, with a swift motion, he shoved the handful of salt into the horse's mouth, clamping its jaw shut with strength.
The crowd gasped. "What're ye doing?"
The horse snorted, shook its head, trying to spit out the mass. Fisk held firm for a few seconds, then released. The horse coughed. For a moment, nothing.
Then, it happened.
The horse jerked as if struck. A choking gasp tore from its throat. Its legs stiffened; its body went board-straight. It swayed, hooves scrabbling on the cobbles. Foam bubbled at its nostrils. It crashed to its knees, then onto its side, legs kicking in spasms.
A stunned silence blanketed the plaza. People stared at the struggling horse, then at the bag in Fisk's hand. The transformation was too fast and too wrong.
Fisk held up the bag again.
"That, people of Frostholme, ain't just salt. That's Commander Stormcrow's gift to the Skarls. His 'special blend.' That's what they're guzzling down in Abercrombie right now! Happy as clams, thinkin' they hit the motherlode!" He pointed a finger at the horse. "That is their victory feast!"
He turned to the crowd.
"Now! How long d'ye reckon before it starts takin' effect on a couple hundred Skarls? An hour? Two? Before they start droppin'? Before the cramps hit? Before their warriors can't draw their bows, before their horses can't run?"
A scarred guard from the gate stepped forward. "By the Frost Mother... it was true?"
Leif took over.
"BUT! But... right now, Commander Stormcrow is in that fort! With Olaf! With Helga! Trapped! While the Skarls are feastin' on death! When they realize what's killin' them... what do you think they'll do to their prisoners? To the man who tricked them?"
His voice dripped to a hiss.
"They'll skin 'em alive! They'll make their deaths last days! They'll send Stormcrow's head back on a pike as a warning! And then... when the poison thins their numbers, but doesn't kill them all... who do you think they'll blame? Who do you think they'll come for next? Frostholme! Starving, defenseless Frostholme!"
He let that sink in.
"Commander Stormcrow bought you time!" Leif roared, pointing back towards Abercrombie. "He bought you a chance! To STRIKE! To BREAK them! To take back YOUR fort! To open YOUR passes! And what do you do? Huddle? Wait? Hope the death sticks to the Skarls and not yourselves?"
He spat on the cobbles near the dead horse.
"Varn hides! Stormcrow fights! He fights for you! He's trapped in that pit, right now, because he dared to try and pull you out of yours! He chose the hard path! The rewarding path! The path that screams 'You will not break me!' to the gods themselves!"
From scattered positions throughout the crowd, Talon veterans who had melted into the gathering began the roar. "FOR ABERCROMBIE!" shouted one near the front. "DEATH TO SKARLS!" bellowed another from the back, pumping his fist.
The enthusiasm spread like wildfire as neighbors looked to neighbors.
"FOR MY BOY! FOR ABERCROMBIE!"
"OPEN THE PASSES!"
"THEN WE GO!" Leif roared. "WE GO NOW! NOT AS VARN'S MEN, BUT AS FROSTHOLME'S! AS ABERCROMBIE'S! AS THE TALONS OF THE STORMCROW!"
He pointed the sword west, towards the mountains and the trapped man who had thrust this burden upon him.
"TO ABERCROMBIE! FOR VENGEANCE! FOR OUR FUTURE! MOVE!"
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Below, Leif and Isolde were mounted near the rear of the fleeing group. Leif looked back constantly, trying to shield Isolde. Isolde clung to her saddle, posture rigid in fear – too rigid. The posture of nobility trying not to show it.
He saw it a split second before it happened.
A fleeing guard's horse veered, crashing into Isolde's mount. The startled horse reared with a scream. Isolde, taken by surprise, lost her grip. She tumbled sideways into the deep snow with a cry.
"MOTHER!”
Leif wrenched his horse around, leaping from the saddle before it stopped. He crashed to his knees beside her, grabbing her arm to haul her up.
Damn it. Eirik's calm fractured. They just became prime targets.
High on the ridge, dark figures moved. Three Skarl scouts peeled away from their vantage point. They vanished into a steep gully that fed towards the trail bend where Leif struggled with Isolde.
Flanking maneuver. They'll cut them off from the main retreat.
Eirik calculated distances. The main Talon group – Olaf, Helga, the veterans, and the bulk of the fleeing guards – were disappearing around a curve.
Too far to help.
Leif was trying to get Isolde back onto her panicked horse, which was dancing away. The three Skarl scouts burst from the gully mouth onto the trail ahead of them, blocking their retreat which was only fifty yards away.
The scouts whooped, cries cutting through the air. Bows appeared in their hands. Not aiming yet.
They were herding them.
Two spread out. The third scout urged his pony forward. He barked a command.
Leif shoved Isolde behind him, drawing his sword. The Fenrir blade flashed in the sunlight.
"Stay back!" Leif yelled. Isolde staggered behind him, terrified. All their pretense gone.
The lead Skarl scout chuckled. He pointed at Leif's sword, then at Isolde, barking more commands. His companions nocked arrows, drawing half-tension.
Surrender, or get shot.
They actually want prisoners. Eirik forced himself to slow his pony. He needs to capitalize this fleeing moment.
Seventy-Two and Seventy-Three, who had lagged behind, reined in their panting mounts nearby. They saw the trapped nobles.
"Frost!" Seventy-Three gasped. "Skarls! Got the fancy ones!" Seventy-Two hissed, turning his horse. "Forget 'em! Ride!"
"STOP!" Eirik barked. He ripped the bow from his back. "Cover 'em! Shoot the bastards!"
Seventy-Two stared at him like he was insane.
"Shoot?! Against three? With this?" He waved his spear. "Are you cracked, Seventy-Six? We run!"
"Run where?" Eirik snarled. He fumbled an arrow from his quiver, nocking it. "They see us! They'll hunt us down! Help the nobles! Maybe they pay extra!"
Seventy-Two hesitated, his eyes darting between the trapped nobles and escape.
"Damn it! Fine! Shoot!" He dismounted, grabbing his own bow. Seventy-Three followed suit, trembling as he nocked an arrow.
Distraction. That's all I need them for.
Eirik raised his bow. But he wasn’t planning on shooting arrows.
He aimed past the scouts, at a patch of snow-covered stone beneath the pony's hooves. He poured a sliver of Frost Mana down the arrow shaft, willing it not into the arrowhead, but into the fletching – guiding the flight path, infusing the air around it with cold.
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He loosed the arrow. It flew, wobbling – right for a panicked recruit's shot. It missed the lead scout by a foot, thudding into the stone patch.
NOW.
The Frost Mana exploded from the arrow's impact point not as ice, but as a slick layer of black ice across the stone and packed snow.
The lead scout, grinning, urged his pony forward to close the distance on Leif. His pony's front hoof landed on the iced stone.
WHUMP-SLIDE!
The pony's leg shot out sideways as if kicked. It gave a scream, crashing onto its side in a tangle of flailing legs. The lead scout roared in surprise, thrown into the snow.
"HAH! Got one!" Seventy-Two yelled, misunderstanding. He loosed his own arrow. It flew high over the heads of the other scouts. Seventy-Three's shot plopped into the snow ten yards short.
But chaos erupted. The two other scouts stared in shock at their fallen leader. Leif seized the moment. He grabbed Isolde's arm. "Run! To the rocks!" He pointed towards a cluster of boulders twenty yards off the trail.
The two mounted scouts recovered, angry now. They turned their bows from Leif towards the unexpected attackers. Two arrows hissed through the air.
One whistled past Eirik's head. The other slammed into Seventy-Three's chest with a thump. The recruit gasped, eyes wide with disbelief, then toppled backwards into the snow.
Dead.
Seventy-Two screamed, terror. He dropped his bow, scrambled back onto his pony, and kicked it into a gallop back down the trail.
Eirik ducked behind his pony. He’s alone again.
The scouts were distracted by Seventy-Two's flight and Leif dragging Isolde towards the rocks. The downed scout leader was struggling to his feet, cursing, his pony still thrashing.
Eirik nocked another arrow.
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He fired low. The arrow struck the snow five yards in front of the charging scouts. The Frost Mana flared – a blue-white flash. A jagged ridge of solid ice erupted from the impact point, spanning the width of the trail.
The scouts' ponies slammed into the barrier. One pony shied, throwing its rider. The other managed to leap over, but stumbled upon landing, its rider clinging.
Eirik didn't wait. He vaulted back onto his pony, kicking it towards Leif and Isolde, who were at the boulders.
"TO THE ROCKS! MOVE!"
Leif threw Isolde behind the boulder, then whirled, sword ready, breathing hard. Eirik skidded his pony to a halt behind the rocks, jumping down beside them.
Isolde stared at him, wide-eyed, panting.
The thrown scout was rising. The one who stumbled was freeing his pony. The leader was back on his feet, furious, drawing his saber.
They abandoned their bows. Close quarters now. They started advancing towards the rocks, spreading out.
Three Skarls. Trained warriors. Against two nobles and a "scarecrow."
Still manageable. If I stay subtle.
Eirik grabbed Leif's arm, pulling him lower behind the rock. "Stay down! Arrows!"
Leif flinched, ducking. "We can't fight them here! They'll flank us!" "Hold… position…"
He peered around the rock. The scouts were thirty yards away, closing, sabers gleaming. He focused on the snow in front of their boots.
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He targeted the packed snow crust under the leading scout's boot. He sent a jolt of Frost Mana, not freezing, but shattering the bonds holding the snow crystals together.
The leading scout stepped down. His boot plunged through the snow crust, sinking knee-deep. He stumbled, off-balance.
"NOW! HIM!" Eirik yelled at Leif.
Leif, reacting to the opportunity, lunged from behind the rock. He didn't hesitate. He drove the Fenrir blade forward in a thrust. It punched through the leather chest plate of the stumbling scout. The man grunted, eyes widening, then collapsed.
One down.
The other two scouts roared, charging. Leif yanked his blade free, stumbling back behind the rock. Isolde pressed against the stone, a sob escaping her.
Too close. Eirik's mind raced. He needed to end this.
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He targeted the thin layer of meltwater above the frozen ground beneath the snowpack. He supercooled it. Not to ice, but to a state of frictionless slush.
Both scouts charged the last few yards. Their boots hit the patch Eirik had targeted.
WHOOSH-SLURP!
Their feet shot out from under them as if on oil. Both men went down hard, flat on their backs in the snow, their sabers flying. They gasped, stunned.
"LEIF! NOW!"
Leif saw the opening. He surged forward again, driven by terror and adrenaline. He plunged his sword into the chest of the nearest prone scout before the man could rise. The scout jerked and went still. Leif whirled towards the last one, raising his blade.
The last scout scrambled backwards. He raised his hands and screamed before Leif drilled the sword down his throat.
Blood pounded in Eirik's ears after the Skarl scouts' choking gasps faded.
"Mother!" Leif spun. "Are you hurt?”
Isolde shook her head, even though her composure was shattered.
"We need to move!" Eirik hissed. He was already scanning the high ridges. "They heard that. The main force will be coming. Now.”
Leif looked around frantically. "The horses... where—?”
Damn. Their small victory now tasted like ashes.
Panic surged.
"The horses!" Leif whirled, scanning the trampled ground near the rocks. "Where are our damned horses?”
Panic surged. His pony, Seventy-Six’s brown gelding, Seventy-Three’s mount with its dead rider, Seventy-Two’s fleeing horse – all gone.
Only the thrashing, wounded pony of the fallen Skarl scout remained nearby, leg twisted, eyes rolling white with terror and pain.
Panic flared on everyone's face.
On foot, deep in Skarl territory, with the thunder of a war band imminent? Death was a certainty.
Hoofbeats.
Hard, fast, approaching from the direction of Frostholme.
Eirik tensed, hand flying to the crude sword at his belt – a recruit's blade, utterly inadequate. Leif raised the Fenrir steel, bracing.
Olaf and Helga burst around the trail bend, sharing Olaf's powerful warhorse.
"You mad fools!" Olaf roared as Isolde let out a relieving sigh. "Thought you were dead meat! Where are the others?”
His eyes darted to the three Skarl corpses, then to the wide-eyed recruits who hadn't made it.
"Where's your damn mount?!”
"Bolted!" Leif yelled. "The lady fell, the Skarls jumped us… our horse bolted while we dealt with them…”
"Frost take it!" Olaf spat. His gaze flicked to the distant ridge where the first scout signal had been seen. No movement yet, but the tension in the air screamed it was coming.
“Frost take us," Eirik rasped, striding towards Helga. "No time! Mount! Leif, take your mother! RIDE FOR FROSTHOLME! DON'T LOOK BACK! Helga!”
The brutal math played on their minds. They had one horse for five people. One horse could carry two people at most – three in desperation, but not far or fast enough to outrun Skarl pursuit.
Olaf's weathered face became grim.
“Aight. The lady and the boy. That's it. Rest of us stay.”
"No!" Leif started forward. "I won't leave—“
"GO!" Eirik bellowed. "That's an order, damn you! Get your mother to safety! That's your ONLY JOB!"
Isolde scrambled towards Olaf’s warhorse. He hauled her up roughly in front of him with a grunt.
Leif hesitated. "But you—"
"DO IT!" Eirik bellowed. He threw a desperate glance back up the trail. The distant rumble was growing – not hooves, but a deep vibration through the ground. "Main force is coming! Feel that?! GO!"
Helga shoved the reins into Leif shaking hands. “Lieutenent! NOW!"
Isolde met Eirik's eyes for a heartbeat. She hauled herself into the saddle. Leif vaulted up behind her, his arms wrapping around her waist.
"RIDE!” The three on foot screamed it in unison.
Leif kicked his heels hard. The horses surged forward, tearing down the trail towards Frostholme.
They didn't look back.
Silence descended again. The ground tremor was unmistakable now. A low, rhythmic drumming that promised annihilation.
"Plan?" Olaf spat.
"Dead men tell no tales," Eirik said. He knelt beside the nearest scout corpse. "Smear their blood. Head wounds. Make it messy. Play dead among them. Eyes shut. Don't breathe deep. Don't move. Not a muscle."
Olaf cursed but saw the grim necessity. Helga moved with swift efficiency, scooping gore from a gaping stomach wound. The stench was overpowering.
Eirik plunged his hands into still-warm blood, coating his jerkin, face, hair. He smeared it over Olaf's weathered features and Helga's stern jaw. They dragged the bodies into a gruesome tangle near the boulders. Then they collapsed into the gory pile, limbs entwined with the dead Skarls.
Eirik positioned himself face-down, an arm flung over a dead scout's back. The cold bit through his jerkin instantly.
"Shut your eyes," Eirik hissed. "Remember. Dead as stone."
He squeezed his eyes shut. The only sound was his own frantic heartbeat and the increasingly deafening vibration through the earth.
Thump. Thump. Thump-thump-thump.
Hooves. Dozens of them. A rolling thunder that filled the world, vibrating into his bones. The air thickened with the smell of horse sweat, leather, unwashed bodies, and something sharper – the scent of predators on the hunt.
They came like a wave crashing onto a frozen shore. The rhythmic pounding of hooves, the jingle of harnesses, the creak of leather, guttural shouts echoing off the valley walls.
"Gorrash! Hurz vak! Thrakka!"
The lead riders reached the bend. The ground shook violently beneath Eirik's cheek. Heavy hooves slammed down mere feet away, spraying icy mud onto his neck. A horse snorted, hot breath gusting over him. He didn't flinch. He was stone.
More riders poured in. He heard the wet crunch of hooves on frozen flesh as riders maneuvered over the scattered bodies. A low, satisfied growl came from above, followed by a spatter of liquid hitting snow. Piss. Disdain for the slain.
Horses stamped and circled. Riders dismounted with heavy thuds. The guttural language washed over them.
"Yar? Vok thrak?"
"Na dras! Hurz vak torg!”
A boot nudged one of the scout corpses near Eirik's head.
"Khel… vak?
Anger crackled in the response: "Vok na dras! Thrak vak!”
A sharp kick landed on the dead scout's ribs, jolting the body against Eirik's arm. He held his arm limp.
The Skarls moved among the bodies with chilling efficiency. Metal scraped – looting.
A rough hand grabbed Eirik's shoulder, rolling him partially onto his back. He kept his limbs utterly slack, head lolling. His eyes remained squeezed shut, lashes sticky with drying blood.
A grunt. "Drak."
He was dumped back face-down into the freezing muck. The scavenging continued. Olaf, lying nearby, let out the faintest groan as a boot pressed hard on his outstretched hand. Olaf didn't react further. He remained still, a gory, unmoving lump.
Just as the scavenging seemed to wind down, a new sound cut through the low murmurs. A rhythmic, bone-chilling rattle.
Slow, deliberate footsteps approached through the carnage. Unlike the heavy boots of warriors, these steps were lighter, almost ethereal, yet they carried palpable weight.
Silence fell over the Skarl warriors. The rattle grew louder. It sounded like dried bones clicking together.
The footsteps stopped nearby. Eirik felt a wave of unnatural cold wash over him, penetrating his blood-soaked clothes. It wasn't mountain chill; it was the deep, sucking cold of the grave. A guttural voice, ancient and rasping, spoke.
"Thul drak... na dras... vak ul."
A collective intake of breath from the warriors.
"Thul drak!" the shaman repeated, rattle intensifying. "Na dras! Trul zhog vak!"
The shaman's staff thumped beside his head. The cold intensified, crawling across his skin like icy spiders. He felt a probing tendril of awareness, cold and invasive, skitter over his mind, searching for the spark of life he desperately concealed.
"Vak! Vak! Vak!” The shaman hissed, the rattle now a furious crescendo. A bony finger jabbed Eirik hard between the shoulder blades. "Thrak vak gorrash!"
Rough hands seized him, hauling him violently upright. His eyes flew open.
He was met with a scene from a nightmare.
Skarl warriors surrounded him – dozens of them, faces hard planes beneath fur-trimmed helms, eyes like chips of flint. They stank of blood, horse, and rancid fat. Beyond them, the slope swarmed with more warriors and shaggy mountain ponies. Hundreds.
Helga and Olaf were similarly dragged to their feet. Olaf snarled, trying to wrench free, but a spear-butt slammed into his ribs. Helga remained terrifyingly still.
The shaman stood before them. He was skeletal, draped in ragged furs crusted with feathers and old blood. His face was sunken, nose a hooked beak, lips drawn back from yellowed teeth. His eyes were milky white, utterly blind, yet they seemed to bore into Eirik's soul.
"Thul drak," he rasped. "Khel vak ul... khel vak zhog gash!"
The shaman leaned closer to Eirik. The stench of decay and old herbs was overwhelming. Those milky eyes seemed to see nothing and everything. A bony, claw-like hand shot out, gripping Eirik's chin, forcing his blood-smeared face upwards.
"Vak... thul vak Skarl," the shaman whispered, his breath like tomb air. "Vak... ul... gorr?" He tilted his head. "Khel vak... gash zhog!"
He released Eirik's chin with a shove and turned to bark orders. "Hur vak gorrash! Torg! Na dras!" He pointed towards the ruined fort. "Zug thak! Gash thrak!"
Warriors grabbed them, binding their wrists brutally tight with rawhide thongs. Hoods made of stinking, greasy leather were yanked over their heads.
It was darkness again.
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The predawn cold cut through Eirik's borrowed jerkin. He huddled with the rest of Team Seven – Seventy-Two, Seventy-Three, Seventy-Four, and Seventy-Five – near the stables outside Frostholme's main gate.
Mistress Isobel Vance's salt caravan was busy. Wagons creaked as drivers checked harnesses. Nervous guards, paid a premium for this suicide run, fumbled with spear hafts. The air was thick with fear and horse sweat.
Olaf finished barking orders to the other teams, assigning them to Bjorn and Harkin for training. Then his gaze fell on Team Seven.
"You lot! Follow Helga. Move yer skinny arses!"
Helga jerked her head towards the tavern's back door. Team Seven stumbled after her, Seventy-Two muttering about "scarecrows" under his breath.
Outside, the mountain air was a welcome shock after the tavern's stale warmth and desperation. Frostholme huddled beneath them, grey.
Helga led them down narrow alleys, away from the main gates. She stopped beside a stable tucked behind a chandler's shop. Inside, five mountain ponies stood saddled and ready, breath pluming in the cold air. Packhorses laden with covered bundles waited nearby. Olaf appeared moments later, leading his warhorse.
"Mount up," Olaf swung into his saddle. "We ain't got all day."
Eirik moved to the most unassuming pony – a brown gelding. He checked the girth strap, ensuring it was tight. Standard tack. Good. Unremarkable. He hauled himself into the saddle with awkwardness.
"Listen sharp, maggots," Olaf gestured towards the covered bundles. "We ain't the main event. We're the scouts. Eyes and ears. Outriders for Mistress Vance's salt wagons."
Seventy-Four paled. "Skarl territory? Sir? Ain't that...?"
"Suicide?" Olaf finished with a grim chuckle. "Could be. That's why she pays so well. But our job ain't to fight a war band. Our job is to see trouble comin' before it hits the wagons."
He fixed each of them with a stare, lingering on 'Errol’.
"We ride ahead. We find the high ground. We watch the trails. If we see Skarl scouts – and we will – we don't engage. We turn tail and ride back to warn the convoy. Clear?"
Seventy-Two sneered. "Run? That's the grand plan? Sounds cowardly.”
"Cowardly? Tryin' to fight two hundred Skarl horse-archers with five scouts is stupid, boy. Dead stupid."
Olaf's hand shot out, grabbing Seventy-Two by the jerkin and hauling him halfway out of his saddle.
"Yer job is to see 'em, yell the warning, and run. Do that right, and you live to spend yer ten talons. Do it wrong..." He shoved Seventy-Two back into his saddle. "...and yer mother mourns. Got it?"
Seventy-Two found his bravado replaced by sullen silence. "Aye, sir."
"Good." Olaf turned his horse. "Helga, take point. You two," he jabbed a finger at Seventy-Four and Seventy-Five, "flank the packhorses. Scarecrow," his gaze landed on Errol, full of practiced contempt, "you stick with Helga. Try not to fall off. Seventy-Two, Seventy-Three, ride drag. Watch our backsides. Move out!"
Helga nudged her horse forward without a word.
Eirik fell in beside her as they left the stable yard, heading not for the main southern road, but a narrower track winding upwards into the pine-clad foothills behind Frostholme. The sun was a cold smear behind thick clouds.
The climb was steep.
The ponies huffed as snow crunched beneath their hooves. Eirik kept his senses dialed high. His eyes scanned the terrain – the dense stands of trees offering perfect cover.
This is where they'll watch.
Helga rode with the quiet intensity of a hunter. Seventy-Four and Seventy-Five looked tense and jumpy at every cracking branch. Olaf maintained position just ahead of the packhorses.
Hours crawled by.
They stopped at midday by a frozen spring to water the horses and gnaw on hardtack and dried venison. Eirik kept to himself, leaning against a frost-slicked boulder.
"See anythin', Scarecrow?" Seventy-Two mocked, tearing off a chunk of venison. "Or ye too busy shiverin'?"
Eirik kept his gaze on the distant ridge line. He didn't need to see far yet. He needed to think like a Skarl scout commander. Where would I place watchers if I was them?
Olaf snorted. "Leave the lad be, Seventy-Two. He's keepin' his mouth shut. Unlike some."
After the short rest, they pushed on. The pines grew thicker. The track began to descend towards a broader valley ahead. Visibility decreased.
The wagons should be nearing the main road junction below. Eirik felt the familiar calm before action settle over him.
Helga raised a clenched fist. The group halted. She pointed towards a rocky knoll overlooking the valley mouth where their track met the wider Pine Run Road.
"Olaf. That knoll. Commanding view of the road junction and the approaches."
Olaf squinted.
"Aye. Exposed, though. Long climb." He glanced at the nervous recruits. "Scarecrow, Seventy-Two, Seventy-Three. With me. Helga, take Four and Five, secure the horses in that gully near the base.”
He pointed to a deep, snow-filled depression hidden by scrub pines.
"Keep 'em quiet."
Helga nodded. "Understood. Move quickly. We're exposed here."
Smart. Olaf picks the potential fighters for the risky climb. Seventy-Two might be useful with a task. Helga guards the escape route.
Eirik dismounted, handing his pony's reins to Seventy-Five. He adjusted the bow strapped to his back, making sure it wouldn't snag.
The climb to the rocky knoll was steep. Olaf led, moving with surprising agility. Seventy-Three followed. Seventy-Two scrambled behind him. Eirik lagged behind.
They reached the summit. The view was breathtaking.
Below, the Pine Run Road snaked through the wide valley floor. To the east, it curved towards Frostholme. To the west, it vanished into rugged foothills leading towards the Skarl-infested passes.
Below their position, the smaller track they'd been on joined the main road. And rounding a bend from the Frostholme direction, Eirik could make out the shapes of wagons – Mistress Vance's salt convoy.
Right on schedule.
Olaf gestured for them to drop low behind the cover of wind-scoured rocks crowning the knoll. He pulled an ice-shaped telescope from his saddlebag. Seventy-Two and Seventy-Three peered over the rocks, eyes wide. Eirik crouched beside Seventy-Three, mimicking his tense posture.
"Wagons," Olaf muttered. "Four heavy-laden. Look like salt barrels under the tarps. Small guard… maybe twenty men? See the gaudy one? Must be Mistress Vance herself." He let out a low chuckle. "Looks like she pissed herself in fright just ridin' out the gate. Good."
Eirik scanned the surroundings without optics, relying on his sharpened senses. Where are the Skarl watchers? They'll be here. They have to be.
He looked north and west, across the valley. Opposite slopes. Higher ridges overlooking the road. Potential ambush draws where gullies spilled onto the valley floor.
Minutes ticked by. The wagons lumbered closer to the junction. The small guard fanned out, looking alert but exposed.
Then Eirik saw it.
A flicker. High on a distant ridge to the northwest, lost against the snow-dusted pines. Not a bird. A reflection? Sunlight glancing off polished horn? Or… a helmed head turning?
There.
He didn't point. He kept his breathing even. But his entire focus locked onto that point.
"Anything?" Seventy-Two hissed.
"Patience, maggot," Olaf growled, still scanning the convoy below.
Eirik shifted, angling his body to get a better view without appearing to look. He swept his gaze from the point where he'd seen the flicker.
Another flicker, lower down the slope this time. Near the mouth of a shadowed gully that fed onto the valley floor a quarter-mile ahead of the approaching wagons.
Movement. Multiple figures, low to the ground, merging with the terrain.
His pulse remained steady. This is the dance. He had to be sure.
He risked a glance at Olaf. The big man was scanning, but his scope was aimed too low, focused on the wagons and the immediate road.
Need him to see them too.
He nudged a loose pebble with his boot. It skittered down a few inches.
Olaf didn't look up. Seventy-Three glanced over, frowning.
Not enough. Eirik let out a soft, shaky breath, loud enough for Olaf to hear. He hunched his shoulders, radiating nervous tension.
Olaf lowered his telescope a fraction, casting a glance at the "scarecrow" trembling beside him.
"Hold yer water, Seventy-Six. Ain't seen nothin' yet." But his gaze followed Eirik's line of sight – towards the northwest ridge.
Eirik held his breath.
Olaf stiffened. His telescope snapped up to his eye again, trained where Eirik had been looking. He adjusted the focus. Seconds stretched.
Seventy-Three nudged Eirik. "What is it? See something?"
Before Eirik could mumble a denial, Olaf let out a low, sharp hiss. "Frost's balls..."
He lowered the glass. His weathered face was grim, devoid of any trace of his earlier bluster. He looked at Eirik, then at Seventy-Two and Seventy-Three. There was no mockery now. Only reality.
"Riders. Skarl scouts. Three… four of 'em. Mounted. High ridge, northwest. Watchin' the wagons."
Fear washed over Seventy-Three's face. Seventy-Two's hand flew to his sword hilt. "Where?!"
"Stay down, fool!" Olaf snapped, shoving Seventy-Two lower. He scanned again, faster now. "And… there! Lower down. Near that gully mouth ahead of the wagons. More of 'em. On foot. Maybe five. Assessin'."
His jaw clenched. "They're settin' the trap. The main band'll be close. Lurkin' in the gullies or behind the next ridge." He looked down at the lumbering wagons, oblivious to the eyes tracking them. "They'll hit 'em hard once they're in the kill zone. When they pass that bend."
He lowered the telescope. His eyes met Eirik's. For a moment, there was no Lieutenant, no recruit. Just two soldiers assessing odds. Olaf gave a tiny nod. He saw. He knows.
Time snapped into focus. The plan crystallized.
Olaf surged to his feet, knocking loose some scree. "UP! NOW! SKARLS!" His roar shattered the silence. "HORSE AND FOOT! THEY'RE READY TO SPRING! MOVE!"
Seventy-Three scrambled up. Seventy-Two yelped, fumbling with his spear.
Pure reflex overlaid with calculated panic. Eirik shoved Seventy-Three towards the descent path.
"GO! GO! RUN!" He stumbled, falling against Seventy-Two, sending them both sprawling.
He saw others fumbling their weapons against the rocks. "LEAVE IT! RUN!" He screamed the words, looking back towards the ridge where they'd "spotted" the scouts. He didn't need to fake the adrenaline flooding his system; the game was afoot.
"FROST TAKE IT, RUN!" Olaf bellowed, already plunging down the treacherous slope, kicking loose rocks, making a racket. "TO THE HORSES! WARN THE WAGONS!”
He vanished behind a boulder.
Eirik scrambled after him, slipping, sliding, clumsy. Seventy-Two and Seventy-Three followed.
They half-fell, half-slid down the last steep incline, crashing into the snow-filled gully where Helga was untying horses. The packhorses snorted and stamped in the confined space.
"SKARLS!" Olaf roared, skidding to a halt near his warhorse. "Scouts on the ridge! More in the gully ahead! They're setting up! Wagons are walking into it!" He hauled himself into the saddle in one fluid motion. "MOUNT UP! BACK TO THE WAGONS! WARN THEM! NOW!"
He wheeled his horse and spurring it towards the trail back down to the road junction, kicking up snow.
Helga vaulted onto her horse, face grim. "Move, you fools! MOUNT!" She was turning her horse after Olaf.
Seventy-Four and Seventy-Five looked terrified, fumbling with their reins. Seventy-Three managed to get astride his pony. Seventy-Two scrambled onto his, eyes wild.
Eirik made a show of struggling to mount the skittish brown gelding. He grabbed the saddle horn, put a foot in the stirrup, and slipped, falling into the snow. Make sure the Skarls see the chaos. He scrambled up, spitting snow, making a pathetic sound.
"SEVENTY-SIX! GET UP!" Helga screamed, already halfway down the gully after Olaf.
He hauled himself onto the pony, kicking it into a frantic, stumbling gallop. He glanced back over his shoulder as he urged the horse after the others. High on the distant ridge, he saw it – not a flicker, but a distinct, dark silhouette against the snow, watching their noisy flight.
Got you. Now see the scared scouts run. See the wagons ripe for the taking. Send the signal to your chief.
They thundered down the trail, Olaf and Helga in the lead, the recruits pounding behind. The junction with the Pine Run Road appeared below. The lead salt wagon was passing the junction point.
Olaf didn't slow. He rode straight for the dressed figure of 'Mistress Vance' sitting on the lead wagon's driver's seat beside Leif.
"AMBUSH!" Olaf bellowed, his voice raw and carrying. "SKARL SCOUTS! ON THE RIDGES! THEY'RE MOVING! THEY'RE COMING!" He pointed back the way they'd come. "TWO HUNDRED HORSE! ARMED FOR BEAR! THEY'LL BE ON US BEFORE WE CLEAR THE BEND!"
Panic erupted. The small guard – a mix of Talon veterans and local hired swords – froze for a split second, then snapped into terrified motion. Shouts erupted.
"Skarls!" "Ambush!" "Frost save us!"
"FORM UP! SHIELDS!" roared the Talon sergeant in charge of the guard detail. But the fear was palpable.
Isolde clutched her chest. "My salt! My investment! You must protect it!" Her voice was high-pitched.
"Protect it?" Olaf bellowed with fury. "Against two hundred? We'll be mincemeat! Bugger yer salt, lady! RUN! ABANDON THE WAGONS! SAVE YOURSELVES!" He wheeled his horse again. "TALONS! FALL BACK! TO FROSTHOLME! NOW!"
He didn't wait. He spurred his horse back towards Frostholme at a gallop. Helga followed. The Talon veterans, drilled in the plan, didn't hesitate. They broke formation, abandoning their positions near the wagons, turning their horses and fleeing after Olaf. The panic was infectious.
"Run! RUN!" screamed one of the hired guards, breaking ranks.
The dam burst. The 'small guard' dissolved into chaos. Men scrambled onto horses, some abandoning their spears. Wagons were left standing. Isolde shrieked as Leif grabbed her arm and hauled her down from the wagon seat. They stumbled into the snow, then scrambled onto two spare horses tethered nearby, joining the ragged, terrified flight back towards Frostholme.
Eirik, lagging behind on his pony, watched the orchestrated rout unfold.
2025-08-10 11:18:30 +0000 UTC
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The Frozen Stag is packed with desperate men.
Dozens filled the benches – laid off miners, guardsmen whose pay was always late, scarred veterans drinking cheap ale. Out-of-work laborers stared into the middle distance. On the small, raised platform at the tavern's far end, a bard with an uneven beard tuned his lute.
Eirik Stormcrow, hood pulled low, bent over a beaten wooden table near the back wall. Across from him, Isolde Fenrir sat strangely calm.
"Do you think this will be a good idea?"
"It is. Don't stress over it." Isolde turned her gaze from the room to him. "Honestly, Commander, I haven't seen you like this. "
Eirik shifted uncomfortably on the hard bench. "It's just… this isn't really my area. Lying in ambush? Fine. Striking hard? Fine. Sitting here waiting for some singer to spin fairy tales about me? Makes my skin crawl."
"Then just watch. Trust the story. People crave simple tales."
Before Eirik could voice the unease growing in his gut, the bard struck a final, loud chord that cut through the tavern's noise.
Heads turned towards the platform.
"Gather 'round, lads!" the bard rasped. "Gather 'round and lend an ear! Forget yer woes for a spell! Tonight, I sing a legendary tale! A tale of the Stormcrow!"
A shared intake of breath rippled through the room.
"Stormcrow?" "The Bastard?" "Heard he butchered trolls by the dozen..."
The bard started his song. It wasn't subtle.
"From the frozen wastes he came,
A spirit made in winter's flame!
Cedric's get, but born anew,
Touched by the Frost Mother's holy dew!"
Eirik cringed. Touched by holy dew? He felt ridiculous.
The bard painted him as a figure easily seven feet tall, muscles stretching plate armor that shined like moonlight on fresh snow. The actual Eirik felt clearly under-sized in his shadowed corner.
"He faced the Troll-King's shaman dread,
With frostfire burning 'round his head!
His blade, a piece of northern star,
He cut the beast down near and far!
The very mountain split in two,
As Stormcrow's legend fully grew!"
"Legend?!" a voice muttered nearby. "He's a bastard."
Another voice, older, more rough, replied. "Aye, a bastard who made Flint dance like a puppet and pay two thousand silver on the spot, didn't he? I'd call that legend enough."
The bard ignored the murmurs, going into ever more impossible acts:
Eirik single-handedly held a mountain pass against a hundred Skarl riders—He hadn't. He controlled ice wyriths—He hadn't seen one. He talked with the Frost Mother in holy caves—More like argued with Isolde about useful scripture verses.
The bard hit a winning high point.
"So raise yer mugs to Stormcrow's name!
The North's own champion, Everwinter's claim!"
The ending hung in the smoky air. Some men cheered. Others remained silent, drinking their drinks and their doubts. Then, from near the bar, a voice loud with ale cut through the clapping.
"Claim? Touched? Ha! I heard different! Heard from Flint's way! Heard he ain't touched, he's possessed! Demon got him! That's how he does the frost tricks! Dark magic! Unnatural!"
A ripple of unease went through the crowd. Eyes darted towards the hooded figure in the corner, then quickly away. The fear of heresy, of the unnatural, was a powerful thing.
Before the fear could harden, another voice shouted out from the opposite side of the tavern. It belonged to a huge, rough-bearded miner.
"Demon-like?!" the miner yelled. "Aye, maybe! A demon that killed the trolls blocking the Ironvein! A demon that embarrassed Flint and made him pay in silver!" He slammed his tankard down. "Fuck yer noble whispers! If that's demon work, I say the world needs more bleeding demons! Especially ones that pay!"
A shocked silence followed the miner's outburst. Then, a noise started. Laughter, rough agreements, banging of tankards.
The bard, feeling the important moment, didn't miss a beat. He struck a single, sharp chord that silenced the rumbling support.
"You speak truth, friend!" the bard called to the miner. "Aye, Stormcrow does act! While others wait and bleed us dry! And he needs men. Real men. Men with ice in their veins and fire in their bellies!"
His gaze moved across the room.
"Ten silver talons! Paid upfront! For every man who joins the Talon banner! Ten talons now! Five every week! More to come with victory!"
Gasps erupted.
"Ten?"
"Up front?"
The bard raised his hand for silence. He had them now. He played a final chord.
"He brings together steel, he brings together might,
To chase the Skarls into the night!
To claim a fort, strong and tall,
And make it Northern kingdom's wall!"
Eirik felt the tension coiling in his own chest. Here it comes.
The bard's voice rang out.
"He marches soon, his holy vow! To raise anew... FORT ABERCROMBIE NOW!"
The name hit the silence like a falling big rock. Fort Abercrombie. A choked gasp came from somewhere near Eirik.
An old veteran with a scar cutting across his eyebrow froze mid-sip. His eyes snapped into scary focus, filled with sudden, gut horror.
"You… you can't mean it," another man whispered. "Abercrombie… Frost take me…"
The name rang out with awful power.
"Sweet Frost Mother…" a guard muttered. "My brother… they pulled him out of the east breach…"
"Aye," another veteran rasped. "Got the chill rot after dragging young Miller's body back from a Skarl ambush. He died coughing up black spit in the barracks." He shuddered. "Cursed ground. Death soaked into every stone."
The initial shock of ten talons had been replaced by a wave of dark memories. Is this hatred too deep? Eirik wondered, watching the raw pain on worn faces. Will they see only death, not opportunity?
Then, the old veteran with the scarred eyebrow slammed his tankard down with a crack that echoed. Ale sloshed. Every eye snapped to him.
"Abercrombie," he spat the word with hate. He looked around, meeting the haunted eyes of his fellow veterans. "That cursed rock drank the blood of my mates! Drank my nephew's blood! Drank Varn's silver until he bled us dry!" His voice rose. "They abandoned it! Left it to the skinning knives! Left our dead not paid back!"
He pointed a shaking finger towards the bard.
"You say this Stormcrow wants to take it back? To rebuild it? To hold it? Not bleed on it forever, but hold it?" He turned his fierce gaze.
"Ten talons? Frost take the talons! You tell yer Commander…" He drew himself up. "You tell him I'll carry his banner up that cursed pass! For free! If he means to plant it on Abercrombie's rubble and make the Skarl bastards choke on it!"
A moment of shocked silence followed his statement. Then, like a dam breaking, the mood shifted.
"Aye! Damn right!" another scarred veteran yelled, jumping to his feet. "They owe us blood! My boy died holding the west tower!"
"Ten talons and spitting in a Skarl's eye? Count me in!" a younger miner shouted. "Fort Abercrombie…" a guard whispered. "Hells. Why not? Can't be worse than freezing my stones off on Frostholme's walls for ha'pennies."
The bard, seeing the tide turn, played his lute proudly.
"You heard the man! Fort Abercrombie rises again! And Stormcrow's banner flies first! Who else stands with the Talons? Ten talons now! Glory later!"
A rough cheer went up, louder this time. Men started pushing towards the back of the tavern, where Yorick had set up a makeshift table with a heavy lockbox. Leif moved to impose order on the sudden rush. Isolde leaned close to Eirik.
"See? Told you. They didn't need the Frost-touched hero. They needed someone to give them permission to be angry. To offer a target for that anger... and pay them for it."
Eirik turned his gaze towards the tavern door, as if he could see the distant, broken shape of Fort Abercrombie against the mountains.
The hard part began now.
———
"Form a bloody line, ye mangy dogs! Shove yer neighbor and ye get nothin' but boot leather! Ten talons paid straight! Sign Yorick's scratchin's! Swear the oath! Then get yer scrawny arse over by Bjorn for yer kit assignment! MOVE!"
Olaf stood near Yorick's makeshift table as he scanned the pushing crowd. New recruits – miners, ex-guards, thin laborers – shuffled into a rough line that snaked towards the promise of silver.
Eirik saw Olaf's gaze sweep past him without recognition. Perfect. The Lieutenant was playing his part flawlessly. To Olaf, Eirik was just another faceless body in the throng, drawn by the glint of coin and the dangerous lure of the Talon banner.
The image that the bard had painted – the seven-foot titan carved from glacier ice – was so far removed from Eirik's reality that it was laughable. Let them look for a giant. It's the blade they don't see coming that cuts deepest.
The line crept forward.
Names were shouted as thumbprints pressed into ink. Olaf issued curt orders.
"You. Team Four."
"You. Team Six."
"Team Two for you, whelp. Try not to wet yourself."
Eirik finally reached the front.
"Name?"
"Errol."
Yorick scratched it down without looking up.
A sneer curled Olaf's lip.
"Errol, is it?" His voice dripped with amused contempt. "Look at ye. Like a stiff breeze'd snap ye clean in half. What hole did you crawl out of? You sure ten talons is worth the trip to Abercrombie? Skarls'll use yer spine for a toothpick, lad."
A low ripple of nervous laughter went through the recruits nearby. Eirik felt their eyes on him.
He kept his head down, shoulders slightly slumped.
"Need the coin, sir," Eirik mumbled. "Hah!" Olaf shouted. "Coin's no use if yer guts are decorating some Skarl chieftain's hut!"
He jabbed a thick finger at Yorick. "Pay the scarecrow his silver, scribbler. Maybe it'll buy him a decent burial shroud." He turned away, already scanning the next recruit. "Next! You! Look like you've seen a blade before! Team Three!"
Yorick silently counted out ten heavy silver talons. He dipped his thumb in Yorick's inkpot and pressed it onto the book beside his false name. The act felt strangely binding, even as a deception.
"Oath," Yorick said quietly, still not meeting his eyes.
Eirik raised his right hand, fist clenched over his heart in the Talon salute. The gesture was instinctive and ingrained to him in both his current and previous life.
"Sworn to the Talon. To the Commander. To victory, or the cold ground."
Yorick nodded. "Accepted. Bjorn will assign your kit and team."
Eirik moved away from the table, pocketing the coins. He felt the lingering stares of the recruits behind him.
"Scarecrow, Olaf called him. Apt."
"Bet he bolts before we even see the pass."
"Ten talons for that?"
He headed towards the towering Bjorn, who stood near a pile of worn leather jerkins, dented helms, and basic weaponry – spears, axes, a few mismatched swords.
"Name?" Bjorn rumbled.
"Errol."
"Right. Arms?"
"Used a sword. Bit of bow."
Bjorn handed over a bundle: a stiff leather jerkin smelling of old sweat and oil, a simple iron cap helmet, a woolen cloak thick enough for the mountains but patched, a waterskin, and a worn but serviceable one-handed sword. Standard issue for the lowest ranks.
"Team Seven." He pointed towards a cluster of men huddled near the tavern's back door. "You are now number Seventy-Six. Go."
Eirik felt a flicker of dark amusement.
"Talon protocol." Bjorn repeated as if he was just another green lad. "Recruits don't get names. You earn those. Hold out your right hand."
He pressed a stylus against his palm.
"Memorize your number," Bjorn commanded. "That's who you are until you prove otherwise. You answer to it. You fight for it. You die under it. Understood?"
Eirik nodded, gathered the gear, and turned to join his group.
Four others were already waiting. All looked at Eirik with a mixture of curiosity and thinly veiled disdain.
"Errol, is it?" Seventy-Two smirked, looking Eirik up and down. "Heard Olaf mark ye. Scarecrow, eh? Fitting. Hope ye can at least carry yer own pack, scarecrow."
"I'll manage," Eirik mumbled.
The recruitment continued for another hour. The pile of silver in Yorick's lockbox dwindled. The pile of gear Bjorn guarded shrank. The tavern filled with clusters of men sorted into teams.
The name "Stormcrow" was whispered constantly, threaded with awe, disbelief, and morbid curiosity.
"Think he's really that big? Ten feet tall?" Seventy-Four whispered, eyes wide. "Bard's tales, lad," Seventy-Two scoffed, but he glanced towards the tavern door as if expecting a titan to stride through. "Still… made Flint pay. In public. That ain't nothin'."
"Demon, some say," Seventy-Three rumbled, his voice surprisingly soft. "Said he cracks mountains. Freezes blood in yer veins."
"Don't matter what he is. He pays silver. Points us at Skarls. Good enough for me. Just hope he knows what he's doing with that cursed rock."
Finally, the last recruit signed. Yorick snapped the book shut with finality. The lockbox clicked locked. Olaf surveyed the room, now packed with over a hundred new faces interspersed with the worn Talon veterans supervising the teams.
"RIGHT!" Olaf's roar silenced the remaining murmurs. "Listen up, ye sorry lot! Ye got yer coin! Ye got yer kit! Ye swore the oath! Welcome to the Talons! Such as ye are!" He spat expertly onto the sawdust-covered floor. "Forget yer mothers' skirts! Forget soft beds! Ye belong to the ice and the steel now!"
He paced slowly in front of the new recruits.
"Ye heard the songs? Heard the tales?"
He stopped near Eirik's Team Seven.
"Aye, Stormcrow's a terror! A Frost-touched giant!" Olaf yelled. "He'll lead us to glory at Abercrombie! Heh!"
He leaned down slightly, his eyes raking over Seventy-Two, Seventy-Three, Seventy-Four, Seventy-Five, and finally lingering on the hunched form of 'Errol'.
"But glory... it ain't handed out like stale bread! It's paid for! In blood! In frozen toes! In the screams of Skarls dyin' on yer steel!" He straightened. "Ye want to see the Commander? Ye want to bask in his mighty frosty presence? Prove yer worth first! Make the end of yer spear sticks the Skarl! Then maybe... maybe... ye'll earn a glimpse of the Stormcrow!"
The new recruits exchanged confused glances. They'd paid, they'd sworn, they'd braved the terrifying prospect of Abercrombie… all to catch sight of the legendary figure. And Olaf was telling them they might not even see him?
"Now!" Olaf clapped his huge hands together. "Dawn comes early, and the road north is long and cold! Get some grub down yer gullets if ye can afford it! Find a corner to curl up in! Be ready to move out at first light!"
But then he stopped. He turned back, his gaze falling specifically on Team Seven.
"You lot. Team Seven." Olaf pointed a thick finger at them. "Don't get too comfortable in yer corners. Ye've got an important job tomorrow. An early start. Be ready."
Important job? The other teams looked at Team Seven with renewed curiosity – and not a little suspicion.
"Sleep well, If ye can."
2025-08-09 09:09:48 +0000 UTC
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The wind whipping across the high pass north of Frostholme carried the bite of coming winter. Eirik Stormcrow stood on a rocky ledge, the walls of Lord Varn's broke fortress visible a mile behind him.
Isolde would be there now, making her big entrance as the spice trader 'Mistress Vance'. The first act of the salt wagon show was happening.
Leif Fenrir and Olaf had found him here.
"Commander?" Leif looked around the empty ledge. "Why aren't you with my mother? The wagon is supposed to be rolling into Frostholme's lower market now. She's the center of the whole show! She needs you!"
Olaf stamped his feet for warmth. "Yes, Commander. Mistress Vance needs her 'hired captain' looking scary nearby, doesn't she? Makes the bait look shinier."
He wasn't used to Eirik missing a key piece of a job, especially one he'd planned.
Eirik turned from the view. He waved for them to join him near a group of rocks that offered some shelter from the wind.
"Sit. We need to talk."
The two lieutenants swallowed hard as they unwillingly obeyed.
"Alright," Eirik began. "The caravan. Suppose it works perfectly. Mistress Vance's salt caravan rolls out of Frostholme, looking like the juiciest prize ever seen north of the Snowcaps. The Skarls swarm in, overpower our small guard… and take the salt. Just as we planned. What happens next?"
Leif blinked. "Next? Commander, if they take the salt, then… then our part in the bait is done. We… we run."
"Run? Could we? Picture it. You're part of the small guard escorting Mistress Vance's priceless, vital salt shipment. A hundred Skarl horse archers come screaming out of the hills. What do you do?"
Leif's first confidence began to weaken at the edges. But Olaf broke into his thought.
"Fight! We hold the wagons! Give the merchant lady time to–"
"And die," Eirik replied. "We'd become arrow-filled bodies before most can blink."
"So..." Leif tried to follow Eirik's logic. "So… we don't stand. The moment they appear, we flee."
"Yes," Eirik nodded. "We abandon the wealthy southern fool and her precious salt for our own rear ends. Now, the details. How do we run?"
"On horses!" Olaf shouted. "Fastest as silvers could buy!"
"Fastest compared to what, Olaf?"
Olaf opened his mouth to reply, but no words came out.
"The Skarl ponies," Leif whispered.
"The Skarl ponies, yes." Eirik confirmed. "The Skarls are mounted on horses bred for this terrain. Fastest in the North isn't worth a dime compared to that."
"Frost Giants' balls..." Olaf's boldness disappeared.
"Exactly," Eirik said. "So. Where does that leave us?"
Leif's mind raced. They couldn't fight nor effectively run. What else could they do?
"So…" Leif's voice was hollow. "The plan fails before it even starts? We lure them out only to be slaughtered ourselves? We gain nothing but dead men and lost salt?"
"Not necessarily. There is a way."
Eirik crouched down in front of them, bringing his strong gaze level with theirs. Olaf looked up, listening carefully.
"It requires," Eirik said, "accepting a different kind of risk. It requires understanding that the only way the small guard survives… is if they don't run when the Skarls attack."
Leif stared. "Don't run? Commander, you just said–"
"I said fighting is suicide," Eirik broke in. "Running is also suicide. So we do neither."
Olaf looked utterly confused. "Neither? What in the frozen hells does that leave? Sit down and sing 'em a song?"
“We abandon it," Eirik stated.
“Abandon it?!”
"Yes," Eirik confirmed. “Pre-emptive desertion. A shameful display of utter cowardice. The lowest form of mercenary scum abandoning their wealthy, helpless employer."
"So… the Skarls ride up expecting a fight… and find nothing but wagons? Salt ripe for the taking?"
"Exactly," Eirik nodded. "We were too scared to even be there when they arrived. What does that tell the Skarls?"
Leif finished the thought.
"It tells them the guards were useless. Worse than useless. Not even worth chasing through the hills."
"Ha! Clever! Make 'em think we're such pathetic worms they ain't even worth squashing! They get cocky, grab the salt, ride off… and we get to watch 'em die slow later! I like it!"
Leif's concern remained.
"But timing, Commander. How do we know when to abandon the convoy? How do we disappear so quickly, without letting them think we just dumped barrels of salt on their doorsteps freely? They'd get suspicious.”
That was a brilliant question, and one Eirik was less sure of. He stood up.
"The way I see it," Eirik said, "Is that we must provide them with proof. Proof that we ran because we saw them coming."
"You mean… make contact? With their scouts? Before the attack?"
"Exactly. We need a small scouting unit. Their job is to get seen seeing the Skarl scouts. To make a noisy retreat back to the convoy. They trigger the signal for the main small guard to flee like scared rabbits before the ambush fully springs. It's the key component in all of this. And I'll lead it."
Silence slammed down at his two lieutenants.
"You?!" Leif exploded. "Commander, have you lost your mind? You can't!"
"Why the frozen hells?" Olaf roared. "You're the damn commander! The heart of this band! If you get caught–"
"If I get caught, Olaf," Eirik broke in, "it will be because I judged the risk necessary and did it myself. I don't mind sending men to die, but I do mind that they'd die failing and ruining our entire plan."
Olaf's protest died in his throat.
"Exactly," Eirik pressed. "This unit needs someone with the eyes to spot hidden riders at distance, the quick reactions to react faster than arrows, and the sheer nerve not to freeze when death comes charging. Who fits that better?"
"But the risk! Commander, if you're captured… if they know you…"
"Know me? How? Think, Leif. Who in Frostholme has seen Eirik Stormcrow?"
Leif blinked. He mentally thought back to their arrival, the tense talks with Lord Varn's servant.
"You sent Yorick and me," Leif breathed. "You stayed outside. Always hooded. Avoiding the lords and their courts." Understanding sparked. "Not even our own men have seen you openly within the hold! Just quick comings and goings in camp or the tavern."
"Exactly," Eirik confirmed. "To Frostholme and any Skarl spies watching it, I am an unknown. Just another mercenary in Mistress Vance's employ."
Olaf, still reeling, spotted another flaw. "But our own men! In the small guard! If they see you with the scout unit… and if any are taken…"
"They won't see me. Because I won't be with them.”
"Where…?"
"The scout unit operates separate from the main convoy," Eirik explained, his voice low and strong. "We shadow the route. Only descend when we spot the Skarl scouts. We make contact, panic, flee back towards the wagons to 'warn' them. That's the signal.”
Leif felt a chill sprang inside him. So he wants to do this… by himself? With some sort of new recruits?
"I will never set foot near that small guard force before or during the operation. Now," Eirik said. "Leif Fenrir."
Leif snapped to attention at suddenly being addressed by his full name.
"Commander?"
Eirik reached into his storage ring. Frost mist shimmered as a wolf-head pommel gleamed dully in the grey light. The Fenrir Heirloom Longsword.
He held it out, handle-first, towards Leif.
Leif went blank.
"Whatever happens when the wagons roll," Eirik stated, "whatever happens to me, to the scout unit, to your mother… your task remains."
He thrust the sword towards Leif.
"You will escape back to Frostholme. You will gather every able-bodied man Lord Varn can spare, every Talon, every hired sword we have left. And one day after the Skarls take that salt… you will lead an assault on the Skarls in Fort Abercrombie."
Leif Fenrir stared at the sword. The symbol of his family line, pride, and everything he'd felt stripped from him by the bastard now offering it back. His hand trembled as he reached out.
It felt alien, and terrifyingly heavy.
"Commander…This plan is yours. I can't just–"
"You will," Eirik repeated. "This isn't about ego or family right, Leif. This is about winning. The assault must happen. The Skarls must be crushed before they recover, before they realize what killed them. That window is critical. One day. Do you understand?"
Olaf's low growl broke the silence.
"Commander, ye can't be serious! Handing him the blade? Making him lead the assault?" He jabbed a thick finger towards Leif. "He's green! Sending him against Skarls is still sending a pup to fight wolves!"
Leif flinched internally.
Olaf's right. What do I know of leading men in a real assault? Men would die because of him. Just like Brynn could’ve died in the mines because of his failure.
Another voice cut through the panic. Eirik's voice.
"The blade is Fenrir steel, Olaf," Eirik stated. "It carries recognition. Lord Varn's men will follow Fenrir blue and silver into that ruin faster than they'd follow a bastard's banner… or a hired sword's scowl. They need rightful authority. Leif provides it."
"Olaf's right. What if I call the charge too late? Or too early? What if the Skarls aren't as weakened? What if–"
"Then you fail," Eirik stated simply. "And we die."
He leaned in slightly.
"But if you do nothing? The result is the same. Worse, perhaps. Because then you never even tried to claw your way out of the pit your family dug itself into. So. What's it going to be, Leif Fenrir? Are you just a spoiled noble heir who loses heirlooms and duels? Or are you the man who'll take this sword and earn it back?"
Leif felt the truth of it settle on his shoulders. This wasn't about his skill nor his qualification anymore. It was about his blood, his name – the very things he'd felt defined him, and failed to live up to.
He's using me. Again. With something I held most dearly, above just anything, besides Isolde's life, which, now that he thinks about it, he's using that, too.
But strangely… Leif felt his bitterness drowned by a chilling resolve.
"And me?" Olaf demanded. "While the pup plays lordling?"
"Leif carries the banner. You break the door. You ensure no Skarl walks out of that ruin alive, poisoned or not. Understood?"
Olaf stared back at Eirik. His weathered face worked through a series of emotions Eirik rarely saw there.
"No. Just… no."
Olaf jabbed a thick finger towards Leif. "You're handing him a whole damn assault command? Fine. Someone's gotta wave the fancy banner."
His gaze swung back to Eirik. "But you? Skipping off to play rabbit for Skarl arrows? By yourself? With some green lads? That's your grand plan? Crazy!"
Leif bristled. "I can–"
"Shut it, pup," Olaf cut him off without even looking. "Commander. You're handing out responsibilities like cheap beer. You wanna be the hero leading the scouting party to damnation? Fine. Heroes need helpers." He took a step closer. "I'm coming with you."
Oh. Eirik processed this. Olaf wasn’t questioning the overall strategy; he was demanding a share of the most dangerous task.
"I lead the scout unit, Olaf." Eirik stated flatly. "Your talents lie elsewhere. With the assault."
"My talents," Olaf growled, "lie in keeping fools alive! Especially fools who think they can see arrows before they’re shot! You need eyes? I got ‘em. You need someone to shove you out of the way when death comes whistlin’? That’s me!”
He leaned in.
"You think those Skarl scouts are gonna play nice? One lucky arrow, Commander. One. And this whole clever poison plot dies with you in the snow. And then what?"
Eirik studied Olaf. The big man’s logic was crude but sound. The scout mission was the critical vulnerability.
"You want heroism?" Olaf pressed. "Too damn bad, Commander. You ain’t hogging it all this time. That suicide scout mission? That’s my kind of party. You’re not goin’ without me."
"Alright, Olaf. You ride with the scout unit.” Stubborn bastard.
"Damn right."
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Eirik's face was blank as Yorick briefed everyone. He had yet to find an angle.
"...so Lord Varn confirms the main southern road, the Pine Run Road? Totally blocked. Skarl war bands hit any group larger than three wagons within ten miles of the pass crossing. They burn what they can't carry. Shipments haven't gotten through from the lower valleys in three months."
Harkin grunted. "Explains why Frostholme's gate looks like a chewed bone."
Yorick nodded and continued.
"Grain groups are the worst targets. They hit fast, kill the guards, burn the wagons. The villages south of Icefang Pass are eating stored roots and cutting down their herds, if they're not burned to the ground by the Skarls yet."
"Anything else?" Eirik asked. This was really tough news.
Yorick shuffled his papers.
"Trade routes for basics… salt being the worst. Skarls hit salt groups with special anger."
Salt.
Eirik straightened. "Salt? Explain more."
Yorick blinked, surprised by the sudden focus. "Salt. It's vital for the Skarls. More vital than grain sometimes, out here. Especially for the Skarls. You see, Skarls live off their herds. Meat, mostly. Milk, cheese when they have it."
Eirik nodded. "They were nomads and favored a meat-heavy diet instead of crops. So they need salt to preserve everything."
"More than that, Commander!" Yorick leaned forward. "It's vital. Not just in their food, their bodies need it, too! All that riding, sweating under furs in summer, freezing in winter… it drains the salt from a man! And not just them, it's their horses, too! Even more so! Without salt replacement, their muscles cramp, they tire quickly, and would become a liabity instead of carrying Skarls to victories!"
Yorick's face darkened further.
"And Lord Varn mentioned something else. Something that makes their need even more... urgent. The Skarls are preparing for some kind of blood ceremony. Within the week, he thinks. They'll be offering human sacrifices to their gods, probably prisoners from the raids." He swallowed hard. "Varn says salt plays a role in their ritual preparations, too."
Hmm... this could be a potential angle, but he'd have to confirm a few details yet.
"When was that attack on Varn's salt group?"
Yorick blinked, going through his mental notes.
"Weeks ago, probably been a month, Commander. Since then? Not a single salt group has dared the southern routes. Lord Varn mentioned he actually has a good supply left in Frostholme's lower storage rooms. Just sitting there. Too risky to move it anywhere useful. Frozen asset, literally."
Eirik's fingers drummed against the table.
If they sent out a caravan carrying salt, the Skarls would hit it - that much was certain. But then what?
He could set an ambush, but Skarls were mounted with faster horses he don't have. The moment they sensed a trap, they'd wheel their horses and vanish into the wilderness before his men could close the distance.
What about explosives?
He could hollow out some of the salt barrels, pack them with alchemist's fire or blackpowder, rig some kind of detonation mechanism. But this might kill off a dozen, and maybe if he's lucky, dozens of skarl warriors who were in the vicinity to check it. But he needed to wipe out an entire warband.
So he was left with the salt itself.
His thoughts ground to a halt, then started again more slowly. What if the salt itself could be turned against them? Not explosives hidden inside - the salt itself. Can salt kill? Too much of anything could be poison, but how would that work? They weren't going to gorge themselves to death on stolen salt.
Unless...
Eirik's eyes suddenly lit up.
"Alright," he suddenly announced. "We're buying Varn's salt. All of it."
Leif's brows came together. "Buying it, Commander? But… we just gave him a thousand talons! And salt? We can't carry ten barrels while we hunt Skarls!"
"Not for us, Leif. For them." Eirik shook his head slightly. "We're setting bait. The richest, shiniest bait they'd ever seen."
Understanding sparked in Yorick's eyes. "You want the Skarls to know about the salt? To want it?"
"Desperately," Eirik confirmed. "We need them to smell it. To see it hanging just within reach. And we need them to come for it."
He turned to Isolde, who had been quietly listening to them this time.
She straightened. "Commander?"
"You are now Mistress Isobel Vance. Wealthy spice merchant from the southern cities. You heard stories of war disrupting basic trade. Specifically, the salt shortage is crippling Frostholme."
Isolde absorbed this while Eirik continued.
"You are bold, ambitious, and with lots of coins. You see Frostholme's bad luck as your golden chance. You plan to buy Frostholme's 'useless' salt supply cheaply, bet on breaking the Skarl blocking with hired fighters, and sell it at very high prices to starving towns further south."
Isolde tilted her head. "The whole hold needs to know?"
"The whole hold must know. Especially the Skarl spies this desperate place surely has. This is an act. Your arrival, talks, loading wagons—it all needs to shout 'foolish southern merchant making a desperate bet.' Make noisy. Better, be gaudy."
"Commander," Leif interrupted. "So… you're thinking an ambush?"
"Exactly."
"Commander, forgive my bluntness, but that's… basic." Leif opened his palms. "Varn told us himself. He tried that. Countless times. Sending out supply trains guarded to the teeth, hoping to lure the Skarls into a fight on his terms."
Yorick nodded jerkily.
"Lieutenant's right, Commander. Lord Varn confirmed it. They'd send out groups, sometimes with half the garrison. Strong guard, banners flying. Trying to look like a target they couldn't resist, hoping the Skarls would get greedy and commit."
Leif picked up the thread with urgency.
"But it never worked! Not once! The Skarls have scouts everywhere. They'd see the force behind the bait. They're not stupid, Commander! They'd know it was a trap." He slapped his hand flat on his lap. "So they wouldn't commit! Not with their main force. Maybe they'd send a handful of riders, pepper the group from extreme range, vanish before anyone could close."
He took a deep breath. "Or worse… They'd let the group get deep into the open ground. Miles from safety. Then, only then, when the heavy infantry was strung out, exhausted… that's when they'd swarm. Hundreds of them, appearing from gullies, cresting ridges."
Yorick helped him finish the grim picture. "They'd kill the horses first, cripple the wagons. Then kill the infantry trapped in the open. They'd turn our ambush back against ourselves until we're all dead."
Olaf slammed his fist against his thigh.
"Aye! How do we fight that? Frost take it, Commander! We've got sixty men! Sixty! Even if we hid every one of them in the wagons, it wouldn't be enough! We'd be cut to pieces out there before we could draw steel!"
Yorick added, "And Commander… Lord Varn stressed it. This tactic? It's textbook Skarl. They've seen variations a hundred times. From every desperate lordling trying to protect his lands. They know how to counter it. Easily."
He dealt the killing blow.
"They expect it. They'll see Mistress Vance's group, see the 'hired fighters' guarding it… and they'll just laugh after they killed our men and took our salt." He swallowed. "This… this plan… It won't work."
Heavy silence fell. Every eye was fixed on Eirik, waiting for his rebuttal.
Eirik met their collective gaze with calm.
"You misunderstand," he said. "I agree with you."
Leif blinked. "Agree, Commander?"
"Agree," Eirik repeated. "Ambushing them won't work. They're primed for it." He paused. "So… we don't."
Leif felt his mind stutter.
"We… don't… ambush them?"
"No."
"We… don't fight them at all?" Olaf sounded incredulous.
"No," Eirik said simply.
"Then… Commander… what exactly do we do? If they attack the group…"
"We let them have it," Eirik stated. Matter-of-fact. As if announcing the weather.
Silence. Total, stunned silence. Olaf stared as if Eirik had sprouted horns.
Leif found his voice strangled. "Let them have it? The salt? The entire shipment? But Commander…" He pointed helplessly. "We'd be paying dearly for it! Maybe hundreds of talons! And you just want to… give it away? To the enemy?"
"Essentially, yes." Eirik confirmed. "They take the salt. All of it. "
He's lost his mind. The thought flashed through everyone's mind. The stress. It's broken him.
"Commander…" Harkin broke the silence on others' behalf. "Respectfully, sir… that sounds… insane." He struggled for a stronger word in an attempt to wake up Eirik from his sudden madness. "Idiotic, even. Apologies, but… why? What possible good comes from handing the Skarls a fortune in vital supplies they were already desperate to steal?"
Olaf growled. "Aye! We feed 'em? Make 'em stronger? So they can raid us better later? Give 'em salt so they can ride their horses harder and shoot their bows farther while they burn our villages? Commander, have you cracked?!"
Yorick wrung his hands. "It's strategic suicide! You empower the enemy! With salt, their warriors stay stronger longer. Their mounts endure harder rides. Their war bands can range farther, strike more often!"
"It weakens us and strengthens them! Every hold north of Stormkeep will curse your name! Lord Varn would think we betrayed him!"
Eirik didn't react strongly to the accusations. He knew what it looked like.
"You see the immediate gain for the Skarls. That is what they will see. That is why they will take it." He looked at each of them in turn. "But I see something else. Something they won't see until it's too late. Something I control."
Leif shook his head. "What? What could you possibly see, Commander? What do we stand to gain by enriching the enemy who wants to skin us alive? Tell us! How is this not madness?!"
"The 'what' remains my concern alone. For now. What you need to know is this, and this only: that I know what I am doing."
He stood up andwalked away from the firelight.
"Get some rest," He said, leaving his officers staring after him. "Tomorrow, the play begins."
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Fisk was grounding dried willow bark in a small mortar as he saw Eirik walk by.
"Commander?" He sounded tired. "Everything alright? Leif looked like he swallowed a hornet when he stomped past."
"He did," Eirik stepped inside. The flap sealed them in the cramped, herb-scented space.
"Sit down, Fisk. We need to talk. Something only you can do."
Fisk set the mortar down.
"What d'ya need, Commander?" Fisk pulled a rickety stool closer. "More frostbite flasks? We're low on the ingredients, but I can manage. Or is it something… trickier?"
"Trickier," Eirik confirmed. "I need you to make... a type of salt."
"What now? Salt?" Fisk sounded skeptical. "Had enough of plain gruel, Commander? Plenty of that in the merchants' booth."
"A special kind of salt." Eirik leaned forward.
How to explain sodium nitrite to Fisk without sounding like a madman?
"A kind that I want the Skarls to have. They'll love it. They'll consume it. Lots of it. And when they do… they die."
Fisk froze.
"Die? Commander… what are ya planning? Poison the salt? That's risky business. Takes skill. Rare ingredients. And Skarls ain't fools – they might test it!"
"Not the way you think. Nothing they can smell or taste." Eirik corrected. " He paused, gathering fragments of chemistry lectures from high school. He'd enrolled in one after one of his favorite TV shows, featuring a high school teacher solving impossible challenges with just simple chemistry.
"You can make it from other salts you already know."
Fisk nodded slowly, intrigued.
"Special salts? Like Sal Ammoniac? Or Saltpeter?"
Eirik seized on the familiar term. "Yes. Related to Saltpeter. Similar origins." He focused on what Fisk knew. "Saltpeter… you get it from dung heaps, stable muck, urine-soaked earth. Right? The white crystals that crust over?"
"Aye," Fisk nodded. "Niter. Collect the crust, dissolve it in hot water, filter the muck, boil it down, crystals form. Good for… certain reactions. And boom-powder, like you had mentioned to me the other day."
"Exactly. Now, this special salt starts like Saltpeter. But you can transform it."
Eirik focused on processes Fisk could understand. "Take your purified Saltpeter crystals. Dissolve them again, in clean water. Very clean."
"Distilled water's best," Fisk muttered automatically. "Got a little alembic rig."
"Good. Once dissolved, you add… you add lead."
"Lead?!" Fisk's eyebrows shot up. "Commander, lead's heavy poison itself!"
"Not adding it to the final salt, Fisk. Think of the lead as a tool. A purifier." Eirik grasped for analogy. "You add lead oxide – litharge – to the Saltpeter solution. Then heat it. Boil it hard."
Fisk frowned. "Boil Saltpeter solution with Litharge? What's that supposed to do?"
"It makes something change. Like adding vinegar to milk curdles it. The boiling with litharge makes the Saltpeter shift its nature. Part of it becomes something else. Something that isn't Saltpeter anymore."
"Separates? Crystallizes differently?" Fisk's alchemist brain latched onto the concept.
"Yes! After boiling, you filter the whole mess again. Get rid of the lead sludge – carefully, it is poison. What's left in the filtered water? It's not just Saltpeter anymore. There's another salt dissolved there now. The special salt I need."
"And how d'ya get this special salt out?" Fisk asked.
"Crystals. Just like Saltpeter. You boil down the filtered liquid carefully. This special salt likes to crystallize out when the solution cools." Eirik emphasized the subtlety. "It might look similar, Fisk. White crystals. Salty. But different."
Fisk stroked his chin, running through the steps mentally.
"Dissolve Niter… add Litharge… boil… filter… boil down filtrate… collect different crystals…" He looked up, sharp eyes locking onto Eirik's. "This 'different' salt. How does it kill? And why won't they taste it?"
"It doesn't kill like arsenic or belladonna – fast and obvious," Eirik explained clinically. "It tricks the blood. Makes it unable to carry air. Like putting a cork in a man's lungs from the inside. Slowly. Without warning."
He met Fisk's gaze squarely.
"They feel weak. Dizzy. Breathless. Skin turns blue, then grey. Then they just stop. They might taste something bitter, metallic… but mixed into food, into their preserved meats, especially in the quantities they'll crave salt? Doubtful. And the weakness comes on fast enough they won't link it back immediately."
Fisk absorbed this in silence.
"Commander… this is dark craft. Powerful. Dangerous. M'self included." He gestured at the jars around him. "Messing with salts that shift blood… Litharge fumes… one slip…"
"I know the risks," Eirik stated. "But think about our foes. We cannot storm it. We cannot siege it. We cannot outride them. This is how we clear the ruin. This is how we take it without losing all our men men charging into two hundred horse archers."
Fisk swallowed. The image of Northern warriors charging a Skarl arrow-storm flashed in his mind. He'd be stitching corpses tomorrow.
"Aye. Point taken, Commander." He sighed heavily. "The dose… how much per man?"
Eirik racked his brain. "Think… a strong pinch. Maybe two." He mimed pinching salt. "For a large man, active. Spread through a day's food, or dissolved in a skin of water… lethal within hours."
Fisk's mind calculated. "Let's say… a barrel of this special salt. Properly mixed into their entire haul? That should do it. Generously. Especially if they're consuming it fast, thinking they've hit the jackpot."
"A full barrel mixed thoroughly into the bulk salt Isolde's convoy carries. That should be more than sufficient."
"Alright," Fisk breathe. "Logistics. I need Saltpeter. Lots. Very pure. The purer the starting niter, the better the yield."
"You'll have it," Eirik stated. "Lord Varn has resources he couldn't move. Including Saltpeter stockpiles. Frostholme has stables, middens, old siege stores. It'll be there."
He pulled a heavy purse from his belt and dropped it onto Fisk's table with a solid thunk. "Buy it all. Use the silver we took from Flint. This is just the start. Buy whatever you need. Price is no object. Hire laborers if needed. Speed is critical."
Fisk hefted the purse, eyes wide. "What about litharge?"
"Buy it. Or if they have lead, you can make it yourself by roasting lead in air?"
Fisk nodded. "Aye. Got a small furnace in the wagon. Messy, but doable. Easier to buy if they've got stocks."
"Buy whatever speeds the process." Eirik stood. "Time, Fisk. You have perhaps seven days to produce that barrel of special salt. Can you do it?"
Fisk looked at the purse, then around his makeshift lab, then back at Eirik. A slow grin spread across his face. The grin of a man presented with the ultimate alchemical puzzle.
"A special salt barrel, Commander?" Fisk picked up a clean glass vial, holding it to the lantern light. "Consider it already crystallizing."
He met Eirik's gaze. "I'll need another assistant. Someone strong, stupid, and doesn't ask questions. Helga's boy, Rolf? He'll do. Send him to me at first light."
Eirik nodded once. "He's yours. Make it happen, Fisk."
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The tavern was called "The Frosty Stag". Isolde Fenrir sat stiffly on a stool across from Eirik, trying her best to tolerate the roughly cut wood and grimy patrons.
Eirik, however, seemed unbothered. He'd ordered a simple beef stew. The moment the worn bowl landed in front of him, he picked up his spoon and started eating. Gulping was perhaps the better word. He finished the first bowl in under a minute, signaled the serving woman, and ordered another without looking up. Then a third.
Isolde watched. "Is it truly that good, Commander?"
Eirik paused, spoon halfway to his mouth with the third bowl. He glanced down at the stew – chunks of tough meat, grayish root vegetables, a thick, greasy gravy. He took a bite, chewing slowly this time.
"Honestly?" he said after swallowing. "It's… okay. A bit salty." He took another careful spoonful. "But it's hot.And it's real food. That makes it taste like the finest feast in the world right now."
Isolde nodded slowly, sipping her watered-down wine. "Fair enough." She set her cup down. "You're leaving Leif and Yorick to handle Lord Varn, then? Negotiating for Fort Abercrombie's rights? Why not go yourself? You handled Flint well."
Eirik finished the third bowl. The warmth spread through his chilled limbs.
"Why not? Varn's drowning in debt. Leif's a noble. Yorick knows the politics. They know the plan." He leaned back slightly. "Varn's poor. Throw enough silver at him, he'll sell the rights to a ruin he can't afford to defend anyway. Anyone who's not completely insane would agree. It's simple economics."
"If you believe that's the best path, Commander," Isolde said carefully, "then I agree with your judgment."
She paused, choosing her next words. "But I have to say… this pace. Moving straight from the troll den to Flint's payment, and now immediately targeting a Skarl-held ruin? It feels… rushed. The men are tired, Eirik. They need rest. You need rest. There are bandits to hunt, wolves to clear from easier valleys – tasks to build strength and teamwork before tackling something… impossible." She lowered her voice. "They respect you, Commander. They follow you. But I think many find this choice… confusing. You had safer choices at your disposal."
Eirik held her gaze.
"Maybe I have less of a choice than you think, Isolde," he said finally. "The universe… has a habit of putting me in dire situations. That's as far as I'll reveal."
It's the truth, without the impossible details, he thought. The Tutorial Quests, the constant escalation, the need to reach higher and higher Realms… the System, keeps throwing pits in my path. I'm always climbing out of one before another opens beneath me.
Isolde's brow wrinkled slightly. "What is that supposed to mean?"
Eirik didn't explain more. Instead, he pushed his stool back and stood, stretching his tall frame. The movement drew a few curious glances from nearby patrons.
"It means," his voice stronger carried a note of force that made Isolde sit up straighter, "it means that maybe… I've learned to welcome it, instead of seeing it as a burden."
He paced a step towards the tavern's center, unaware of the bard who had just launched into a showy ballad about a dragon-slayer, complete with big arm movements. The bard's voice shook, but Eirik's words cut through it for Isolde.
"Comfort? I know comfort. The feeling of a thick blanket, a warm fire, a full belly, no threats on the horizon… it's bliss. Don't get me wrong. It's the best feeling." He gestured loosely around the tavern. "But… it gets stale after a while."
He let his hands resting on the back of his stool. "But the feeling when you're desperate? When you're backed against the wall? When you've got nothing left but your wits, no tricks hidden up your sleeve, absolutely nothing… that's the moment I find… enjoyable. In a way."
Enjoyable? Isolde looked truly puzzled now. He enjoys being cornered?
"I found myself think differently when I'm desperate. I'm more diligent. I see angles I'd miss when I'm comfortable. I fight differently – using every scrap, every weakness, every ounce of strength I have. And when I win… when I claw my way out of that pit… the victory…"
An almost hunting smile touching his lips.
"I crave that feeling, Isolde. It's like I'm standing in front of the universe itself, shouting: 'No matter what shit you throw at me, no matter how deep the pit you dig, you will not break me. I will stand here. And I'm going to WIN.'"
He replaced his force with a quiet sureness. "So you're right. I do have a choice. I chose to leave Leif and Yorick to handle Varn. I chose to target Abercrombie now, while the Skarls are careless in their ruin. I chose this rushed pace. Maybe… maybe because, I feel it's the most rewarding path. The one that forces me to be… more."
Isolde stared at him. The showy bard hit a high, screeching note about the dragon's fiery breath, but it was background noise. All she saw was Eirik – not the edgy bastard she'd first met in the Frost Pit, not even the cool commander who'd faced down Flint after slaying the trolls. This was something else.
"Choosing the pit," she repeated softly. "And dragging your men into it with you."
Eirik's gaze softened slightly. "They follow because they see the results. They see the path forward." He glanced towards the tavern door.
Isolde let the silence stretch as yet another greasy beef stew was put in front of Eirik. He sat down, and started to devour it again.
"So," Isolde began as soon as Eirik put down the bowl. "The invincible tactic Leif described. Hit-and-run, I heard? Horse archers? You found a solution yet?"
"No." Eirik let out a word as he wiped his mouth.
Isolde's perfectly shaped eyebrow rose. "No? That sounds remarkably like famous last words to me, Commander."
"Probably are," Eirik admitted. "It's a bit tricky, Lady Fenrir. Can't beat them head-on in the open. Can't siege them – they just melt away. Can't reliably bait them into a stand-up fight either, because they run." He sighed, the sound swallowed by a roar of laughter from a nearby table of miners. "Honestly? If I crack this nut, I deserve some sort of award from the King. Maybe a princess, now that I am of age."
"An award?" she felt indignancy filled her voice. "I think avoiding being turned into a pincushion by two hundred Skarl bows might be reward enough. Though I suppose that would grant you quiet. Permanently."
Eirik chuckled, a rough sound that seemed unfamiliar even to him. He took another huge spoonful of stew.
"Tell me, Lady Fenrir," Eirik began after the slurp. "Why are you here? Truly?"
"Pardon, Commander?"
Eirik pointed vaguely around the crowded tavern. "Here. In this… delightful place. Frostholm, at all. Trailing after a recently made legal bastard through blizzards and troll guts." He leaned forward slightly. "This isn't exactly the Fenrir family house, is it? Where servants fetch your wine chilled and the floors don't try to stick to your boots. You could be back at Stormkeep, dealing with the safer currents of Cedric's court, working for whatever scraps remain to House Fenrir. That was your safer choice. And a much less… smelly one."
Isolde's jaw tightened almost barely. "My son. My father. My house. All remain bound to your… deal. Where you go, Commander, House Fenrir's interests currently lie."
It was the obvious answer, and the most safe one.
Eirik chuckled again. "Ah, the loyal mother. Protecting her children. A noble cause, certainly."
He pushed the gravy-smeared spoon aside.
"And you didn't have to come north yourself. Leif is here, supposedly under my command, learning discipline the hard way. You could have sent a trusted man or woman on your behalf. Yet here you sit. So, cut the 'duty' line for a moment, Isolde. Tell me. Why follow the bastard?"
The directness, the use of her first name in this setting, stripped away another layer of her noble front. She flushed. It wasn't entirely anger. There was discomfort, yes, but also… challenge? She took a careful sip of her cheap wine.
She met his gaze again. "Duty binds me, yes. But you're right. It's not just that." She paused. "I am here… because I see something."
Eirik raised an eyebrow. "Something?"
"Opportunity," Isolde stated. "Not just survival, Eirik. Not just scraping House Fenrir out of the gutter Cedric pushed us into. I see the potential… for restoration. For rise. Greater than anything my father ever managed. Greater, perhaps, than anything House Fenrir has ever achieved."
Eirik blinked, really surprised. He'd expected fighting back, perhaps some half-truth about leverage, not… ambition. Grand ambition. From a widow.
"Rise? With me? Lady Fenrir, I appreciate the vote of confidence, but have you sniffed too much Frostfire?"
Isolde didn't flinch. "I am completely sober, Commander. And completely serious." She pointed slightly towards him. "Look at what stands before me. A man who, within weeks, went from a cut off bastard everyone looked down on – including me, let us be honest – to someone gathering power. Real power. A commander who took seventy-three men into a Troll Shaman's den and walked out victorious. A strategist who turned a lord's money trap into his own gain, publicly humiliating said lord in his own courtyard."
She took a breath. "You command loyalty bordering on devotion from hardened men. You have magic that goes against normal ways. But more than anything, you see people's very strengths and weaknesses laid bare."
The intensity in her eyes is now blazing. "You asked why I put up with the cold and the dirt and the bastard commander? Because I see a chance to rebuild my house not just from ruin, but into something… legendary. And that chance," she finished, "sits across from me, smelling slightly of troll and beef stew."
Silence hung between them. Eirik stared at her, suddenly found himself not knowing what to say. The feeling was quite foreign to him.
A grin finally spread across his face. He ran a hand through his dark hair, looking really flustered for perhaps the first time since she'd known him.
"Rise? Legendary?" He let out a short. "Frost's frozen balls, Isolde. Don't say shit like that." He pointed vaguely at his face. "You're gonna make me blush. And nobody wants to see that."
Isolde found a startled breath escaping her. She was laughing. A real laugh despite herself. "Consider it payment for putting up with your table manners, Commander. Four bowls? Honestly."
Before Eirik could return the banter, the tavern door banged open.
A gust of icy wind swirled sawdust and smoke, carrying in Leif Fenrir and Yorick. Snow dusted their shoulders.
Leif spotted them instantly, striding through the press of tables with Yorick trailing. He dropped a heavy leather satchel onto the table with a solid thump, making Isolde's wine cup jump. His eyes, usually guarded around Eirik, held a spark of weary triumph.
"It's done, Commander," Leif announced. "Lord Varn signed the papers." He pulled out a thick bundle of vellum scrolls with wax seals of House Varn clearly visible. "Fort Abercrombie. Ruin and rights. All his claims, given up. Once you take clear of the Skarl threats."
Good. Eirik scanned the topmost document. "The price?"
Leif's jaw tightened. "He insisted on one thousand talons, Commander. Up front. No negotiation. Said he had debts due yesterday." He hesitated, then added, "He looked… bad. Like a man already half in his grave. The hall was practically bare. "
Eirik nodded. "One thousand talons is manageable." He gestured towards the satchel. "It's paid?"
"Paid and witnessed," Leif confirmed. "His steward counted it twice. Signed the receipt." He tapped another document in the stack.
Eirik looked past Leif to Yorick. The scholar looked pale but keyed up, clutching his own satchel bulging with notes. "And the other task, Yorick? The information I required?"
Yorick blinked, startled to be addressed directly. "Oh! Yes, Commander! Absolutely. We… we gathered everything we could. Lord Varn's steward was surprisingly talkative once we greased his palm. Also talked to some old retainers, a few traders who'd dared the northern routes recently…" He licked his lips. "It's… extensive. Patterns of movement, suspected clan affiliations, names of known sub-chiefs, details on their horses, preferred tactics beyond the obvious…" He trailed off, eyes wide. "D-do you want the whole spill now, Commander? It's… rather a lot."
Eirik looked around the noisy tavern. Miners laughed boisterously. The bard plucked at his lute. He pushed the documents back towards Leif.
"Nah," he said, surprising both Leif and Yorick. He raised a hand, catching the barmaid's eye. "Three ales. Proper ones. And another round of that… fine stew." He gave Isolde a sidelong glance. "It grows on you."
He looked back at Yorick and Leif. "Sit down. Get that frozen look off your faces. You look like you've been wrestling ice wraiths." He gestured to the stools. "We've got the fort. Varn's signature is drying. That's step one." He accepted a large, foaming tankard from the barmaid. "Step two… the Skarls… that's tomorrow's mountain to climb."
Leif slowly sank onto a stool. Yorick practically collapsed onto another, fumbling his satchel onto his lap. "Tomorrow, Commander?" Yorick asked, bewildered. "But… the intelligence… it could be vital for planning the assault…"
"It is vital," Eirik agreed, taking a long pull of the surprisingly satisfying ale. It was dark, nutty, and blessedly cold. "And we will plan. Exhaustively. But not now."
He set the tankard down with a soft thud. "Right now, my bones ache, and I've eaten enough questionable stew to feed a small troll." He looked at Leif, then Yorick, then finally at Isolde, who was watching him with renewed scrutiny. "Tonight? Tonight, we drink." He raised his tankard slightly. "To Fort Abercrombie. Our new… fixer-upper."
A flicker of something flashed Isolde's eyes. He knows forcing it now, exhausted, will just lead to mistakes. She realized. He's delegating… the rest to his own instincts. It was a terrifying level of confidence, or perhaps just madness.
Leif, after a moment's hesitation, picked up his own tankard. Yorick followed suit. Isolde raised her wine cup.
"To Abercrombie," Eirik muttered, and downed the drink in one go.
2025-08-06 11:48:34 +0000 UTC
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Eirik, Leif, Olaf, Bjorn, and Yorick moved quietly through the snow-dusted pines.
Silence was paramount.
"Steeper up ahead, Commander," Yorick puffed as they reached the base of a sheer rock face. "Old goatherd's trail used to switchback up, but landslides buried it years back. This cliff... it's the fastest way to the ridge overlooking the fort's western approach. About sixty feet straight up."
Eirik craned his neck.
The cliff face was intimidating – dark granite, slick with frost and ice patches. Handholds were scarce. A slip here could be fatal.
His gaze lingered on the ice clinging to the rock. Ice. His element.
He stepped forward, placing a gauntleted hand against the cold rock. He closed his eyes, pushing his senses outwards. Frost mana flowed from his core, down his arm, and into the rock. He felt the microscopic water molecules trapped within crevices, the thin film of ice glazing the surface.
Foundation first. He visualized the thin patches thickening, spreading, flowing together. He willed the ice to harden and form rough steps jutting out from the cliff face.
[MANA EXPENDED: 2]
[MANA: 48/50]
[ABILITY: FROST SHAPER ACTIVATED]
A low,groan echoed from the rock. The existing patches of frost and ice surged, thickened, and solidified into uneven blue-grey slabs. Four distinct steps formed, each about two feet wide, spaced roughly six feet apart.
"By the Frost..." Leif breathed.
"Quiet," Eirik murmured, already focusing again. The middle section was smoother, devoid of natural holds. This required Conjuration, drawing moisture from the frigid air itself.
[MANA EXPENDED: 3]
[MANA: 45/50]
[ABILITY: ICE CONJURATION ACTIVATED]
Frost mist bloomed mid-air. With sharp CRUNCH sounds, three thick blocks of solid blue ice materialized, anchored into the granite. They formed a staggered line, another eighteen feet upwards.
The final stretch was steepest, overhanging. He found thin veins of moisture weeping from a crack and coaxed them out, freezing them into rough handholds and a final ledge.
[MANA EXPENDED: 2]
[MANA: 43/50]
[ABILITY: FROST SHAPER ACTIVATED]
Yorick stared, jaw slack. "Frost's breath, Commander... You just... built stairs out of ice?"
"Temporary stairs," Eirik corrected, testing the lowest step. It held firm. "Follow me. One at a time. Test each step before putting your full weight. Bjorn, bring up the rear."
He ascended. Leif followed, grim-faced but sure-footed. Olaf grunted, muttering about "unnatural sorcery" but climbed with agility. Bjorn brought up the rear.
Then it was Yorick's turn.
The scout was wiry and agile, but his face was pale as he eyed the ice staircase. Fear warred with necessity in his eyes. He placed a trembling boot on the lowest step. It held.
"Hurry up, scribbler!" Olaf hissed from above.
Yorick swallowed hard and started climbing. He made it past the first three steps, onto the first conjured ice block. He focused on the next step, stretching his fingers toward the cold surface.
Then his boot slipped.
He lurched sideways with a gasp, one foot swinging into empty air. He scrabbled, fingers clawing at the ice block. Panic choked him.
"YORICK!" Leif's sharp call cut through his terror.
Eirik reacted. He felt the ice Yorick clung to, felt the scout's weight straining the foothold.
[MANA EXPENDED: 1]
[MANA: 42/50]
[ABILITY: FROST SHAPER ACTIVATED]
He poured frost mana down, reinforcing the ice block beneath Yorick's fingers. He roughened the surface where Yorick's hands gripped, increasing friction.
Yorick gasped, finding grip on the ice. He hauled himself back onto the step, pressing flat against the rock face, breathing in gulps. Sweat beaded on his forehead despite the freezing air.
"Don't... look... down..." he whimpered.
"Don't stop," Eirik commanded. "Next step. Now, Yorick."
Trembling, Yorick forced himself to move. Step by step, he ascended the remaining stairs. Bjorn's hand grabbed his arm, hauling him onto the rocky ledge at the top.
Yorick collapsed onto his hands and knees, gasping. "Never... again... Commander... Never..."
Olaf clapped a heavy hand on his shoulder. "Ha! You made it, scribe!"
Eirik ignored the reactions. "This way. Yorick, lead on to the overlook. Quietly."
The scout led them along the narrow ridge for another quarter mile. Finally, he gestured towards a cluster of snow-dusted boulders overlooking a deep valley.
"There," Yorick breathed, crouching behind the largest boulder.
Eirik moved forward.
The valley below opened up and Fort Abercrombie lay within it.
A ruin? That might be generous.
From their vantage point high on the ridge, the scale of the destruction was clear. What remained was less a fortress and more a skeleton of one.
Thick stone walls, once formidable, were now broken in multiple places. One entire section near the eastern corner had collapsed into a tumble of shattered stone blocks, spilling into the valley. Gaps yawned elsewhere, large enough for a warhorse to charge through.
The massive double gatehouse Yorick had described no longer existed. One gate was a splintered wreck, hanging off twisted hinges. The other was gone, leaving a dark maw. Towers were either shattered stumps or missing. Only two on the western side stood partially intact, their tops broken off, revealing gaping holes.
The inner keep, the heart of the old fort, was a charred ruin, its roof gone, only skeletal beams reaching for the grey sky.
Defensible? Barely. Repairable? Maybe. With time and resources we don't have right now. The reality of the "damaged" state hit harder than the frigid wind.
But Yorick had been right about one thing: It wasn't empty.
Movement flickered within the ruins, confirming his fears.
A hundred people? Minimum?
"Commander," Yorick whispered, voice tight with dread. "See the smoke? They've got fires going inside the old barracks shell. And look near the main breach – horses."
Eirik squinted. Through the swirling snow flurries, he could make out shapes moving near the largest gap in the eastern wall. Darker shapes milled about: horses. Lots of them. But details were impossible. Were they war mounts? Pack animals? How many warriors? How alert?
His hand went to his storage ring.
[ITEM: Frostforged Spyglass (F-Grade)]
He willed it into existence. Frost mist shimmered in his palm, resolving into the thick, blue-grey ice cylinder with its cloudy lenses. It looked primitive.
He brought it to his eye, ignoring the biting cold against his skin.
"What in the Frozen Hells is that?" Olaf leaned closer, scarred face scrunched in disbelief. "Some kinda… ice trumpet?"
"It's a seeing-tube, Olaf," Eirik answered.
Yorick gaped. "But… how? With ice…?"
"Quiet," Eirik commanded.
He focused, adjusting the crude tube. The world beyond the lens swam. Then it sharpened.
He scanned the main breach in the eastern wall. Dozens of horses, shaggy mountain breeds, were picketed on trampled snow just inside the ruined perimeter. Men moved among them, clad in boiled leather armor stitched with bone and iron plates.
Skarl horsemen.
He counted. Thirty warriors tending horses. Another twenty visible near a large central fire pit within the shell of what might have been the main barracks. He shifted the tube.
Beyond the warriors, deeper in the ruined courtyard, were non-combatants. Women in heavy furs worked around smaller fires, tending iron pots or scraping hides. A cluster of older men sat on furs near one fire, sharpening weapons or carving bone.
Not just a war band. It's a clan segment. A nomadic unit – warriors, families, elders. At least two hundred souls. Probably more hidden in the rubble.
This complicated things. Attacking a war band was one thing; attacking what amounted to a moving village holed up in a ruin was another. The warriors would fight to protect their families.
But those families meant baggage, supplies… and vulnerability.
He panned the spyglass.
The southern and western stretches were less damaged but still had gaps. The northern wall looked ruined… with a massive hole where the main gate had been ripped away. The splintered remains hung.
That's a killing ground waiting to happen… for either side.
Only two partial towers remained on the western side, both missing their tops. The inner keep sat ruined.
Eirik focused on their activity next. Warriors clustered near the main fire pit, eating dried meat, drinking from skins, sharpening axes and curved sabres. No armor worn beyond basic chest plates. Few weapons close to hand.
However, every single one of them is carrying a light bow.
The bows weren't fancy - just simple hunting bows made of horn and wood. But they were ubiquitous - slung across backs, resting against legs, or held in hands even while the men ate and talked. They sleep with those bows, he thought. Probably bathe with them too.
He counted again, slower.
Thirty tending horses. Forty near the main fire. Another dozen visible near smaller fires scattered among rubble piles that had once been outbuildings. That made eighty warriors visible. With the size of the encampment, likely another fifty or sixty resting or on perimeter patrols deeper in the ruins. Perhaps one-thirty to one-fourty fighting men.
The numbers were daunting.
A thick, oily smoke coiled upwards from the large central fire pit. Figures moved around it in a rhythmic pattern that felt less like dance and more like convulsions.
Olaf's eyes gleamed. "Look at 'em, Commander. Scattered. Lazy. Thinkin' themselves safe in their ruin. We could take 'em. Hit hard and fast."
"Take them? Olaf, look at the numbers!" Yorick hissed, his face pale. "We've barely sixty fighting fit, and half of those are walking wounded! Against a fortified position… even a ruined one… held by over two hundred Skarls? It'd be slaughter!"
"Fortified?" Olaf scoffed. "Holes big enough to march a giant through! Walls you could spit through! How's that fortified?"
"Take them?" Yorick's whisper was sharp. "Olaf, by the Frost, look! One hundred thirty warriors? Minimum? And that's just the men we see! Look at the horses!"
Olaf scowled, his gaze sweeping over the picketed mounts. "So? Horses are good eating after we win. Or riding."
"Riding away is what they'll be doing!" Yorick's voice rose before he caught himself, glancing towards the valley. "Don't you understand? You never fight the Skarls in the open if you can avoid it. Never. Especially not from a position of weakness!"
"Weakness? We took down a troll Shaman!" Olaf countered, thumping a fist against his thigh. "These are just men."
"Men who live and die on horseback!" Yorick pressed. "That's why Lord Varn lost Abercrombie, why it bled him dry! It's why the North trembles! Forget their axes, Olaf! It's the bows!"
He gestured. "Everyone down there, everyone – the warriors, the women hunched over pots, the greybeards sharpening blades, even the children playing behind the fallen wall – they can all ride. They can all shoot. They're born in the saddle."
Everyone a rider… and an archer? Eirik kept his face impassive, but the implication hit him.
Yorick saw the flicker in Eirik's eyes and seized on it. "Commander, listen! It's their way of war. Their tactic."
"Invincible?" Olaf scoffed. "Nothing's invincible."
"Against forces like ours? It is. Think, Olaf!" Yorick pleaded. "You hit them with a small force? They don't huddle behind the broken walls waiting to be slaughtered. They pour out. Every rider, bow in hand. A hundred, two hundred horse archers swarming towards you before your first rank is halfway across the valley."
The image crystallized in Eirik's mind: A mass that would engulf his sixty Talons long before they reached cover. His Frost Shaper abilities were potent, but shaping terrain for sixty men against two hundred mobile archers?
Not gonna work.
Yorick continued. "They won't come in close for melee. Not at first. Why should they? They'll just... swarm. They'll circle you at a distance, far outside the reach of your swords or even our crossbows."
He gestured. "They can loose arrows from twenty yards further out than our best archers, Commander. Light, fast bows, designed to shoot from horseback."
Superior range and mobility. Eirik saw the death knell for a direct assault.
"Okay," Olaf muttered, his bravado faltering. "So we recruit more people. More than they can encircle. Commander just got paid. We dig in, and make them come to us on our terms."
"They won't!" Yorick hissed, shaking his head. "If you show up with a force big enough they think they can't overwhelm? They run. Simple as that. They mount up, grab their families, their tents, their horses, and they ride. Deeper into the mountains, maybe just over the next ridge."
His voice grew bitter. "You won't catch them. They know this land, and their horses are bred for it – tough, fast, tireless. They leave you standing in the ruins or chasing shadows."
Hit and run. Denial of a decisive battle. It was the perfect strategy against a slow-moving, conventional force.
"Then we take the fort!" Olaf insisted.
Yorick gave a laugh. "Oh, you take the fort. Congratulations. You hold the broken walls. And then? They're still out there. Watching. Waiting. They know where you are. You think you get a day's peace? A single hour?"
He gestured down into the valley. "The next morning, or maybe the day after when you're hauling stone or trying to patch a gate, they come back. Not to storm the walls. Just a handful of riders, maybe. Sweeping past at a gallop, a hundred yards out, barely in sight. A volley of arrows arcs over the wall."
He mimicked the whistling sound. "Thwip-thwip-thwip! Into the yard where your men are working. Men drop. Maybe one, maybe three. Wounded. Dead. Panic spreads. You scramble archers, but they're already gone."
His voice grew urgent. "And they do it again. And again. And again. Day after day. Night raids to keep you from sleeping. Never a big fight, just… slow bleeding. They wear you down, Commander. Arrow by arrow."
Yorick pointed toward the camp. "They'll shoot your horses grazing outside. They'll shoot anyone who fetches water from the stream without a shield wall."
Eirik felt the weight of the strategy. A siege in reverse. Instead of trapping the enemy, he'd be the one trapped inside a ruin, besieged by an unseen force that could strike at will and retreat before retaliation.
How do you build walls when every mason is a target? How do you plant crops when every field is a killing ground? Morale would crumble faster than the fort's remaining walls.
"It's attrition," Eirik murmured. "Death by a thousand cuts."
"Exactly!" Yorick nodded. "And if you ever get so frustrated, so desperate, that you do send a force out to chase them? To try and finish it?"
He leaned closer, his eyes wide. "That's what they want. That's the trap! They let you chase. They ride just fast enough to stay ahead, just slow enough to keep you interested. Luring your main fighting strength away from the fort, deeper into broken terrain you don't know."
He snapped his fingers.
"And then… They hit you from all sides. Horsemen you never saw coming, rising from gullies, pouring over ridges. They surround your sally force. More arrows, raining down from every direction."
His voice dropped to a whisper. "They close in, not for a melee, but to keep you penned, confused, while they keep shooting. And when you break? When you try to flee back to the fort? That's when they charge. Sabres flashing. Cutting you down as you run. No prisoners. No mercy."
He pointed a finger towards the skull-adorned posts below. "That's how Fort Abercrombie suffered its worst defeat, Commander. Years ago, before Varn abandoned it. They sallied out after a raiding party. Overconfident. Lost nearly two hundred men in an hour."
His voice grew bitter. "Dragged back in pieces to decorate the Skarl camps. That loss… that's what started the bleeding Varn couldn't stop. That's why the North is in such a bad way now!"
Olaf had fallen silent, his scarred face pale. The bravado was gone, replaced by horror. He might relish a bloody melee, but the idea of being shot down from afar, unable to strike back, was anathema.
"Frost's frozen balls..." he breathed.
"Why do you think Lord Flint is terrified of them?" Yorick pressed, seeing he had their attention. "It's not just the warriors, Lieutenant. It's the scorching."
He gestured back towards Flint's Hold, unseen beyond the mountains. "The Skarls don't just raid; they destroy. They burn villages to ash before the garrison can muster. They trample crops into mud. They slaughter livestock they can't take. They poison wells."
His voice grew hollow. "They leave nothing behind but death and starvation. They target the vulnerable – the old, the children. They have no mercy. Commerce routes vanish because no trader dares the roads. Holds starve because the fields lie fallow and burned."
He swept his arm toward the distant holds. "Men become desperate, turn bandit… or die. The Skarls create deserts, Commander. Deserts filled with bones."
"That's the fear gripping Flint, Varn, Lord Cedric, and even Earl Borin. It's not just losing a battle. It's losing everything. The Skarls turn the land itself against you. They force you into choices – abandon your forward defenses, bleed your treasury trying to hold them, or watch your people starve and burn."
His voice cracked. "There are no good choices against them on open ground."
Silence descended over the scouting party.
The wind whistled through the rocks, carrying faint sounds from the ruined fort below – the whinny of a horse, a shout, the crackle of fire.
Eirik turned away from the vista.
"Back to camp. Then ride for Frostholme. Double time. We have work to do."
2025-08-05 13:40:28 +0000 UTC
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Their camp sprawled across a valley fifteen miles north of Flint's Hold.
Eirik stood at the camp's edge, watching his men settle in. The adrenaline from their escape had worn off. Now came the pain.
"Easy, easy!" Fisk's voice carried from the medical tent. Fisk worked on Helga's arm. "This will sting. Bite down on this."
A scream. Then silence except for breathing.
"Commander!" Leif approached. Blood had dried on his temple. "First watch is set. Olaf's got the perimeter. Horses are secured."
"Good. Get that head looked at."
"It's nothing—"
"That's an order, Leif." Eirik's tone brooked no argument. "We can't afford infections. Not out here."
Leif nodded and headed towards Fisk's tent.
Eirik waited until his lieutenant was gone. Then he moved into the trees, away from the firelight. He needed solitude for what the system has for him.
He found a pine. He leaned against the bark, letting his shoulders sag.
[Tutorial Quest #3: Build A Warchest (Stewardship) - COMPLETE!]
[Objective: Accumulate 5,000 Silver Talons.]
[Final Amount: 5,910 Silver Talons]
[Reward Calculation in Progress...]
[Timely Completion Bonus: x2 Multiplier Applied]
[Total Reward: 5,000 Silver Talons]
Eirik's eyes widened. Five thousand? On top of what they'd already earned?
[5,000 Silver Talons Transferred to Storage Ring]
[Current Storage Ring Balance: 10,910 Silver Talons]
Ten thousand... The number was staggering. With management, he could maintain the Talons for months. Recruit more men. Buy equipment. The possibilities raced through his mind.
But the system wasn't done.
[Initial Talent Unlocked: Merchant's Eye (Passive)]
He focused on the talent.
[MERCHANT'S EYE (Passive)]
[Effect: Instinctively assess the approximate value of goods, services, and opportunities. Reduces chance of being deceived in financial transactions]
Useful. How many opportunities had he missed because he couldn't judge their worth? This would help level that playing field.
The system messages continued.
[Tutorial Quest #7: Roots of Power (Final Tutorial Quest) - UNLOCKED!]
[Objective: Obtain your first settlement through conquest, construction, or cunning.]
[Reward: Tutorial Completion Bonus Package]
[Warning: As the final tutorial quest, it must be completed within 30 days. Any delay will result in immediate failure.]
A settlement. Eirik's mind raced. Not just a camp. Not borrowed barracks. An actual holding.
But thirty days?
He pushed the concern aside. One problem at a time. First, he needed to understand what "obtaining a settlement" meant.
Conquest is obvious. Take someone else's holdings. But that means war. Real war, not just clearing out trolls. And the sixty men at his side weren't anything close to pull off something like that.
Construction? Building from scratch? Where? With what resources? That would take months, maybe years. Not thirty days.
Cunning though... His mind raced.
That's an option. Inherit something. Marry into it. Get granted lands for service. But he'd have no control over where the holding would be, if he could find a match and get the marriage done within thirty days — not a chance.
There had to be more information about settlements.
[SETTLEMENT TUTORIAL INFORMATION]
[A settlement is defined as any controlled territory with the following minimum requirements:]
[- Defined borders recognized by local authorities or defended by force]
[- Structures suitable for habitation]
[- Population of at least 1,000 individuals under your authority]
[- Source of income or resources]
[- Basic defensive capabilities]
A thousand people minimum. That looked unrealistic even if he had money now. But the other requirements… these won't be done close to thirty days if he plans to do everything from scratch.
He was looking at either taking a settlement or building one from scratch. Neither option was simple. Both would take time, resources, and blood.
He needed knowledge. Now.
The sound of boots made him turn. Leif emerged from the treeline, a bandage wrapped around his head.
"Commander? Everything alright?"
"Things are fine," Eirik said. "What's our supply situation?"
"Decent enough. Fisk says we've got medical supplies for maybe two weeks of injuries. Food for a week, maybe ten days if we're careful. Weapons are in good shape after Flint's armory, but we're burning through arrows fast." Leif shifted his weight. "The men are wondering where we're headed, Commander."
Eirik nodded. They needed a base. A real one.
"Tell me about the northern territories, Leif. What's up there beyond Flint's influence?"
"Dangerous country, mostly. The mountain passes, the Skarl war bands prowling around…" Leif frowned. "Why? What are you thinking?"
"I'm thinking," Eirik said, "that we need more than just a warband. We need a home base. Somewhere defensible."
"That's… ambitious, Commander. Building a fort from scratch would take—"
"Not building," Eirik interrupted. "Taking. Or finding somewhere built but abandoned." He turned to face Leif. "Those Skarl raiders you mentioned. They've been hitting settlements, haven't they? Some must have been overrun. Abandoned."
Leif's expression grew cautious.
"Aye, there's been damage. But most of those places…" He shook his head. "They're ruins for a reason, Commander. Either the Skarls are still using them as bases, or they're too destroyed to be worth salvaging."
"But not all of them?"
"Well…" Leif scratched at his bandage. "There's talk of some places that got hit but not destroyed. Places the Skarls abandoned after they finished looting." He paused. "But Commander, even if we found such a place, occupying it would be asking for trouble. The Skarls know those ruins. They'd come back."
"Let them come," Eirik said. "We'll be ready."
Leif studied his commander's face in the light filtering through the pine branches. "You're serious about this."
"Dead serious. We can't keep running forever, Leif." Eirik pushed away from the tree. "Gather Olaf, Harkin, and Yorick. I want to know everything they know about the northern territories."
"Commander," Leif said, "even if we found the perfect ruin to occupy, we'd need more than two hundred men to hold it against raiders."
"Then we'll recruit more men," Eirik replied. "But first, we need to know what's available. Information, Leif. That's our first priority."
Leif nodded and headed back toward the camp.
Eirik waited for a while, then made his way back to the fire where Leif was gathering the men. Olaf, Yorick, and Harkin were present.
"Right," Eirik said without preamble. "I need to know about the northern territories. Places that have been hit by Skarl raiders but might still be salvageable."
Yorick straightened. "Commander, you're not thinking of—"
"I'm thinking of establishing a base," Eirik cut him off. "Somewhere we can recruit, train, and launch operations from. Somewhere that's ours."
Olaf grunted. "About time. I'm tired of sleeping in other men's halls."
"But the risks—" Harkin began.
"Are manageable if we choose the right location," Eirik said. "That's why I need information. What do you know about the positions north of here?"
"Well," Yorick said, "there's the defensive triangle. Three strongholds guarding the main mountain passes."
"Triangle?" Eirik prompted.
Yorick picked up a stick and began sketching in the snow beside the fire.
"Here's how it works, Commander. The mountain chain runs like a wall." He drew a line. "Only two decent passes for any sizeable force. Each one guarded by a stronghold."
He marked three points.
First point. "Flint's Hold here. Blackstone Pass."
Another point. "And Frostholme here. Icefang Pass."
Last point. "Stormkeep here. That's your father Cedric's seat. Further back."
"Three strongholds watching two passes," Eirik mused. "Mutual support?"
"In theory," Yorick said. "If one gets hit, the others can swing forces to help. But…"
"But?" Eirik prompted.
"But it only works if all three are manned and supplied," Yorick finished. "And from what traders say, Frostholme's been struggling."
"Struggling how?"
"Lord Varn's drowning in debt," Yorick said. "Been selling everything that isn't nailed down. Cut his garrison to the bone."
Eirik's interest sharpened. A weakened stronghold in a position. "How weakened?"
"Bad enough that the Skarls probe Icefang Pass," Yorick said. "Testing his defenses. Waiting for the right moment."
"And if Frostholme falls?"
"Then the whole triangle collapses," Yorick said. "The Skarls could pour through Icefang Pass and hit the other two from behind."
Eirik nodded. A settlement quest, and here was a stronghold on the verge of collapse. But taking Frostholme would mean war with Lord Varn, and the other stronghold lords.
"What about places the Skarls have hit?" he asked. "Ruins that might be rebuilt?"
Yorick gave him an uncomfortable look.
"There's Fellstone Keep," Yorick said. "Between Flint's lands and Frostholme. The Skarls burned it last year."
"Destroyed?"
"Near enough. And the Skarls still patrol the area. It's contested ground."
"Anywhere else?"
Another pause. Then Leif spoke. "Fort Abercrombie."
The name seemed to hang in the air. Yorick flinched.
"What's Fort Abercrombie?" Eirik asked.
"Was Varn's forward position," Leif said. "Guarded the main approach to Icefang Pass. Half-day's ride northwest of Frostholme."
"Was?"
"Varn abandoned it," Olaf interjected, seeing Eirik's interest. "Damn shame if you ask me. Planted right atop the main approach to Icefang Pass. First line of defense. Any war band coming through Icefang? Had to get past Abercrombie's walls. Or climb mountains that'd make a goat weep."
"The Skarls… they hated it," Yorick continued. "For years, it stood. Stone walls, double gatehouse, towers manned by Varn's best. Archers, boiling oil, sallies… it was brutal. But…" His voice dropped. "Brutal cost too."
"Cost? What do you mean?" Eirik pressed.
"I mean that the Skarls ain't stupid. That they adopted to play the long game instead of trying to taking it by force. They'd hit it. Not with one siege, but waves. Smaller bands. Probe the walls. Sap a corner. Lure a sally party too far. Every fight chipped away Varn's chests."
"And after?"
"After?" Yorick gave a laugh. "After every raid, Varn poured silver like water. Masons. Smiths. Carpenters. Wagons of timber, stone, iron bars dragged up the pass. Paying mercs to guard the repair crews. Paying bonuses to the survivors holding the line. Money ran out faster than men died." He shook his head. "For years. Every season. Abercrombie held… but it drained Varn's finances. So he abandoned it last year."
Eirik felt a spark of interest. "Abandoned, but not destroyed?"
"The Skarls wrecked it some when they found it empty," Yorick said. "But they didn't burn it. Why bother? It was abandoned."
"So it's still sound?"
"Sound wouldn't be the words I use, Commander." Yorick said. "But should be some sort of walls and towers left."
Eirik stared at the map Olaf had sketched in the snow. Fort Abercrombie. A forward position controlling access to a pass. Abandoned due to financial constraints, not military defeat.
"How big is this fort?"
"Big enough," Yorick said. "Could house maybe two, three hundred men when garrisoned. Good walls, defensible position."
"And it's just sitting there empty?"
"Well," Yorick said, "empty of Varn's men. But the Skarls…"
"What about the Skarls?"
"They use it sometimes," Yorick said. "As a base when they're raiding the area. Not permanently, but…"
"But we'd be taking it from them if we occupied it," Eirik finished.
"Aye," Olaf said. "And they wouldn't like that one bit."
Eirik studied the map in the snow. Fort Abercrombie. Strategic position. Defensible. Large enough for his needs. And unoccupied by any authority.
It was perfect. Except for the matter of the Skarl war bands who considered it their territory.
"How many Skarls use the fort?" he asked.
"No idea," Yorick said. "But based on what I know about Skrals, they may occupy razed or abandoned settlements with a war band. Maybe a hundred, two hundred warriors."
About triple the size as Eirik's force. And the Skarls would have the advantage of knowing the terrain, and they could call for reinforcements from other bands.
Still, it was a possibility. A real possibility.
"Any other options?" he asked.
The men looked at each other, but nobody spoke up.
"Right," Eirik said. "Fort Abercrombie it is, then."
"Commander," Leif said, "are you sure about this? Taking on the Skarls for a fort?"
"It's not ruined," Eirik corrected. "It's damaged. There's a difference. And yes, I'm sure." He looked around the circle of faces. "We need a base. This is our option."
"When?" Olaf asked.
"Soon," Eirik said. "But first, I need more information about the fort itself. Layout, defenses, condition of the walls. Everything."
He stood up, brushing snow from his cloak. "Yorick, you seem to know the most about it. I want a description. Every gate, every tower, every weakness."
"Commander, I've never been inside—"
"Then we will scout it out," Eirik said. "Together."
———
Eirik moved into the pine thicket, finding a clearing where moonlight filtered through the branches.
A telescope. The thought crystallized. His mentor carried one at the Academy. But conjuring optics from scratch?
He focused on the snowdrift against a boulder, pouring Frost mana into his vision: a hollow cylinder, three feet long.
[MANA EXPENDED: 3] [MANA: 47/50]
Within moments, a tube of ice stood upright.
Item Identified: Crude Ice Tube (F-Grade)
The tube needs to be clearer. He scanned the clearing. An icicle hung from a branch, dripping.
Liquid water. Perfect.
He cupped his hand beneath the drip, catching droplets. This time, he willed the water to flow like syrup, forming a narrower tube with clearer ice.
[MANA EXPENDED: 4] [MANA: 43/50]
Item Identified: Clear Ice Tube (F-Grade)
He raised it. Still blurred. No magnification.
Right. Lenses.
Convex lens first. He visualized a disk bulging outward like a raindrop, guiding the freezing process molecule by molecule.
[MANA EXPENDED: 5] [MANA: 38/50]
The lens formed—smaller, but clearer. He peered through it at a pine branch. The needles blurred together, but they were larger.
It works!
The concave eyepiece proved trickier. Instead of bulging out, it curved inward. More mana, more careful shaping.
[MANA EXPENDED: 9] [MANA: 29/50]
Assembly time. Using Frost Shaper to melt and refreeze edges, he fused both lenses to the tube. Crude—like a child's craft project made of frozen pond water.
[ITEM: Frostforged Spyglass (F-Grade) - Crude Optics, Low Durability, Moderate Magnification ]
Heart pounding, Eirik raised the telescope toward the ridgeline half a mile away.
The blur resolved.
A mountain goat, picking its way along a ledge.
Incredible.
A flick of will sent the spyglass dissolving into blue mist, vanishing into his storage ring. He turned back to the dripping icicle, gathering water in his palm.
Time to try again—this time, he'd make it better.
2025-08-05 10:53:28 +0000 UTC
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The oak gates of Flint's Hold squeaked open.
Eirik Stormcrow walked at the front. Behind him the main group of Talons marched.
They were beaten up, wrapped in cloth. Some walked with hurt legs. All had marks of fighting. But it was what they carried that made the quiet talking turn into silence.
Tusks — yellow and longer than a man's arm — were carried on their shoulders. And most clearly seen, carried on spears held high, were grotesque-looking heads.
Troll heads.
Their faces were stuck in terrified looks. One was bigger than the rest, with magic marks cut into its forehead – it belonged to the shaman.
The proof of winning hit the watching crowd.
"Look at them! Look at the heads!" A miner pointed. "That... that's a warrior-class! Tusks that big… It must've been twelve feet or taller!"
A wave went through the crowd.
"That's the one that crushed Torvald's crew last winter! I'd swear it! Look at that cut over its eye!" another miner gasped.
"But... so few men?" a baker's helper said quietly. "Against that?"
A group of Flint's guards exchanged uneasy looks.
"Momma," a boy pulled at his mother's skirt. "Who's that? He looks… so young. And short."
The mother pulled the boy closer. "That... that's him. Eirik Stormcrow. Cedric's boy. The bastard they sent away."
The boy scrunched up his nose. "That's him? But Old Man Hagar... he said the Stormcrow Bastard had horns! And breathed fire! Like a demon! He said he was huge and scary!"
He looked again at Eirik.
"Why doesn't he look like that, Momma?"
The mother shook her head. "I don't know, Jorin. Maybe the stories got it wrong."
"Is he a hero now, Momma?"
"I don't know what he is, Jorin. But he killed the trolls. Now be quiet."
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Lord Arcturus Flint stood still at the window. Impossible. He knew the Throat. A Troll Clan stronghold. Over a dozen warriors. Organized. Led by a Shaman using frost magic.
He'd sent three hired bands – companies numbering close to two hundred each. They'd looked around and walked away without arguing. Because they knew it was suicide. He'd thrown the contract to the Bastard for them to run away. To run away so Stonehand would have nothing left and obey his will.
Seventy-three men. Seventy-three! Against a dug-in force of trolls. They shouldn't have lasted ten minutes!
"Did you say twelve..." Flint said roughly to the steward beside him. "Twelve dead? Out of seventy-three? Are those reports checked?"
Barlow, the steward, swallowed.
"They are checked, my lord. Twelve checked dead. Several hurt. Against..." He pointed. "Against that."
It wouldn't make sense. A dozen losses against an enemy that should have wiped out three times that number! Flint felt his plan lay in pieces.
If the Talons failed, he could blame Stormcrow's incompetence and keep Stonehand choked. If they ran away, then he’d kept playing his game until Stonehand folded. But them winning… with hard proof and marched right into his court yard — this was the last thing he’d expected and the worst scenario he’d imagined.
Now, the trolls were wiped out, and he was tied to pay them money. Money he needed for the Skarl raids. Money he’d rather spend on his wine collection than giving to this stubborn and annoying bastard. Money he’d hold on to dearly, one way or another.
"Barlow!" Flint snapped. "Offer them the barracks annex. Hot food. Medical care. Tell them I will see Commander Stormcrow. In one hour. In the study. Alone."
Barlow bowed and ran away.
Flint turned back to the window, eyes locked on Eirik Stormcrow. The man had stopped near the courtyard center.
Eirik raised a hand. The Talons stopped, waiting.
The Hold's door squeaked open. Flint's steward came out, deliberately averting his gaze away from the Troll heads.
"Commander Stormcrow. Lord Flint offers shelter to your band. The barracks annex is ready with hot food. Our healer will help the hurt." He swallowed. "Lord Flint asks for the honor of your presence. In his study. In one hour. To discuss the ending of your contract."
A private meeting? Not a chance, Flint. You tried to bury us quietly. Now you'll pay us loudly.
Eirik let the silence stretch, then he raised his voice.
"We thank Lord Flint for his kindness." His eyes looked around the crowd, then locked onto the steward. "My men are tired. Annex barracks is welcome."
Relief went through the steward, he opened his mouth to answer.
"However." Yet Eirik didn’t give him the chance. "There will be no private meeting."
Eirik pointed at the cut off troll heads, the tusks, the claw prizes held high by his Talons.
"The contract Lord Flint offered was for clearing the troll dens blocking the Ironvein. We did it. The blockage is removed. The terms were clear. Payment was written upon finishing." He took a step forward forcing the man to step back. "I see no reason to wait. "
He turned, talking to the courtyard now.
"Lord Flint hired the Talon Warband to clear the Ironvein blockage. We have done so. The price was agreed: One thousand silver talons. Payable upon proof of success." He swept his arm towards the trophies again. "Proof is right here."
Inside the study, Arcturus Flint's knuckles were white on the windowsill. He dares? The young one dares demand payment like a seller on market day? In front of everyone?
Flint saw the steward stuck in the courtyard, looking towards the window for help. He forced himself to take a breath and summoned his servant.
"Tell Barlow," Flint hissed. "Tell him… tell him payment requires checking of the Ironvein access. It requires counting the dead for the bounty clause. It requires... tallies! It cannot be done instantly!"
The servant nodded and ran out. He pushed past the crowd and whispered in Barlow's ear.
"Commander Stormcrow," Barlow finally began. "Lord Flint appreciates your action. However, contract duties require certain... formalities. Checking of the Ironvein passage being cleared and open. Tallying the troll remains for the per-head bounty clause detailed in the contract add-on. This requires a trip to the site, led by Hold representatives. Payment processing follows completion of these tallies, which will require several days."
He spread his hands. "Standard procedure, Commander. To ensure accuracy and fairness for both parties."
Ah, the dance. Wait, wait, wait, until they find something to reduce the pay.
"Formalities," Eirik repeated. "Lord Flint's contract said 'clearing of the dens blocking the Ironvein workings'. Not 'checking trips'. Not 'bounty tallies'. Clearing. The dens are cleared. The proof of clearing is piled around your feet, Steward."
He pointed at the shaman's head. "That? That made sure the clearing. Its presence here proves the dens are no longer working. There are no trolls left in that gap able to block anything. Your Hold scouts can check the pass is open later. That doesn't delay the contract payment."
He took another step forward, forcing Barlow back another step. The steward looked scared. "As for the bounty clause..." Eirik paused. "...we expected that."
He raised his voice again. "Talons! Present the tallies!"
From the ranks, Helga stepped forward, pulling a paper scroll from her belt. Bjorn followed, holding up a leather pouch bulging with... something.
They unrolled the scroll before Barlow. Helga began reading aloud:
"Warrior-Class Trolls, standard height, ten to twelve feet: Fourteen checked kills. Tusks, claws, heads presented. Bounty: Fifty talons each. Total: Seven hundred talons." Gasps. Fourteen?
"Warrior-Class Troll, Shaman: One checked kill. Features written down. Head presented. Bounty: As per leadership clause – Two hundred talons." More murmurs. Two hundred for one head!
"Worker-Class Trolls: Seven checked kills during fight and run. Smaller claws presented. Bounty: Twenty talons each. Total: One hundred and forty talons."
She paused, then tapped the paper.
"Total Bounty Due: One thousand and forty talons."
Bjorn stepped forward and turned over the pouch onto the stones. Clatter-clatter-thud. Dozens upon dozens of frozen, cut off troll ears tumbled out. The crowd’s faces turned pale.
"The ears," Eirik said. "For checking if Lord Flint's clerks question the authenticity of our account. Each matched to the tally." He locked eyes with the steward. "The contract completion payment: One thousand talons. The checked bounty tally: One thousand and forty talons. Total owed: Two thousand and forty silver talons. Payable. Now."
The number hit everyone. Two thousand talons! A huge sum. The boldness of having it all counted, written down, and demanded publicly… they had never seen their Lord being cornered like this — being forced to pay right away and in full, with all his subjects as witnesses.
Inside the study, Arcturus Flint staggered back from the window, crashing into his chair. His face was grey. Two thousand? They counted? They wrote it down? They have the ears? Flint felt the walls closing in. The Skarl raids demanded coin now. Paying this… it would drain his reserves.
But refusing? In front of everyone? After that display? His authority would disappear.
Steward Barlow looked like he might faint. His gaze darted towards the Keep's window where Lord Flint stood unseen. The oak door of the Keep groaned open once more. Not a servant this time. Lord Arcturus Flint himself stepped out.
A gasp rippled through the courtyard. Lords didn't come down to deal with hired fighters, especially ones led by a bastard.
Flint looked around the prizes, the ears, the tally scroll, and locked onto Eirik. He walked down the steps, the crowd parting before him as he stopped a few steps from Eirik, close enough for private talk if they kept their voices low, but positioned so the courtyard could witness the meeting.
"Commander Stormcrow," Flint forced a smile onto his lips. "A remarkable feat of arms. The Hold owes you and your men a debt for clearing the Throat."
Eirik tilted his head. "Lord Flint. The troll threat was significant, my men suffered losses. But the Talons did the contract as written. Swift resolution benefits everyone."
Flint's smile tightened. "Indeed. Swiftness is praiseworthy. Yet," he leaned closer, "even swiftness requires due diligence, Commander. Large sums, complex contracts… checking takes time. My steward explained the formalities."
His eyes, inches from Eirik's, held a warning. Stand down.
"Respectfully, Lord Flint, your steward explained stalling tactics. Lady Isolde of House Fenrir witnessed the aftermath firsthand. She could check everything, here, and now."
Flint kept the smile, though it looked like it hurt. "Lady Fenrir’s presence is… noted. But witness or not, standard accounting procedures—"
"Standard procedures," Eirik interrupted, still smiling, "can be sped up when proof is overwhelming and presented at point of completion. As it is now. Delaying payment," his gaze hardened, "could be… misunderstood, Lord Flint. Given the circumstances under which this contract was offered."
He let the hint hang – offered to a bastard band you hoped would fail or die as dispensable tools for your petty little schemes.
"Are you threatening me, boy? In my own courtyard?" Flint's smile vanished.
Eirik's smile remained. "Threatening? Never, Lord Flint. Stating potential outcomes." He leaned even closer. "Refuse payment now? After this demonstration? I walk to Earl Borin back at Stormkeep. With Lady Fenrir. And we retell everything. The troll den you knew was a fortress. The contract you offered knowing its impossibility. Your attempts to block the Ironvein to force a marriage were denied."
Eirik tilted his head. "How do you think he'd view your… resource management, Lord Flint? Especially when the man who killed the trolls shaman and saved that resource stands before him, unpaid?"
Flint's face drained of color. If Eirik escalated this with proof, not just with the troll heads but with whatever account the sleazy weasel Stonehand and his spoiled daughter put together, he’d be put in a tough spot. Borin's displeasure could mean much worse troubles for him — reduced territory, increased tithes, and he’d be made to pay the bastard anyway.
Eirik pressed.
"Or… you pay the two thousand and forty talons owed. Today. Publicly. Honorably. The Talons leave with coin in our pouches and a tale of Flint's justice. Your miners see their lord reward those who remove threats. Stonehand reopens the mine, your royalties resume, and the Skarls' throats get the steel they deserve."
He leaned back, his smile returning. "A simple choice, wouldn't you say?"
The silence between them was heavy. Flint straightened his shoulders, summoning lordly dignity.
"Commander Stormcrow. Your… zeal for precision is noted." He turned to Steward Barlow. "Barlow. The treasury. Fetch the sum. Two thousand and forty silver talons." He ground out the number. "Immediately. Counted and brought here."
Barlow looked confused. "My… my Lord? Here? Now?"
"NOW!" Flint roared, startling everyone. He reined himself in. "Count it before witnesses. Every talon. Pay the Talon Warband what they are owed. For services rendered. Promptly."
A wave of murmurs swept the crowd as Eirik gave Flint a nod.
"Lord Flint honors his word. The Talons are grateful."
As Barlow ran away to fetch the fortune in silver, Flint stepped closer to Eirik again.
"You have your coin, Stormcrow. Take it. Take your band of outcasts. And get out of my Hold." His hate was thickening. "You may have won, boy. But remember this. You tread on dangerous ground. You've made an enemy today. A powerful one. The North has a way of swallowing up men who overreach. Your luck won't hold forever."
Eirik met the gaze with calm.
"Remember this too, Lord Flint. You tried to bury me with trolls. You failed. You tried to bury me with contracts. You failed. What makes you think anything in the North you can throw at me will succeed?"
He stepped back, turning to face his men just as Barlow and two clerks returned, carrying wooden chests. The sound of silver talons, hundreds and hundreds of them, echoed in the air.
Eirik Stormcrow watched as the chests were opened.
[+2,040 Silver Talons]
[5,910 / 5,000 Silver Talons]
[Tutorial Quest #3 (Stewardship): Build A Warchest - Completed!]
[Tutorial Quest #7 - Final Tutorial Quest - Unlocked!]
It really took a while. This sum, with a band of warriors that bleed money from him every second, is achieved.
But there's one last thing before he could tend to the spoils. He turned sharply.
"Talons! Mount up! Column formation! We leave. Now."
Leif snapped his head up. "Now? Commander, some wounded can barely stand! Helga's arm needs stitching! We just got paid! They offered sleeping rooms, food…"
"You heard me! MOUNT UP! NOW! Move your asses! Bjorn, Helga – grit your teeth, we'll tend you on the trail! Isolde, get Fisk mounted! Yorick, secure the packs! MOVE!"
The transformation was remarkable. Grumbles died. Tiredness was shoved aside by discipline. Within minutes, the column formed up near the main gates.
Eirik raised a hand.
"Talon Warband! Forward! Double time! Keep formation!"
Lord Arcturus Flint watched the column hobble towards the open gates and afforded himself a smirk. Too scared of my wrath to even claim the shelter I offered? Good. Run, you bastard. Run like the mongrel cur you are.
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Lord Arcturus Flint retreated to his study's warmth and slumped into his chair. The bottle arrived swiftly. Flint poured a measure, not bothering with a sip. The liquor burned down his throat. He poured another. Then another.
Hours crawled by.
Flint nursed his fury and his bottle while the door burst open. Barlow stood there, eyes wide and panicked.
"My Lord! Lord Flint!"
Flint blinked, the haze disappearing. "What? Spit it out! Can't you see I'm… occupied?"
"The… the Ironvein Throat, my Lord! Scouts… our patrol sent to check access… they've returned!"
"And?" Flint snapped, dread coiling in his gut. "Spit. It. OUT!"
"It's… it's blocked, my Lord! Blocked! Collapsed! The main cave entrance… the one Stormcrow cleared? It's buried! Tons of rock!" Barlow's voice rose to near shriek. "Like the whole mountain face slumped down! It'll take months to clear! Maybe through the winter!"
Collapsed? Months? Through the winter? Lord Flint's knuckles whitened around the stem of his expensive crystal glass. The image of Eirik Stormcrow flashed in his mind.
The bastard hadn't just outmaneuvered him. He'd played him for the ultimate fool.
An impulse ripped from his chest and outside his throat.
"THAT FUCKING BASTAAAARRRRD!" He surged to his feet. The crystal glass flew from his hand, arcing through the air to smash against the stone hearth with spectacular crash. It exploded.
"WHERE IS HE?!" Flint bellowed, spit flying. "DON'T JUST STAND THERE GAPING, YOU OAF! WHERE DID HE GO? SEND THE GUARDS! EVERY MAN! MOUNT THE CAVALRY! BRING HIM BACK! I'LL FLAY HIM ALIVE! I'LL FEED HIM HIS OWN SILVER TALONS!"
Barlow flinched back, eyes wide with terror.
"M-My Lord! They're… they're gone! Hours ago! We saw them leave! They're miles away by now! In the wilds! Tracking them would take days! And the Houseguard… the garrison… we'd be defenseless! The Skarl raiders have been probing the eastern passes! If we strip the Hold…"
The wave of rage crested… and broke.
Lord Arcturus Flint stared at glittering crystal shards scattered across his hearth rug. It left only hollow despair.
"Fuck."
He didn't roar again. He simply sank back onto the stone floor amidst the ruin of his bottle.
2025-08-04 10:09:01 +0000 UTC
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Eirik entered the cave.
He blinked, forcing his eyes to adjust. Light seeped from deeper within, lighting walls shining with hoarfrost. Troll-stink hung beneath the air. He glanced upward. The symbols near the cave mouth beat. Triggered? Or sleeping? Without any mana, he couldn't tell without Identify. He couldn't afford to find out the hard way.
Move.
His survival, the Talons' survival, depended on him reaching that crystal source deep within this maze, and he had to do it before the shaman realized where he'd gone or before the trolls beat his men outside.
He moved deeper into the tunnel. The light grew stronger, showing splitting passages ahead. A maze. He chose the left path leading towards the source of the light. He moved quickly but quietly, listening for any sound beyond his breathing.
Ten yards in, the passage widened.
An archway of ice-glazed rock framed the opening ahead. Hanging across it, woven from glowing ice, was a net. It shone with energy. A ward. Eirik stopped. Trap. Alarm. Both? He couldn't risk touching it.
He scanned the walls. Ice, no handholds. The net was woven too tightly to slip through. He couldn't climb over without touching it. He looked down. The floor beneath the net shone differently –black ice. Pressure plate? He picked up a chunk of rock nearbym and tossed it towards the floor beneath the net.
Clack. The rock hit the ice.
Nothing happened for a split second. Then, with a HISSSSS, spikes of ice exploded upwards from the surface, slamming into the net above! The ice net lit up blue, taking in the impact and crackling. The spikes pulled back, leaving only the buzzing net and the black ice floor.
Damn it.
Direct attack or passage was suicide without magic. He needed another way. His eyes raked the walls near the archway again. The net… it's fixed to the rock on either side. Could he chip the ice holding it? He drew his dagger, testing the ice near one anchor point. It was fused to the stone. Chipping it would take forever, and every strike might be the trigger.
He had Frostfire flasks tucked into his belt pouch. He considered one. Blow the net apart? But the flare of fire and the explosion would tell his location to the shaman. It would come. He'd be caught inside its lair, drained, facing a Peak Snow threat with nothing but steel.
A roar echoed down the tunnel, shaking the stone beneath his feet. Damn. It was followed by the dragging tread of something large. A guard left behind? Panic clawed at his throat.
He saw a shadow move against the wall of the lit passage ahead. Big. He pressed himself into a crack in the wall of the main tunnel, Skyfrost Cloak pulled tight, wishing for the non-existent mana to activate its camouflage. He held his breath.
A figure moved slowly into view at the junction. Smaller than the warriors, barely ten feet tall, but thick-limbed. A worker troll. It sniffed the air. It held a chunk of frozen bone like a club. Its eyes swept the tunnels… and locked onto Eirik's hiding spot.
Fuck.
The troll growled, raising its bone club. It took a step towards Eirik's crack.
Eirik's mind raced. Fight? In this narrow space, one hit from that bone club would crush him. Run Back? Another dead end. His eyes darted past the troll towards the warded archway.
Need breeds madness…
As the worker troll jumped, bone club screaming down, Eirik dove forward, towards the troll and the archway beyond it. He hit the floor hard, sliding beneath the troll's swing. The club smashed into the crack he'd just left, breaking ice.
Eirik rushed to his feet past the troll, now standing between it and the buzzing ice net.
The troll roared, spinning on the slick floor. It saw Eirik standing near the ward and charged again, angry, focused on crushing the intruder.
Now or never. Eirik stood his ground for a part of a second, forcing the troll to do its charge. Then, at the last instant, he threw himself sideways, towards the wall, away from the net's path.
The worker troll couldn't correct. It crashed into the beating ice net.
CRACKLE-ZZZZT!
A flash of energy burst out as the troll hit the ward. The ice net's the threads tightened around the troll. A choking sound coming from its throat as the energy tore through. Smoke rose from its hide, the stench of burnt flesh filling the tunnel. It slammed backward onto the black ice floor.
HISSSSS! The frost spikes burst out again, stabbing the shaking troll from below. The creature gave one final shudder and went still. However, the beating light became much dimmer. The brute force too much weakened it!
Eirik didn't hesitate. He went around the edge of the black ice floor, avoiding the spikes still pulling back, and came near the net. Where the troll had hit, several threads were broken or hanging loose. He could see through the gap.
Taking a breath, he ]ducked and pushed his body through the opening the troll'd created, pulling back as his cloak touched against the buzzing ice threads. A jolt of shock made his shoulder numb, but nothing worse. He was through.
The passage opened into a vast cavern.
Eirik stopped, amazed despite the danger.
The cavern was beautiful. Stalactites and stalagmites of glowing ice met in twisting columns. Frost patterns curled across every surface, cut deep into the ice and stone, beating with light. The source of it all ruled the chamber's center.
A crystal tower, roughly the height of a man, pushed upwards from the floor. . Power flowed within its core – lines of light moved through it. Cold came out from it in waves, frosting Eirik's eyelashes and cutting deep even through the Skyfrost Cloak. The Crystal Source.
But it wasn't not protected.
Between Eirik and the crystal, cut into the floor in detailed, glowing lines of energy, lay another ward. This one was huge, covering a circular area thirty feet across. Spirals fromed a fancy, circles inside circles pattern centered on the crystal itself. It beat with a rhythm.
Eirik came near, stopping at the ward's shining edge. He scanned the glowing lines. How do I break it? He had no mana to probe it. He needed something he could lose.
He picked up an icicle from the cavern wall. He tossed it towards the center of the ward pattern.
The moment the icicle crossed the edge of the glowing lines, the entire pattern lit up. A beam of frost energy screamed from the nearest rune group, striking the icicle mid-air. It turned to gas into a puff of frozen mist. The beam pulled back as quickly as it had appeared.
Frost Giants' balls… That energy beam would turn him into an ice sculpture. Direct approach can't be done.
He circled the ward, looking for weaknesses, changes in the pattern, anything. The how hard it is was amazing. He saw symbols that might show anchors, boosters, power sources. Yorick might figure this out… but Yorick isn't here. He was alone. With no magic. Against a can't be done puzzle.
He tried another angle. He threw a rock at a different rune group near the edge. CRACK! Another frost beam lanced out, turning the rock to gas. He tried tossing ice near the crystal base. Same result. He tried moving faster, going around the edge of the pattern – the ward lit up, energy gathering, forcing him back. Every attempt met with the same deadly response. No blind spots. Just too much, automatic breaking. It's a fort.
Minutes passed, each one a forever. Panic began to edge in. They're dying outside. The shaman will realize… He had to risk the Frostfire. Blow a hole. Hope the shaman didn't arrive. Hope the blast didn't bury him or destroy the crystal.
Then, the sound he'd feared echoed through the cavern entrance tunnel. Not a worker troll's shuffle, but a shriek of rage that shook the ice beneath his feet. A shriek that carried fury.
It's coming.
Eirik spun, drawing the Fenrir blade. His back was to the crystal ward. The shaman filled the cavern entrance.
The creature seemed taller inside its holy place. Its hide beat with red light, mixing with the chamber's blue glow. Its black eyes, burning with hatred, locked onto Eirik. It raised its staff, the crystals at its tip blazing.
It's going to destroy me from range.
The shaman's staff lit up. A bolt of frost energy, far larger and faster than the ward's beams, screamed towards Eirik's chest.
Eirik moved. He didn't try to move away sideways. He threw himself backwards into a dive, aiming his body towards the edge of the glowing ward pattern behind him. He hit the floor hard, sliding, twisting his torso as he did so.
WHOOOOOSH-CRACK!
The shaman's bolt missed his head by inches. It struck the floor where he'd stood… just outside the ward's edge. Ice exploded, showering Eirik's form with pieces.
The shaman shrieked again, angry at the miss. It changed its grip, crystals lighting up anew. Eirik rushed to his knees, staying close to the ward's shining edge. He needed it as a shield.
Another bolt screamed out. Eirik twisted to his left, pushing off the ground. WHOOOOOSH-CRACK! The bolt cut a trench in the ice floor, passing through the space his torso had been in a moment before. He felt the wind of its going by, the cold that promised death. He landed hard, rolling, his shoulder slamming against a stalagmite.
Too close! That was too close!
The shaman moved forward a step, hunting him. Its confidence was clear. It had him trapped. It raised its staff for a third shot, taking its time, aiming.
Now! Eirik thought. He timed it. As the shaman released the bolt, Eirik threw himself sideways along the edge of the ward, towards the point where the bolt was aimed.
WHOOOOOSH-CRACK!
The bolt passed through the space Eirik had just left… and this time, its path carried it across the glowing edge line of the ward.
ZAAAAPPP!
The reaction was instant and terrible. The ward lit up bright. Not just one, but three ice-blue beams, thicker than Eirik's body and crackling with power, burst out from different rune groups. They came together not on Eirik, but on the going in frost bolt.
CRRRRAAAAAAACK-KOOOM!
The crash was very loud. Energy exploded in an explosion of blue and red light. Pieces of ice flew outwards. The cavern shook. Stalactites fell from the ceiling, smashing on the floor. The patterns on the walls blinked. The entire ward lit up and beat with shaky energy.
It worked! Eirik felt happy, shielding his face from the flying pieces. It targeted its own attack! The ward is weakened! Where the shaman's bolt had crossed, the lines were burned black, cracked and sparking.
The shaman stumbled back from the kickback wave. It held tight its staff. Its eyes, wide with shock, stared at the ward, then back at Eirik, now rising to his feet near the broken section. Hatred burned hotter than ever.
Eirik saw it. It won't risk firing into the ward again. It wants me dead, but not at the cost of its crystal. He had a window. He faked towards the cracked section of the ward, raising his sword as if testing it.
The shaman reacted. Giving up ranged attacks, it roared and charged, crossing the distance in big steps, its staff raised like a club, aimed to smash Eirik against the cavern wall. It wouldn't risk its magic near the broken ward; it would crush him by force.
Eirik met the charge. He stood his ground until the last moment, the shaman's shadow covering him. The staff screamed down.
Now.
He dropped low, not away from the blow, but under it. He rolled forward, between the shaman's legs. The staff slammed into the cavern wall behind where he'd stood with a CRUNCH, sending ice pieces flying.
Eirik came up behind the shaman, spun, and slashed at the back of its knee with the Fenrir blade. CLANG! The sword slid off thick ice-armor hardened by the shaman's magic. It felt like hitting stone.
The shaman spun with speed for its size, swinging its staff back of hand in an arc. Eirik brought his sword up in a block.
CLANG-SHATTER!
The force of the blow knocked the Fenrir blade from Eirik's hands. It flew through the air, making noise against a stalagmite yards away. Eirik was thrown backwards by the impact, slamming hard into the cavern wall. Stars exploded behind his eyes. Pain lanced through his ribs. The air was driven from his lungs. He slid down the wall, dazed.
The shaman stood big over him, blocking out the blue light. Winning shone in its black eyes. It raised its staff again, the crystals lighting up, ready to deliver the final blow.
Eirik hand shot to his storage ring. His fingers closed around cold, smooth ice – a Frostfire flask.He ripped it out. His other hand felt around at his belt, finding the flint striker he kept for bad times. Flick. Flick. Flick! Sparks flew in the dim light.
The shaman saw the object in his hand. Knowing blinked – it had seen Frostfire outside. It hesitated for the smallest part of a second, its mind thinking about the new threat.
"STOP!" Eirik roared. "THIS ONE HITS THE WARD! YOUR CRYSTAL!!"
Understanding dawned in the shaman's eyes, replaced by fury. It saw the flask threatening the wholeness of its ward and its precious crystal, and hesitated.
That hesitation was all Eirik needed.
He jumped at an angle across the cavern floor, away from the ward's edge, heading towards the spot where his Fenrir blade had been knocked.
The shaman, realizing the trick, whipped its head back towards Eirik.
But Eirik was already diving. His fingers closed around the handle of the Fenrir blade. He rolled behind a thick stone spike just as a bolt of ice screamed past, blasting a hole where he'd been kneeling.
Eirik ignored the pain from ice pieces hiting his back, and burst from behind the stone spike, sword raised, but he didn't charge the shaman. Instead, he ran alongside the ward's edge.
The shaman tracked him. It raised its staff. It would risk the crystal's closeness now; nothing mattered but his death.
Eirik turned sharply, running directly towards the shaman, sword held low. It was a deadly charge. The shaman planted its feet, staff coming up, crystals blazing as it gathered energy for a close blast.
Ten feet away. Five.
Eirik threw himself sideways into a slide, sliding across the icy floor directly beneath the shaman's guard. He wasn't aiming for the creature itself. He was aiming for its shadow – the spot directly behind its feet.
He slid past the shaman's legs, its staff swept overhead, missing him by inches. He crashed to a stop half-sprawled on the ice, barely outside the ward's edge, right behind the shaman. He was facing its back.
He got up quickly and slammed his entire body weight against it.
The shaman, thrown forward by its missed strike and the force from behind, stumbled forward. One step, two step... it struggled for balance as clawed foot came down…
Right onto the glowing blue line marking the edge of the ward pattern.
ZAAAAPPP!
The reaction was terrible. The entire ward, already weakened, exploded. Dozens of ice-blue spears of frost energy, thicker than Eirik's body and crackling with cold, screamed out from multiple rune clusters. They came together on the source of entering life force that had broken the ward's boundary: the Ice Troll Shaman.
It had time for one gurgling scream of terror and pain.
The beams struck it at the same time – chest, back, legs. Its flesh froze quickly and exploded into a cloud of steaming gore. The staff snapped like a twig. Chunks of frozen guts rained down onto the cavern floor, steaming where they landed on the ward's glowing lines. A wave of force and cold blasted outwards, slamming Eirik back against the cavern wall hard enough to make stars explode behind his eyes again.
Only its head remained.
Eirik forced himself to his feet, leaning against the cavern wall. Stumbling, ignoring the pain from his body, Eirik went to where the head and remained. "Goodbye, witch," he said, touching the head, and willed it inside his storage ring.
He then moved backwards, willed a Frostfire flask – his last one – from his ring. He lit the wick with the flint striker, aimed it at the most damaged, sparking section of the ward pattern. The flask curved through the air and landed in the center of the cracked runes near where the shaman had been turned to mist.
CRACK-FOOM!
The blast wasn't as big as the shaman's destruction, but it was final. With a final sputter, the remaining light in the ward went out.
Finally. Eirik reached the base of the crystal pillar. Suspended within its heart, was the source he had felt since entering the mountains.
[ITEM: Crystal of the Frozen Heart]
It was larger than he'd imagined. Each pulse sent ripples of cold through the pillar and out into the cavern. This was the heart of the shaman's power. The key to his ascension.
He placed both palms against the surface. Ignoring the bite of the cold, he poured his will inward.
Raw mana, sharp and focused like a chisel, slammed into the pillar where it touched the Heart within.
CRACK!
A fracture split the ice from the core outwards, radiating like lightning through the pillar. Eirik poured more will into the fracture point.
CRACK! CRACK-CRACK-CRACK!
Webs of fractures exploded across the pillar's surface.
CRUNCH!
The pillar imploded. Shards of ice exploded outwards in a hail. Eirik threw up an arm, wincing as ice fragments peppered his cloak and skin. The Crystal of the Frozen Heart floated freed from its prison, radiating frost energy.
He snatched it from the air.
[ITEM: Crystal of the Frozen Heart ACQUIRED]
GAAAAH!
Frost flooded his meridians. His body seized. His vision whited out, replaced by swirling fractals of blue and black ice. He felt his blood freeze.
But he had no choice.
[STATUS]
[NAME: EIRIK STORMCROW]
[REALM: SNOW (RANK 5 of 5) - PEAK ACHIEVED]
[ASCENSION REQUIREMENT TO FROST REALM]
[1. Mana Fragments: 10,000] - [AVAILABLE]
[2. Crystal of the Frozen Heart: 1] - [AVAILABLE]
[INITIATE ASCENSION? YES/NO]
[YES.]
[ASCENSION TO FROST REALM INITIATED!]
[CONSUMING 10,000 MANA FRAGMENTS…]
[CONSUMING CRYSTAL OF THE FROZEN HEART…]
The crystal dissolved. He felt the reservoir of Mana Fragments drain away in a torrent.
Then the transformation hit.
It wasn't like advancing through Snow Ranks. This felt like his existence was being dismantled atom by atom and reassembled in a glacier's heart.
Cold poured into his bones, marrow, blood. His thoughts seemed to slow, crystallizing in frost. His heartbeat hammered once, twice, then slowed... slowed... threatening to stop.
Hold! Hold on! This is the threshold!
His core—the pulsing center of cold mana in his chest—imploded. It collapsed into a point of cold. Then it detonated outwards.
[MANA POOL EXPANDING…]
Where Snow mana was sharp shards and wind, Frost mana felt like mercury—dense, heavy, powerful, and cold. It flooded his reforged meridians like a tsunami.
[MANA CAP INCREASED: 25 → 50]
[FOURTH MANA SLOT UNLOCKED!]
[FIFTH MANA SLOT UNLOCKED!]
Fifty units! Five slots! The potential staggered him.
[REWARD: +10 FREE STAT POINTS]
[UNIQUE ABILITY UNLOCKED: FROST SHAPER]
[AUTOMATICALLY EQUIPPED TO ABILITY SLOT THREE]
Frost Shaper? Before he could focus, a wave crashed over him—not pain, but pressure. Pressure, as if a glacier's weight settled onto his spirit.
And then... stillness.
Stillness. The cold receded, replaced by calm. The energy settled into a thrum. He felt anchored. Solid. Like the mountain's bedrock.
His senses sharpened. He could hear frost crackling on stone, smell troll scents beyond the barrier, feel vibrations through his boots.
He opened his eyes.
[ASCENSION SUCCESSFUL! REALM: FROST RANK 1]
[MANA POOL: 50/50]
[NAME: EIRIK STORMCROW]
[REALM: FROST (RANK 1 of 5)]
[STATS]
[STRENGTH: 18+]
[ENDURANCE: 10+]
[AGILITY: 15+]
[INTELLECT: 17+]
[CHARM: 6+]
[MANA: 50/50]
[FREE STAT POINTS: 20]
[ABILITIES]
[SLOT ONE: IDENTIFY (EQUIPPED)]
[SLOT TWO: ICE CONJURATION: (EQUIPPED)]
[SLOT THREE: FROST SHAPER: (EQUIPPED)]
[SLOT FOUR: EMPTY]
[SLOT FIVE: EMPTY]
Twenty stat points. And a new Ability: Frost Shaper.
He focused on it.
[ABILITY: FROST SHAPER]
[Manipulate existing ice, snow, and liquids with control using Frost Mana. Shape, move, harden, or shatter frozen matter within range. Scale and complexity dictate cost. Cannot create ice from nothing.]
Manipulate existing ice. The implications hit. The cave walls. The barrier itself. The ice armor on trolls. All within his command.
But first, the stat points.
Intelligence governed mana control, regeneration, and Frost Shaper precision. Agility meant speed—speed to react, dodge, kill before being killed. Strength translated to force, critical against trolls.
Intellect first. Enhanced control was paramount.
[INTELLECT: 17 → 27 (10 Points Used)]
[MANA REGENERATION RATE: 1 point per 30 minutes]
[AGILITY: 15 → 20 (5 Points Used)]
[STRENGTH: 18 → 23 (5 Points Used)]
He glanced at the empty space where the pillar had been. Frost energy pulsed from the point of extraction, lashing the cavern walls like a serpent. But the cavern was collapsing, destabilized by the absence of its core.
He needed out. Now.
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Leif's world had shrunk to the shaking ice beneath his boots.
'They're… they're not stopping!' Goran reloaded his crossbow with shaking hands. A bolt from below thunked into the ice wall inches from his head, showering him with crystals. He flinched. 'Look at them! The one with the bolt in its eye… it just keeps coming!'
Leif risked a glance over the wall. Goran was right. One troll warrior, blood streaming from a dozen bolt wounds, its left eye socket ruined with a shaft sticking out, ignored the pain. It bellowed, red froth coating its tusks, and brought its club down again on the broken ice support.
'The Commander…' Yorick's voice was a whisper behind the shield wall. 'He went in. He has to be…'
'Shut it, bookworm!' Olaf snapped. 'He'll do his part! We do OURS! Bjorn! Loose!'
A shower of bolts and rocks rained down. One found a gap in the ice-armor of a troll's shoulder, causing a roar more of annoyance than pain. It did little than it should.
'Left side's giving way!' Harkin screamed from below, where men braced against the rock face supporting the shield wall ledge. 'We need men off! NOW!'
'No one moves!' Leif commanded. 'Hold position! We break, we're all dead!' He knew the moment they left the high ground and cover, the trolls would overrun them in the open ground. But the ice couldn't hold.
Commander, Leif thought, sweat freezing on his brow despite the cold. Where are you? We're breaking…
CRRRRAAAAACK-KABOOM!
The sound was like the mountain screaming. The broken left front support of the ice platform, hammered, gave way. A section, a quarter of the structure, broke off with a groan of tearing ice and broken magic. Four Talons – crossbowmen who moments before had been firing – vanished with screams, falling onto the slope below.
'NO!' Leif's scream tore from his throat. He saw their shocked eyes for a split second before the falling ice swallowed them. Horror washed over the remaining defenders. The platform tilted, throwing men off their feet. The wall on the collapsed section crumbled. The killing ground below was exposed.
'Up! Get up!' Olaf bellowed, hauling a dazed Talon to his feet. 'Shields! SPEARS IF YOU HAVE 'EM! HERE THEY COME!'
Below, the trolls, sensing victory, let out a roar. The one-eyed horror leading the charge plowed through, raised its club raised high for the slaughter.
'This is it,' Leif thought. 'We held as long as we could. Commander… I hope it was enough.' He braced himself, ready to meet the club swinging towards his section of the crumbling wall.
Thrum.
The sound wasn't loud, but it echoed inside Leif's bones.
The trolls froze.
The red aura flickered around them like a dying candle, then went out. The rage in their eyes was gone, then a wave of pain rippled through their bodies as if they'd been gut-punched.
The one-eyed troll leader staggered, the club dropping from its fingers and slammed into the snow. The Frostfire-burned trolls collapsed onto the ice. Every troll warrior shook and screamed.
'The aura… it's gone. The shaman...' Understanding slammed into Leif. 'HE DID IT! THE COMMANDER KILLED THE SHAMAN!'
A cheer erupted from the Talons. They saw the terror in the trolls' eyes, saw them staggering, clutching wounds, looking for escape.
"PUSH! FORWARD! DON'T LET THEM REGROUP!"
Talons found their targets with vigor. Bolts slammed into exposed backs as trolls tried to flee. Frostfire bombs arced down, exploding amidst the panicking giants, cutting off retreats.
Without their shaman's will or magic, they were just big, scared animals.
Eirik stood over the cave entrance, breathing deeply.
Most trolls were down. A few that had emerged last were milling in panic, trying to retreat towards the large cave.
They're routed. But they mustn't regroup underground.
He saw a frozen pillar near the edge of the ritual ground – ten feet tall, thick as a tree trunk, coated in ice.
Frost Shaper. That's mine.
Eirik raised a hand, palm facing the pillar. He poured Frost Mana into it, willing it to shatter. He focused on its center of gravity, its weakest points identified by his enhanced Frost senses.
[MANA EXPENDED: 8]
[MANA: 42/50]
[ABILITY: FROST SHAPER ACTIVATED]
A CRACK. Fractures webbed across the pillar's surface. Then, with a sound like breaking glass amplified a thousand times, the structure exploded.
WHOOSH-THUNK-THUNK-CRUNCH!
The shrapnel storm ripped through the panicked trolls. Shards punched through thick hide, impaled limbs, shredded faces. Dark blood bloomed on white fur. A troll took a shard through its chest and collapsed without a sound. Another stumbled screaming, clutching its face. A worker troll was torn apart.
The destruction was horrific.
The surviving trolls who hadn't been shredded turned tail and fled, abandoning their wounded, scrambling for the dark cave, howling in terror. They left behind a slaughterhouse littered with broken bodies and whimpering wounded.
CRUMPH-BOOOOOM!
The roar ripped through the battlefield, shaking snow from peaks.
The large cave entrance vomited a plume of dust. The ground under Eirik's boots vibrated. He staggered, then burst into full-speed running towards safety. Across the ritual ground, Talons stumbled, grabbing onto rocks or each other.
"What in Frost's name—?" Leif gasped, whipping his head towards the cave.
CRACK-CRACK-CRACK!
Splintering sounds echoed from within the collapsing cave, followed by the shriek of tearing rock. Then, a final RUUUMMMMBLLLLEEE that faded into stillness.
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The deep, rhythmic THRUM pulsed through the frigid air, resonating in Eirik's bones.
It wasn't a sound made by troll lungs or clubs. It came from beneath their feet. From the mountain itself. Or from the source the shaman guarded.
Then, they emerged.
Not four. Not six.
A solid wall of white fur, tusks, and rock-hard muscle poured from the large cave mouth. Eight massive warrior trolls, easily twelve feet tall, their faces twisted with primal fury, clubs already swinging. They filled the entrance, a living avalanche.
Behind them, Eirik glimpsed smaller, hunched figures – more worker trolls, clutching jagged rocks, crude spears made from ice-bound branches.
An entire warband. Held in reserve. The shaman called its full strength.
Frost take Flint and his lies! Seventy-three men against this?
"TALONS! TO ME!" Eirik roared, his voice cutting through the trolls' bellows and the ominous thrumming. He sprinted away from the ritual site, towards the steepest section of the slope overlooking the defile. "HIGH GROUND! NOW!"
The command was unexpected, but discipline held. Leif yelled orders, rallying Thirteen, Twenty-Nine, Bjorn, and the others. They broke from their positions, scrambling desperately uphill, arrows and rocks whizzing past as the Trap Group laid down harassing fire.
The trolls saw the retreat and redoubled their charge. One warrior, club raised, closed the distance terrifyingly fast on the lagging Talon – Thirteen. He stumbled.
No! Not another!
Eirik skidded to a halt, whirled, and focused. He visualized not a weapon, but a barrier. Simple, crude. A knee-high wall of jagged ice spikes erupting right in the charging troll's path. A speed bump. A distraction.
[MANA EXPENDED: 2]
[MANA: 15/25]
[ITEM: Conjured Ice Spike Trap (F-Grade) - Low Durability]
Frost mist bloomed and solidified. Rows of sharp, translucent ice spikes, each a foot tall, sprang from the frozen earth directly before Thirteen. The troll, committed to its charge, slammed a massive foot down.
CRUNCH!
Ice shattered, but the troll lurched violently, momentum broken. It roared in pain and surprise, pulling its bleeding foot free.
Thirteen scrambled past, wide-eyed, joining the others racing up towards Eirik's position. Gained seconds.
Eirik reached the spot he'd scoped out during initial observation. A natural ledge, about thirty feet above the ritual site and troll caves, backed by a near-vertical rock face. Below was a steep, snow-covered slope.
This is it.
"Shield wall here! Crouch! Hold them!" Eirik commanded the first Talons scrambling up. "Leif! Get them braced! Yorick! Stay behind them! Watch the shaman!"
Leif, understanding blossoming on his grim face, slammed his shield into the snow beside Eirik. "SHIELD WALL! FORM UP! PROTECT THE COMMANDER!"
Men shoved into position, overlapping shields creating a fragile crescent on the ledge. They were panting, terrified, but their training held. Bjorn and Helga joined the flanks, swords ready. Thirteen, Twenty-Nine, and the crossbowmen scrambled behind the shield wall, frantically reloading.
The trolls reached the base of the slope below Eirik's position. They looked up, eyes burning with hatred. The slope was steep, maybe forty-five degrees, covered in deep, churned snow. Difficult footing, even for them. The Ice-Spike Troll was limping but still furious. The others bunched together, letting out guttural challenges.
Eight massive targets, clustered below.
"FROSTFIRE! ON THE CLUSTER! VOLLEY!" Eirik yelled towards the Trap Group.
Clay spheres trailing smoke rained down.
WHOOSH... CRACK-FOOM! CRACK-FOOM!
Blue-white explosions blossomed amidst the trolls. One roared as flames engulfed its legs. Another staggered back, fur smoking. Ice-armor hissed and cracked under the intense cold-fire.
But the trolls were enraged. They started lumbering up the slope, ploughing through snow, claws digging for purchase. Slow, but terrifyingly unstoppable. The shield wall wouldn't hold against a concerted charge for long.
Time to build.
Eirik spun away from the ledge. He needed an instant fortress. Something elevated, defensible, giving his men a killing ground. He closed his eyes for a split second, pushing fatigue aside.
He raised his hands, palms facing the empty space just beyond the shield wall.
"Commander, what are you—?" Leif started, his eyes widening as frost began to swirl around Eirik's hands.
Foundation first. Eirik poured his will into the vision. He needed a solid base, wider than the ledge, anchored deep. A flat platform, maybe ten feet across, extending out over the slope. Simple slab. Thick. Stable. Anchor it to the bedrock.
[MANA EXPENDED: 3]
[MANA: 12/25]
[ITEM: Conjured Ice Platform - Foundation (F-Grade)]
The air crackled. Thick mist of condensed cold erupted in the designated space. It swirled violently, thickening into blue-grey ice. With a low groan, a massive slab of solid ice, ten feet wide, fifteen feet long, and three feet thick, materialized. It slammed down onto the slope just beyond the ledge, half-burying itself into the frozen earth. Its surface was rough but perfectly level. A stable foundation.
"By the Frost..." Yorick breathed, scrambling back as cold radiated off the new structure.
The climbing trolls paused, momentarily confused by the sudden appearance of the huge ice block.
Step one done. Now height and access.
Eirik ignored the gasps. He visualized the next component – a solid staircase rising from behind his shield wall, leading up onto the platform. Narrow steps, steep. Only wide enough for one man at a time.
[MANA EXPENDED: 2]
[MANA: 10/25]
[ITEM: Conjured Ice Staircase (F-Grade)]
Frost bloomed again. Ice surged upwards from the ledge, forming a crude but functional set of six steep steps that climbed directly onto the new platform.
"Leif! Get half the archers UP! NOW! Cover the slope!"
Leif snapped into action. "ARCHERS! UP THE STAIRS! NOW! RAIN HELL ON THOSE UGLIES!"
The designated crossbowmen scrambled up the glistening ice steps onto the platform. They stumbled slightly on the unfamiliar, cold surface but quickly gained footing. The view was suddenly commanding. They looked down on the trolls struggling up the slope.
"LOOSE!" Leif bellowed.
THWUNK! THWUNK! THWUNK! THWUNK!
Bolts hissed down. The elevated angle made a difference. One punched through a troll's thigh. Another struck a shoulder joint. The trolls roared, shielding their heads, their climb slowing further.
Good. But they'll get closer.
Eirik stepped onto the platform himself. He needed a parapet. Not a full wall yet, but a chest-high barrier along the front edge, facing the slope. Solid ice, thick enough to stop a troll-thrown rock or provide cover.
He focused his will on the leading edge of the platform.
[MANA EXPENDED: 3]
[MANA: 7/25]
[ITEM: Conjured Ice Parapet Wall (F-Grade)]
Ice erupted upwards from the platform's edge. It thickened and grew rapidly, forming a solid, four-foot-high wall of dense blue ice along the entire front of the platform. It wasn't pretty, but it was thick and functional. Thirteen immediately ducked behind it after firing, reloading in relative safety. Cover achieved.
The trolls were halfway up the slope now, slowed by snow, Frostfire burns, and arrows, but still coming. Their roars were deafening, filled with berserk fury. One particularly large warrior, leading the pack, slammed its club into the slope, sending showers of snow and rock towards the platform.
Need to break their momentum.
Time for obstacles. Eirik looked at the slope below the platform. Make it treacherous. Make them stumble. He visualized simple, thick ice pillars, jagged and uneven, erupting randomly across the slope below. Not to kill, but to trip, block, and channel them into kill zones.
[MANA EXPENDED: 2]
[MANA: 5/25]
[ITEM: Conjured Ice Obstacles (F-Grade) - Multiple Pillars]
Frost surged across the slope. Thick pillars of ice, ranging from three to six feet high, burst from the ground like jagged teeth. They appeared randomly, creating an obstacle course between the climbing trolls and the platform. One troll stumbled hard, crashing into a pillar, showering itself with ice fragments. Another had to awkwardly detour. The charge fragmented, losing cohesion.
Perfect. Slows them down. Forces them into smaller groups.
Eirik glanced back. The Trap Group was still peppering the trolls, but running low on bolts. He saw Olaf's group, now free as the four canyon trolls were finally being overwhelmed, starting to move down towards the main fight. Reinforcements coming. Need to hold.
He was dangerously low on mana. Only five left. Regeneration was agonizingly slow – he felt the faint trickle, but it wouldn't be enough for more grand constructions soon.
"Commander!" Yorick yelled from behind the shield wall. "The shaman! It's... it's doing something! To the mountain!"
Eirik spun. The shaman had stopped shrieking. It stood rigid, staff plunged deep into the ritual ground near its cave entrance. The crystal tip glowed with intense, pulsing blue-white light. The rhythmic THRUM intensified, vibrating the air, making Eirik's teeth ache.
Fracture lines, glowing with the same cold light, began to spiderweb across the rock face above Eirik's ice fortress and shield wall.
Oh, Frost damn it. It wasn't attacking them directly. It was trying to bring the mountain down on them!
"ROCKFALL! ABOVE!" Eirik roared the warning. Panic rippled through the Talons on the platform and behind the shields. They looked up at the cracking cliff face.
Need cover! Massive cover! Now!
He couldn't stop the mountain falling, but he could try to deflect it. He visualized the strongest thing he could muster with his remaining mana: a massive, thick, sloping ice awning extending outwards and upwards from the platform and the ledge shield wall, angled to shed falling rock and debris.
Everything I have left.
[MANA EXPENDED: 3]
[MANA: 2/25]
[ITEM: Conjured Ice Overhang - Heavy Deflector (F-Grade)]
With a draining surge of his will, Eirik poured his mana out. Frost erupted above them like a frozen wave. Thick, opaque blue ice, layered and heavy, surged upwards and outwards from the top of the parapet wall and the rock face behind the shield wall.
It formed a massive, crude, but incredibly thick canopy, angled sharply at about sixty degrees, covering the entire ice platform and most of the ledge shield wall position below it. It groaned under its own sudden weight but held, anchored into the rock and the platform structure.
CRRRRAAAAACKKK-BOOOOOM!
The shaman shrieked in triumph. A huge section of the cliff face, weakened by the pulsing energy, sheared off directly above them. Tons of rock, ice, and debris thundered down.
KRAKOOM!
The avalanche slammed onto the heavy ice awning. The impact was deafening, shaking the entire structure. Cracks spiderwebbed violently across the thick ice canopy, and chunks sheared off, cascading harmlessly down the outside slope. But the core held. The angled design worked.
The deadly cascade roared over the ice shield, showering past the platform and ledge, crashing harmlessly onto the slope below, burying some of Eirik's ice obstacles and forcing the climbing trolls to scramble back momentarily.
Silence fell, thick with dust and ringing ears. Snow and rock fragments skittered off the ice canopy. The structure groaned but stood. The Talons on the platform and the ledge stared around, stunned, unharmed. A ragged cheer started, then swelled into a roar.
"THE COMMANDER'S ICE! IT HELD!"
Frost take me... Eirik sagged against the parapet, utterly drained. Mana exhaustion washed over him, cold and hollow. Every muscle trembled. Two Mana. But they were alive. Sheltered.
He looked down. The trolls below were enraged but confused, milling about in the rubble at the base of the slope, temporarily thwarted by the rockfall and the now-imposing ice fortress looming above them. The shaman stared, its earlier triumph replaced by pure, incandescent fury. Its staff trembled. The thrumming energy subsided.
"Commander!" Olaf bellowed, leading a group of panting, bloodied Talons – the survivors of the canyon fight – scrambling up the slope towards the ledge shield wall. "We're here! Where do you want us?"
Eirik forced himself upright, pushing through the exhaustion.
"Olaf! Get your men behind the shields! Leif, get more archers onto the platform! Every crossbow we have!" His voice was raw but commanding. "Fisk! Where's Fisk? FROSTFIRE! Bring up every damn bomb!"
The Talons surged into action, energized by the miraculous defense. Olaf's men bolstered the shield wall. More crossbowmen scrambled up the ice stairs onto the platform, joining Thirteen and Twenty-Nine.
The view from the platform was now a commander's dream. Below, at the foot of the fortified slope, milled the bulk of the troll force – ten enraged, ice-armored warriors, plus the injured limper, plus a few worker-types huddled fearfully near the cave entrances. All trapped in a deadly funnel formed by the natural slope, Eirik's remaining ice obstacles, and the rubble from the avalanche.
The trolls looked up at the bristling ice fortress. They saw the shields. They saw the crossbows leveled over the ice parapet. They saw the cold determination on human faces. And they saw Eirik, standing tall on his frozen battlements, the Skyfrost Cloak swirling around him like a banner of defiance.
"NOW, TALONS!" Eirik's voice rang out, cold and sharp as his conjured ice. "LET THEM KNOW THE PRICE OF THIS MOUNTAIN! VOLLEY FIRE! FROSTFIRE ON MY MARK!"
"LOOSE!" Leif and Olaf roared simultaneously.
THWUNK-THWUNK-THWUNK! A storm of bolts hissed down from the platform and the ledge. They rained onto the clustered trolls below. Shafts punched into thick hides, glanced off ice-armor, found vulnerable joints. Roars of pain and fury erupted.
"FROSTFIRE! VOLLEY!" Eirik commanded.
From the ledge, Olaf's strongest throwers hurled clay spheres. From the platform, Talons leaned over, dropping bombs directly down. Arcs of smoke trailed.
WHOOSH... CRACK-FOOM! WHOOSH... CRACK-FOOM!
Blue-white fireballs erupted amidst the trolls. Frostfire clung, spread, encased legs, burned fur, hissed violently against magical ice. The trolls were engulfed in a storm of cold flame and whining death. Chaos erupted. They staggered, flailed, tried to bat out the impossible flames, crashed into each other and the jagged ice pillars.
It was a slaughterhouse.
They're beasts at heart, Eirik assessed. Big, strong, but easily spooked without their leader's guidance.
He snapped his gaze to the ritual ground near the shaman's cave. Its beady eyes, like chips of black ice, were fixed not on its dying kin, but directly on him. Pure, distilled hatred radiated from that stare.
Then, it moved.
With a guttural shriek that scraped the very air, the shaman slammed its crystal-topped staff onto the frozen earth. The embedded crystals pulsed once, violently, not blue-white, but deep, unsettling crimson. The pulse traveled down the staff and exploded outward in a visible wave of sickly red energy that washed over the struggling troll warriors below.
The effect was instantaneous and horrifying.
Every troll touched by the crimson wave froze mid-roar, mid-stagger. Their massive bodies shuddered violently. Then, their eyes snapped wide, veins bulging beneath ice-rimed skin, glowing with the same unnatural red.
GRAAAAAGH!!!
A chorus of utterly bestial, mindless roars tore through the valley, shaking snow from distant peaks.
Pain, fear, uncertainty – all were scorched away, replaced by pure, unthinking rage.
Berserk spell! Eirik's gut clenched. Frost's frozen balls, it just burned away their self-preservation!
The transformation was terrifying. A bolt slammed into a troll's forearm, shattering the bone with an audible crack. The troll didn't flinch. It didn't even seem to register the wound. It just roared louder, red eyes fixed on the ice platform above.
Another troll, Frostfire still clinging to its legs, ignored the sizzling flesh and the ice encasing its feet. It simply ripped its legs free with a sickening tear of frozen hide and burning muscle, spraying dark gore onto the snow, and lumbered forward, snarling.
They're ignoring pain, ignoring wounds that should cripple.
Panic flickered across the faces of the Talons on the platform and ledge. Seeing massive creatures shrug off bolts that should have dropped them, advance through Frostfire that should have melted them… it was unnerving.
"HOLD YOUR GROUND!" Olaf bellowed, his own ferocity a bulwark against the tide of fear. "THEY CAN STILL DIE! AIM FOR THE EYES! THE NECK! PUT 'EM DOWN!"
Another volley of bolts hissed down. One struck a berserk troll's eye socket, vanishing deep. The creature stumbled, blinded, but kept moving, swinging its club in wide, deadly arcs.
Another bolt lodged in a troll's thick neck, dark blood gushing. It clutched the shaft, roaring, but didn't slow its charge towards the base of the slope.
The berserk trolls didn't mill anymore. They didn't hesitate. They surged forward as one terrifying mass, driven by the shaman's crimson command. They smashed through the remaining ice pillars like kindling. They plowed through the deep snow with terrifying, single-minded speed.
Their target was clear: the ice platform.
The first troll reached the base of the slope directly beneath the platform's overhang. It ignored the arrows thudding into its back. It didn't look up at the archers. Instead, it reared back and slammed its massive, ice-rimed club into the thick, blue-grey ice supporting the platform's left edge.
WHAM!
The impact resonated through the entire structure like a gong. The ice platform shuddered violently. Thirteen, leaning over the parapet to fire, stumbled and nearly fell. Deep cracks spiderwebbed outwards from the point of impact across the lower portion of the ice foundation.
"IT'S HITTING THE FOUNDATION!" Leif screamed, horror dawning.
WHAM!
Another troll joined the first, swinging its own club with berserk fury against the same spot. Chunks of ice the size of a man's head exploded outward. The cracks deepened, spreading further. The platform visibly sagged an inch.
"FIRE! FIRE AT THEM BELOW!" Olaf roared, pointing frantically. Crossbowmen on the ledge tried to angle down, but it was awkward, dangerous. Bolts glanced off broad backs or shoulders. Frostfire bombs were too risky; dropping them straight down risked blasting the platform supports or showering the Talons in shrapnel and cold fire.
WHAM! WHAM!
Two more berserk trolls focused their fury on the ice base. More cracks appeared. Fine ice dust rained down on the heads of the Talons below the canopy.
Fear was turning palpable. The shield wall on the ledge tightened instinctively. Men glanced upwards, their expressions tight with dawning terror. Their fortress was literally being hammered apart beneath them.
"Olaf! Leif!" Eirik's voice cut through the hammering and the roars. "Listen carefully!"
He pointed a gauntleted finger directly at the berserk trolls hammering the platform. "They're mindless! They only see the platform! Make them see you!"
Olaf's eyes widened, then narrowed with savage understanding. Leif's face paled, but he nodded sharply.
"DISTRACTION!" Eirik emphasized the word. "Loud! Aggressive! Make them angrier! Make them focus every shred of rage on you! Right here! Right NOW!"
Olaf didn't need telling twice. A feral grin split his scarred face. He snatched up his axe and slammed it against his shield. "HEY! UGLY BASTARDS! UP HERE! OLAF'S WAITING!" He bellowed, leaning precariously over the ledge shield wall. "COME ON! TRY SMASHING SOMETHING THAT FIGHTS BACK!"
Leif caught the plan, pushing down his fear. He joined Olaf, banging his sword on his shield. "TALONS! SHOUT! ROAR! MAKE THEM HEAR YOU! THEY WANT A TARGET? GIVE THEM ONE!" His voice, usually calm, rose to a raw shout.
The men, spurred by their leaders, took up the cry. They slammed weapons on shields, roared challenges, screamed insults. The noise level skyrocketed, a focused wave of defiance aimed directly at the berserk trolls below.
WHAM! WHAM!
The trolls paused their hammering. Their red, vacant eyes lifted from the cracking ice. They saw the men now. Saw them shouting, banging, mocking them.
A deeper, even more furious roar erupted from the trolls.
They stopped hitting the platform base and started scrambling up the steep slope towards the ledge shield wall and the yelling Talons, claws digging deep.
The platform groaned, damaged but no longer under immediate, concentrated assault.
Eirik didn't hesitate. He backed away from the parapet, dropping below its line of sight. He turned to Yorick, who was crouched nearby.
"Yorick. Point. The symbols. The entrance. Exactly."
Yorick pointed a shaking finger towards the shaman's cave entrance. "Th-There, Commander! The cave with the swirling symbols… just left of the large one… behind the shaman!"
Eirik followed his gaze. The entrance was about thirty yards away across the open, blood-soaked ritual ground. The shaman stood directly in front of it, radiating crimson energy, its back to the cave, its focus entirely on the berserk trolls charging the ledge and the platform above. The two warrior trolls originally guarding the entrance were gone – likely drawn into the berserk charge.
This is the moment. The only moment.
He pulled the Skyfrost Cloak tight. He focused his will, feeding precious mana into the enchantment.
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The familiar shimmer flowed over him. His form blurred, edges softening into translucent blue-grey mist.
To the cave.
He dropped silently over the back edge of the ice platform, landing in a crouch on the steep slope behind it. The shouting and roaring of the Talons and the trolls was deafening, covering any sound he might make.
He moved sideways along the slope, and reached the edge of the ritual area. The shaman was only fifteen yards away, standing rigidly over its staff plunged into the earth. The crimson energy pulsed visibly from it. The cave mouth yawned darkly behind it, etched with the crude, glowing symbols Yorick had sketched. He could feel the intense cold radiating from it, deeper and more potent than the surrounding air.
Got to get past it without being sensed.
Eirik dropped to his belly, pressing himself flat against the freezing, blood-soaked ground. He crawled, an invisible serpent, moving inches at a time.
It's channeling massive power. Its senses are probably extended outwards, along the spell-lines to its warriors.
He slithered around the perimeter of the bone pile, the frozen, shattered horned beast head inches from his face. The stench was overwhelming. He edged closer to the shaman, giving it a wide berth, aiming for the dark opening just to its left.
Five yards. Three yards.
He paused as the shaman shifted its weight slightly, a low growl rumbling in its chest. Had it sensed something? A ripple in the energy? A misplaced sound? Eirik froze, every muscle locked, his breath held. He willed himself to be part of the ground.
The shaman's head tilted slightly, as if listening. Its free hand flexed, claws scraping against the icy staff shaft. For three agonizing heartbeats, Eirik waited, poised to spring, to strike, though he knew a direct attack now would be suicide against a creature channeling such power.
Then, another berserk roar echoed from the slope, followed by Olaf's defiant bellow. "IS THAT ALL YOU GOT, SNOTLOCKS? MY GRANDMOTHER HITS HARDER!"
The shaman snarled, and its focus snapped back outwards, pouring more energy into its warriors.
Eirik didn't waste a second. He flowed forward on his belly, past the shaman's flank, and reached the cave mouth.
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He slipped into the darkness of the cave.
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Dawn broke over the Serpent's Spine.
The Talons moved following Olaf's lead towards the bait point near the canyon entrance. Eirik, Leif, and Yorick shadowed the Trap Group heading for high ground flanking the canyon's bottleneck.
Eirik replayed the variables: Ten warrior trolls, plus the shaman, plus workers. The canyon is narrow – fifty yards long, ten wide at the choke. Our noise draws them. Trap seals them in. Bjorn rains death from above.
The air grew thick with troll-stink. They were close. Eirik signaled silently. The Trap Group fanned out, scrambling up the steep slopes to positions overlooking the canyon's throat.
Leif took point, directing men with sharp gestures towards the heavy logs and piles of rocks poised near trigger points. Yorick crouched behind a boulder, peering into the canyon's gloom.
Eirik found a vantage point beside Leif, overlooking both the canyon entrance and the distant troll defile.
They're still inside.
Minutes crawled by. Eirik's breath misted steadily. Then, a distant sound shattered the quiet.
CLANG! CLANG! CLANG!
The rhythmic hammering of steel on steel echoed across the mountainside. Olaf's signal. A heartbeat later, a thunderous roar erupted from the ridgeline.
"FROST TAKE YOU, UGLIES! COME GET SOME!"
"RAAAGH! FILTHY SNOTLOCKS!"
Men screamed, shouted, banged swords on shields. The cacophony rolled down the slopes, amplified by rock walls, bouncing into the troll defile.
Movement.
Dark shapes emerged from the large cave mouth. Big. Hulking. Tusked. They paused, massive heads turning towards the noise, sniffing the air. Guttural roars answered Olaf's challenge.
One. Two. Three warrior trolls lumbered out, clubs hefted. Then a fourth. They started moving with ground-shaking strides towards the canyon entrance. Their path would take them directly past the hidden Trap Group's position.
Four drawn. Good start. Where are the others? Where is the shaman?
"Positions!" Leif hissed. The Trap Group readied themselves.
The four trolls were closing distance. Their roars mingled with the Talons' continuing racket. Their focus was locked on Olaf's ridgeline, broad backs exposed as they passed the canyon chokepoint.
The trolls passed the canyon entrance. Ten yards in. Twenty.
"NOW, LEIF!" Eirik commanded.
Leif's arm chopped down. "TRIGGER ONE! GO!"
Three Talons heaved. A massive lever groaned. With a splintering CRACK!, a huge log studded with sharpened rock tumbled down directly into the canyon entrance. It slammed into the narrow opening, creating a massive obstruction.
The lead trolls barely registered it, focused on the noise ahead. They were thirty yards into the canyon now.
"TRIGGER TWO! THREE! NOW!" Leif yelled.
More levers pulled. Another log crashed down behind the first, thickening the barrier. Higher up, ropes were yanked. A cascade of boulders thundered down onto the canyon floor behind the advancing trolls.
CRUMP! BOOM!
The canyon shook. The rockfall landed across the narrow path, not hitting the trolls but completely blocking their retreat. They were trapped between the barrier behind and Olaf's warband ahead.
"YES!" Olaf roared from his ridge. "STUCK LIKE PIGS! LIGHT 'EM UP!"
From higher up the canyon walls, crossbow bolts hissed down. THWUNK! THWUNK! They mostly bounced off thick hides or stuck harmlessly in layered fur. One troll roared as a bolt glanced off its shoulder.
Then clay spheres trailing smoke arcs sailed through the air.
WHOOSH… CRACK-FOOM!
Frostfire bloomed. Violent gouts of blue-white flame erupted around the trapped trolls, clinging to fur and hide. One troll shrieked, clawing at its arm where the Frostfire burned. Another stumbled as its foot became encased in spreading ice.
CHAOS.
The canyon echoed with roars of four enraged, injured trolls. They slammed clubs against rock walls, trying to smash towards Olaf's noise, blinded by Frostfire smoke and fury.
It's working! On four of them… Eirik's gaze snapped back to the defile.
His blood ran cold.
Only four warriors had been drawn out. Five figures stood clustered near the large cave entrance. Two more warriors had emerged, clubs ready. One worker-type troll stood behind them. And between them stood the shaman.
It hadn't budged.
The shaman pointed its staff towards the canyon where explosions echoed. It shook the staff, crystals humming with power. Frost gathered in the air around it. Then it gestured sharply back into its smaller cave entrance. A low, guttural command resonated. The two fresh warriors immediately turned and lumbered towards the shaman's cave, taking guard positions. The worker scurried back inside.
It's fortifying the heart. It's not panicking – it sees the canyon fight for what it is. A distraction.
Yorick scrambled up beside Eirik, panting. "Commander! The shaman! It didn't move!"
"I see it, Yorick," Eirik said. His mind discarded the infiltration plan instantly. Three of us against two warriors and a shaman inside a cramped cave? Suicide. He needed leverage. He needed to hurt the tribe deeply enough to force the shaman's hand.
Leif clambered up. "The trap's sprung, but only on four. The shaman's too smart." He followed Eirik's gaze. "And now it's dug in."
Below, chaos in the canyon continued. One trapped troll, half-encased in ice, had collapsed. Another staggered blindly. Bjorn's group can probably finish them eventually. But it will take time. And those warriors guarding the shaman won't budge.
"New plan," Eirik announced. "The shaman's protecting its cave. Fine. We kill its warriors. Right in front of it."
Leif's eyes widened. "Attack the two guarding the cave? But Commander—"
"Not the two at the cave. Not yet." Eirik pointed down the slope towards the ritual bone pile. "Look."
A worker troll had emerged from the large cave. It clutched a frozen beast leg, lumbering towards the bone pile. It was isolated. Vulnerable.
"One worker," Yorick said. "But…"
"Not just one," Eirik countered. "The trap drew four warriors. Two are guarding the shaman. That means there should still be more warriors inside the large cave." He turned to Leif. "They won't stay inside forever. Not with their kin screaming. The noise will draw them out. Especially if we make a new noise. Right here."
Understanding dawned on Leif's face. "You want to hit them as they come out?"
"Not an ambush. A slaughter." Eirik said. "We kill that worker. Fast. Where the tribe can see. Then, when warriors rush out to avenge it… we kill them too. Right on the doorstep. We make the shaman watch its warriors die."
He looked from Leif to Yorick. "Leif, recall half the Trap Group. Get them down to those rocks. Silent approach. Wait for my signal. Yorick, you stay hidden here. Watch the shaman's cave. If it moves, warn us immediately."
"Commander," Leif breathed, "that's asking for a death wish—"
"Then we kill the first one or two incredibly fast," Eirik stated, drawing the Fenrir longsword. "That will shake the shaman's confidence. Now move, Lieutenant."
Leif swallowed hard, then nodded, scrambling back down. "Thirteen! Forty-two! Twenty-One! With me! Crossbows ready!"
Eirik didn't wait. He focused his will, feeding mana into the Skyfrost Cloak's clasp.
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He slipped downhill, using rocks and dips for cover. He reached the lower boulders just ahead of Leif and five Talons. The worker troll had clearly noticed the roarings outside but appeared to be determined to stay here. His focus stayed on the distant battlefield.
Eirik crouched behind a boulder, ten yards from the worker troll. Leif and the others pressed in beside him. Five crossbows were levelled.
"Target the neck joint," Eirik whispered. "Below the jawline. Fire on my mark. One volley. Then Leif and I charge. If more come out… shoot anything that moves."
The worker troll took a step towards the large cave mouth.
Now.
"FIRE!" Eirik hissed.
THWUNK-THWUNK-THWUNK-THWUNK-THWUNK!
Five heavy crossbow bolts snapped through the air. The worker troll jerked violently. Three bolts hit its thick torso, sinking deep. One grazed its ear. The fifth bolt struck true.
It punched through the softer hide below the jaw, plunging deep into the troll's neck. The creature froze, a gurgling roar erupting from its ruined throat. Dark blood bubbled from its mouth and neck wound. It dropped to its knees, clawing at the bolt shaft.
"CHARGE!" Eirik roared, dropping his camouflage. He erupted from behind the rocks, the Fenrir longsword gleaming. Leif was behind him, sword raised.
The troll was still alive, gasping, trying to rise. Eirik didn't slow.
He leapt the last few yards, bringing the masterwork longsword down in a vicious, two-handed chop aimed at the bolt protruding from the troll's neck.
CHUNK!
The impact jarred up Eirik's arms. The heavy blade sheared through troll hide, muscle, and bone. The troll gurgled. Its massive head, severed cleanly below the jawline, tumbled into the bloody snow. The headless body slumped forward, dark blood fountaining from the ragged stump.
Leif skidded to a halt beside Eirik, staring at the decapitated body spurting blood onto the frozen ritual ground. The Talons behind gasped. Beheading a troll brutally in ten seconds… that was different.
ROOOOOOAAAAARRR!!!
The sound ripped through the mountains. It came from the large cave mouth.
The shaman reacted instantly. Its staff snapped towards the killing ground, crystals flaring bright blue-white. Frost crackled around it. It let out a piercing shriek.
Not four. Not five. Six massive warrior trolls burst out simultaneously, driven by the shaman's command and the scent of their kin's blood. Their eyes were fixed on the small group standing over the headless corpse only twenty yards from their cave.
The ground trembled as six tons of enraged troll flesh charged. Clubs the size of tree trunks were raised. Tusks gleamed. The primal fury of the charge was terrifying.
The Talons behind Eirik and Leif froze, staring death in the face.
"BRACE!" Leif screamed. The crossbowmen scrambled to reload.
Eirik didn't freeze. They're committed. He met Leif's panicked gaze.
"NOW, Leif!" Eirik roared over the charging trolls. "THAT'S how you draw them out! Crossbows! Aim for the eyes! FIRE!"
The five Talons reacted, reflexes honed by fear and drilled commands. Five heavy bolts snapped forward with sharp THWUNK! sounds.
One missed, skittering off a boulder. Two slammed harmlessly into thick shoulder muscle. Another gouged a deep furrow across a charging troll's chest, drawing a roar but no stumble.
But the fifth bolt, fired by Thirteen, flew true. It struck the leading troll square in its beady, bloodshot left eye. The beast stumbled mid-stride, a shattering bellow tearing from its throat. It crashed to one knee, clawing at the shaft in its skull.
"Leif! Fall back! Behind the rocks! Archers, reload! Second volley on my mark!" Eirik didn't wait for acknowledgment, already pouring mana into his cloak.
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The Skyfrost Cloak blended Eirik with the frost-limned rocks. He sidestepped, putting the dead worker troll's bulk between himself and the charging giants. They ignored the corpse, focused on the living targets scrambling back – Leif and the five Talons.
The leading troll raised its club, aiming for Leif desperately scrambling over low rocks. The distance closed horrifyingly fast. Too fast.
Eirik acted instantly. He visualized a solid, thick wedge of ice appearing directly beneath the charging troll's massive foot.
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The frost bloomed and solidified. A three-foot-long, slick, sloping block materialized right where the troll's foot would land.
The troll stepped down. Its clawed foot hit the angled ice.
Skreeeeech!
Its weight and momentum betrayed it. The leg shot out sideways. Balance vanished. With a startled bellow, the twelve-foot monster crashed sideways.
Eirik dropped camouflage as the Talons scrambled over the barrier. "Volley! NOW!"
"Loose!" Leif gasped, hauling himself over rocks. Four crossbows fired again. The shock of seeing their kin crash unnerved the trolls slightly. Two bolts slammed into a lagging troll's chest. Dark blood bloomed, but it roared and kept coming. Another bolt chipped a tusk. The fourth missed.
Not enough. They're still charging. Four trolls were almost upon the sheltering boulders. The fifth disentangled itself from its fall. The blinded one howled. The shaman stood near its cave, staff raised.
Then the shaman acted.
It slammed its crystal-topped staff onto the ritual ground. A visible pulse of deep blue energy rippled outward across the snow. The crystals flared blindingly. The air temperature plummeted. Eirik felt it sear his lungs even through the cloak's regulation.
The power ripple shot toward the charging trolls, washing over them as they neared the rocks.
Frost armor! It just hardened them! Damn that witch-doctor! Frustration stabbed through Eirik. Hitting them just got much harder.
"FROSTFIRE!" Eirik bellowed toward the Trap Group scrambling down the slope. "ON THE LEADERS! NOW!"
The two Talons carrying Fisk's bombs hurled ice spheres trailing smoke arcs over the rocks toward the front-most trolls.
WHOOSH… CRACK-FOOM! CRACK-FOOM!
Twin gouts of searing blue-white flame erupted. One engulfed a troll's head and shoulders just reaching the barrier. The Frostfire hissed violently against fresh ice-armor. The troll shrieked, clawing at its face as fire burned through ice, searing flesh beneath. It staggered back, blinded and burning.
The second bomb exploded at another troll's feet. Frostfire encased its legs in rapidly spreading ice. The troll bellowed, stumbling, trying to wrench free, its charge halted.
Bought time! The third and fourth trolls hesitated, intimidated by flames consuming their kin. But their eyes, burning with fury under ice-rime, locked onto the humans. They raised clubs.
"SHIELDS UP! BRACE!" Leif screamed.
Eirik didn't hesitate. He couldn't conjure a wall fast enough. He needed to redirect.
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He poured his will into the ground directly before the charging trolls. A sheet of sheer, frictionless ice, fifteen feet wide, erupted across their path.
The trolls hit the ice.
Skreeeeeeech!
Their massive legs shot out sideways and forward. Too close, moving too fast. One troll pinwheeled its arms wildly, club flailing uselessly as its legs splayed. It slammed sideways into the rock barrier with bone-jarring force.
The other managed half a step before its feet shot out. It landed hard on its back, the impact driving air from its lungs in a pained WHUMPH!, club clattering away.
One troll burned. One encased. Two sprawled and vulnerable. The fifth was still untangling, the sixth blinded and thrashing. But the shaman screeched again, furious. It pointed its staff skyward. Frost gathered rapidly above the rock barrier, swirling into a miniature storm cloud.
Ice shards. Hail. Eirik knew instantly. It's going to shred my men.
"LEIF! OUT! GET OUT FROM BEHIND THE ROCKS! SCATTER!" Eirik roared, already moving, pouring mana again.
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He visualized it materializing mid-air, spinning fast, flying straight at the shaman's face. The gleaming dagger appeared three feet away and shot forward.
The shaman saw it coming. With surprising speed, it jerked its head aside. The ice dagger grazed its thick cheek, drawing a thin line of dark blood. The spellcasting faltered. The gathering ice cloud dissipated slightly.
Bought a heartbeat.
Leif and the Talons scrambled away from the rocks, desperately seeking distance from any predictable cluster. But they were exposed in open ground between the ritual site and canyon slope.
Number forty-two stumbled as he scrambled backward. He looked up just in time to see the ice-armored troll Eirik had tripped regaining its feet only yards away. It wasn't disoriented. It was enraged, beady eyes fixed solely on Forty-two. The troll roared, spittle flying, and swung its club in a brutal arc.
There was no time to scream. The club, a massive trunk studded with rock shards and coated in rime ice, connected with Forty-two's torso.
CRUNCH.
The sound was sickeningly final. Forty-two's body folded around the impact like a broken doll. Bones shattered, armor crumpled like tin. He was lifted clean off his feet, flung twenty feet through the air like a discarded rag, and landed in a broken heap near the ritual bone pile, motionless. The snow around him instantly stained crimson.
"NO!" Leif's scream was raw with horror. The other Talons gaped, frozen for a deadly second by their comrade's sudden death.
Damn it! Eirik's fury surged. Forty-two was his responsibility. "DON'T STAND! KEEP MOVING! CROSSBOWS, RELOAD! TARGET THE DOWNED ONES! KILL THEM WHILE THEY'RE VULNERABLE!"
His voice shattered their paralysis. Thirteen and Goran scrambled further back, fumbling bolts into crannequins with trembling hands. Leif joined them. The other two Talons drew swords, positioning themselves as a desperate shield.
The shaman recovered from the dagger distraction and slammed its staff again. This time, it aimed at the burning troll. A pulse of pure cold washed over the creature. The troll, still howling but no longer burning, thrashed wildly.
The trapped troll was back on its feet. The one slammed into rocks shook its massive head, snarling. The two who had slipped struggled to rise on treacherous ice. The blinded one still clawed at its eye. The encased one roared, trying to smash the ice around its legs.
Need to end this phase.
He saw movement higher up – Leif's recalled Trap Group, finally reaching position on the slope overlooking the ritual site and troll cave. Ten men, crossbows aimed down.
"TRAP GROUP!" Eirik yelled, pointing toward the shaman and two warrior trolls guarding its cave. "FIRE AT WILL! DISTRACT THE SHAMAN! PIN DOWN THOSE GUARDS!"
A ragged volley rained down from the slope. Most bolts clattered harmlessly off rocks near the shaman or thudded into thick guard hides. But it forced the shaman to flinch, raising its staff defensively. The two guards roared, shifting stance, focus momentarily pulled upward. Good enough.
The troll Eirik had tripped finally found purchase and charged Leif's group again. Bjorn and Helga stepped forward bravely, swords raised, knowing it was hopeless against the ice-armored behemoth but determined to buy time for the others to reload.
No. Not more losses.
Eirik felt the cloak pull taut. He cut diagonally to intercept the charging troll before it reached Bjorn and Helga.
The neck. Eirik dove into a roll beneath the troll's first clumsy swipe. He came up inside its guard, directly beside its massive thigh. He channeled everything into a single, upward thrust. Straight up, aiming for softer hide just below the jawline, where neck met body.
The masterwork Ice-Steel blade punched through the troll's magically hardened hide. It met resistance, rime ice cracking. But Eirik drove the point deep.
CHUK!
Dark, steaming blood gushed over Eirik's hand and arm, hot even in freezing air. The troll's roar became a choking gurgle. It stumbled forward, collapsing onto its knees, then crashing face-first into snow, Eirik ripping his sword free in a shower of gore.
"ONE DOWN!" Eirik bellowed, spinning away from the collapsing giant, sword dripping black blood. His eyes scanned the battlefield.
Bjorn and Helga are safe. Thirteen and Twenty-Nine reloaded. Leif and the Trap Group pinning the shaman and guards. The burning troll is down, thrashing weakly. The encased one is still stuck. The blinded one is useless. The two who slipped are getting up…
But the shaman... Eirik's gaze snapped back. Its staff pointed frantically – at trapped trolls, at Eirik, at the bodies of its kin.
"LEIF!" he roared. "FORGET THE GUARDS! EVERYONE! CONCENTRATE FIRE ON THE SHAMAN! NOW! ALL BOLTS! ALL ROCKS! MAKE IT BLEED!"
The order cut through the din. A hail of projectiles streaked toward the shaman.
Bolts clattered off rock near its head. A bolt sent by Bjorn slammed into one guard's arm, making it bellow. Thirteen's bolt actually grazed the shaman's shoulder, drawing another thin line of dark blood. The shaman flinched violently, raising its staff defensively, crystals flaring erratically as it poured energy into a half-formed dome of frost around itself.
It's scared! Eirik exulted internally. The tribe's morale hinges on it. Break the witch, break the horde.
The shaman shrieked again, a sound of pure, impotent fury. It glared at Eirik across the carnage. Its beady eyes burned with hatred and something deeper…
THRUM. THRUM. THRUM.
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The Talon camp nestled in a deep crevasse half a mile from the troll defile, hidden from sight and partially sheltered from the biting wind.
Eirik's arrival cut through the low murmur.
Olaf emerged from beside a larger fire. "Commander. Orders?"
"We move. At dawn." Eirik stated flatly. He strode towards the central fire where Olaf, Leif, Yorick, Harkin, and Fisk clustered.
Leif's jaw clenched. "So… no reinforcement from Flint?"
"No." Eirik's single word silenced the immediate ripple of dismay. "We fight. On our own."
He gestured towards the piles of rope, iron spikes, and crossbows resting against the rocks. "Trolls are idiotic. We have more than enough."
A spark ignited in Olaf's eyes. "Aye! Bury the frost-bitten bastards!" His roar rallied the men nearby. Others picked it up, a ragged cheer echoing off the stone walls.
Eirik held up a hand for silence. The cheer died instantly. He met their eyes, his gaze sweeping across faces lit by firelight – hardened veterans like Bjorn and Lars, nervous recruits clutching crossbows, fierce Fenrir guards. He needed them sharp.
"Victory demands preparation," Eirik declared. "We've planned the trap. Now, we execute. Olaf. Report."
Olaf stepped forward, bluster replaced by focused efficiency. "Troll movements, Commander. Patrols are sloppy. Two warriors guard the main cave mouth at all times. Rotates every few hours. The big ones feast mid-morning, near that bone pile. Shaman only comes out for its weird chanting then too."
He spat. "Scrawnier ones – not the shaman, others – do grunt work. Hauling carcasses, stacking rocks. Like… servants. Seen ten distinct warriors now. Plus the shaman. Plus maybe five or six worker-types."
Ten warriors. Plus the shaman. Plus support. Dangerous, but not impossible if we split the horde. Eirik nodded. "Good. Any sign they suspect we're here?"
"Nah. They stink worse than a midden pit. Couldn't smell us over themselves. That shaman though… when it did its chant near the bone pile, it looked right up towards Bjorn's perch. Sniffed hard. Didn't raise no alarm, though."
The ritual sharpened its senses. Eirik filed that away. "Leif. Trap status."
Leif pointed towards a rough sketch in the frozen dirt. It showed the canyon approach, the defile, and the planned ambush site. "Bottleneck canyon northwest – confirmed. Steep sides, narrow entrance. Fifty yards long, ten yards wide at the choke point."
"Fisk and his detail have rigged three primary rockfall triggers. Logs positioned here, here, and here. They'll need muscle to lever them free. Spikes dug into the ice floor at the entrance – slow them down just enough."
"Frostfire?" Eirik asked.
Fisk stepped forward, nervously adjusting his spectacles. "Batch four is ready, Commander. Potency confirmed. Sixty in total." He held up a crude ice sphere, its wax seal gleaming faintly. "Needs a torch to light it first. And immediately thrown."
"Good," Eirik said, clapping the alchemist on the shoulder. "Distributed?"
"Yes, Commander. Half to the Harassment Group, half to the Bait Group."
Eirik turned to Harkin. "Supply run?"
The quartermaster checked a worn parchment. "Rope – ample. Spikes – three dozen. New crossbows – fifty-three, with two dozen bolts per man for the assigned crossbowmen. Extra bolts? Only another hundred total."
It was threadbare. Eirik felt the pressure. No room for error. No prolonged siege. Get in, draw them out, trap them, hit hard, then strike the cave.
"Understood. Coordinate with Leif to distribute the spikes and rope to the trap-setting teams. Yorick."
The scholar jumped. "Commander?"
"The symbols. Around the shaman's cave. Did you decipher anything?"
Yorick unrolled his wax tablet, filled with careful sketches. "Complex, Commander! Primitive ritual markings, yes, but consistent with documented Frost Troll shamanic practices. Concentric spirals – likely amplifiers for ambient cold energy. Jagged lines – possibly wards or warnings."
He tapped one specific symbol near the cave mouth in his sketch. "This one appeared repeatedly. It resembles archaic runes associated with 'Guardian' or 'Warder' energies in known frost elemental loci."
Guardian wards? Protecting the source? Or alerting the shaman? "Anything we can disrupt? Sabotage?"
Yorick deflated slightly. "Without understanding the exact energy flow… highly risky, Commander. Tampering could trigger a backlash. Or simply alert them."
Another unknown. Eirik absorbed the information. "Alright. Prioritize observation if we get close. Avoid touching anything that glows or hums. Harkin, sound off on assignments."
Harkin consulted his list. "Main Force – Bait Group: Forty men. Lead by Olaf. Objective: Make immense noise near canyon entrance. Draw troll horde into canyon. Primary weapons: Crossbows, shields, Frostfire bombs. Retreat path pre-marked once the trolls are committed."
"Rear Guard – Trap Group: Fifteen men. Lead by Leif. Objective: Trigger rockfalls and log barriers after the trolls enter canyon. Seal the bottleneck. Reinforce barrier if possible. Then join harassment."
"Cliff Harassment Group: Ten men. Lead by Bjorn. Objective: Positioned on canyon cliffs before bait is set. Rain arrows, rocks, Frostfire down onto trapped trolls. Maximize chaos and injury."
"Infiltration Team: Commander Eirik, Leif after trap trigger, Yorick. We enter the Shaman's cave while tribe is distracted."
"Reserve Guard: Five men plus Fisk and his pigeons. Lead by Lars. Secure camp, manage supplies, relay messages if possible."
Silence fell. Each man visualized his role. The sheer audacity of drawing a dozen giant, magic-backed trolls into a narrow canyon while a tiny team slipped into their sacred cave felt like madness.
Eirik broke it. "Questions?"
A young Talon, barely eighteen, raised a trembling hand. "Commander… the shaman? Inside? Just the three of you?"
Eirik met his eyes. "Three is quiet. Fast. Its focus will be on the noise, the threat to its tribe. We go in light. We move fast. We get out faster."
"But… what if it is there?" another voice asked, thick with dread.
"Then we fight," Eirik stated, the cold finality silencing further protest. He drew the Fenrir longsword. The clean, sharp shing resonated in the frozen air.
His confidence steadied nervous hands. Shoulders squared. Leif's face, etched with lingering doubts, hardened into resolve. Olaf cracked his knuckles, a fierce grin replacing his scowl.
"Alright, pups!" Olaf bellowed, turning to the Bait Group. "You heard the Commander! Tomorrow, we make the biggest racket these mountains have ever heard! I want you screeching like gutted pigs! Bang your shields till they dent!"
"I want those ice-lugged brutes so frost-bitten mad they charge straight into our pretty little trap! Understood?"
A ragged chorus of "Aye, Lieutenant!" rose, fueled by Olaf's ferocity.
The men went to their positions.
The Trap Group were pointing to the sketch, assigning positions for lever teams and spike layers. Yorick nervously reviewed his symbol sketches near Fisk, who was meticulously checking the seals on his Frostfire bombs. Bjorn gathered his Harassment Group, selecting the best archers and steadiest climbers for the treacherous cliff ascent.
They're still afraid. But so am I.
He found Harkin overseeing the distribution of the last hardtack rations. "Harkin. Ensure Lars' reserve group has clear orders. If we're not back by dusk tomorrow… they break camp. Ride hard for the rendezvous point three valleys west. Wait one day. If we don't come… they ride for Stormkeep. Report directly to Baron Cedric Stormcrow."
Harkin paled but nodded sharply. "Understood, Commander."
As dusk deepened into the long northern night, the camp settled into an uneasy rhythm.
Men sharpened blades, fletched extra arrows, checked and re-checked gear. Nervous chatter faded into low murmurs and the crackle of fires. Sentries were posted on the high rocks overlooking the approach to their crevasse and the distant, unseen Throat.
Eirik sat near his own small fire, apart from the others.
He watched them. Against Frost Trolls, resorting to melee was a death sentence. Those clubs would shatter bone and armor like kindling long before a blade bit deep. He needed a failsafe.
Ice Conjuration.
His most potent weapon, and his most costly. He couldn't afford majestic walls spanning the canyon mouth. But a knee-high barrier of solid ice angled across a narrow passage? A cluster of jagged spikes erupting beneath a charging troll’s foot? A sudden, thick wedge sealing a side tunnel in the cave? That was feasible.
Two mana here, three mana there. Small, vicious creations, perfectly timed, leveraging the terrain.
And he had something else.
His hand dropped to the heavy bundle wrapped in dark oilcloth beside his bedroll. With deliberate movements, he untied the cords. The rich, deep blue fabric seemed to drink the firelight, a stark contrast to the rough furs and leather surrounding him.
The Skyfrost Cloak.
He hadn't worn it yet. Not truly. It had arrived at Stormkeep the night of the troll pit, delivered with icy precision as he'd demanded. A symbol of his dominance over House Fenrir, yes. But symbols needed substance. Especially tonight.
Focusing his will, he pushed mana towards the familiar command.
[CASTING: IDENTIFY]
[MANA: 23/25]
Blue text bloomed over the shimmering fabric:
[ITEM: SKYFROST CLOAK]
[TYPE: MAGICAL GARMENT (ENCHANTED)]
[MATERIAL: MOONWEAVE SILK (PRIMARY), SILVER-WEAVE THREADS (ENCHANTMENT LATTICE), FROST WYRM SCALE REINFORCEMENT (COLLAR)] [ENCHANTMENTS:]
[THERMAL REGULATION (PASSIVE)]: Maintains wearer's core body temperature within optimal range in extreme cold environments. Highly resistant to ambient frost magic.
[ACTIVE CAMOUFLAGE (ACTIVE/SUSTAINED)]: Upon activation and sustained mana infusion, bends light and subtly disrupts perception around the wearer, creating a visual distortion effect akin to shifting ice mist. Effectiveness diminishes with movement and proximity. Mana Cost: 1 per minute.
[FROST WARD (PASSIVE)]: Provides moderate resistance against directed frost-based magical attacks and environmental hazards (e.g., blizzards, freezing fog).
[ENCHANTMENT TIER: FROST]
[ESTIMATED VALUE: 3,000 SILVER TALONS]
Thermal Regulation… perfect for these mountains. Frost Ward? Crucial against a shaman throwing ice. But Active Camouflage made his pulse quicken.
He unclasped his worn fur cloak, letting it fall. The air bit instantly, sharp against his exposed neck. Frost, it's cold.
He swung the Skyfrost Cloak around his shoulders, fastening the heavy silver clasp. The effect was instantaneous.
Warmth. It spread from the clasp across his chest and back, gentle and encompassing. The biting wind still tugged at the hem, but no longer sliced through to his bones. The cloak settled with surprising lightness, flowing smoothly around him. Like wearing sunlight in winter.
He took experimental steps. The cloak moved with him, whispering against his trousers, surprisingly silent. No rustle. Good for stealth. He raised his arms; full range of motion without hindrance. Practical.
Now, the key test. He directed a thread of mana towards the clasp. Activate Camouflage.
[MANA EXPENDED: 1]
[MANA: 22/25]
A subtle shimmer flowed outward from the clasp, washing over the silvery fabric. Not invisibility. He could still see his hands, his boots. But the edges blurred. Colors leached out slightly, replaced by shifting, translucent haze of pale blue and grey.
Looking down at himself, he seemed less distinct. Like a statue partially dusted with frost, fading into the shadows behind him.
He took another step, moving sideways along the massive root wall. His form rippled, momentarily blending with the rough bark and deep shadows before resolving again. Better when still. Less effective moving fast or close up. But at a distance? In low light? Near ice or snow?
The potential was staggering.
He released the mana flow. 1 per minute. Manageable, if used sparingly.
He ran a hand down the impossibly smooth fabric. Isolde gave me this. Her house's treasure. To save her son, her father. Does she regret it now?
The thought barely had time to settle before he sensed movement at the edge of the firelight.
Isolde Fenrir stood just beyond the circle of warmth, wrapped in a heavy traveling cloak of dark green wool. Her gaze was fixed on him, specifically on the Skyfrost Cloak draped over his shoulders and the Fenrir blade gleaming in his hand.
Eirik lowered the sword, turning to face her fully. He didn't sheath it.
Her family's power, literally wrapped around him and wielded by his hand.
"My Lady Fenrir," he greeted. "Couldn't sleep?"
She stepped closer, stopped a few feet away, her gaze tracing the intricate silver embroidery on the cloak's edge, then lingering on the familiar pommel of the sword.
Her eyes finally lifted to meet his. "You wear them well. The cloak. The sword. "
"It serves its purpose," Eirik replied carefully, sheathing the longsword with a soft shing. He gestured vaguely towards the cloak. "The enchantments are potent."
Isolde nodded curtly. "I know. House Fenrir guarded its secrets well. That cloak saved my grandfather's life during the Winter Wolf Uprising. Fell from a burning tower… walked away."
A faint tremor touched her lips. "Seeing it on another… especially…" She trailed off, unable to finish. Especially you. Especially after how you took it.
Eirik watched the play of emotions across her face – pride, loss, forced acceptance. He understood that knife-twist of seeing something precious worn by the one who took it. He'd felt it often enough himself, the outsider looking in.
"Complicated, isn't it?" he said softly. "Seeing me like this."
"Complicated doesn't begin to cover it, Commander Eirik Stormcrow," she murmured.
"When you first stood in my hall… demanding my loyalty on threat of my son's life and my father's freedom… I saw only a predator. Ambitious, ruthless, clad in Stormcrow shadows." Her voice was low, intense. "I didn't see… this."
"'This'?" Eirik prompted.
"This…" She gestured not just to the cloak, but to him, to the camp beyond. "Purpose. Discipline. A cold fire that burns brighter with every impossible challenge thrown at it. The way the men look to you… not just fear, Commander. Respect. Even that stubborn son of mine."
A ghost of a smile touched her lips, gone as quickly as it appeared. "It's… unsettling."
The raw honesty took him slightly aback. He hadn't expected introspection from Isolde Fenrir tonight.
"You weren't exactly radiating trust and cooperation when we first met either, Lady Fenrir," he countered. "I seem to recall venom, spitting fury, and a refusal to believe I could offer anything but ruin."
He tilted his head slightly. "We've both traveled an interesting road since then."
A startled, almost choked sound escaped Isolde. It took Eirik a second to realize it was the beginning of a laugh. She pressed her lips together, but the tension in her shoulders eased fractionally.
"Interesting?" she echoed, a genuine flicker of dark amusement in her eyes now. "Terrifying. Insane. Utterly bewildering." She shook her head. "But… yes. Interesting."
It was ridiculous. And strangely, against the backdrop of imminent, violent death.
He found himself smiling back. "Quite."
They held each other's gaze for a beat longer than necessary.
Eirik shifted his stance, deliberately turning his attention away from her, back towards the fire and the unseen Throat beyond the camp. "You should get what rest you can. Leif will need you steady tomorrow, regardless of the outcome."
It was a dismissal. Polite, but firm.
"Of course, Commander." Isolde hesitated for only a fraction of a second. "Frost guide your blade tomorrow."
"And yours, Lady Fenrir."
She turned and walked away, her figure swallowed swiftly by the darkness beyond the firelight. The only trace of her presence was the lingering scent of pine and the faint echo of that shared moment.
Dawn was coming.
2025-08-01 12:39:24 +0000 UTC
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In a cramped scroll shop in Flint's dingy lower town, Eirik Stormcrow stood before a cluttered wooden counter.
The last few days were spent on relentless grinding. On top of what he’d already been doing in the previous march from Stormkeep to the Serpent's Spine. By the time they glimpsed the Serpent's Spine, he already leveled his Riding skill firmly from D to C-, generating 2,000 Mana Fragments. Nights brought no rest. He drilled relentlessly, parrying, striking, refining footwork until his muscles screamed and his Swordsmanship inched from C- towards the next tier, generating another 4000 fragments.
Helping Fisk prepare the Frostfire pushed his nascent Alchemy skill from D to C-, and scouting ahead, practicing moving silently over crusted snow and loose scree, lifted his Stealth from its nascent F ranking to a more functional D. And these gave him another 6000 fragments.
He now had 10,000 mana fragments. Along with the 1,000 he left over when he reached Snow Rank 5, he got more than enough for the realm's ascension. If he could get his hands on the Crystal.
He'd also spent Harald Stonehand' silver talons – the entire five hundred – outfitting the Talons. Crossbows with heavy quarrels replaced rusty swords for most. Piles of stout rope and simple iron spikes destined for the canyon trap sat waiting near the camp. Fisk had brewed another batch of Frostfire bombs.
Logically, they were as ready as they could be.
So why do I feel like we're marching straight into the Frost Giant's gullet?
His current frustration focused on the pathetic array of spell scrolls and enchanted trinkets laid out before him. "Finest collection north of Bearclaw Pass, Commander!" the wheezing, myopic shopkeeper declared. "Ice Warrior's Icy Gaze! Chill the blood of your foes!"
Eirik picked up a small, poorly carved ice-dagger charm. It radiated the faintest whisper of cold. He focused inward.
[IDENTIFY ACTIVATED]
[MANA: 24/25]
[ITEM: Crude Frost Talisman (F-Grade)]
[EFFECT: Minor Chill Aura - Creates a faint cooling effect within a one-foot radius.]
[DURABILITY: Fragile]
[DESCRIPTION: A cheaply enchanted bauble.]
He tossed it back onto the counter with a disgusted snort. The others were worse. A scroll promising "Icicle Barrage" looked like a child's drawing. Another offered "Frost Armor," but the energy felt like cheap glass.
None of it was battle-worthy.
The crossbows were essential – shoot, run, harass from the cliffs. But inside the cave? Down where the Crystal pulsed? If the Shaman sensed them, if it unleashed some primal frost magic… arrows and Frostfire might not be enough.
He needed flexibility. An escape. A surprise.
The canyon trap plan replayed in his mind again. Talons making a deafening racket near the narrow entrance, luring the troll horde in. Sealing the bottleneck with rocks, maybe even a hasty ice wall. Then, raining death from above while the trolls roared below.
And while they're distracted, me and a small team slip into the Shaman's cave. Find the Crystal source. Get out.
Simple on parchment. Brutal in reality. He'd walked the canyon approach a dozen times with Olaf and Leif. Dug practice pits. Calculated rockfall points. But caves? What waits in the dark besides the Shaman? How deep is the source? What if the ritual chamber is guarded?
He needed something more. Something to tip the scales inside the cave. Something beyond sharp steel and desperate courage.
"Nothing else?" Eirik demanded. "No teleportation scrolls?"
The shopkeeper paled, shrinking back. "C-Commander! Such things? Legendary! The cost alone… n-none in Flint's Hold, I swear! Only the great Guild Houses in the capital might…"
Eirik didn't hear the rest. He'd known it was a long shot. A waste of precious time, really. He turned away, the bell above the door jingling mournfully as he stepped back into the biting wind. He pulled his fur cloak tighter.
A light tap landed on his shoulder.
Eirik spun, hand instinctively flying to the hilt of the Fenrir sword. His eyes snapped down.
Elara Stonehand stood there, bundled in thick, plain woolens that couldn't disguise her striking figure. Honey-blonde hair escaped a simple braid, framing a face too beautiful for Flint's Hold – high cheekbones, intelligent blue eyes, and lips set in a determined line.
Her cheeks were flushed pink from the cold.
"Commander Stormcrow," she said. "A word. Please. Somewhere less… exposed."
Eirik scanned the busy street quickly. Suspicion flared. Still, he gave a curt nod. "Lead."
She turned without another word, leading Eirik through the labyrinthine alleys. She knew the lower town well, avoiding main thoroughfares, slipping down narrow passages stacked with firewood and refuse.
They emerged into a quieter section near the outer palisade wall – a dead-end alley stacked with empty, frozen barrels. The sounds of the town faded to a distant murmur. Secluded enough.
Elara spun to face him, breath misting rapidly. "You were looking for spells."
Eirik crossed his arms, leaning back against the cold stone wall. "And?"
"You won't find what you need here. Not in the shops." She took a step closer. "But I know what you need. Or… I have what you might need."
Eirik raised an eyebrow.
She reached into a deep pocket and pulled out a single, palm-sized object. It wasn't paper or cheap metal. It looked like a shard of pure, flawless ice, impossibly clear and cold. Geometric patterns, glowing with faint blue-white light, were etched deep into its surface. Frost curled gently around Elara's fingers where she held it.
"Take it," she said, thrusting the icy shard towards him. "See for yourself."
Suspicion warred with intense curiosity. Eirik saw no obvious trap in the object itself. Cautiously, Eirik took the ice shard. It was shockingly cold, yet didn't melt in his palm. The etched runes pulsed with an inner light. He focused his will, pushing a sliver of mana.
[IDENTIFY ACTIVATED]
[MANA: 23/25]
[ITEM: Ability Shard - Frost Phase (B-Grade)]
[DESCRIPTION: Contains the knowledge and mana pattern to unlock the Unique Ability: FROST PHASE. Upon activation, the user's physical form temporarily disperses into an incorporeal mist of supercooled vapor, capable of passing harmlessly through solid matter composed primarily of ice or water, and intangible to purely physical attacks.]
[MANA COST: Variable. 3 Mana per second of activation. Higher cost may be required to phase through denser materials or maintain stability.]
[DURATION: User-controlled, limited by Mana Pool.]
[VULNERABILITIES: Extreme heat or fire-based magic disrupts the mist form instantly, potentially causing backlash. Strong disruptive energy fields may cause instability. Concentration required.]
[WARNING: This ability is non-permanent. Upon draining 100 mana using this ability, from all sources, this shard will shatter instantaneously.]
Eirik's breath caught. Incorporeal. Pass through ice. Avoid physical attacks.
Even if it’s a non-permanent ability, the 30 seconds of phasing through whatever thing in his way was still a game-changer. He can slip through an ice wall blocking a passage. Evade a crushing troll club. Bypass a guarded entrance silently.
Inside the cave… this could be the key. It was beyond anything he'd imagined finding.
He looked up, his gaze sharp as the shard in his hand. "Where did you get this?"
Elara met his intensity without flinching. "Does it matter? It works. You felt it. It's exactly what you need to survive inside that mountain."
"It's… impressive," Eirik conceded. "But nothing like this comes free. What's the real catch, Elara? Besides your father finding out you're giving away family heirlooms?"
Though he doubted Harald even knew such a thing existed.
She reached into her pocket again. This time, she pulled out three small, thumb-sized crystals. They were cloudy white, like frozen milk, but pulsed with a soft, pure light.
[IDENTIFY ACTIVATED]
[MANA: 22/25]
[ITEM: Minor Mana Crystal (D-Grade)]
[EFFECT: Contains 25 Units of Raw Ambient Mana. Can be absorbed directly to replenish the user's Mana Pool. Slow absorption recommended to avoid backlash.]
[DESCRIPTION: Naturally occurring crystals formed in areas of concentrated magical energy. Highly valuable.]
Eirik stared. Mana crystals. Refills. His biggest internal dread – running dry deep underground, surrounded by enemies, unable to Conjure, unable to Identify, unable to use this new ability – suddenly had a solution. Three shots of pure energy, ready for the moment of absolute need.
She's thought this through. She knows exactly what I lack.
Elara held up the three crystals beside the Frost Phase shard. "These too. A package."
Eirik's mind raced. The sheer value… the Frost Phase shard alone felt priceless. Combined with the crystals…
"Why?" he asked. "Why offer this? What do you want?" He locked eyes with her. "Don't say 'save my father's mine'. This is more personal."
Elara's blue eyes burned with fierce resolve. "Three conditions, Commander Stormcrow."
"Name them." He braced himself.
"One. When you leave Flint's territory, whether victorious or not, you take me with your band. North. Away from here." Her voice didn't waver.
Eirik blinked. Take her? "That's suicide for you, and political poison for me. Flint wants your marriage alliance. Your father will hunt us down. Offending both? You expect me to become a kidnapper?"
"You said it yourself back in the tavern," she shot back, her gaze unwavering. "You don't care about Lord Flint's long-term favor. You need legitimacy, coin, and to get north. This is north." She gestured vaguely towards the mountains. "And beyond."
A hint of bleakness touched her voice. "If you fail, Flint crushes my father within weeks. If you succeed but leave me, Flint still forces the marriage as his price for 'allowing' the mine to reopen. My fate is sealed either way unless I disappear."
She paused. "You're the only ship sailing out of this frozen hell, Commander. Risky? Yes. But staying is guaranteed ruin. I heard you, in the tavern. You understand desperation. That's what this is."
Eirik processed it coldly. Desperation indeed. Taking her was insane. A noble daughter, a target on their backs. But… She was resourceful, intelligent, and clearly had access to things Harald didn't.
And she was right about Flint's inevitable moves.
"Condition Two," Elara continued, snapping him back. "You formally acknowledge the debt. On paper. Signed and witnessed." She pulled a small, folded parchment and a charcoal stick from her other pocket – she'd come prepared. "The Frost Phase shard? A conservative market value is seven thousand silver talons. The three Minor Mana Crystals? Five hundred each. Total debt: Eight thousand, five hundred silver talons."
Eirik's eyes widened. "Eight thousand?! That's extortion!" It was more than he'd ever dreamed of possessing.
Elara shrugged, a flicker of cold pragmatism in her eyes. "Prove it's less. Find another Ability Shard. Anywhere. I dare you." She held out the parchment, already partially written on. "Consider it… venture capital. I'm investing in your future profits, Commander. With interest. Five percent per month, compounded."
"You don't need to pay it all now. Just pay it when you can. Weekly installments. Monthly. Whatever you can manage. I intend to stay close to collect," she added pointedly.
She expects to survive. And stick around. The sheer audacity was almost impressive. Debt slavery wrapped in a business deal. But… it wasn't upfront coin he didn't have. It was a promise to pay from future gains. Gains he desperately needed the Ability and Crystals to secure.
"Interest?" Eirik grated out. "You drive a hard bargain, Lady Stonehand."
"Necessity teaches hard lessons, Commander," she replied evenly.
"And Condition Three?" Eirik asked, dreading the answer.
"Simple. While I am with your company, I have complete freedom. I come and go as I please. I am not your prisoner, nor your soldier. I am a… creditor in transit. You provide basic protection as you would for any valuable asset, but you do not dictate my movements beyond necessary safety for the band."
She met his gaze squarely. "I may choose to leave at any point. Or I may choose to stay. That is my prerogative."
Eirik stared at her. It was insane.Taking responsibility for a noble daughter with a priceless ability shard and a mountain of debt hanging over his head?
"Do you realize," Eirik asked, "what you're proposing? You’re staking your freedom, your family heirloom, and a king’s ransom in mana crystals on a stranger. On a mercenary captain leading a band of outcasts into a troll-infested mountain. Why? Why not run south? Disappear on your own? Why trust me with this?"
"Why not?" Elara met his gaze squarely. "I saw you with my father, Commander. I heard how you spoke. And that was enough."
Eirik looked at her for a long moment, the silence stretching in the cold alley.
Then, he chuckled.
"Clever, Elara," he said. "Very clever. But let's dissect this properly, shall we?"
He held up the Frost Phase shard. "First, this. An Ability Shard. B-Grade. Priceless. Where did it really come from? Not your father's hearthstone coffers. House Stonehand, struggling as it is, wouldn't casually possess such a treasure. Nor would Harald let it out of sight if he did."
He saw the brief flicker in her eyes – surprise quickly masked. "You stole it. Found it. Inherited it from a different relative? Doesn't matter. Point is, you have it. And possessing it is dangerous. You need it gone. But selling it outright? Too risky. Flint or any number of vultures would swoop in, questions would be asked, your own safety compromised."
"So, you offer it to me. A desperate mercenary captain leading a disposable band into a troll-infested death trap. A perfect solution for you. It disappears, potentially solves your troll problem, and ties me to you with an unbreakable bond of debt."
Elara's flush deepened, but she didn't interrupt, her jaw tightening.
He gestured to the parchment. "Second, this debt. Eight thousand five hundred talons? But it's not just my debt, is it?" His gaze sharpened. "You wrote 'Commander Stormcrow of the Talon Warband'. You're clever enough to know that Cedric might be forced to acknowledge that. House Stormcrow, however strained, might be pressured to honor a debt signed by its legitimized son."
"You bind them as well as me. A double anchor. And if I miraculously succeed? You have a claim on our future spoils for years. If I die? Well, the debt might become House Fenrir's problem, since Isolde is my sponsor, or it dies with me, but the shard is already gone – your primary goal achieved."
He leaned closer, his voice dropping to a dangerous rasp. "And the moment you think you've extracted enough, the moment a better opportunity arises far from Flint or your father's reach, you'd vanish. Poof. Leaving me or my successors holding a worthless piece of parchment and a mountain of obligations. I'm just a pawn in your escape plan, Elara."
Elara stared at him, momentarily stunned. Her carefully constructed facade wavered. Her eyes widened slightly, genuine shock flickering before hardening into defiance.
She recovered quickly, tossing her head. "So what if you are? So what if I am? We're all pawns, Commander! Flint plays my father. My father plays you, or tried to. I'm trying to do something! To break the cycle!"
Her voice rose. "Have you seen Oswin? Do you have the faintest idea what it would be like to spend the rest of my life being ploughed by someone I despise? Someone cruel and stupid? Being sold like cattle to settle my father's debts? Is that freedom?"
Eirik met her fury with icy calm. "I don't know Oswin. But these are the fates noble daughters often face. Houses rise and fall on such transactions. Sometimes, Elara, you don't get to decide. Power decides for you."
"I don't get to decide?" Elara spat the words, stepping closer, her eyes blazing. "But you do! Right? You were Cedric Stormcrow's bastard! Nothing! Scraped from the floor! And then suddenly you reached Snow Realm. You bested the barony's youngest champion in single combat. You dragged together a band of outcasts and won against veteran knights!"
Her words tumbled out. "You carved out a life for yourself despite and against the will of others who saw you as less than nothing! You took the name 'Stormcrow' and made it mean something! How is that not deciding your own fate? How is that not breaking the cycle?"
Eirik's eyes narrowed. "How do you know all this? The specifics… Gunnar? Snow?"
Elara scoffed, a harsh, brittle sound. "Practically everyone whispers about it these days, Commander. News travels fast, especially when it involves rising bastards. But I gotta tell you," she added, "they aren't painting you favorably."
"Rumors say you consort with dark spirits, that your power is stolen. They portray you as some sort of demon-possessed berserker, a monster wrapped in human skin." She gave him a quick, assessing glance. "It's a good thing few people here know what you actually look like. Short, lean… you don't exactly match the seven-foot-tall, black-eyed demon they describe."
Ingrid. Rurik. The names flashed in Eirik's mind like cold steel. They move faster than I anticipated. And far dirtier.
The web was tightening. Faster. I need to move faster.
"Personally," Elara continued, her gaze steady on his, "I don't believe a word of their poison. But I do believe this: you and me? We're alike. We refuse to have our lives forced down our throats. We fight."
She took a deep breath. "So, I'm asking you. Again. Do you agree? No matter what my motives truly are? Because my need is real. My fear is real. And what I offer…" she glanced at the shard and crystals still in his hand, "is real. It could save your life. It could help you save your men."
Silence descended again.
The sheer weight of her proposal. The power of Frost Phase within his grasp. The lifeline of the mana crystals.
He looked into her eyes, seeing the desperation, the fierce intelligence, the ruthless pragmatism that mirrored his own. She's dangerous. Untrustworthy. Driven by a fear as potent as my own ambition.
But… Frost Phase. The ability to become mist, to slip through ice and stone, to evade crushing blows… it was a game-changer, especially inside the Throat. Inside the caves where the Crystal pulsed.
He weighed the cost.
"I appreciate your honesty, Elara. I truly do. More than you might believe. And here's my truth."
He held her gaze. "I am not someone who suddenly finds himself pegged, entangled in debt papers and responsibilities not of his own making. I cherish my freedom. You, of all people, should understand that hunger."
He paused, letting the weight of his next words settle. "I won't lie. What you offer… Frost Phase, the mana… it tempts me. Desperately. The tactical edge… it could mean the difference between life and death inside that mountain."
"But," he continued, the word dropping like a stone, "I am perfectly willing to fight these trolls on my own terms, however dangerous that path might be. Just because I refuse to emerge from that ice only to find myself in a gilded cage of your making."
He raised the hand holding the artifacts slightly. "What you offer, Elara Stonehand, presents a different kind of enemy. One far more insidious than trolls. Debt. Obligation. A creditor with a claim on my future, my men's future, potentially my House's future. You call it venture capital. I call it a leash."
"I'll tell you this plainly," Eirik stated. "Freedom. The will to carve a path of my own choosing, unbound by anyone – that is the bedrock I stand on. It's why I fight."
"If I sign this," he gestured contemptuously at the parchment she still clutched, "then I, and the seventy-three Talons under my command, instantly become your collateral. Our victories become your repayments. Our risks become your investments. I refuse to solve one problem by shackling myself to a greater one."
He held out his hand, the Frost Phase shard and the three Minor Mana Crystals resting on his palm. The offer was undeniable. The cost was unacceptable.
"So," Eirik finished, his tone final, cold as the mountain wind. "Take your stuff. And leave."
Elara stared at him, her blue eyes wide with utter disbelief. The fierce negotiator was gone, replaced by stunned incomprehension. Her mouth opened, then closed. She looked from the priceless artifacts back to Eirik's impassive face.
"W-What?" she stammered, the word escaping in a shocked whisper. Her carefully constructed plan, her desperate gamble, lay shattered at her feet. "You… you don't want them? You're… refusing? Now? When you're marching into that?"
"Do I need to repeat myself?" Eirik asked.
For a long, brittle moment, the only sounds were the distant clang of a smithy and the mournful whistle of the wind funneling down the alley. The flush on her cheeks deepened, whether from anger, humiliation, or the dawning horror of her own situation, Eirik couldn’t tell.
"You… you stubborn, prideful… bastard," she finally hissed. She snatched the Frost Phase shard and the three Mana Crystals back from his palm, the cold biting her fingers through her gloves. She shoved them roughly into her pocket. "Fine! Die then! See if I care!" Her voice cracked. "Die fighting trolls in a pointless fight for a mine that isn’t even yours, to protect the pride of a bastard too arrogant to see a lifeline!"
She spun on her heel, her boots crunching sharply on the frozen ground as she stalked towards the alley’s entrance. She didn’t look back.
Eirik watched her go.
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Harald snatched the list, his eyes darting down it.
"Saltpeter? Sulfur? This is alchemical stock! Expensive! And in those quantities? Commander, I told you—"
"You told me you're bleeding dry, but that has nothing to do with the fairness of our current trade." Eirik cut him off. "I will tell you what is fair: you want the Talons as your martyrs. So I want Stonehand as my future miners."
"Miners?" Harald scoffed, trying to regain control. "What nonsense is this? You clear the dens, you get paid per the contract!"
"The contract?" Eirik's laugh was harsh and devoid of humor. "The contract Flint designed to see us fail or die? He'll honour it? When pigs fly. He has no incentive. We succeed, he still gets his royalties from you. We die, he avoids paying and keeps you choked. Why should he pay the Talons a single copper?"
Harald's face flushed. "What are you proposing, Stormcrow? Extortion?"
"Partnership," Eirik stated flatly. "A renegotiation you sign. Not Flint. You need the Throat cleared to save your House. The Talons clear it. In exchange, we take a twenty-five percent stake in the net profits of the Ironvein mine for the next three winters."
Elara gasped. Harald looked like he'd been punched.
"Twenty-five percent! For three winters! Outrageous! You might as well ask for my daughter!"
"I need something Flint can't just ignore or erase," Eirik countered, his voice cold steel. "Something with tangible, lasting value tied to our success. A stake in the mine."
"It binds Flint. If he tries to cheat us after we clear your mine, he cheats you, his landholder, out of royalties and disrupts a productive asset he profits from. He'll honour it because disrupting it costs him more."
He saw the dawning horror mixed with reluctant understanding on Harald's face. The bastard was right. It was diabolical.
"It turns the Talons from disposable mercenaries into... investors."
A stake forced Flint's hand in a way pure coin never could. But giving up twenty-five percent? For three winters? To this... rabble?
"It's robbery!" Harald spluttered. "My House teeters on ruin, and you demand its lifeblood!"
"Your House bleeds because Flint cut you," Eirik shot back. "We offer the knife to remove the blockage. You pay for the surgery."
"Twenty-five percent for three winters or watch Flint grind you into dust and marry your daughter off to someone she resents. What's Elara worth, Lord Stonehand? Less than twenty-five percent of a mine you can't access?"
Elara flinched, but she didn't look away. The unspoken message was clear: He's right, Father.
Harald slumped. The fire of outrage flickered, drowned by cold desperation.
He saw his daughter's face, saw the futility of clinging to pride while his world crumbled. This Stormcrow bastard saw angles he hadn't.
"And if you fail?" Harald rasped. "If you all die?"
"Then you lose nothing but the supplies," Eirik shrugged. "The contract becomes void. Flint still owns the surface. You still own the mineral rights, blocked. Status quo. Or even better for you, because that’d be a scandal against Flint you could spread." He leaned closer. "But if we win... you get everything back. Minus twenty-five percent."
The silence stretched, thick with the weight of a collapsing future.
Harald stared at the scarred wood of the table, then at his daughter's resolute face, then finally at Eirik's unyielding gaze. The cost was immense. But the alternative... was even worse.
"Frost take you, Stormcrow," Harald breathed, his voice thick with defeat. "Twenty-five percent. Three winters."
He pulled a worn leather satchel towards him, extracting a creased parchment and a stub of ink. His hand trembled slightly as he began drafting the agreement.
"But I see this only on the condition that the Throat is cleared and the main access tunnel secured within two weeks. Fail that deadline, the stake dissolves."
"I don’t need two weeks," Eirik said, watching the words take shape.
Partial assignment of net mineral profits: Twenty-five Percent for a term of Three Winters to be held collectively by the Stormcrow Talons Mercenary Company...
It was real. A foothold. A future bought with blood and audacity. He'd get Yorick to scrutinize it later, but the essence was locked.
Harald signed with a flourish that looked more like a death rattle. He shoved the document across the table.
"There. Your poisoned chalice. Now get me my mine back."
Eirik took the parchment, folded it carefully, and tucked it inside his tunic. It felt heavy.
"The supplies, Lord Stonehand. Including the alchemicals. Delivered to our camp by dawn tomorrow. We move at first light the day after."
"Fine." Harald looked at Eirik, and spat. "May Frost freeze your ambitions, Commander. Now get out."
———
Leaving the stench of cheap ale behind, Eirik didn't head back to camp. He turned his steps back towards Flint's Hold.
"Commander?" Leif asked, keeping pace. "What now? We have Stonehand's stake. Why poke the bear?"
"To make sure the bear knows he's been poked," Eirik said, his gaze fixed on the Hold's imposing gates. "And to force his hand."
Isolde nodded slowly. "A declaration. Showing him Stonehand's capitulation... and your resolve."
Getting an audience this time was trickier.
The steward looked pinched and disapproving. "Lord Flint is occupied, Commander Stormcrow. He instructed no further—"
"Tell him it concerns the Throat," Eirik interrupted, his voice flat. "And a newly signed contract with the actual mineral rights holder."
The steward paled slightly. Mineral rights holder? That meant Stonehand. He vanished, returning moments later, looking shaken. "Lord Flint will see you. Briefly."
Flint was back in his study, but the relaxed aura was gone.
"Commander Stormcrow," Flint drawled, finally glancing up. His eyes flickered to Isolde with mild, dismissive curiosity. "And the Fenrir matron. Back so soon? Did you forget something? Perhaps your senses of self-preservation?" He took a slow sip. "I told you my position. The contract will not change. Go away."
Eirik didn't sit. He planted his feet, meeting Flint's bored gaze directly.
"We're going into the Throat, Lord Flint."
Flint's glass paused halfway to his lips. A flicker of genuine surprise crossed his face before settling back into practiced disdain.
"Going in? Into the Throat? After you just spent an hour detailing how it's a deathtrap crawling with trolls and magic?" He lowered the glass slowly. "Commander, I confess, I thought you were reckless. Now I fear you're genuinely unhinged. Did that fall you took as a boy damage more than just your prospects?"
"We're going in," Eirik repeated, pulling the folded parchment from his tunic. He held it up.
"Just fulfilling your contract. Clearing the dens blocking the Ironvein. With Harald Stonehand's blessing and... financial participation."
Flint's eyes narrowed to slits. "Financial participation? What nonsense is that bastard peddling now? His pockets are emptier than a Skarl's conscience."
"A stake, Lord Flint," Eirik clarified, his voice dangerously calm. "Twenty-five percent. Net profits. Three winters. Signed and sealed. Part of the price for the Talons risking their necks against your under-described troll problem."
He saw the flare of disbelief, then dawning fury in Flint's eyes.
"You... you insolent whelp! You went behind my back? Dealing with that sniveling lickspittle?" Flint hissed, stepping closer. "After you yourself told me that Throat is death? Do you have a death wish, boy? Or are you truly as stupid as everyone says?"
"Neither," Eirik replied. "Just committed to seeing the job through. With or without your help. But since you are the land’s Lord protector, I'm informing you of the arrangement. I trust you'll honour it once the dens are cleared."
"Honour it?" Flint choked on the words. "Honour your back-alley deal with a debtor? You've signed your own death warrant, Stormcrow! And you've dragged Stonehand down with you!" He slammed a fist on his desk.
"I march in with a plan," Eirik corrected. "And the resources to execute it."
Flint surged to his feet, leaning over the desk, his voice dropping to a dangerous hiss.
"You told me! An hour ago! Trolls! A dozen or more! Organized! Led by a shaman! Equivalent to Peak Snow! You painted a picture of certain death! And now you stand there and tell me you're marching right back into it? Are you utterly mad, boy? Or are you truly Cedric's useless get, determined to drag your rabble to a pointless, gruesome end just to spite me?"
Eirik met Flint's furious gaze without flinching.
"My assessment stands, Lord Flint. The threat is significant. Perhaps you underestimated it when you wrote the contract. But the Talons signed on to clear dens. We intend to clear them. With or without your active help, the job will be done."
"Without my help? Without my help?" Flint's laughter was brittle. "You need my help, you reckless fool! You need my men, my resources! Or you die! Do you think Cedric Stormcrow will sit idly by when word reaches him that his bastard led seventy men into a troll-infested death trap on my lands? Or worse, when Earl Borin hears about it? The last thing I need is that old bear stomping through my territory demanding answers over a pile of your frozen corpses!"
"Then give me the support to ensure no heads roll," Eirik pressed. "Scrolls detailing the underground layouts Stonehand's miners mapped. Potions. Maybe a squad of your own veterans for the bottleneck sealing?"
"Not a chance!" Flint roared. "I am not sending one more soul to die alongside your suicidal folly! You want to be a hero? Fine! Be a dead one! I wash my hands of it!" He stabbed a finger at the document. "But this? This is blackmail! Pure and simple! You wave a worthless piece of paper tied to a treacherous weasel and expect me to endorse your suicide mission?"
"I expect you to honor a legally binding contract signed by your steward, witnessed by your Captain of the Guard, Torvin," Eirik replied evenly. "Whether the Talons succeed or fail, you hired us for this task based on your representation of the problem. I've merely secured additional motivation for my men from a... third-party stakeholder."
He gestured to the signature on his own copy of the original agreement on Flint's desk.
"That doesn't negate your obligation. So, Lord Flint, do I have your assurance that payment will be rendered upon successful completion? That the terms regarding our mining rights hold? Or should I send a raven to Earl Borin tonight informing him of your involvement in actively hindering a vital operation against a significant troll threat within his vassal lands?"
Flint stared at him, apoplectic. Eirik could see the calculations warring behind his eyes – fury at the defiance, fear of Borin's involvement, the sheer, staggering recklessness of Eirik's plan, and the inescapable fact that Eirik was technically, legally, correct.
Flint had hired him. Eirik was proceeding. And Flint couldn't openly stop him without looking like he was sabotaging the clearance of his own blockage.
"You... you arrogant, suicidal pup!" Flint finally spat, sinking back into his chair like a deflated wineskin.
He snatched a quill from his desk, dipped it violently in ink, and scrawled his signature across the bottom of the original deployment contract Eirik had placed before him earlier. He didn't even read it again.
He slammed the quill down.
"There! Your death warrant is signed! Take it! Take your rabble and march to your frozen hell! There will be witnesses!" He gestured wildly towards the window overlooking the courtyard below. "Plenty of them! So everyone knows this madness is entirely your doing! I wash my hands of you and your fools!"
He shoved the signed contract across the desk.
"But mark my words, Stormcrow. When you stand at the mouth of that Throat, watching those monstrosities tear your street rats limb from limb, shattering bone and spraying gore across the ice… When the stench of their offal and the screams of dying boys fill your ears... you'll puke your guts out. You'll freeze. And you'll run."
He glared at Eirik with pure, undiluted hatred.
"You'll run back to your father like a whipped cur, if you make it out at all. And Flint lands will be cleaner for your absence!"
Eirik calmly picked up the signed contract. The ink was still wet. He folded it neatly into his pouch.
"Thank you for your hospitality, Lord Flint. And your... well-wishes. We will depart soon."
Without waiting for a dismissal that wouldn't come, Eirik turned on his heel.
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Lord Arcturus Flint leaned back in his chair. He gestured lazily towards chairs opposite him with a hand that held a heavy crystal glass half-filled with amber liquid.
Eirik took the offered seat, projecting calm he didn’t entirely feel. Leif stood rigidly at his shoulder. Isolde Fenrir took the other chair.
"You made good time, Commander Stormcrow," Flint remarked, and took a slow sip from his glass. "Captain Torvin sent word you were scouting the Ironvein blockage. Find what you were looking for?"
"More than we bargained for, Lord Flint," Eirik stated flatly, cutting through the pleasantries. He saw no point in dancing around it. "We found the dens blocking your access. One major defile. Not scattered dens."
Flint’s eyebrows rose fractionally, a flicker of mild interest. "Oh? Tricky terrain, I hear. How many of the brutes did you count?"
"Seven warrior-class trolls visible immediately," Eirik replied. "Twelve feet tall, armed, armored with lizard hide, clearly organized. They were feeding on mountain goat carcasses."
Flint waved a dismissive hand. "Big lads, yes. Standard Ice Troll fare. Seven's decent cluster. Nasty, but manageable for a determined force."
"They weren’t alone, Lord Flint," Eirik pressed, leaning forward slightly. "A eighth troll emerged. Smaller, leaner. Carrying a staff topped with crystals and bones. Performing rituals on the carcass pile. Symbols carved and frozen into the rock all around its cave entrance."
Flint took another sip. "Staff? Rituals?"
"A shaman, Lord Flint," Eirik stated, the word dropping into the room like a stone. "It channeled frost energy. The warriors reacted to its presence. We felt it sense our position, even from concealment. This isn’t just a cluster of brutes. It’s a tribe. With leadership and… magic."
Flint sighed. He placed his glass carefully on the desk.
"Shaman, eh? Bad luck that. Nasty business, troll magic. Makes them cleverer. Tougher." He met Eirik’s gaze directly. "So? What’s your point, Commander? You signed a contract to clear dens blocking my Ironvein workings. That’s what’s down there. Dens full of trolls."
Eirik kept his voice level. "The contract stipulated 'clearing of troll dens,' Lord Flint. It implied scattered, lesser trolls – manageable opposition for a mercenary band. What we found is a fortified stronghold defended by likely dozens of organized, magically supported troll warriors led by a shaman equivalent to a Peak Snow Realm warrior. That’s not a 'den'. That’s a small army garrisoning the very land you need cleared."
Flint spread his hands. "The contract says 'clear the dens blocking the Ironvein.' Doesn’t specify the size, intelligence, or hobbies of the inhabitants. You assessed the situation. You don’t like the look of it?" He leaned back again, picking up his glass once more. "Then walk away."
Silence slammed down in the study, broken only by the crackle of the fire.
Walk away? Just like that? Eirik’s mind raced. He doesn’t care? Doesn’t try to persuade, threaten, or renegotiate? He just… dismisses us?
"Walk away?" Leif couldn't control himself. "Our men, our resources… wasted scouting this… death trap? The contract stipulated payment upon clearing!"
Flint gave Leif a look of mild annoyance. "Payment upon successful clearing of the specified dens, young Fenrir. Which, by your commander’s own assessment, hasn’t happened. You don’t want the job? Fine. Consider the contract void. No harm, no foul. Move on to easier pickings." He took a deliberate sip.
"But… your mines?" Isolde asked. "The blockage remains. The iron vein remains inaccessible."
Flint’s lips twitched in a ghost of a smile that held no warmth. "Ah, the mines. Yes. What a dreadful shame." He looked almost bored. "Terribly inconvenient. But there it is. Sometimes, business ventures face… unforeseen obstacles."
Eirik stared at him. The sheer, calculated indifference was staggering. It didn’t fit. A lord like Flint, building his power on iron wealth, wouldn’t shrug off such a crucial resource being blocked by a monstrous infestation unless… unless letting it stay blocked served a purpose.
"Unforeseen obstacles we were hired to remove, Lord Flint," Eirik said. "Obstacles you misrepresented significantly."
"Misrepresented?" Flint chuckled. "Commander, I provided the location of the blockage. You chose to assess it. Found it not to your liking. That’s the risk of mercenary work, isn’t it? My sympathies. Better luck next time."
He looked pointedly at the door. "Was there anything else? My steward will see you out."
He’s not even pretending. Eirik rose, signalling Leif and Isolde with a glance. Arguing further was pointless.
"No, Lord Flint," Eirik said, his voice icy. "Nothing else." He turned and walked out, Leif and Isolde falling in behind him. The heavy oak door closed behind them with a soft, final thud.
The cold air of the corridor was a shock after the study’s heat. Leif looked thunderous. "He just… dismissed us! Like we were peddlers selling stale bread! What about the contract? The advance? The lost time?"
Isolde’s expression was troubled. "It makes no sense. That iron vein is rich, easily accessible once cleared. To abandon it over a… difficult clearance? It’s illogical. He gains nothing."
He gains nothing by clearing it? Or… gains something by leaving it blocked? Eirik’s mind churned as they were escorted back towards the main hall. What leverage does a blocked mine give him? Against whom?
They were crossing the crowded, bustling main hall, heading for the heavy outer doors and the bitter cold beyond, when a small figure darted out from behind a pillar stacked with ore samples.
"Commander? Commander Stormcrow?" It was a boy, maybe ten or eleven, grubby-faced and bundled in thick, patched furs. He clutched a folded piece of cheap parchment sealed with a blob of plain wax.
He thrust it towards Eirik.
"For you, sir. Gent said give it only to the Stormcrow Commander. Got a whole copper talon for it!" He grinned, showing a missing tooth, before scampering away into the throng before anyone could question him.
Eirik caught the parchment. Leif and Isolde immediately closed ranks around him, shielding him from casual view as he broke the crude seal.
The message inside was brief, written in a hasty, unfamiliar hand:
‘Commander Stormcrow - Meet at the Broken Plow Tavern, lower town, one hour. Ask for the back room. Do not be seen coming from the Hold. Urgent.’
No signature.
Leif glanced at the note over Eirik’s shoulder. "Who?"
"No idea," Eirik murmured, folding the note. "Someone who knows Flint’s game?"
Isolde met Eirik’s gaze. "The Broken Plow is a rough place, but known. Fenrir agents sometimes use it discreetly. It’s plausible."
"We need information," Eirik stated. "Let's see who's behind this."
They didn’t return directly to their horses. Instead, they wandered seemingly aimlessly through the lower settlement for a while, blending with the crowds of miners, smiths, and traders, ensuring no obvious tail followed them from the Hold.
The Broken Plow Tavern was nestled in a warren of narrow lanes near the smithy quarter, its sign – a cracked wooden plow – hanging crookedly over a door that leaked warmth, smoke, and the sour smell of cheap ale.
Eirik pushed the door open. The noise and fug hit them like a wall. Miners in thick jerkins, their faces grimed with soot and ore dust, packed the benches, drinking deep and arguing loudly. Barmaids wove through the chaos with practiced ease. Eirik ignored the curious glances drawn by their finer clothes and weapons, scanning the room. His gaze landed on a grizzled bartender polishing a tankard.
"Back room," Eirik said, pitching his voice low but carrying under the din. "Expecting someone."
The bartender barely glanced up, just jerked his head towards a heavy curtain at the back of the room. No questions. Eirik pushed aside the thick, stained fabric, Leif and Isolde close behind.
The back room was lit by a single guttering lamp on a heavy table. A man sat with his back to the wall, facing the entrance. He straightened as they entered, pushing the hood back slightly.
He was older than Eirik expected, perhaps in his late forties. His eyes widened momentarily as they took in Eirik, then Leif, then lingered on Isolde with visible surprise.
"Commander Stormcrow?" he asked, his voice a low rasp. "I expected… well, frankly, I expected the reports were exaggerated nonsense. That Cedric had finally snapped and let his useless bastard try playing mercenary captain to get himself killed quietly."
He shook his head, a flicker of disbelief in his eyes. "But here you stand. Leading what? A bunch of boys barely weaned off their mothers? Against that?" He gestured vaguely towards the direction of the mountains. "Did you scout the Throat?"
Throat? So it has a name. Eirik took the chair opposite him, Leif and Isolde flanking him. "We did. Troll Clan. Shaman. The works. And Lord Flint just tossed us out like trash. So, who are you, and why should we listen?"
The man sighed, rubbing a hand over his weary face. "Name’s Harald Stonehand. And the mine? The Ironvein? It’s not Flint’s."
Leif leaned forward, frowning. "Not Flint’s? But he hired us to clear it!"
Harald snorted. "He owns the land, young Fenrir. But the mineral rights? The Ironvein workings? They belong to me. Or rather, to my family. My grandfather discovered that seam, struck the original claim with the old Earl. Flint holds the title to the surface land, but the wealth beneath belongs to House Stonehand. We pay him royalties, a sizeable chunk, for the privilege of digging it out and getting it to market. He profits handsomely without lifting a finger."
He looked at Eirik, his gaze intense. "Until now. You see, Commander, Lord Flint recently proposed a marriage alliance. His third son, Oswin – a wastrel with more brawn than brains – to my only daughter, Elara." His jaw tightened. "I refused. Elara’s barely sixteen. Oswin Flint is… unsuitable. Cruel. Known to frequent the lowest brothels in Bearclaw Pass." His voice dropped, thick with anger and paternal protectiveness. "I refused him."
So that’s the lever.
Harald continued. "Flint didn’t take rejection well. Shortly after… the trolls moved in. Aggressively. Into the only viable access point to the richest part of the Ironvein. Curious timing, wouldn’t you say?"
"Too convenient," Isolde murmured, her eyes calculating. "He controls the surface land. Could he have… facilitated it? Driven something else into the area?"
Harald shrugged bitterly. "Who knows? He denies it, of course. Calls it bad luck. Says the mines are unsafe until cleared. Which means I can't work them. Can't pay his damned royalties. Can't provide for my people. My workers sit idle. My forges grow cold." He slammed a fist softly on the table. "He thinks he can starve me out. Force me to agree to the marriage to save my House from ruin. Or…" he gestured towards Eirik, "…dispose of troublesome mercenaries foolish enough to take his poisoned contract."
Leif’s eyes flashed with sudden understanding. "That’s why he didn’t care if we walked away! He wants the Throat uncleared! He wants the blockage to stay, crippling Stonehand! Hiring us was just…"
"Just another move," Eirik finished. "Hire desperate, expendable mercenaries – the Bastard of Stormkeep and his band of misfits. If we miraculously succeeded? Flint gets his royalties flowing again instantly, without lifting a finger. If we failed and died? No loss to him. He still keeps Stonehand choked. Either way, he wins. And we were the perfect, ignorant pawns."
Harald leaned forward. "Commander Stormcrow, I know Flint. He has other… pressures. His ambitions cost coin. Skarl raids are increasing on his eastern borders. He needs the Stonehand royalties more than he lets on, but he won’t bend on the marriage. He sees Elara as his key to absorbing my holdings completely. If I can just clear the Throat myself… if I can restart the Ironvein independently… I break his leverage! But I don’t have the men. I barely have the coin to feed my idle miners!"
He looked desperately at Eirik. "Flint has sent three other mercenary bands to ‘clear the dens’. Reputable ones. They went, saw what you saw, and walked away. Flint paid their scouting fees without complaint. He wants them to walk away. That’s why the job finally fell to someone…" he hesitated, "…to someone like you. Someone new. Or easily disposed of."
And that someone has seventy-three lives depending on him. Eirik met Harald Stonehand gaze.
"Harald. Let’s cut to the chase." Eirik ignored his jab. "I want the trolls killed. You need the trolls killed. I came to Flint expecting resources: coin, weapons, perhaps scrolls detailing the terrain. Preparation." He tapped the tabletop once, sharp and deliberate. "Flint refused. So, the question falls to you, Lord Stonehand. Can you provide what Flint will not?"
Harald leaned back.
"Commander Stormcrow," he began guardedly, "resources are scarce. Flint's blockade bleeds me dry. My miners idle, my forges cold. Offering significant aid… it's a heavy risk."
Eirik cut him off. "Frankness then. I'll wager you've approached every mercenary band Flint hired and discarded. Offered them a 'better deal' from the shadows, hoping they'd take the bait. Am I right?"
Harald's jaw tightened. "I sought solutions," he hedged.
"Their refusal wasn't about your coin," Eirik pressed. "Those were established companies. Reputable. Taking your coin to directly undermine Lord Flint? Poisonous. They'd never work in these mountains again."
He locked eyes with Harald. "But I don't care about Lord Flint's long-term favor. I don't have it. I never will. My 'rabble' need legitimacy through a victory. We need coin. Now. Walking away gains us nothing. Dying is the baseline risk we signed for. But dying as a pawn for your little scheme? Never."
"You accuse me of playing you?" Harald challenged.
Eirik didn't blink. "Be honest. Flint wants us gone. You? You likely wanted us to die. To fail spectacularly in the Throat, bleeding on Flint's doorstep. Dead mercenaries mean proof Flint sent men to die on a misrepresented contract. Leverage you could use publicly."
Harald flinched, color rising on his neck. "That’s a harsh judgment, Commander!"
"It’s the truth," Eirik countered flatly. "So, let’s talk in earnest. I will kill your trolls. The Talons will clear that defile. But not without the resources we need to survive the attempt. I won’t lead my men into a meat grinder unprepared just to become your political martyr."
He placed his hands flat on the scarred table. "I need to see your tangible contribution before I commit a single Talon’s life to that icy death trap. Gear. Supplies. Coin upfront. Proof of your commitment beyond hopeful whispers in a tavern."
Isolde Fenrir, who had remained silent, spoke for the first time.
"Lord Stonehand, Commander Stormcrow speaks plainly, and with reason. You have been grievously wronged by Flint. We have been deceived and discarded. Our goals align perfectly."
She continued, "Eirik Stormcrow has proven himself resourceful beyond expectation. He bested Marshal Gunnar's warriors with improvised weapons and cunning. Against this troll threat, he needs proper tools. Denying him those tools ensures failure, and your continued stagnation. Supporting the Talons is your sole path to reclaiming your birthright."
Harald stared at her, then back at Eirik. The elegant Lady Fenrir vouching for this harsh, calculating bastard… It shifted something.
Before Harald could respond, the heavy curtain blocking the back room entrance twitched aside. A figure slipped through with silent, fluid grace.
She was about nineteen, Eirik's age. Honey-blonde hair escaped a simple braid, framing a face that held none of the softness expected of a noble daughter.
"Father," she said. "Stop dithering."
Harald startled. "Elara! What in Frost's name? I told you to stay at the manor! This is no place—"
Elara Stonehand ignored him and went to Eirik directly.
"Commander Stormcrow. I overheard enough. What do you need to turn that Throat into a grave for trolls?"
Eirik felt a flicker of surprise. He kept his focus, turning the question back to Harald.
"Tangible contribution, Lord Stonehand. Before we step foot back into that defile. Proof you're investing in success, not just hoping for convenient corpses."
Harald turned startled eyes towards his daughter. "Elara! What are you—?"
Elara stepped closer to the table, placing her small hands flat on the scarred wood, leaning towards her father.
"You have the Old Armory," she pressed, her voice dropping to an urgent whisper. "Grandfather’s gear. The silver bars hidden under the hearthstone. The ones Mother doesn’t know about! Give him what he needs! What’s the alternative? Let Flint starve us? Force me to marry Oswin?" Her voice cracked slightly on the name. "Or…" she gestured fiercely towards the mountains, "…let them try! With our help! What do we lose by trying properly?"
Harald Stonehand stared at his daughter. She’s braver than I am, he thought with a pang of shame. He closed his eyes for a long moment, a sigh escaping him.
“Alright, Stormcrow. You’ll have what I can scrape together. Silver? It won’t be Flint’s sum, but… five hundred talons upfront. What little I have in reserve.” He gestured helplessly. “My armory holds miners’ picks, shovels, maybe two dozen serviceable short swords, leather jerkins. Winter gear? Some extra furs, thick boots from the stores. Rope? Plenty of mining rope, strong stuff.” He sighed. “Medical supplies… I could spare some poultices and bandages. That’s… that’s it. That’s all I have.” The admission was painful.
"Very well," Eirik said, pulling a small scrap of parchment and charcoal nub from his belt pouch. "That's more like the tangible commitment I mentioned, Lord Stonehand. But still not enough. Here are some more non-negotiables for the Talons to attempt the clearance."
He began writing quickly.
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The wind howled through the jagged peaks of the Serpent's Spine. Eirik Stormcrow crouched behind black rock. Five days of hard marching northeast from Stormkeep had brought them deep into Lord Arcturus Flint's territory.
Below him, in a deep shadowed defile carved by ancient glaciers, lay their objective… and their trap.
His scouting party – Olaf, Leif, Yorick, and two reliable Talons, Bjorn and Goran – were hunkered down nearby, pressed against frozen ground. They'd left the main Talon camp in a sheltered rock crevasse a mile back, guarded by Harkin and Fisk with his nervously cooing pigeons.
Eirik scanned the defile. It wasn't a simple cave mouth. The sheer rock face was pockmarked with openings, dark maws leading deeper. The ground sloped steeply down from their position, littered with house-sized boulders.
Near the largest cave entrance, crude symbols were daubed in frozen mud and ash – jagged lines and spirals radiating menace. Thick, greasy bones were piled near smaller cave mouths. The stench was incredible: rotting meat, wet fur, and a sharp ammonia tang that stung the nostrils.
Not just a den. A stronghold. Eirik's tactical mind kicked in. Flint said 'troll dens'. Plural. He didn't say 'Troll City'.
Thoom. Thoom.
The sound echoed from the depths of the largest cave. Heavy, rhythmic footfalls. Then, it emerged.
Eirik's breath hitched.
The creature that lumbered into weak grey daylight was a mountain of muscle and frost-rimed white fur. It stood easily twelve feet tall, shoulders wider than two men. Thick, curved tusks jutted from its lower jaw, gleaming like dirty ice. Its skin looked like weathered leather stretched over rock-hard muscle, crusted with ice and grime.
In one massive clawed hand was a crude club fashioned from a young pine trunk, studded with sharpened rocks and ice shards. Strapped across its broad back was giant lizard hide serving as armor.
Thoom. Thoom. Another identical troll emerged behind the first, sniffing the air. Then another. And another.
Frost. Eirik's curse was colder than the wind. An outpost? Patrol?
But the trolls didn't leave. They moved towards a massive pile of frozen carcasses – some kind of shaggy mountain goats. With brutal efficiency, the first troll swung its club.
CRUNCH-SPLATTER.
The goat carcass exploded. Frozen chunks flew. The troll leaned down, grabbed a huge leg, and ripped it free, stuffing half into its maw. Gore and bone crunched audibly. Others followed suit, tearing into the feast with guttural grunts.
Not dumb, Eirik realized, watching their coordination. Brutal, yes. But they work together.
He counted silently. Four visible. All identical, all terrifyingly large. Against one or two? A well-drilled force might manage with heavy losses. Against four? A slaughter.
"Frost's frozen balls," Olaf breathed, voice barely a whisper. His usual ferocity was muted, replaced by wary respect. "Seen trolls… but these? " He shifted his grip on his axe, knuckles white. Olaf wasn't scared easily.
"They look… organized," Leif murmured. He pointed subtly. "That one near the cave mouth – the one with the finger bone necklace. It didn't feed first. It watched the others. Guarding?"
Eirik followed his gaze. Leif was right. The fourth troll, slightly apart, wore a crude necklace strung with human-sized finger bones and large teeth. Its gaze wasn't fixed on food, but scanned the defile entrance and rim above. Its stance was alert, club ready.
Not just brutes. Tribal structure?
The thought chilled him more than wind. This wasn't clearing vermin. This was assaulting a fortified position held by intelligent, organized monsters.
"How many dens did Flint mention, Commander?" Yorick whispered, voice trembling as he peered down. "Captain Torvin spoke of multiple dens blocking the iron vein… but he implied scattered problems. This looks… concentrated."
"He implied manageable," Eirik replied flatly. "This isn't manageable with seventy-three untested men charging down that slope."
He pictured it. Talons slipping on ice, arrows bouncing off thick hide, swords failing to bite deep before those clubs turned men into paste. Frostfire bombs? Effective, but limited supply, and getting close enough would be suicide.
"Bait-and-switch," Olaf growled. "That bastard Flint. Sent us to clean out rats, but the rats are bloody dire bears with clubs!"
"Worse," Eirik muttered. His eyes swept the rock face again. The symbols. The bone piles. The multiple entrances.
This wasn't a few dens. This was a settlement. How many trolls lurked in those caves? Ten? Twenty? More?
Why us? The question hammered in his skull. Because we're cheap? Because we're expendable?
The answer clicked with cold clarity. Both. They were the unproven bastard's band, desperate for legitimacy and coin. Established mercenary companies had likely laughed or demanded prices Flint wouldn't pay. So he'd dumped the problem on the Talons.
"Commander," Bjorn whispered urgently, pointing towards the far end. "Movement. Smaller cave."
Emerging from a lower, narrower opening was another troll. Smaller – maybe eight or nine feet tall – and leaner. Its fur was patchier, tusks smaller. But it moved differently. Less lumbering, more purposeful.
It carried no club. Instead, it clutched a long staff topped with crude feathers, bones, and glinting crystal chunks that seemed to pulse with inner light. In its other hand, it held the frozen, severed head of a large horned beast.
The shaman-troll walked directly to the bone pile. It raised the staff, shaking it vigorously. The crystals rattled, emitting a low, discordant hum that Eirik felt vibrate in his chest. It chanted something guttural, gesturing with the beast head towards sky and symbols. It dipped the head into frozen gore, then slammed it onto a flat rock with a sickening crack.
Shaman. Eirik's blood ran cold. Not just organized. Spiritual. Magical.
Trolls led by a shaman? That changed everything. They wouldn't just fight; they'd fight with strategy, augmented by primitive magic. Frostfire bombs suddenly felt inadequate if that shaman could conjure ice storms or bolster the trolls' resilience.
"Throm's balls…" Olaf breathed, eyes wide. "They got a witch-doctor?" He made the sign against evil.
Leif's face was grim. "This isn't a clearing job, Commander. This is a war."
Yorick's hands were shaking. "Shamanic practices… tribal hierarchy… Commander, this is unprecedented! Trolls are supposed to be solitary! This is… a clan!"
"Flint sold us a pig in a poke." Cold fury crystallized in Eirik. He scanned the defile again, reassessing every rock, cave mouth, the slope, the ice.
Can we fight them?
He had seventy-three men. Frostfire. His Ice Conjuration. But the cost… Too high. Talons would die. Many. Against this? It would be massacre even if they won.
Moreover, he needed something other than just slaying these trolls. He needs the Crystal. The Crystal of the Frozen Heart. Its location was deep within the Serpent's Spine, in caves similar to these. But not necessarily these specific caves.
Can we bypass them? Unlikely. This defile was the most direct route deeper into the mountains. Scaling the sheer, ice-slick peaks around it? He'd need to grind his climbing skills a lot more, and then it'd be a crazy endeavor. This was not the thirty-feet hill he'd climbed in the wargame. These were fucking cliffs. Hundreds, some were thousands of feet. One mistake, and then he's dead forever. Going around would add weeks through equally dangerous territory.
Can we use them? The thought was dangerous, almost absurd. But it sparked. Flint wants the trolls cleared for his iron. I don't care about iron. I need access to deep caves.
The shaman's faintly pulsing crystals snagged his attention. Frost energy? Was there a connection? A source nearby?
Eirik focused his will, pushing mana into the command.
Identify.
[MANA EXPENDED: 1]
[MANA: 24/25]
Cool awareness washed over his mind. Words formed:
[CREATURE: Frost Troll Shaman]
[REALM: Roughly equivalent to Snow Rank 5 (Peak)]
[STATUS: Channeling ambient frost energy. Performing ritual maintenance.]
[DESCRIPTION: A tribal spiritual leader. Possesses innate attunement to elemental cold and rudimentary ritualistic magic. Strengthens kin, senses intruders, appeases perceived elemental spirits. Note: Crystal staff resonates with concentrated frost energy source proximity.]
The information flooded Eirik's thoughts. Snow Rank 5 equivalent? And able to channel ambient energy? Performing rituals? That staff… resonating?
The shaman finished its guttural chant. It slammed the horned beast head down onto the flat rock.
CRACK. Bone fragments skittered.
Then it raised the staff high. The crude crystals bound near its top – rough chunks of milky quartz veined with deep blue – pulsed faintly.
As the shaman held the staff aloft, the four feeding trolls paused. They lifted their massive, blood-smeared heads. Their beady eyes, dull with hunger moments before, seemed to sharpen. A low, collective growl rumbled in their chests.
The shaman lowered the staff, the thrum fading. The trolls returned to their feast, more focused now, movements less sluggish.
It's not just mumbo jumbo, Eirik realized. That ritual does something to energize and makes them more than just dumb brutes. And that staff… it's drawing power. From nearby? From deep underground?
He scanned the cave mouths again. The largest one, where the big trolls had emerged, yawned darkly. The shaman had come from a smaller, lower entrance near the ritual site. Symbols covered the rock around it – swirling patterns of ice frozen into stone, interspersed with crude drawings scratched deep.
"Commander?" Leif's voice was a tense whisper. "Did… did its stick glow?"
"Not glow," Eirik's eyes never leaving the shaman who was now placing the shattered beast head onto the bone pile like an offering. "Pulsed. It's channeling something."
Olaf shifted, axe grip tightening. "So smashing the witch first ain't just strategy, it's necessity. Cut the head off the snake."
Yorick, trembling slightly, scribbled on his wax tablet despite the cold. "Tribal hierarchy confirmed! Shamanic practice with observable effect! Commander, the resonance in the crystals... could it indicate a local source of concentrated frost energy? Like... ley lines? Or a manifestation site?"
Ley lines? Manifestation site? Yorick's scholarly babble clicked hard. The Crystal of the Frozen Heart. The system's description echoed: 'Found only in places where the world's cold has concentrated over centuries… Sites of Ancient Frost Elemental Manifestations.'
This is a manifestation site. Or damn close to one.
The shaman moved towards the smaller cave entrance. It paused at the threshold, sniffing the air deeply, turning its tusked head slowly side to side. Its beady eyes scanned the rim where Eirik and his men were hidden.
Eirik pressed himself flatter against the frozen rock, willing himself to be part of the landscape. His enhanced senses felt the faint prickle of something – a ripple of cold awareness emanating from the shaman, brushing over their hiding place like an icy breeze.
Leif sucked in a sharp, silent breath. Olaf went completely still. Yorick froze mid-scribble.
The shaman's gaze lingered on the jumbled rocks concealing them. It sniffed again, long and wet. Then, with a final guttural grunt, it turned and disappeared into the darkness of its cave.
A collective sigh of relief misted in the air. Olaf loosened his death grip on his axe handle. "Frost's teeth. Felt like it looked right through the damn rock."
"Its connection to this place... it's tangible, Commander. Those symbols likely act as wards or amplifiers." Yorick whispered, eyes wide.
Eirik's mind raced. The shaman sensed us. Or sensed the disturbance we represent. And if it can sense us, it can warn the others.
Flint's deception had landed them right on top of a hornet's nest with an alarm system. Seventy-three men charging down there is suicide.
"Bjorn, Goran," Eirik whispered, turning to the two Talons who had remained silent. "Mark this location precisely. Every cave entrance, every symbol you can see, the ritual site, the feeding ground. We need the layout burned into your minds."
"Aye, Commander!"
"Olaf, Leif," Eirik said, voice dropping even lower. "Forget fighting the tribe. How do we fight one? The shaman. How do we isolate it? Draw it out? Without bringing the whole tribe down on us?"
Leif frowned, thinking. "It came out for the ritual... but that seemed tied to the feeding, or maybe the light? It's weaker alone, Commander. Slower. But it senses us..."
"Bait," Olaf rumbled. "Proper bait. Somethin' loud. Somethin' annoyin'. Make the witch poke its head out, curious-like. Then we grab it. Quick and quiet. Like snatchin' a badger from its hole."
"Trap the bait?" Leif suggested. "Something that makes noise here," he pointed to a jumble of boulders midway down the slope opposite their position, "drawing its attention... while we hit it from here," he indicated a fissure closer to the shaman's cave entrance, partially concealed by a frozen waterfall.
Eirik studied the terrain. The proposed bait site was visible from the shaman's cave but partially shielded from the larger cave where the brutes were. The ambush fissure offered concealment and a direct line to the shaman's entrance.
It could work, if the Shaman was just as dumb as the Troll warriors. Which it clearly wasn’t.
It doesn't fetch its own meals. Those troll brutes down there would drag a mountain goat carcass right to its cave mouth before they let their witch-doctor risk itself.
Offer it noise? Curiosity might bring it out briefly, but cautious. And one shout from it, one pulse of that staff, and the entire defile erupts. We'd be fighting forty tons of furious troll in a kill-box.
His gaze locked onto the smaller cave where the shaman had vanished.
What would make it abandon caution?
The answer slammed into him: The source.
That shaman draws its power from something deep within these mountains. If we threaten the source, the shaman will react. Violently. Instinctively. It'd do anything protect the heart of its power.
Olaf shifted impatiently. "Well, Commander? Badger-snatchin' ain't gonna work itself."
"No, Olaf," Eirik said, his voice low but carrying to his small group. "Baiting the shaman directly won't work. It's too smart, too protected."
He gestured down at the feeding brutes and the dark cave mouths. "We need to bait all of them. Or at least, most of them. Make them leave their den."
Leif's brow furrowed. "Bait the entire tribe? Commander, we barely escaped notice crouched up here. How do we lure away dozens of ton-heavy trolls? Charge down screaming?"
"Not us directly," Eirik countered. "Not all of us. The majority of the Talons become the bait. Loud, aggressive, threatening. Drawing the trolls' attention away from this defile, away from the caves."
Olaf's eyes narrowed. "Draw 'em where? An' how do we survive that? Even with Frostfire, facin' that many…"
"To a prepared position," Eirik cut in, his mind racing through the terrain they'd scouted earlier. "Northwest. Remember that narrow ice canyon, half a mile back? Bottleneck entrance. Cliffs on both sides."
"We fortify it quickly. Logs, rocks, ice – make it a death trap. The Talons make a huge racket near the canyon mouth, lure the trolls in. Once they're committed, the rear guard seals the bottleneck with whatever we can – collapse ice, conjure a barrier – trapping the bulk of them inside."
"Hit them hard from the cliffs above with arrows, rocks, Frostfire. Harass them. Keep them busy, contained, and angry."
He saw the logic clicking for Leif first. The lieutenant's eyes scanned the invisible map. "The canyon… narrow enough to bottle them. If we can seal it quickly… High ground for harassment. Risky for the bait group, but possible. Better than charging this defile."
He paused, frowning. "But Commander, why draw them away unless…" His gaze snapped back to the shaman's cave. "…unless we plan to go in?"
"Exactly," Eirik stated flatly. A cold thrill shot through him, mixed with the sobering weight of the risk.
"While the main force draws the tribe's fury into that canyon, a small team infiltrates. Right here." He pointed at the shaman's cave entrance. "Down into the heart of their den. While they're distracted. While they're protecting what they think is the main threat."
The silence that followed was deeper, colder than before. Olaf blinked, momentarily speechless. Yorick let out a tiny, involuntary whimper. Bjorn and Goran exchanged wide-eyed glances.
"The… the heart of their den, Commander?" Yorick stammered, clutching his wax tablet like a shield. "With the shaman? Its rituals? Its power source? You mean… go inside… while the tribe is rampaging nearby?"
"Affirmative," Eirik said, his voice devoid of hesitation. "That's where the Crystal will be. Or where the path to it lies. Deepest, coldest point. Where the shaman draws its strength."
"We go in fast, quiet, find the Crystal, and get out before the tribe realizes the distraction was a feint."
Olaf finally found his voice. "That shaman sensed us hidin'! What happens when it senses us inside its sacred cave? An' what if the tribe don't all leave? What if some stay behind? Or the shaman itself stays?"
Leif's expression was grim. "Olaf's right, Commander. It's… audacious. But bordering on suicidal. Infiltrating the core of an enemy stronghold during a diversion? It relies on everything going perfectly."
"One mistake inside those caves… one troll guard left behind… one wrong turn…" He didn't finish the thought. They all knew. Death would be slow and messy.
Eirik met their worried gazes. He saw the fear, the doubt. It was justified. The plan was crazy.
Flint sold us death, Eirik thought. He knew exactly what was here. He threw us, the expendable bastard's band, to the trolls to soften them up or die trying. Why pay mercenaries when you can get desperate fools to walk into a meat grinder for free?
But walking away wasn't an option.
He needed that Crystal. Without it, he remained trapped at Peak Snow, vulnerable to the trouble currently brewing in Stormkeep.
The Talons needed legitimacy, coin, and a victory that wasn't just surviving an ambush. Retreating without even trying… it felt like surrender. It was surrender.
So, we play Flint's game, Eirik decided. But we play it smarter. We force a renegotiation. On our terms.
"You're right," Eirik said aloud. "It is crazy. And potentially suicidal. Charging into the storm's eye while it's raging? Foolish." He paused deliberately. "Which is why we don't do it… yet."
Leif tilted his head, puzzled. "Commander?"
"First," Eirik stated, rising slowly from his crouch but keeping below the skyline, "we pay a visit to Lord Arcturus Flint. It's time our esteemed employer learned the true nature of the 'vermin' infesting his iron vein."
"And it's time he paid appropriately for clearing a Troll Clan Stronghold led by a shaman."
Understanding dawned on Olaf's face, followed by a fierce grin. "Ha! Shove his lies down his throat!"
Yorick nodded vigorously. "Renegotiation based on material misrepresentation! The contract stipulated 'dens,' implying scattered, lesser trolls! This is a highly organized, magically supported clan structure! Breach of implied terms!"
"Precisely," Eirik said. "We don't fight his war blind. We force him to acknowledge the threat, and more importantly, pay the price for dealing with it."
If we vanish down that cave, he can't claim we just got lost. He sent us knowingly into a death trap. That's leverage.
He looked back at the shaman's cave. The Crystal probably is here. It can wait a few more days if it means securing victory.
"Olaf," Eirik ordered. "You, Bjorn, and Goran stay. Observe. Note patrol patterns, any changes. Count how many trolls come and go if you can."
"How many warriors, any other smaller ones like that shaman's apprentice we saw earlier. Everything. We need intelligence."
Olaf nodded crisply. "Understood, Commander. We'll be shadows."
"Yorick," Eirik turned. "Sketch everything you see down there. Especially those symbols near the shaman's cave. Make detailed notes on the ritual site, the bone piles. Flint might dismiss our word; physical evidence is harder to ignore."
Yorick pulled out his tablet. "Evidence! Contextual analysis! Yes, Commander!"
"Leif, you're with me," Eirik said, starting to inch back from the ridge. "We ride for Flint's Hold. With your mother. Time for a frank discussion about breach of contract and hazardous working conditions."
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The reek hit Eirik as he descended the familiar, uneven stone steps into the warren beneath the tavern.
Eirik didn’t bother knocking. He pushed the door open, the hinges groaning. Fisk spun, eyes wide with surprise, then immediately shifted into his manic merchant persona.
“Commander! Frost’s frozen balls, you startled me! Back so soon? Need more Frostfire? Batch number three is simmering! Quality control requires patience! Or…” He waggled his eyebrows. “…a rush fee?”
Eirik stepped inside, closing the door firmly behind him. The cramped space felt even more oppressive than usual. He surveyed the chaos – precariously stacked jars, stained parchment scrawled with formulas, pigeon feathers drifting in a draft. Fisk’s kingdom. Or his prison.
“We leave at first light, Fisk,” Eirik stated, his voice flat, cutting through Fisk’s chatter. “The Talons march north. You’re coming with us.”
Silence. The bubbling in the beaker suddenly seemed very loud.
Fisk’s grin froze, then slowly slid off his face like grease. “Leave? With you? North? To… where? Savage tribes? Trolls?” He let out a high-pitched, nervous giggle. “Commander, my noble friend! Jests! Always with the jests! Uncle Fisk is a humble purveyor of potions! My workshop… my birds… my delicate experiments! They require stability! Tenderness! Not… trolls and marching!” He spread his hands helplessly, gesturing at the cramped, reeking chaos. “This is home!”
Eirik took a deliberate step closer. Fisk instinctively flinched back, bumping into his workbench, rattling glassware.
“Home?” Eirik’s voice dropped. “How long do you think this ‘home’ lasts, Fisk, once I’m gone?”
Fisk blinked. “Gone? You mean… you leaving? Well! Business as usual! Fisk’s Fine Philtres endures! Discreet solutions—”
“—For discreet customers who suddenly become very indiscreet,” Eirik interrupted. He leaned forward slightly, making the small flame under the beaker flicker. “Let’s be frank. Earl Borin saw the Frostfire demonstration. He wants them. Badly. For his Skarl problem. How long before he sends men down here? Men who won’t politely ask for ‘Fisk’s Fine Frostfire’. They’ll take the recipe. They’ll take you. To a dark cell under Ironhelm Keep.”
Fisk’s face paled beneath the grime. “Borin? But… but the secrecy! Our arrangement!”
“Our arrangement ends the moment my protection vanishes,” Eirik stated ruthlessly. “You think Cedric’s guards care who skulks in the underbelly? Or that Ingrid Stormcrow wouldn’t pay handsomely for the alchemist who aided her disgraced stepson? Silence you permanently? Or worse, sell you to the highest bidder?”
He let the images sink in. “You’re a walking recipe book, Fisk. A valuable, vulnerable asset. And I’m the shield between you and everyone who wants what’s in your head.”
He saw the fear flicker deep in Fisk’s eyes cutting through the manic facade.
Good. He’s recognizing the threat.
“But…” Fisk stammered, clutching at straws. “The flasks! Only you can make the ice flasks! They need you too!”
“They need the idea,” Eirik countered sharply. “They need the fuel blend. They need the alchemist who can replicate it. The ice? That’s a hurdle. They’ll find a way. Clay pots? Reinforced leather sacks? Crude, messy, dangerous… but they’ll try. And while they experiment, they’ll have you locked up, working until your hands blister and your mind breaks, churning out your ‘signature blend’ for their war machine. Is that the future you want? Tending pigeons in a cell?”
Fisk visibly shuddered. He looked around his workshop again, but now with dawning horror, seeing not comfort, but the trap it was. His shoulders slumped slightly. “So… no choice? Follow the Commander or become Borin’s lab rat?”
“Choice?” Eirik allowed a cold smile to touch his lips. “I’m offering more than escape, Fisk. I’m offering partnership. True partnership. You think Frostfire is impressive? That’s a child’s sparkler compared to what else I know.” He tapped his temple. “Knowledge from… elsewhere. Places where alchemy is a science, not just potions and prayers.”
Fisk’s eyes snapped back to his, curiosity momentarily overriding fear. “Elsewhere? Science?”
Eirik pressed the advantage. He picked up a lump of dirty saltpeter from Fisk’s bench. “This. Combined with charcoal and sulfur. Finely ground. Encased properly. Ignited rapidly.” He looked Fisk dead in the eye. “Imagine a blast that doesn’t just burn, Fisk. It shatters. Stone walls. Armored gates. Whole squads of men, vanished in smoke and thunder.”
Fisk’s jaw dropped. He stared at the saltpeter as if seeing it for the first time. “S-shatters? Thunder? Like… dwarven blasting powder? But controlled?”
“More powerful. More reliable,” Eirik affirmed. He gestured vaguely. “Liquids that freeze flesh solid on contact. Powders that choke entire battalions far worse than your Cloud. Devices that spit fire continuously, like a dragon’s breath. Healing salves that knit wounds in days, not weeks.” Lay it on thick. “This is just the beginning, Fisk. The rudiments. And you? You have the talent. The instinct. The… practical genius.”
He paused, letting the flattery sink in. “Stuck down here, you’re a talented rat. With me? You become indispensable. Master Alchemist to the Talons. Architect of destruction. Purveyor of miracles. Your name won’t be whispered in back alleys, Fisk. It will be feared across the Northern Reaches. And the wealth?” Eirik let his smile widen. “Forget talons. Think chests of gold. Think estates. Think a workshop bigger than this tavern, stocked with everything you ever dreamed of… funded by terrified kings and grateful lords paying top coin for your inventions.”
He saw it happening. The fear was still there, but now warring with a fierce, greedy excitement. Fisk’s eyes were wide, gleaming with avarice and the dawning horror of being left behind. He’s picturing it. The wealth, the prestige, the power. The chance to play with bigger, more dangerous toys.
“Indispensable?” Fisk whispered, his voice thick with longing. “Master Alchemist?”
“You’re the only one who can bridge the gap between my knowledge and reality,” Eirik stated flatly. “Without you, Frostfire is just a nasty trick. With you? We create legends. And legends pay exceptionally well.” He gestured around the dingy room. “Is this… this… worth clinging to? When I’m offering you the keys to a kingdom built on fire and ice? Or do you want to wait for Borin’s men to kick down your door?”
Fisk looked frantically around his beloved, filthy workshop. At the cooing pigeons. At the bubbling, potentially unstable brew. The fear of Ironhelm’s dungeons warred violently with the intoxicating vision Eirik painted. Gold. Fear. Power. A legacy beyond pigeon shit and stinkbombs.
He swallowed hard, his throat working. “My… my birds?” he asked weakly, a last grasp at his old life.
“Bring them,” Eirik said, a flicker of ruthless pragmatism in his eyes. “They might be useful. Early warning.” Or target practice if they annoy Olaf. “But decide now. Pack only what’s essential. Your tools. Your most precious ingredients. Notes. We leave before dawn. Yorick will bring crates. The wagon can handle it.”
He turned towards the door, the unspoken ultimatum hanging heavy in the chemical-laden air. “Be ready, Master Alchemist. Or stay here, and see who knocks next.”
"W-Wait!"
Fisk voice cracked. He waved his arms wildly. "Look! My life's work! The pigeons! They need me! Their digestive rhythms are crucial for catalysts! And the notes! Years of research scribbled on walls, on floorboards! I can't just grab a satchel and go! It's impossible!"
He clutched his head, staggering back until he bumped a tower of empty clay jars. They wobbled threateningly. "Borin? Ingrid? Fine! Terrifying! But packing in hours? Are you mad? I need time! Weeks! To organize, to crate, to stabilize volatile extracts! One jolt, one warm patch, and BOOM! Goodbye Fisk, goodbye wagon, goodbye Commander's eyebrows!"
Eirik watched the alchemist unravel.
"Fisk," Eirik cut through the babble, his voice flat and cold. "Look at me."
Fisk flinched, his darting eyes locking onto Eirik's steely gaze. The unblinking intensity forced stillness upon him.
"You are right," Eirik stated, surprising him. "It is chaos. Moving a workshop overnight? Insane." He gestured dismissively around the cramped space. "But this? This isn't a workshop worthy of the Master Alchemist I need. It's a hovel. A dangerous hovel."
Fisk blinked. "W-worthy?"
"Yes," Eirik pressed, leaning in. "Think, Fisk. You believe staying is safe? Let me paint reality. Borin's men won't ask politely for Frostfire recipes. They'll kick in this door. They won't care about digestive rhythms. They'll see unstable mixtures, strange smells, and a twitchy little man who screams 'guilty secret'. They'll drag you out. Dump your precious jars wherever they land. Your notes? Tinder for their campfire. Your pigeons? Stew."
He saw genuine horror flicker in Fisk's eyes at the thought of his birds in a pot.
"Your life's work, Fisk, ends here. Smashed, scattered, forgotten. Because you clung to rubble."
He let that sink in. "Now," Eirik's voice shifted, becoming less harsh. "I'm not asking you to abandon it. I'm offering you a chance to save it. To build something better. Out there."
He pointed towards the ceiling, towards the world above. "The Talons have a heavy wagon. Reinforced. Yorick is gathering sturdy crates right now. Pack your essentials: tools, irreplaceable catalysts – carefully secured. Your most vital notes. We have saltpeter. Sulfur. Charcoal. The core ingredients. We have the means to pack them safely. Cold isn't a problem; we are masters of cold."
Fisk's eyes darted to his bubbling pots, to the stained parchment. Hope warred with terror. "But the birds! Commander! My early-warning system! My friends!"
"Bring them," Eirik stated. Sentiment is weakness, but practical use? That I can justify. "We'll cage them securely. They serve a purpose. But understand: What you leave behind is forfeit. Ingrid or Borin's men will ransack this place. But what you bring becomes the seed of your new workshop. A mobile workshop."
"Think, Fisk! A dedicated space on campaign! Protected by the Talons! Your experiments not confined to a cellar, but tested in the field! Your genius applied to real problems, with immediate feedback!"
He saw the spark.
"The saltpeter mixtures? The frozen-flesh liquids? The dragon-breath devices? They aren't fantasies for later. They are possibilities for now. But only if you are there. Only if you have the materials, the space, and the protection to work. Staying here consigns your 'genius' to a dungeon or a grave. Coming with me makes you Master Alchemist Fisk, architect of victory, swimming in gold and fear. Choose. But choose now."
Eirik turned decisively towards the door. "Yorick arrives with crates in ten minutes. Pack what you can save. Prioritize. Tools. Catalysts. Notes. Birds. Anything else slows us down and risks your new beginning. Decide if you want to be a footnote in Stormkeep's gutters or a legend forged in Frostfire."
He pulled the door open and simply stepped halfway out. "One hour, Fisk. Your future starts now. Or ends here." He paused, leaving the door ajar, a silent ticking clock and a path to salvation hanging in the reeking air.
Fisk stood frozen for three heartbeats that felt like an eternity. The Commander's words echoed, clashing with the terror of leaving his nest. Borin's dungeon. Ingrid's quiet knife. His pigeons… stew. The image of his notes feeding a soldier's campfire made bile rise in his throat.
Then the other image surged: Gold. Fear. A mobile fortress-laboratory. Saltpeter mixtures that shatter stone. His hands twitched. One hour.
"AAAAARGH!"
He let out a half-scream, half-warcry. Then, he exploded into motion.
"Tools! My babies!" He lunged for a heavy leather roll near his main bench, unfurling it to reveal meticulously maintained glassware, metal tools, and small ceramic mortars. He scooped it up and dumped it into the sturdiest wooden crate he could find.
"Catalysts! The volatile ones! Frostbite lilies!" He scrambled towards a shelf lined with peculiar jars sealed with wax and leather. He grabbed two containing dark, viscous liquids and a third filled with shimmering blue crystals. He handled them with sudden care, wedging them tightly into the crate, cushioning them with scraps of sacking.
"Notes! The good ones!" His eyes darted frantically around the walls, floorboards, piles of parchment. He ripped down several large, annotated sheets – formulas for pressure containment, viscosity modifiers, combustion accelerants. He scooped up a thick, battered journal bound in greasy leather from under a pile of feathers. The Black Book. Core formulations. Irreplaceable. He shoved it deep into the crate.
He spun, looking at his bubbling beakers. One contained a near-complete batch of Frostfire fuel. "The batch! Can't leave it!" He grabbed thick leather gloves, snatched the beaker off its stand, cursing as the hot glass seared through the leather. He spotted a thick ceramic jug, emptied its contents onto the floor, and upended the bubbling fuel into it, slapping a wax-sealed stopper on top. Into the crate it went.
His eyes fell on the pigeons, cooing obliviously. "My darlings! Your doom approaches!" He scrambled towards their roost, a chaotic mess of nested boxes. He spotted a large wicker basket buried under burlap sacks. "Perfect! Mobile coop!" He dumped out the sacks, grabbed the startled birds – six of them – ignoring indignant coos and flapping wings, and shoved them into the basket. He tied the top shut with frantic haste. "Quiet now! Adventure awaits!"
He dragged the bird basket towards the crate. Ten minutes! Barely started! His gaze swept his domain: shelves of rare herbs, jars of powdered minerals, racks of unique extracts, his precious pressure cooker rig, the pigeon guano collector... All doomed. Left behind for Borin's thugs to smash or Ingrid's agents to plunder. A sob choked him.
But saltpeter that shatters stone...
He whimpered, then launched himself at a small chest bolted near his sleeping pallet. The Reserve. He fumbled with a complex lock, fingers trembling. Inside, nestled in padded compartments, were his absolute treasures: crystallized Manticore venom, a chunk of raw Starfall Iron, a sealed lead box containing Void Ash, and a small bag of flawless frost diamonds – his 'retirement fund'. He grabbed the chest itself, slamming the lid shut.
He staggered back to the main crate, sweating and gasping. He shoved the reserve chest inside. The crate was almost overflowing. The essence! The heart! His eyes landed on a large clay amphora in the darkest corner. The Mother Batch. Years old, constantly refined, the foundational suspension for half his best work. Too big! Too heavy! Despair threatened to drown him.
Thumping footsteps from the stairs froze him. More than one person.
Borin's men?! Already?! Terror seized him. He abandoned the amphora, scrambling back to his crate and bird basket like a cornered animal.
The door swung wider. Not Borin's brutes. Yorick the scribe followed by two burly Talons – Gorm and Knut. They carried sturdy wooden crates and coils of rope.
"Master Fisk?" Yorick called out, wrinkling his nose against the stench. "The Commander sent us. For your essentials?"
Relief flooded Fisk so intensely he nearly wept. Not Borin. Help. Crates!
"Yes! Essentials! Save what we can! Hurry!" Fisk babbled, pointing frantically. "That crate! Full! Seal it tight! The birds! Carefully! And THAT!" He pointed at his main distillation apparatus. "Dismantle! Carefully! The copper coils! The condenser! All of it! Pack it! Pad it! It's vital!"
Gorm and Knut exchanged a dubious look. The apparatus looked complex and fragile.
Yorick sighed, pulling out his ledger. "Inventory. One crate, contents unknown, sealed. One bird container. One alchemical apparatus, to be dismantled." He started scribbling. "Commander said essentials, Master Fisk. We move at first light. Dawn is in three hours."
"These are essentials!" Fisk shrieked. "Vital apparatus! The beating heart of future innovations! Without it, genius is shackled! Now HURRY!"
He danced around the Talons as they cautiously approached the still-bubbling equipment, babbling instructions that sounded more like alchemical incantations.
Eirik oversaw the final loading. The heavy wagon, already laden with crates of rations, bundled gambesons, and rolls of tarpaulin, now bore extra cargo. Fisk's overflowing crate, lashed down securely. The large wicker bird basket, covered with heavy cloth to quiet the indignant cooing. Several smaller crates containing the dismantled pieces of Fisk's distillation rig.
And Fisk himself, perched on the wagon bench while clutching his small reserve chest like a baby, his eyes wide and scanning the shadowed battlements as if expecting crossbow bolts.
It's done. Barely. Eirik felt a small triumph. Fisk was a powder keg on wheels, but he was their powder keg now. The potential outweighed the risk. Barely.
Leif approached, his breath misting. He glanced at the wagon and its new occupants. "The last perimeter guards have reported in, Commander. All quiet. The sentries at the main gate haven't changed since midnight. Gate Commander is Sven Ironhand. Known to be pragmatic, but loyal to the Baron."
"Good," Eirik nodded. Pragmatic was good. It meant Sven was unlikely to ask awkward questions if things looked official. "The deployment orders?"
"Presented to the Gatehouse an hour ago, as instructed," Leif confirmed. "Signed by the Baron. They expect our departure."
Olaf stomped over. "Lads are formed up, Commander!" He grinned ferally. "Trolls'll warm 'em up right quick!"
Eirik surveyed his company. Seventy-three souls. Ragged street fighters now clad in stiff, new padded armor, looking uncomfortable but marginally more soldier-like. Isolde Fenrir sat beside Yorick, wrapped in a thick fur cloak. Harkin stood near the front, checking the harness on the lead mule.
We are a patchwork legion, Eirik thought. Held together by fear, coin, necessity, and my will. Let's see how long the stitches hold.
He strode to the front, turning to face the assembled Talons. The weak grey light of false dawn was bleeding into the eastern sky, outlining Stormkeep's grim bulk behind them. Silence fell, broken only by the stamp of a hoof and a muffled pigeon coo.
"TALONS!" Eirik's voice cut through the frigid air. "You've trained. You've been equipped. You've been paid. Now comes the proving ground. North. Ice Trolls infesting Lord Flint's iron mine." He gestured subtly towards the wagon where Fisk shivered. "We fight smart. We fight together. The Talons walk in. We walk out victorious. Understood?"
A ragged roar answered him. "AYE, COMMANDER!"
"Squad leaders! Check your lines! Olaf, Leif! Mount up! DRIVER!" Eirik barked. "Move out! Take us through the gate!"
The coachman snapped the reins. "HYAH!" The wagon lurched forward.
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Seated behind the desk, Cedric Stormcrow wore a simple tunic of dark wool, the Stormcrow raven embroidered over his heart. To Cedric's right, Earl Borin Ironhelm slouched in a heavy wooden armchair that seemed too small for him. He nursed a large tankard of ale, already half-empty despite the early hour. His face was ruddy, his russet-grey beard slightly damp. He grinned around the rim as Eirik entered.
To Cedric's left stood Rurik Stormcrow. His half-brother wore impeccable dark blue wool over practical leather armor. His expression was attentive neutrality, but his dark eyes were sharp, scanning Eirik from boots to hairline.
"You sent for me, Lord Father?" Eirik's voice projected calm he didn't entirely feel. He bowed crisply towards Cedric and then slightly towards Borin. "Lord Earl."
Cedric didn't offer a seat. "Commander Stormcrow." The use of the title was deliberate, acknowledging Eirik's new position while maintaining distance. "Earl Borin requires details on the deployment of your… Talons." His gaze flickered towards the sheaf of parchment in Eirik's hand. "I understand you intend to leave Stormkeep territory."
Eirik stepped forward, placing the muster roll and deployment plan on Cedric's desk. "Yes, Lord Father. Lord Earl. I present the muster roll for the Talons and our initial deployment plan, submitted as protocol requires."
Borin leaned forward, his chair creaking. "Deployment? Already? Bit eager to spend your new coin, aren't you lad?" He chuckled, taking a deep swig. "Or just eager to be away from the nest?"
Eirik met Borin's gaze squarely. "Eager for practical field experience, Lord Earl. The Talons are green. Drills can only teach so much. They need to face a real threat, learn to work as a unit under pressure." He gestured at the papers. "And we have secured a contract."
Cedric's eyebrows lifted almost imperceptibly. He picked up the muster roll, scanning the neatly written names. "Seventy-three men?" He looked up. "And you propose to take them… where, precisely?"
"North, Lord Father. To the foothills bordering Lord Arcturus Flint's territory" Eirik answered factually. "A significant source of high-grade iron ore has been discovered there, vital for forging weapons against the Skarl raiders. However, the access tunnels and surrounding valleys are heavily infested with Ice Troll dens. Lord Flint's men have suffered casualties trying to clear them."
Borin slammed his tankard down. "Ice Trolls! Frost's frozen balls, lad! Sending your fresh recruits against Trolls? That's not field experience, that's suicide! Those things peel knights out of plate like walnuts!" He looked at Cedric. "Cedric, surely you see the folly? These… Talons… will be minced meat!"
Exactly the reaction Ingrid would love. Proof of recklessness. Eirik kept his expression neutral. "Respectfully, Lord Earl, the Talons aren't intended as heavy infantry to meet a Troll charge head-on. That would be suicide. Our approach leverages preparation, terrain, and specialized tools."
He pointed to a section of the deployment plan. "We will operate in small squads. Utilizing elevated positions, choke points, and natural obstacles. We'll employ extensive pit traps – deep, spiked trenches camouflaged with snow and weak ice. Trolls are powerful but clumsy and predictable in their aggression." He paused, meeting Cedric's gaze. "And we possess a tool well-suited to vermin clearance in enclosed spaces."
The implication hung heavy in the air. Borin's eyes widened with dawning comprehension.
"Frostfire," Cedric stated flatly.
"Yes, Lord Father," Eirik confirmed. "Properly deployed into a Troll den entrance or baited into a prepared kill zone, a Frostfire bomb incinerates the contents within moments. It bypasses the need for protracted melee against superior physical strength. Efficient. Relatively low risk to my personnel… compared to conventional assault tactics. Lord Flint's Master-at-Arms, Captain Torvin, has approved the contract. He sees the value in our… method."
Borin whistled low. "Using those fire jars on Troll dens… Frost's teeth, that is clever. Nasty business, but clever. Smoke the bastards out and roast 'em alive in their holes!" He stroked his beard. "Flint gets his mine. You get paid and blood your pups. Efficient indeed. How many jars you taking?"
How much do I reveal? Borin might want some for himself. "A sufficient quantity for the estimated dens, Lord Earl. Production is… intensive. We cannot spare any beyond our operational requirements at this time." Eirik saw the brief flash of disappointment. He wants the toys. "However, upon successful completion and return, scaled production may become feasible."
"Hmmph," Borin grunted, reaching for his tankard again. "See that it does. Could use a few dozen of those things myself. Skarls love their caves too."
Cedric had been silently assessing the papers and Eirik's responses. He finally set the deployment plan down. "The muster roll… Leif Fenrir. You list him as a Lieutenant."
"Yes, Lord Father," Eirik replied, prepared for this. "He commanded the shield wall that held Gunnar's veterans during the war game. He followed orders under pressure. He possesses valuable tactical training and understands Northern warfare better than most recruits. His position… encourages House Fenrir's continued loyalty and investment."
"And… Olaf?"
"My senior lieutenant and drillmaster, Lord Father. Experienced. Fiercely loyal. Knows how to forge discipline in raw recruits. He commands the men's respect."
Cedric leaned back slightly, steepling his fingers. "You move with speed and… audacity, Son. Mustering a force, forging weapons of war, securing contracts beyond your station, deploying against dangerous foes barely a month after crawling out of your hovel." He paused, his gaze boring into Eirik. "You exceed expectations. Consistently."
Is that approval? Or suspicion? Eirik kept his posture rigid. "Survival demanded action, Lord Father. Stagnation was death."
"Indeed," Cedric murmured.
Rurik chose that moment to speak.
"It truly is remarkable, Eirik. The transformation." He offered a smile. "I confess, when news first trickled south, I scarcely believed it. The Eirik I remember… well." He chuckled. "Forgive my nostalgia, but seeing you stand here now, commanding men, forging alliances… it brings back memories. Perhaps not the happiest for you, but memories nonetheless."
Eirik kept his face neutral. "We all carry our pasts, Rurik."
"We do," Rurik agreed amiably. He took a small step forward. "Do you remember the pond? Behind the old stables? Where the willow hung low?" He smiled reminiscently. "Garrick always tried to push you in. Poor Harkin nearly drowned trying to fish you out one time when he succeeded. He was always getting into scrapes trying to look out for you." He chuckled again, shaking his head. "He had such a fierce spirit."
The pond. Eirik's mind raced, sifting through fragmented memories. Flashes. Cold water soaking ragged clothes. Garrick's mocking laughter. Smaller hands grabbing his arm, hauling him coughing towards the bank. Harkin's face, furious and determined. The smell of wet hay and horse dung.
He held Rurik's gaze.
"I remember," Eirik said. He deliberately didn't elaborate. "Harkin always had courage."
Rurik's smile didn't falter. "He did. Still does, I hear." He smoothly shifted gears. "And what about old Hobb? The stablemaster? Gods, he terrified me when I was small. That scar across his nose. Always smelling of liniment and horse sweat. He caught you trying to feed that lame mare sugar cubes once, remember? Roared like a bear. Said you'd make her colic. Chased you halfway to the gatehouse." He laughed softly, inviting Eirik to share the memory. "You were fast, even then. When you were scared."
Old Hobb. The scar. The smell – liniment, sweat, leather. Images surfaced: the warmth of the mare's muzzle, the illicit thrill of the sugar cube, the sudden bellow like thunder, the terrifying sight of Hobb's scarred face looming, the instinctive bolt of fear sending him sprinting across the courtyard.
He's checking key details. Things only someone who lived here would know. Eirik forced a slight, tight smile. "Hobb's bellow could curdle milk. He had a soft spot for the horses, though. Feared incompetence more than anything."
"True enough," Rurik nodded. His eyes were still locked on Eirik's, searching for a flicker, a hesitation. "A harsh teacher, but effective. Do you ever wonder what became of him? Retired to his daughter's farm near Frosthold, I believe. Still alive, last I heard."
It was a casual question, designed to see if Eirik would invent something unknowable.
Eirik shrugged minutely. "He earned his peace." I don't know where he went. Best I don't pretend to.
Rurik studied him for another long moment. The silence stretched, thick and uncomfortable. Borin shifted, looking faintly bored by the reminiscing. Cedric watched, his face unreadable, but his eyes sharp, observing the interplay between his sons.
Finally, Rurik nodded again, his polite smile returning. "He did. Well." He turned slightly towards Cedric and Borin, gracefully stepping back. "My apologies. Seeing Eirik so… capable… brought back the past vividly. The journey he's undertaken is astonishing." He turned his warm gaze back to Eirik. "Truly astonishing. A testament to House Stormcrow's hidden strengths."
He doesn't have proof. But he's not convinced I'm me. Eirik felt a chill that had nothing to do with the room's temperature. Ingrid's whispers found fertile ground.
"Commander Stormcrow's initiative is… notable," Cedric stated, reclaiming control. "The Flint contract serves a useful purpose – removing a pestilence and aiding an allied lord." He tapped the muster roll. "These seventy souls are now your responsibility. Their conduct reflects upon Stormkeep. See they do not shame the raven." His gaze was hard. "You have your orders. Dismissed. Be ready to depart at first light, tomorrow. Report any significant developments via messenger."
Eirik bowed. "Understood, Lord Father. Lord Earl." He turned crisply and walked towards the door, feeling Rurik's eyes on his back like twin daggers of ice.
Just before he reached the door, Borin's voice boomed out, thick with ale and sudden thought. "Hold there, Commander!"
Eirik turned, hand on the iron door handle. "Lord Earl?"
Borin grinned. "Almost forgot! That Frostfire display… impressive bang! Got me thinking. About those Skarl caves near Deepfrost Pass. Perfect bottle-neck. Three, maybe four of your fancy jars dropped at the entrance as they come charging out at dawn…" He chuckled darkly. "Be a sight cleaner than trying to root them out blade by blade. When you get back… we will be talking bulk orders. Twenty-five talons is steep… but we'll talk. Depend on it!"
Eirik inclined his head. "As you say, Lord Earl. We will discuss it upon our return." He pushed the heavy door open, stepping out into the cooler, slightly musty air of the corridor. He pulled it shut behind him with a solid thunk.
———
Back to their temporary camp, Eirik spotted Yorick hunched over a makeshift table cobbled together from crates near the central hearth.
"Commander! The payments! They arrived!" Yoric gestured frantically at a heavy, locked iron chest pushed against the wall. "Mender’s advance! Aksel’s! Stonefist and Knife’s Edge! All here!"
Eirik’s fatigue momentarily lifted, replaced by fierce satisfaction. Finally. He crossed the stone floor in three strides, the sound echoing in the near-empty hall. Most Talons were likely at their final drill or packing gear. "Excellent, Yorick. The totals? Combined with our reserves?" He knelt, the cold stone biting through his leathers, and inspected the chest. It looked satisfyingly solid. He pulled the key Olaf had given him from his belt pouch. He must be close to that five thousand target.
He inserted the key. The lock clicked with a heavy, final sound. Eirik lifted the lid.
Inside, nestled in rough burlap sacks, gleamed thousands of silver talons. The Stormcrow raven stamped on each coin caught the candlelight. It looked like a king’s ransom.
Yorick shuffled closer, his ledger clutched like a shield. "C-Commander… the sums… they are substantial. But…" He swallowed hard.
"But?" Eirik’s voice was dangerously calm. He kept his gaze on the coins, sensing the but was about to drop like an anvil. Don’t say it. Not now.
"It’s… it’s not five thousand, Commander." Yorick’s voice dropped to a whisper. He opened his ledger with trembling fingers. "Allow me… please."
Eirik straightened slowly and nodded.
Yorick traced a grimy finger down a column. "Total inflow of the Frostfire advances: Silas Mender’s seven hundred and fifty for thirty units. Aksel’s five hundred for twenty. Stonefist’s seven fifty for thirty. Knife’s Edge five hundred for twenty. That… that totals…" He did a quick mental sum. "Twenty-five hundred."
Eirik nodded. "And our previous reserve? It should be over two thousand. Combined… four thousand, pushing five?"
Yorick flinched. "Ah, Commander… our reserve was two thousand three hundred and eighty talons after the feast, yes. But… that was before we became a company of seventy-three men."
Ah. Eirik closed his eyes for a split second. Soldiers cost money. Especially ones who would risk their life on ice trolls.
Yorick plowed on. "We have seventy-three mouths to feed, Commander. Seventy-three bodies to clothe, arm, and shelter. You declared the Talons a mercenary company. You promised wages."
He flipped a page. "First week’s wages for seventy-three men, at the standard recruit rate you authorized? Five silver talons per week per man? Three hundred and sixty-five talons. Paid yesterday. As per contract."
Eirik felt the number with gravity. When he was alone, every copper he scavenged or earned went straight into his pouch. Now? Now he had an insatiable beast to feed.
Logistics. What makes empires crumble.
Yorick wasn’t done. "Then… equipment. Commander, we started with fifty street fighters in rags and Fenrir hand-me-downs. We need to be a functional fighting force. Basic gambesons for all? Standard padded armor? Five talons each? Three hundred and sixty-five talons. Ordered and half-paid for delivery before we leave." He paused, seeing the storm gathering in Eirik’s eyes. "Spare boots. Socks. Mittens. Against this cold? Easily another fifty talons." Four hundred and fifteen.
He tapped another entry. "Weapons maintenance. Sharpening stones, honing oil, leather for grips, spare spearheads for those using scavenged gear… thirty talons. Food for seventy-three men for the week-long journey to Flint’s territory, plus reserves? Another hundred talons. Feed for the four pack mules we just acquired? Twenty talons. Tarps for shelter, extra ropes for climbing, basic medical supplies – honey, clean linen, needle and gut? Forty talons." One hundred and ninety more. Total bleed: Nearly eight hundred talons in a single week, on top of wages.
The numbers cascaded. Yorick pointed to the chest. "Combined with our previous reserve and the Frostfire advances… total available funds are… three thousand eight hundred and seventy talons."
Silence descended, thick and heavy, broken only by the crackle of the hearth and the frantic flutter of pages as Yorick nervously double-checked. Eirik stared at the ledger, then the chest full of silver that suddenly seemed pitifully small. Three thousand, eight hundred and seventy.
[Tutorial Quest #3 (Stewardship): Build A Warchest - 3,870 / 5,000 Silver Talons]
The system prompt pulsed in his vision. So close. And yet… one thousand, one hundred and thirty talons short. Not ‘pushing five’. Miles away.
Yorick wilted under the oppressive silence. "Commander… I… I apologize. Perhaps I should recalculate…"
Eirik held up a hand, cutting him off. "No, Yorick. Your numbers are sound. You kept the accounts faithfully." He looked around the dim hall – at the stacked crates of basic gear, the burlap sacks of black bread near the hearth, the faint smell of men and leather and cold stone. This was his creation. His responsibility.
And it devoured silver like a dragon.
He slammed the chest lid shut. The heavy thud echoed. What other choice is there? Delay? Staying invites scrutiny, sabotage, stagnation. The system quest could wait. He will find another way.
He met Yorick’s worried gaze. "Secure the chest. Pack everything essential. We move out at first light, as ordered. The Talons get their boots, their gambesons, and their rations. Everything they need."
Yorick nodded vigorously. "Understood, Commander! Immediately!"
Eirik turned away from the chest, his gaze swept the camp, landing on Olaf barking orders, Leif quietly checking spear shafts against a list, Isolde Fenrir directing two Talons packing medical supplies with quiet efficiency. It was great to see his men working with the urgency he always demanded of himself.
But one piece is missing. One critical piece… and I might not get another chance to secure him.
The image of the dank cellar workshop, filled with volatile fumes and manic energy, flashed in his mind.
Fisk.
He was happy here. He had his dank kingdom. Stormkeep, for all its dangers, was his home. Asking him to leave meant asking him to trade relative security for the unknown dangers of the road, a mercenary camp, and active warzones. It meant trusting Eirik with his life, not just his profits.
How do you bait a creature of chaos and greed?
Eirik strode towards inside. "Olaf! Final gear checks. Leif! Rations and water – double the estimates. Isolde! Coordinate with Yorick on the manifests." His commands snapped out, crisp and clear, cutting through the low murmur of preparation. "I have one last recruit to secure before we depart."
Leif looked up, a flicker of surprise crossing his face. "A recruit, Commander? This late? Who?"
"Our master alchemist." Eirik said, already pulling the heavy door open.
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A single lantern cast flickering shadows on the worn map table where Eirik Stormcrow stood, flanked by his inner circle: Olaf, Leif Fenrir, Isolde, Harkin, and Yorick clutching his wax tablet.
"The payment?" Eirik’s eyes fixed on Yorick.
"Tomorrow, Commander. Harkin's contact confirmed. Final transfers clear at dawn. We'll have the full talons by mid-morning."
Eirik nodded. Good. "Supplies?"
Harkin stepped forward, jabbing at the map. "On track. Hardtack, smoked meat, dried fruit – secured. Ale casks acquired, thanks to Lady Fenrir's contacts." He nodded toward Isolde. "Medical basics: salves, bandages, stitching gut. Not enough for a siege, but for patrols. Also climbing gear. Ropes, hooks, spikes. Basic tents and tarps. We're cobbled together, Commander, but we won't freeze immediately."
Olaf grunted. "The lads are restless. They see the preparations, smell movement. Grinding axes, patching leathers, swapping tales of Ice Trolls. Morale's sturdy. For ditch-diggers turned soldiers."
Leif shifted, gaze flickering between Eirik and the map. "Captain Torvin is intrigued. Flint's Master-at-Arms thinks we're reckless fools eager for coin and troll-blood. He's willing to give us the contract. Small advance on proof of troll kill. Full payment per cleared den. He mentioned 'deep sinkholes' near the iron vein being particularly nasty."
Heavy silence followed. They all knew the risks. Deep ice caves meant confined spaces, cave-ins, ambushes, things worse than trolls. Olaf cracked his knuckles. Leif's jaw tightened. Yorick nervously scribbled.
Eirik leaned forward, palms flat on the table. "We leave day after tomorrow. First light. Olaf, Leif, final drills tomorrow. Emphasize formation shifts in rough terrain, ambush response. Harkin, Yorick – supplies loaded by dusk tomorrow."
"Aye! Commander."
His men slammed a fist to his chest in salute, and hurried out. Isolde Fenrir moved towards the door with them.
"Isolde." Eirik's voice stopped her mid-stride. "A moment. Alone."
She turned sharply. The door clicked shut behind the others. Eirik gestured to a stool opposite the map table. "Sit."
Isolde remained standing near the door. "Commander Stormcrow. The hour is late. What requires my presence alone?"
Eirik leaned against the table, crossing his arms. "Preparation is precisely why we need to speak. But not about barrels or bandages." He paused. "Wouldn't you say our fates have become rather intricately entwined?"
A flicker of wary surprise crossed her face. "Entwined? You offered House Fenrir survival. I accepted. It is a contract, however unorthodox."
"A contract forged in blood," Eirik countered. "Your son's blood, mostly. " He saw her flinch. "It goes deeper than parchment and pledges. What happens to me, happens to Leif. What happens to Leif, happens to Fenrir."
He pushed off the table, stepping closer. "Because of this entanglement, I'm going to share something critically confidential. " His voice dropped. "If you hear it, you bind your fate to mine irrevocably. There will be no unhearing i"
Isolde stared at him. "What could possibly be more perilous than troll-infested mountains?"
"The mountains are a threat we can fight with steel and fire," Eirik said flatly. "The danger I speak of is a knife aimed at the back. Right here. Right now." He held her gaze. "Hearing this ensures you're fully committed to navigating this threat with me."
Isolde went very still.
"The 'big deal', Isolde," Eirik continued, "is that upon my return from dealing with those trolls… there's a very real possibility I will be burned at the stake."
The words hung like poison gas. Isolde's breath hitched. Her hand flew to her throat, color draining from her face.
"What? Burned? For what? Cedric wouldn't—"
"Not Cedric," Eirik cut her off. "Ingrid. And Rurik. They're building a case now. As we stand here. A case of heresy. Dark magic. Or possession."
He saw the dawning horror. "The Frostfire… the ice… my sudden 'ascension'… they have Marta, likely others. Testimonies about 'Spineless Eirik' one day, and whatever I am now, the next. They have the shattered Eye of Snow. They'll spin the tale of a bastard touched by forbidden powers."
His voice was cold, analytical. "Ingrid practically painted the target tonight, whispering about 'born of pure Frost' and 'defying craftsmanship'. She put doubt in Borin's ear, but more importantly, in Rurik's mind. Rurik serves the Earl. He understands threats. Especially unnatural ones."
Isolde swayed, bracing against the doorframe. "Heresy… But you have no magic! It's just tricks! Resourcefulness!"
Eirik barked a humorless laugh. "Proof? Reason? They matter little in a heresy trial fueled by political ambition and fear. Ingrid doesn't need proof, only enough suspicion to demand a Temple investigation. They'll find 'witnesses'. They'll twist every strange thing I've done into evidence of corruption."
He let the picture sink in. "So I ask you again, Isolde. Are you certain you wish to hear what comes next? Because knowing it will make you complicit in an endeavor that, if discovered, would doom us all just as surely as the pyre."
Silence descended. Isolde stared at him, mind reeling.
Fear wrapped around her heart. He offers a choice. A choice to step deeper into the abyss with him, or… what? Step back? Pretend ignorance? Could I shield Leif and Brynn if I refused? Ingrid would see her refusal as weakness, as an opportunity to crush Fenrir for betraying them. Like it or not, we already are bound. He just named the rope. She looked into Eirik’s cold, determined eyes.
She dipped her head. "Speak. I am committed."
Eirik studied her. "The topic is the Frost Mother."
Isolde blinked, perplexed. "The Frost Mother? Religious texts? How is that relevant?"
"Because religion is the weapon they're forging against us," Eirik said. "Therefore, it must become our shield. We fight heresy with orthodoxy. Undermine their accusations by wrapping ourselves in the mantle of the very faith they'll invoke."
He saw her confusion. "Ingrid's case relies on painting me as unnatural. A wrongness defying the natural order. To counter that, we don't deny the strangeness; we redefine it. We claim it is the blessing."
Isolde's eyes widened. "Blessed? You? By the Frost Mother?"
"Why not?" Eirik's tone was pragmatic. "The Frost Mother embodies winter's harshness and survival. Look at my journey: cast out, near death, rising through impossible odds, wielding the cold itself. It fits a pattern. The narrative of a chosen one."
He leaned forward. "But we need more than just my story. We need scripture. Prophecy. Something ancient, obscure enough to be plausible, vague enough to be adaptable, but pointing towards someone like me emerging in times of trial."
Isolde stared at him, the audacity beginning to dawn. "You want to fabricate a prophecy? Present yourself as some herald?"
"Fabricate? No." Eirik denied. "But more likely, rediscover. Reinterpret. What we need is something obscure, tied to northern territories, perhaps even mentioning caves? Places of deep cold?"
Understanding flared in Isolde's eyes. The caves. The mission. "The Deep Ice Caves… You want to stage a revelation? Find some forgotten carving that foretells your coming?"
"Precisely," Eirik confirmed. "Our journey to clear trolls provides the perfect opportunity. While the Talons fight, we search for something ancient. Something that recontextualizes my abilities not as dark magic, but as the Frost Mother's will made manifest."
"And how does this help now? "
"Because the trial could be convened before we return! " He paced a short path. "We don't need the full prophecy yet; we just need the idea planted. The suspicion that Ingrid and Rurik aren't hunting a heretic, but persecuting a potential holy figure."
He stopped before her. "This is about building power they can't touch. If I'm seen as the Frost Mother’s blessed, it grants immunity. Attracts followers. Justifies our actions, our expansion."
The scope of his ambition left her breathless.
"Your role is crucial," Eirik continued. "You are Isolde Fenrir, noblewoman of a great House. Your word carries weight. You know the lore better than I ever could." He paused. "You can start the whispers."
"Lord Eirik," she began. "This… plan. It reeks of danger far greater than trolls. We risk offending the gods themselves, not just Ingrid! People believe, Eirik. Truly believe. What happens if they feel mocked?"
Eirik met her wide, fearful eyes. "Like it or not, people are already talking. About me. Ingrid is stoking that fire with whispers of dark magic and possession. I just need you to help me douse the fire that's already burning, Isolde."
He stepped closer, his shadow falling over the map. "Listen closely. There are only two paths this narrative can take."
"Path One: Eirik Stormcrow is a dark magic-wielding, demon-possessed warlock who needs purging from the world with cleansing fire. That path ends with me screaming on a pyre, Leif dragged down as my accomplice, and House Fenrir ground into dust for sheltering a heretic."
"Path Two: Eirik Stormcrow is a blessed warrior touched by the Frost Mother herself, emerging in troubled times to bring strength and perhaps, eventually, good tidings to her faithful."
He leaned forward, planting his hands on the map, pinning her with his gaze. "Ingrid chooses Path One. She paints me as the demon. She doesn't care about faith; she cares about power and removing a threat to her precious Garrick's succession. Do you choose that path also? Or do we fight back with the only narrative powerful enough to counter hers?"
Isolde swallowed hard.
"But… Commander…" She searched his face, looking for some sign of genuine conviction beyond ruthless pragmatism. "Do you truly believe in the Frost Mother? Or is this just… a tool? Another weapon like Frostfire, wielded for your own survival? If it's hollow… if it's just lies… the gods will see it. The people might see it eventually."
A flicker of something raw passed through Eirik's icy eyes. For a fraction of a second, the impenetrable mask slipped. He didn't look away, but his gaze seemed to turn inward, focusing on a distant, painful memory.
Praying the rosary… endless hours… cold linoleum under his knees… the sterile smell… the slow, agonizing rattle of Anya's breath… The memory surged. Watching life fade from his little sister's eyes. Feeling the crushing helplessness, the rage against a universe that allowed such suffering. He thought that pain would finally kill any belief he held. But it didn't.
The weight of them settled onto his shoulders, momentarily bowing them. His voice, when he spoke again, was stripped bare.
"Isolde." Her name sounded almost like a sigh. "You speak of religious affections. Of true belief." He paused. "I have wrestled with faith in the face of suffering that would break many. I have known despair intimately. Not the blind piety of easy comfort, Isolde. But a faith that doesn't demand surrender, but demands I fight."
He gestured sharply, encompassing the map. "Ingrid doesn't have faith. Rurik sees faith as a tool of his swift advancement. Cedric… his god is power. Most of the lords in that hall? Their piety begins and ends with ensuring good harvests and smiting their enemies."
"This 'heresy' accusation? It's not about faith, Isolde. It's their version of war. Warfare waged with whispers and manipulation instead of swords. And if I lose? It ends with me screaming as my skin chars."
His voice hardened. "So yes, I will use the tools they try to use against me. I will fight fire with faith. Not because I mock it, but because I believe it. And I am asking you: Are you comfortable with the alternative? Are you truly fine with standing aside and watching them burn me – and by extension, your son and your House – at the stake? Burned by people who have far less faith than I do, and infinitely more malice?"
Isolde closed her eyes. The Frost Mother… she believed. Truly. The thought of twisting her faith felt like sacrilege. But is it twisting? Or is it… fighting for survival using the only shield available? She took a deep, shuddering breath. Blessed or not, he is our only path forward. And if the Frost Mother truly watches over us… perhaps she understands the fight we face.
She opened her eyes.
"So be it, Commander Stormcrow," she said, her voice low but steady. "Tell me specifically what you need from me now. Before we leave. What whispers need planting?"
"Anything from the sacred text mentioning 'awakening'? 'Sudden strength'? Anything tied to caves or deep cold? Or…" he searched for the right concept, "...someone forged by hardship?"
"There's… the Canticle of Stone and Breath," she said slowly, testing the words. "Attributed to Saint Jorunn the Anchorite. He sought enlightenment in the deep ice caves centuries ago. Most consider it allegory. A meditation on the soul trapped in flesh—the 'stone'—yearning for the divine 'breath'."
Eirik's gaze sharpened. "Go on."
"It's… dense. Mystical. But there are lines…" She recited from memory, her voice taking on a formal cadence:
"From the heart of winter's sleep, Not through slow melt, but shattering deep, A spirit sharpens, cold and keen, Where shadows dwell, where light's unseen."
Shattering deep. Eirik's mind seized the phrase. The 'awakening' after Garrick's beating? Or the shattering of the Eye of Snow? It was vague enough. "Continue."
"The frozen tomb gives up its claim, Not gentle thaw, but sudden flame? Or chill that burns with purpose bright, A vessel shaped in endless night?"
Flame? Chill that burns? Eirik frowned. Too close to Frostfire? Or perfect for explaining it? "Purpose bright. Vessel shaped." He latched onto those. "Is the vessel the person? Or… the power?"
"Interpretation varies," Isolde admitted. "Some scholars see it as the soul's purification through suffering. Jorunn spoke of witnessing 'strange lights' and 'singing ice' in the deep caves."
Strange lights. Singing ice. Eirik filed that away. Potential 'discoveries'. "Does it mention a time? A sign?"
Isolde shook her head. "No specific prophecies. Just… conditions. 'When the wolves of winter howl at the gate' is another line often debated. It could mean external threats, like Skarls… or internal strife within a House."
Wolves at the gate. Eirik almost smiled. It was almost too good. Vague enough to be applied to nearly any crisis, specific enough to sound ominous and relevant. "Is it widely known?"
"Yes, the Canticle is known, though rarely read outside northern circles."
"Very well. The Canticle of Stone and Breath. Well-known, poetic, open to interpretation. Suitable… seeds."
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Eirik pushed his half-finished plate away, nodded curtly to Olaf and Leif – both instantly alert, sensing the shift – and followed the steward.
The walk felt longer than it was. Eyes tracked him – nobles whispering behind hands, retainers pausing mid-bite. The heat from the roaring fireplaces pressed against his chilled skin.
He reached the head table, dominated by Earl Borin Ironhelm's broad frame, Cedric's granite presence, and Ingrid's chillingly perfect smile.
"Ah! The man of the hour!" Borin boomed, sloshing ale from his tankard. He grinned, ruddy cheeks flushed. "Eirik Stormcrow! Pull up a seat, lad!"
He gestured expansively to a hastily added stool at the end, conspicuously below Garrick and Rurik. Birgitte sat beside Rurik, her glacial eyes assessing him with detached curiosity. Garrick, nursing his bruised face and arm, glared daggers but stayed silent under Ingrid's invisible command.
Eirik inclined his head. "Lord Earl. Lord Father." He sat.
"Heard tales that'd make a Skarl bard blush!" Borin leaned forward, his voice carrying across the suddenly quieter table. "They reached me even before I crossed the Frostfang! Said you beat Leif Fenrir – Your father's best young swordsman! – in a duel? Then you whipped up a mercenary band outta ditch diggers and crushed your brother and Cedric's own Marshal?"
He chuckled, a deep rumble. "How in the Frost's frozen heart did you manage that, lad? Share the secret! We could use some tricks against those damned raiders!"
Here it comes. Eirik kept his gaze level. "Necessity, Lord Earl. I used what was available."
But Ingrid smoothly stepped in. "Oh, Lord Earl, don't let his modesty fool you! My stepson is far too humble." She beamed at Eirik with maternal pride. "It was pure genius! Resourcefulness worthy of Stormcrow legends!"
She's laying it on thick.
Ingrid continued, her eyes glittering. "He didn't just use the terrain, Lord Earl, he transformed it! He had his men prepare the field beforehand – logs, ropes, cunning pitfalls! He lured Garrick's knights and Gunnar's veterans into perfect killing zones using nothing but their own predictable tactics against them!"
"And the finale! He scaled that sheer ice cliff like a mountain goat! Simply breathtaking! Why, Marshal Gunnar himself was speechless!"
Eirik felt the trap tightening.
Birgitte leaned forward slightly. "He scaled a sheer cliff? During a battle?" Her voice held a touch of disbelief.
"Yes! Lady Birgitte!" Ingrid gushed, turning her dazzling smile on the Earl's daughter. "With nothing but a simple tool he designed himself! Ingenious!"
She sighed theatrically. "Barely three weeks ago, Eirik was… well, finding his path. Now? He shatters Rurik's own prodigious record entering the Snow Realm at nineteen! He defeats a renowned warrior! He builds a company from nothing and defeats seasoned veterans! It's… miraculous, wouldn't you say, Lord Earl?"
MIRACULOUS. The word hung in the air, heavy and dangerous.
Borin's jovial expression shifted. His bushy eyebrows climbed his forehead. "Shattered Rurik's record? Nineteen? Frost's breath!" He looked between Eirik and Rurik. "And you stayed hidden all these years, lad? Why the sudden bloom? Late starter?"
Eirik's mind raced. Danger!
He needed an answer that was plausible, boring. "Training, Lord Earl. Focused effort. After… a difficult time." A spark of genuine anger flared in Garrick's eyes, quickly smothered.
But Ingrid wouldn't let it drop. She leaned forward conspiratorially, her voice dropping to a murmur just loud enough for the entire table. "His genius knows no bounds, Lord Earl. Why, just yesterday, I acquired something quite remarkable… something else he created."
Her hand dipped beneath the tablecloth. No.
She carefully, deliberately, placed a Frostfire bomb onto the polished oak surface.
Eirik's blood turned to ice water. How?! The smooth, clear ice flask gleamed under the torchlight, the dark, viscous fuel clearly visible inside, the wick protruding innocuously. His design.
Panic surged, instantly crushed by cold fury and sharpened focus. Who? When? Fisk? Or the merchants? Someone got sloppy.
Borin's eyes widened. "What in the frozen hells is that? Some kind of fancy lantern?"
"Far more, Lord Earl!" Ingrid's smile was triumphant, predatory. "This, my lords and lady, is 'Frostfire'. Another of Eirik's astonishing inventions! Crafted with rare alchemy, contained within enchanted ice of his own making."
She paused, letting the false description sink in. "It delivers purifying flame precisely where it's needed most. Utterly devastating."
Birgitte's glacial eyes widened, fixed on the bomb. Rurik's gaze snapped to it, then flickered to Eirik. His expression remained perfectly composed.
Cedric's jaw tightened, a muscle ticking. He clearly hadn't known about this either.
Borin slammed a fist on the table, rattling plates. "Devastating? Show me! By the Frost, I want to see this marvel!" His earlier joviality was replaced by the warrior's eager curiosity. "Outside! Now!"
Trapped. Eirik saw the gleam in Ingrid's eyes. This was her masterstroke. Force him to demonstrate his creation, reveal its terrifying power publicly. Make it undeniable. Make him shine. And in shining, cast a long, suspicious shadow.
How does a broken bastard suddenly create weapons of war?
"Lord Earl," Eirik began, his voice carefully measured, "the demonstration requires preparation. Open space. Targets. It's not safe…"
"Nonsense!" Borin bellowed, already standing. "Plenty of space in the main courtyard! Targets? Find some old shields! Barrels! Move!" He started barking orders at his own guards.
Ingrid rose gracefully. "Of course, Lord Earl. Commander Stormcrow is merely being cautious. Such power demands respect." She shot Eirik a look of pure admiration. "Shall we?"
There was no refusing. Cedric rose stiffly, his expression thunderous. Rurik assisted Birgitte to her feet, his movements unhurried, his gaze lingering on the Frostfire bomb Ingrid now cradled like a precious trophy.
Garrick scrambled up, radiating schadenfreude. Finally, the bastard gets his.
The procession moved through the Great Hall, leaving stunned silence and buzzing speculation in its wake. Olaf and Leif met Eirik's eyes as he passed; he gave them a sharp, almost imperceptible shake of his head.
The frigid air of the main courtyard was a shock after the hall's heat. Torches flared, casting long, dancing shadows. Borin's men efficiently cleared the center space and dragged over a heavy wooden door salvaged from some outbuilding, propping it up like a crude shield wall. Someone brought a moldy straw pallet.
"Right then!" Borin rubbed his hands together, oblivious to the thick tension. "Let's see what this pretty ice jar does! Commander?" He gestured grandly at Eirik.
Eirik stepped forward. His mind was cold crystal. Damage control.
He took the Frostfire bomb from Ingrid. Her fingers brushed his, cold and deliberate. He ignored her. He focused on the task.
"Stand back, Lord Earl," Eirik warned, his voice carrying authority. "All of you. At least twenty paces." He projected calm confidence. Hesitation now would look suspicious.
Borin and his entourage shuffled back. Cedric and Ingrid moved with them. Rurik guided Birgitte back, placing himself slightly in front of her, his posture protective, watchful. Garrick lingered closer, his bruised face eager.
They need to see it's a weapon, not magic. Eirik took out flint and steel. Make it look mundane. A tool. Not sorcery.
He struck the flint. Sparks flew. He held them to the wick. A tiny ember caught, sizzling softly. He felt every eye on him.
He drew his arm back. Not a throw. A demonstration. He hurled the bomb underhand, aiming squarely for the center of the wooden door. The ice flask spun through the torchlight.
CRACK-SMASH!
It hit dead center. Ice exploded. Thick, sticky fluid splattered across the wood.
For one frozen heartbeat, nothing. The sizzle of the burning fuse the only sound.
Then…
WHOOSH!
Deep orange flame erupted with shocking ferocity. It didn't just ignite; it clung, spreading with terrifying speed across the wooden surface. Intense heat washed over Eirik even from fifteen paces away. The flames roared, thick black smoke coiling into the night sky.
Within seconds, the heavy door was a blazing pyre, the wood crackling and buckling violently. The nearby straw pallet caught secondary flames, adding to the inferno.
Gasps erupted from the Earl's entourage. A soldier muttered a curse. Birgitte's hand flew to her mouth, her eyes wide, reflecting the dancing flames. Not fear, Eirik noted, but stark fascination, perhaps even a hint of awe.
Borin Ironhelm stared, his mouth slightly open, the boisterous lord replaced by the calculating warrior seeing a new, brutal tool. "Frost's frozen balls…" he breathed.
Eirik stood motionless, five paces from the blaze.
Ingrid forced this. Why? To awe Borin? Or to highlight the suddenness, the strangeness? Now Borin sees raw destruction. He's hooked. That's good for selling Frostfire... but terrible for hiding my origins.
"Contained fire, Lord Earl," Eirik answered, his voice cutting through the crackle. "Alchemy and physics. Not magic. Thickened fuel. A stable vessel." He gestured towards the dwindling blaze. "Effective against fortifications, concentrated troops, or... vermin dens."
"Effective?!" Borin finally tore his gaze from the flames, rounding on Eirik. "It's bloody terrifying is what it is! A shield wall killer in a bottle!" He stepped closer. "How? How does the ice hold? How do you make it? How many can you make?"
Before Eirik could formulate a bland answer, Ingrid glided forward, smooth as ice on stone. She placed a gentle, almost proprietary hand on the Earl's massive forearm.
"Oh, Lord Earl, you cut straight to the heart of it!" Ingrid said. "That's precisely what I marveled at! Eirik guards his secrets well, as any true artisan should!"
She gestured elegantly towards the dying flames, where scorched wood and melting puddles were all that remained. "But look! Look at the ingenuity!"
She steered Borin closer to the rapidly dissipating remnants of the flask itself – small, irregular shards of ice melting quickly in the heat. "Observe the vessel, my lord. The shape. Perfectly formed. Smooth as glass. No seam, no flaw. It contained that volatile fire until the very moment of impact! Remarkable craftsmanship."
She's pointing at the conjured ice itself. Not the fire, not the fuel. The ice. The unnatural perfection of it.
He saw Rurik's dark eyes narrow, his gaze shifting from flames to melting ice shards.
"And the process!" Ingrid continued, her voice a conspiratorial murmur that carried perfectly. "To mold ice with such precision? To give it strength enough to hold such power until precisely the right moment? Commander Eirik, you must have discovered some extraordinary technique during your studies in that quiet tower! Was it some forgotten lore? A unique blend of salts? Or perhaps…" she let the pause hang, "…a truly revolutionary understanding of the ice itself? It defies ordinary craftsmanship."
Her eyes met Eirik's, wide with curiosity. "Truly, where did such an idea spring from? It seems almost… born of pure Frost, doesn't it?"
There it is. The careful phrasing: 'defies ordinary craftsmanship,' 'born of pure Frost.' She couldn't cry 'magic!' outright, not without sounding hysterical. But she was sowing the seed: how a neglected bastard suddenly produced artifacts of such strange, flawless cold.
She wants them questioning the source, not just admiring the effect.
Eirik felt the trap closing. Denial would sound defensive. Explanation was impossible. He needed to redirect Borin's enthusiasm into safe channels.
He forced a chuckle. "Lady Ingrid flatters my humble efforts," he said, turning to face Borin fully, ignoring her. "The flask's shape? Necessity, Lord Earl. A sphere minimizes weak points, holds pressure best. Smoothness? Careful freezing molds and temperature control. Nothing magical about it, just tedious work and understanding basic principles."
He waved dismissively at the steaming puddles. "It's ice. It melts. The trick is keeping it cold until it needs to not be cold anymore. Simple logistics."
He leaned toward the Earl, his tone shifting to soldiers discussing kit. "The real marvel, Lord Earl, is the effect. You saw it. A shield wall? Gone. A barricade? Kindling. Imagine lobbing a few of these into a Skarl raiding party holed up in mountain caves. Or onto an Ice Troll barge. Cleanse the nest without risking a single blade."
The hungry spark ignited again in Borin's eyes.
He gestured back towards the hall. "My men call it Frostfire for a reason. It's Northern winter's fury, bottled and delivered on command. A tool. One I've developed, yes, but its value lies in what it does." He paused, letting the image sink in. "The how? That's workshop tradecraft. Ask any alchemist or master smith about their best work – they guard their methods closer than their coffers."
Ingrid saw her subtlety being bulldozed by Eirik's direct pitch and Borin's fascination with destruction. She quickly interjected. "Precisely, Commander! A marvel of Northern ingenuity! Developed right here at Stormkeep! Born from our harsh land!"
Her smile was brilliant, inclusive, trying to tie the invention back to House Stormcrow as a whole. "It speaks volumes of the potential that has always… slumbered… within Eirik, wouldn't you agree, Lord Earl?"
Slumbered. Another dart.
Eirik gave a short, sharp bark of laughter. "My Lord Earl, forgive us. It seems Lady Ingrid is determined to secure you as Stormkeep's first prestigious client for Frostfire. She's been quite the advocate since… acquiring that sample."
He let a flicker of annoyance cross his face. "Frostfire is effective. But the price reflects the effort and risk." He met Borin's gaze squarely. "Twenty-five silver talons per unit. Non-negotiable. Production is limited, but available… for the right partners."
Borin's eyes widened, then crinkled. He threw back his head and let out a booming laugh that echoed off the courtyard walls.
"HA! By the Frost Mother's icy teats! I see it now!" He clapped Eirik on the shoulder hard enough to stagger a lesser man and pointed at Ingrid. "You two! A matched pair of schemers! Cedric!" he bellowed. "Your lady wife and your bastard are trying to squeeze me dry before I've even finished my first barrel of ale! Frostfire indeed! More like Silver-fire!"
He wiped a tear of mirth from his eye. "Twenty-five talons a pop? For a jar of frozen lamp oil that makes a big boom? That's steep, lad! Steep as the Frostfangs!" He was still grinning, the suspicion Ingrid tried to seed washed away by amusement at the perceived haggling. The sheer ordinariness of a sales pitch was something he understood.
Ingrid's perfectly composed smile tightened almost imperceptibly. She'd aimed for revelation and landed being painted as a mercenary broker. "Lord Earl," she began, "I merely wished to showcase Commander Eirik's remarkable achievement..."
"Bah! Showcased it right into my purse, didn't you?" Borin chuckled again, though his eyes, flicking back to the smoldering remains and then to Eirik, held a calculating gleam beneath the mirth. He understood the weapon's value, regardless of origins. "Alright, lad. Impressive bang, I'll grant you that. Makes sieging easier. But twenty-five? We need to talk numbers, logistics, and discounts for bulk orders!"
He winked, the jovial lord firmly back, but the warrior was already planning deployment. "But later! After Cedric and I settle these Skarl reports. Come!" He threw an arm around Cedric and steered him back towards the hall's warmth. "My throat's drier than a beggar's prayer!"
The Earl's entourage began to follow. Rurik lingered, his dark eyes moving from Ingrid's pinched expression to Eirik's controlled face, then to the last, rapidly vanishing sliver of conjured ice on the cobblestones. His gaze was unreadable but intensely observant. He offered no comment, simply turned and guided Birgitte back inside.
Garrick glared pure hatred at Eirik, but Ingrid's sharp glance silenced any outburst. She swept after Cedric and the Earl, posture straight despite the setback.
Eirik stood alone in the suddenly quiet courtyard, the acrid smell of burnt wood thick in the air. The cold seeped back in, biting through his clothes.
He had sidestepped Ingrid's trap, turning it into a crude sales opportunity, but the cost was high. The unnatural perfection of the ice flask had been spotlighted. Rurik had noticed. The seed was planted.
Ten thousand mana fragments, the thought hammered in his skull. And the Crystal. I need out. Now. Before Ingrid sets another trap, before Borin demands another demonstration, before Rurik starts digging deeper. He needed that ascension, and freedom to hunt the Crystal far from Stormkeep's poisonous politics.
Olaf and Leif materialized from the shadows near the gatehouse, expressions grimly alert. Yorick hovered behind them, looking pale.
"Commander?" Olaf rumbled low. "That was... tense."
"Understatement, Olaf," Eirik rasped, scrubbing a hand over his face. He could feel the hollow ache of his near-empty mana core. "Ingrid forced our hand. Exposed Frostfire deliberately."
"To make you look suspicious," Leif stated flatly.
"She tried," Eirik said. "Borin saw a weapon. For now. But the risk is higher. We need our first contract. We need out." He focused on Olaf. "Flint's Master-at-Arms. Troll dens. Did you get a name?"
"Aye, Commander," Olaf nodded. "Captain Torvin. Tough sod. Looked like he'd bite a troll's nose off himself. He's drinking with Borin's captains."
"Good." Eirik straightened, pushing weariness down. "Leif, find Harkin. Tell him we need final inventory of usable gear – weapons, armor, winter kit. Assume we're moving out within days. Yorick." He turned to the quartermaster. "Payment from the merchants should arrive tomorrow or the next day. Be ready to collect it. We'll need supplies for a hard journey north. Assume... thirty men, two weeks minimum in deep cold. Prioritize rations, medical supplies, climbing gear, cold weather additives for the ale."
Yorick swallowed, pulling out his wax tablet. "A-at once, Commander. Two weeks... deep north? Where exactly?"
"Lord Arcturus Flint's territory," Eirik said, his gaze turning towards the distant, unseen peaks. "Specifically, the hills near the Ironvein he's trying to clear. Troll dens are just the cover story, Yorick. There's something else up there. Something I need."
"The caves?" Leif asked quietly.
"Deep Ice Caves," Eirik confirmed. "Captain Torvin and his complaints about blocked caves and lost men would be our way in. We offer to clear the trolls. Flint gets his iron mine operational. We get access, information, and pay. And I..."
He clenched his fist, feeling the faint pulse of his drained core. "...get a chance to find what I need to become more than just a maker of frozen bombs in a locked cell."
Olaf grinned fiercely. Leif's jaw tightened, but he gave a sharp nod. Yorick just determinedly scribbled notes.
"Right," Eirik said, turning towards the hall. The noise of the feast spilled out again. "Olaf, find this Captain Torvin. Sound him out. Express the Talons'... interest... in practical field testing against worthy foes. Be polite. Be professional. But make it clear we're the solution to his troll problem."
Olaf slammed a fist to his chest. "Aye, Commander!"
"Leif, Yorick, see to your tasks. I need to endure the rest of this farce."
He took a deep breath of the frigid, smoke-tainted air, steeling himself, and walked back towards the Great Hall's roaring light.
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The biting wind howling through Stormkeep’s main gate felt like knives against Eirik’s skin.
He stood slightly apart from the main Stormcrow contingent gathered on the frost-rimed battlements – Cedric, Ingrid, a heavily bandaged Garrick trying to stand tall, and a cluster of lesser nobles. Eirik ignored the sidelong glances and barely concealed hostility radiating from Garrick’s direction.
His focus was inward, on the bone-deep weariness that hollowed him out.
Ten days, he thought grimly. Ten days of dawn-to-dusk conjuring. Ten days of pushing Peak Snow mana to its absolute limit.
Every spare moment had been consumed by the relentless creation of ice flasks. One after another, until his core screamed and his vision swam. Sleep was a luxury snatched in stolen hours, punctuated by the ache of overextended mana channels.
But it was done.
The final shipment of Frostfire bombs had rolled out just before dawn, escorted by a Talon squad commanded by Olaf. Yorick’s calculations were precise: the combined payment for all delivered orders, plus the remaining upfront deposits, would land in their coffers within days.
It would push him well past the 5,000 silver talon mark.
The thought should have sparked triumph, but it was buried under layers of exhaustion and the weight of what came next.
Ascension to Frost Realm, his mind raced. 10,000 mana fragments... achievable with grinding, quests, time. But the Crystal of the Frozen Heart?
The system’s description echoed in his mind: ‘Found only in places where the world’s cold has concentrated over centuries. Deep Ice Caves. Glacial Rifts. Sites of Ancient Frost Elemental Manifestations.’
It screamed danger and rarity. Where to even start looking? And how to get there without abandoning the fledgling Talons? The northern wilds were notoriously unforgiving, patrolled by Skarl raiders and prowled by things worse than Ice Trolls.
A trumpet blast shattered his thoughts, sharp and clear despite the wind.
Down the winding mountain road, the Earl’s entourage came into view. A vanguard of heavy cavalry, their plate armor gleaming dully under the grey sky, rode under a banner depicting a snarling, frost-coated Direwolf – the symbol of Earl Borin Ironhelm.
Behind them rolled heavy supply wagons, guarded by disciplined lines of infantry bearing halberds. More mounted knights followed, then a cluster of outriders scanning the high rocks with hawk-like vigilance. At the center, surrounded by a phalanx of elite guards in finer armor, rode the Earl himself.
Borin Ironhelm was a mountain of a man. His barrel chest strained against a fur-trimmed leather jerkin worn over gleaming mail. A great two-handed axe rested easily across his saddle, looking more like a woodsman’s tool than a noble’s weapon. His beard, thick and russet-streaked with grey, framed a broad, florid face currently split by a booming laugh directed at one of his companions. Even at a distance, his sheer physical presence and unrestrained energy dominated the scene. This was a warrior lord who enjoyed food, drink, and battle, probably in that order.
But Eirik’s gaze sharpened, drawn to the man riding calmly at the Earl’s immediate right.
Rurik Stormcrow.
His half-brother was Garrick’s opposite in every conceivable way. He sat his courser with perfect, effortless posture, his dark Stormcrow hair neatly trimmed, his features sharp and intelligent, composed into an expression of attentive politeness. He wore meticulously maintained half-plate armor over deep blue wool, the Stormcrow raven subtly embroidered on his surcoat. No ostentation, just calculated precision. He listened to the Earl’s booming voice with a slight, attentive tilt of his head, his dark eyes constantly scanning – not just the road, but the battlements, the gatehouse, the soldiers lining the approach. Taking everything in. Processing.
Perfectly courteous. Absolutely lethal underneath. Eirik remembered Rurik from fragmented memories of the old Eirik: quiet, terrifyingly competent in the training yard, already garnering their father’s interest before being sent to the Earl’s glittering court. Rurik didn’t radiate open malice like Garrick. That made him infinitely more dangerous.
Beside Rurik, riding with elegant poise on a graceful grey palfrey, was a young woman who could only be Lady Birgitte Ironhelm, the Earl’s daughter. She possessed a striking beauty – honey-blonde hair braided intricately beneath a fur-lined hood, high cheekbones, and eyes the colour of glacial ice. Her expression was serene, almost detached, observing the grim fortress with cool appraisal.
The subtle proximity between her and Rurik, the ease with which Rurik occasionally leaned to murmur something only she could hear, confirmed the rumors: they were courting, and Rurik had clearly made an impression.
Securing the Earl’s daughter, Eirik analyzed. That’s a power move. Cements Rurik’s position at court, potentially even as heir if the Earl favors him enough.
He risked a quick glance towards Ingrid. Her smile for the approaching Earl was dazzling, perfectly sculpted. But her eyes, when they flickered towards Rurik and Lady Birgitte, held a spark of pure, icy calculation. Garrick, beside her, had managed to puff out his chest despite the bandages, trying to project heir-like dignity, but the comparison to the composed Rurik was starkly unflattering.
The Earl’s party clattered to a halt before the lowered drawbridge. Borin Ironhelm boomed out a laugh that echoed off the stone walls. “Cedric, you frozen old badger! Still clinging to this wind-bitten rock, I see!”
Cedric Stormcrow descended the steps from the battlements. Despite the Earl’s casual tone, there was genuine respect in the greeting.
“Borin. Took your time getting here. Trouble brewing down south, or just too many taverns to visit?” Cedric’s gaze flickered appreciatively over the Earl’s formidable escort. “Strong turnout.”
“Bah!” Borin waved a meaty hand, dismounting with surprising agility for a man his size. “Trouble’s always brewing. That’s why we’re here, eh? To talk axes and Skarl skulls! But aye, the ride was… invigorating.” He clasped Cedric’s forearm in a warrior’s grip. “Good to see you standing, Cedric.”
The Earl’s sharp eyes scanned Cedric’s assembled family. “Lady Ingrid, radiant as winter sunrise! Garrick, my lad!” His booming voice took on a jovial note as he clapped Garrick heavily on the shoulder, making the heir wince despite himself. “Heard you tangled with your brother! Looks like he roughed you up some! Shows spirit!” It wasn't malicious, just thoughtlessly blunt. Garrick flushed, forcing a tight smile.
Borin’s gaze then swept past them, settling on Eirik, who stood a respectful few paces back. “And this…” The Earl’s bushy eyebrows rose slightly. “The Bastard who stirred the pot! Eirik Stormcrow!” He strode forward, his presence filling the space. Up close, he smelled of horse, leather, and spiced wine. “By the Frost, lad, you’ve put the cat among the pigeons!” His laughter boomed again, but his eyes assessed Eirik with keen interest. “Turning out quite the Stormcrow, aren’t you?”
Eirik bowed crisply, keeping his expression neutral. “Lord Earl.”
“Ha! Modesty! Good trait, if you can keep it.” Borin clapped him on the shoulder almost as hard as he’d clapped Garrick. Eirik, braced, absorbed the impact without flinching.
The Earl noticed, his eyes glinting. “Strong too. Seems you took after your father.” He winked, completely oblivious to the sudden stiffness in Cedric’s jaw and the icy daggers Ingrid shot towards him. He turned back, waving his hand. “Rurik! Birgitte! Come meet the firebrand!”
Rurik dismounted smoothly. He moved with economical grace, every motion deliberate. He approached, offering Cedric a perfectly respectful bow, deeper than the Earl’s casual greeting.
“Lord Father. Well met. Stormkeep stands strong, as always.” He then turned to Ingrid with flawless courtesy. “Lady Mother. A pleasure.” His eyes lingered on Garrick’s bandages for a fleeting second. “Brother. Your recovery is swift.” It was neither warm nor cold. Then his dark, observant eyes landed fully on Eirik.
Eirik felt it like a physical touch – a cool, calculating intelligence sweeping over him. There was no overt hostility. No disdain. Just intense, cold assessment.
“Eirik,” Rurik said, his voice polite, his expression neutral. He extended a hand. “Well met. The reports of your… initiative… have reached even the Earl’s court. Impressive resourcefulness.”
The words were correct. Complimentary, even. But the pause before “initiative” and the slight emphasis on “resourcefulness” were subtle barbs.
Eirik met his gaze steadily. He saw the practiced calm, the polished veneer, and beneath it, the mind constantly strategizing. Garrick was a snarling dog; Rurik was a stiletto in velvet.
“Thank you, Rurik,” Eirik replied, his voice level. “Necessity breeds unconventional paths. The Northern Defenses require more than just polished steel.”
Rurik’s lips twitched in what might have been the faintest ghost of approval. “Indeed,” he murmured. His gaze shifted minutely, taking in Eirik’s practical gear, the lines of fatigue around his eyes that even Peak Snow constitution couldn’t entirely erase, the faint aura of controlled cold.
He senses something… different, Eirik realized. Not just the tactics. The mana? Or just the change in demeanor?
Lady Birgitte stepped forward then. Cedric bowed deeply; Ingrid offered a perfect curtsy. “Lady Birgitte,” Cedric said. “Welcome to Stormkeep. Your presence brightens our cold halls.”
“Lord Cedric,” Birgitte’s voice was melodic. “Thank you for your hospitality.” Her glacial eyes swept over Eirik as Rurik introduced him. “Eirik Stormcrow. Your exploits are… novel.” Her tone held a faint, aristocratic detachment.
Eirik bowed. “Lady Birgitte. Welcome.” He offered nothing more. He wasn’t here to impress her. He noted the subtle way her hand rested lightly on Rurik’s arm as she turned back to Cedric.
The greetings over, Borin Ironhelm threw an arm around Cedric’s shoulders. “Enough standing about freezing our stones off, Cedric! Let’s get inside! Crack open some barrels! I’m parched after that climb! Then we talk Skarl raids, those damned ice spiders multiplying near Flint’s hold!”
As the Earl steered Cedric towards the Great Hall, the rest of the entourage began dismounting and moving. Eirik fell into step towards the rear, flanked by Leif and Olaf, who had returned just in time. The imposing figure of Marshal Gunnar strode ahead, exchanging curt nods with the Earl’s guard captain.
As they entered the marginally warmer chaos of Stormkeep’s inner courtyard, a loud conversation between two of the Earl’s grizzled captains cut through the noise. They were unloading gear near their mounts.
“…deep into the Serpent’s Spine last season, chasing that Ice Drake rumor for Lord Arcturus,” one captain, a man with a scar bisecting his beard, grunted. “Waste of damned time. Nothing but ice and echoes. But the damn deep caves there… colder than a witch’s tit. Saw crystals growing down there, bright as stars. Frostbite just lookin’ at ‘em.”
“Crystals?” the other, younger captain asked, hefting a saddlebag.
“Aye,” Scar-Beard spat. “Pretty. But brittle. Useless for forging. Old Brynjar, the guide – Frost rest his soul – called ‘em ‘Winter’s Tears’. Said they grow where the heart of the cold is, where frost elementals are said to sleep. Never saw any elementals, thank the Frost. Just the damn crystals and cold that seeps into your bones.”
Heart of the cold… Frost elementals… ‘Winter’s Tears’… Eirik’s mind latched onto the words like a lifeline. Deep caves in the Serpent’s Spine? It matched the system’s description: ‘Deep Ice Caves’. ‘Sites of Ancient Frost Elemental Manifestations’. Could ‘Winter’s Tears’ be the local name for the Crystal of the Frozen Heart? The proximity – Lord Arcturus Flint’s territory wasn’t impossibly far, maybe a week’s hard ride north and east beyond Stormkeep’s direct borders.
Hope pierced his fatigue. A potential lead. It was dangerous – the Serpent’s Spine was notoriously treacherous, riddled with caves that were natural death traps, home to Ice Trolls and worse. But it was something.
He stored the information away, a precious nugget amidst the political maneuvering. He needed to learn more about these ‘Winter’s Tears’, these caves, and Lord Arcturus Flint. Could Flint be a potential client for the Talons? A way to get access? Or was this a solo venture?
Inside the Great Hall, a feast was hastily laid out.
The Earl roared with laughter, downing ale and tearing into roasted meat with gusto, dominating the head table. Cedric played the host, his earlier wariness partially masked by a veneer of noble hospitality. Ingrid was the perfect chatelaine, engaging Lady Birgitte in polite conversation, though her eyes frequently darted between her sons and Rurik. Garrick tried to join the warrior-talk with Borin, but his forced joviality rang hollow next to the Earl’s genuine bluster. Rurik sat beside Birgitte, eating sparingly, drinking water, observing everything with those unnervingly calm eyes. Occasionally, his gaze would settle on Eirik.
Eirik sat at a lower table with his officers – Olaf, Leif, Harkin, and Yorick. He ate mechanically.
Leif leaned closer, pitching his voice low over the hall's din. "Commander. Lord Flint's Master-at-Arms is over there." He nodded subtly towards a tough-looking man in Flint’s colors sitting with the Earl’s captains. "Heard him complaining about Ice Troll dens blocking a promising iron vein in their hills. They've lost men trying to clear them."
Olaf perked up. "Ice Trolls? Pay well for clearing vermin, eh? Good training for the lads." He grinned, cracking a boar rib. "Maybe toss in a Frostfire or two? See it work on proper hide?"
Eirik’s eyes narrowed. An Ice Troll contract near Flint’s territory… close to the Serpent’s Spine? Opportunity. It was dangerous grunt work, but it could provide cover, access, and crucially, information. He could scout the area, ask questions about the deep caves and the crystals. He needed leverage to approach Lord Flint himself.
"It's an option, Olaf," Eirik said quietly. "We need our first contract. Troll clearing is… practical." He glanced towards the head table. Earl Borin was slamming his tankard down, demanding a song.
He needed that crystal, and left this place as soon as possible. Eirik thought coldly, raising his own tankard of water in a silent, mock salute.
"Lord Eirik Stormcrow!"
A herald’s sharp call cut through the din. Every head at the lower tables swiveled. The herald stood near the head table, gesturing towards Eirik. "His Lordship, Earl Borin Ironhelm, requests your presence."
Shit. Eirik forced his tired body upright, schooling his features into neutrality. What now?
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Garrick Stormcrow stared at his reflection in the polished surface of a discarded knight’s breastplate. The blue-and-silver enamel was scratched, the metal dented. Utterly ruined.
Like him.
He barely recognized the face staring back – swollen face, one eye puffed nearly shut, a sheen of sweat and grime making his usually ruddy cheeks sallow.
How?
The word hammered inside his skull. How? He had real knights. Plate armor worth a fortune. Coursers bred for war. Against that? A rabble clutching clay pots and dressed in refuse. Led by the Spineless Bastard.
It wasn’t just the loss. It was the manner of it. The world had tilted on its axis. The thunderous charge, the glorious roar meant to herald his ascension… silenced by cheap jars exploding like peasant festival tricks. His magnificent knights reduced to choking, blinded fools, stumbling into trees, brought low by… seasoning?
"Cheater!" The word escaped his cracked lips in a raspy whisper. He slammed his fist against the dented breastplate. "He cheated! Again! Filthy, underhanded, bastard tricks!"
And Father… Father had allowed it. Cedric Stormcrow, who preached strength and honor above all, who had flogged men for lesser breaches of combat decorum… had sat on his horse like a glacier and watched. He’d seen and heard it all… and done nothing.
Why? The question was a scream in Garrick's soul.
I am the HEIR! Stormkeep, its wealth, its armies, its legacy… it was his birthright! Why wouldn’t Father punish the upstart? Crush him for daring to shame the Stormcrow name with such gutter tactics? Why did Eirik’s defiance seem to earn more of Cedric’s attention than Garrick?
Tears threatened to spill from his good eye. He blinked them back furiously. Weakness. He was not weak. He was Garrick Stormcrow, heir to the Barony. He straightened his spine, ignoring the sharp protest from bruised ribs and the throbbing ruin of his face. He adjusted the sling cradling his sword arm – wrenched during Silvermane’s panicked bucking – striving for a semblance of the noble warrior. The image in the polished breastplate mocked him.
He hadn’t always felt this… precarious.
Once, he’d been the one. The golden son. Strong, boisterous, blessed with the Stormcrow looks. Father’s pride. Mother’s hope. Servants scrambled to please him. Lesser nobles curried favor. His world was woven with threads of certainty: he would rule. He was meant to rule. Strength was his birthright, and it came easily… until Rurik.
His younger brother. Quiet where Garrick was loud, thoughtful where Garrick acted. And terrifyingly capable. Rurik surpassed Garrick in the training yards before he’d even grown his first beard. His intellect was sharp. Father’s gaze, once fixed solely on Garrick, began to linger on Rurik. Pride turned to something sharper, more demanding when directed at Garrick.
Garrick had tried. Gods knew he’d tried. He practiced longer, roared louder, demanded more obeisance. But it felt… hollow. He saw the flicker in Father’s eyes sometimes – not anger, not even disappointment anymore, but a weary sort of resignation. Mother’s expectations, however, never wavered.
Then Rurik left. Called to the Earl’s glittering court. He was secure again. The heir. The focus. The future. He could bask in his imagined superiority, torment Eirik with impunity, and enjoy the trappings of power.
Until the bastard woke up.
How? How? In days, Spineless Eirik had shattered Garrick’s world. He defied Garrick in his own shack. He made him confess, bloodied and terrified, in front of servants. He shattered the Eye of Snow. He stood before Father without flinching.
And now… this.
The public humiliation of the war game. Garrick’s carefully curated image of martial prowess lay trampled in the Frostmire mud beside his shattered knights. He could feel the sneers, the whispers, the pitying glances from the assembled nobility even now, hours later. His position, seemingly unassailable just days ago, felt thinner than ice on a spring pond.
"Failure," he whispered, the taste of the word like ash. He hated that feeling. The crushing weight of expectations unmet. The suffocating knowledge that he’d disappointed. It had been his shadow since Rurik first picked up a sword. And now, Spineless Eirik, the object of his contempt, the victim, was the source of his deepest shame. Daily. Relentlessly.
The tent flap rustled. Garrick stiffened, hastily wiping his good eye with the back of his hand, trying to force his features into a mask of stoic endurance.
He knew who it was. He didn’t want to face her.
Lady Ingrid swept in. Her expression was smooth, unreadable marble, but Garrick saw the slight tightening around her eyes, the rigidity in her posture. Disappointment radiated from her like winter chill.
"Garrick," her voice was devoid of its usual warm encouragement. "You look… unwell."
He flinched. "The bastard… he used poison gas, Mother! On knights! Father just… watched!"
"Your father," Ingrid said, stepping closer, "saw a strategy that defeated superior forces using available means. He saw cunning where you saw only cheating." Her voice dropped lower, sharper. "And he saw his eldest son falter when faced with the unexpected."
Garrick winced. "I… I reacted! I tried to rally them! Kael—"
"—followed your order to charge headlong into an obvious trap," Ingrid finished coolly. "You underestimated Eirik. Fatally. Again."
The accusation hung in the air. Garrick wanted to rage, to defend himself, but the truth of her words were unmistakable. He looked down at his mud-splattered boots, unable to meet her gaze.
She had poured everything into him, and he had failed her.
"Looking at your boots won't change what happened, Garrick," Ingrid said, her voice regaining its usual steel. "Wallowing won't restore your standing. Come. There's work to be done."
She turned towards the tent entrance without waiting for a response. Garrick hesitated, shame warring with a desperate need for her guidance, her reassurance. Reluctantly, wincing as he moved, he pushed himself up and followed her out into the biting air.
They moved away from the bustling aftermath of the war game – the groans of the wounded, the clank of gear being collected, the low murmur of voices thick with judgment. Ingrid led him through lesser-used corridors of Stormkeep, down narrow servant stairs Garrick hadn't known existed, descending into the fortress's cold, damp underbelly. The air grew thick with the smell of mildew, damp stone, and something darker…
They reached a heavy, iron-bound door guarded by two of Ingrid’s personal retainers – men with faces like carved stone, loyal only to her. A curt nod from Ingrid, and the door was unlocked, swinging open with a protesting groan.
The chamber beyond was a cell. Dank. Dark. Lit only by a single guttering torch in a wall sconce. Straw littered the floor. Chains hung from rusted rings on the wall. And huddled in a corner, chained by one ankle to a stout iron ring, was Marta.
Garrick’s stomach clenched. The cook looked broken. Her face was a tapestry of bruises – purple, yellow, sickly green – one eye swollen shut. Her hands, usually rough but capable, were swollen, knuckles raw. Her grimy dress was torn, stained with what looked like old blood and filth. She flinched violently as the torchlight fell on her, shrinking back against the cold stone wall, whimpering.
"Gods," Garrick breathed.
He hadn’t ordered this. He didn’t want to see it. This was Mother's way. It made him feel… dirty. Weak. Not the strong lord heir dispensing justice, but a spectator to something ugly.
Ingrid stepped into the cell, her fine velvet skirts seeming absurdly out of place amidst the squalor. She moved with predatory grace, stopping just out of Marta’s reach. Garrick hung back near the door, unable to fully enter the oppressive gloom.
"Marta," Ingrid’s voice was soft, chillingly polite. "Look at me."
Marta slowly, painfully, raised her head. Her one good eye, filled with terror, fixed on Ingrid. She tried to speak, but only a choked sob escaped her cracked lips.
"Now, Marta," Ingrid continued, her tone conversational, as if discussing the weather. "We need to revisit our previous conversation. About Eirik."
Marta whimpered again, pulling her knees tighter to her chest.
"Let me refresh your memory," Ingrid said, taking a half-step closer. Marta flinched violently. "In all your years serving in his… hovel… did you ever witness Eirik Stormcrow train? Did you see him practice sword drills before dawn? Lift stones? Run endurance laps? Anything that might explain this sudden… ascension?"
Marta’s good eye darted wildly from Ingrid to Garrick hovering in the doorway, then back. She shook her head frantically. "N-no, m'lady! Never! I swear by the Frost Mother! He was… weak. Always weak! He'd… he'd struggle with the water bucket. Get winded climbing the tower stairs. He just… hid. Read those moldy books. Or stared out the window like a lost lamb! Never trained! Not once!"
Ingrid nodded slowly. "Good. Very good. And the sudden strength? The defiance? The… abilities? When did that start?"
Marta’s voice was a terrified whisper. "After… after Lord Garrick…" she flinched again, glancing fearfully at Garrick, "...after he… woke up. In his bed. Days ago. Like… like a different person crawled into his skin. Cold eyes. Moved… different. Spoke different. Strong… scary strong." She shuddered. "Like… like somethin' possessed him, m'lady."
Garrick felt a chill that had nothing to do with the dungeon air. Possessed? Or just… awakened? But how so fast? It made no sense.
"And you can attest to this?" Ingrid pressed. "You can find others? Servants from his household? Stableboys? Anyone who will swear they saw no gradual change? Only… suddenness?"
Marta nodded desperately. "Y-yes, m'lady! Everyone could attest to it. We all saw it! Eirik weak as a kitten. I’ll give you names! They’ll tell you! He was Spineless Eirik one day, and… and that… the next!" Her voice cracked.
Ingrid smiled. It wasn’t a pleasant sight. "Excellent, Marta. Your cooperation is noted." She turned away dismissively, her gaze meeting Garrick’s. The message was clear: Proof.
As Ingrid swept back towards the door, she paused beside Garrick. Her voice dropped to a whisper only he could hear. "Stop looking like a whipped dog, Garrick. This defeat is a setback, not the end. Compose yourself."
He straightened slightly, trying to mimic her icy calm, though his insides churned.
"The Earl’s entourage arrives within the week," Ingrid continued, her eyes sharp. "Rurik will be with them."
Garrick’s heart plummeted. Rurik. His perfect brother. The last person he wanted to see him like this – humiliated by a bastard.
"Rurik? What can he do? He doesn't hate Eirik! He probably pities the worm!"
A flicker of irritation crossed Ingrid’s face. "We make him hate Eirik, Garrick. Or at least, see him for the dangerous, unnatural threat he is. Marta’s testimony, the shattering of the Eye, the suddenness of his power… it smells of dark arts. Outsider influence. A danger to the realm. Rurik serves the Earl. He understands stability, lineage, the threat of the unexplained."
She gripped Garrick’s arm, her nails biting even through his sleeve. "We lay the case before him. We show him Eirik is not just an embarrassment, but a threat to House Stormcrow… and by extension, the Earl’s domain. Rurik will act. The Earl will act."
Garrick absorbed this. A spark of hope, brittle and desperate, flickered in his chest.
"But," Ingrid’s voice hardened, her grip tightening painfully, "you must play your part. No more bluster. You are the wronged heir. The loyal son. You focus on your recovery. You attend your father dutifully. You show contrition for your… tactical misjudgment in the war game. Do you understand?"
Garrick met her intense gaze. The weight of expectation settled back onto his shoulders. He couldn't fail Mother again. He wouldn't.
He forced a nod, drawing himself up to his full height, ignoring the pain. "I understand, Mother."
"Good," Ingrid released his arm. She cast a final, dismissive glance back at the shivering Marta chained in the darkness. "Our time will come. Until then, be patient. Be smart."
She swept out of the dungeon, leaving Garrick standing in the torchlight flickering over the damp stones.
2025-07-26 12:01:04 +0000 UTC
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For three solid days, Eirik Stormcrow felt like nothing more than a glorified ice machine. His Peak Snow Realm mana core churned relentlessly, cold energy flowing from his center, down his arm, crystallizing into shape above his palm.
Thunk. Thunk. Thunk.
The rhythm was unceasing. Flask after flask materialized: thick-walled, apple-sized, with narrow necks. Each one cost him a single precious point of Mana. He'd wake before dawn, find a secluded spot near the Talons' temporary camp, and work. Conjure, rest while his Mana regenerated painfully slowly, then conjure again.
Twenty-five flasks. That was his daily limit before hitting zero, leaving him drained and irritable. Rinse. Repeat. A hundred flasks didn't materialize by wishing.
This is the cost, he thought grimly, watching frost plume from his latest creation. Mana is power, but it's also currency. Time. Stamina.
But the relentless grind wasn't without rewards. On the second day, desperate for efficiency, he'd slipped a single conjured flask into his storage ring. He'd held his breath. Would it vanish? Melt instantly?
Nothing happened. An hour later, he retrieved it. Cold, solid, pristine.
It doesn't decay inside, the realization struck him. The storage ring suspends it. Time stops. No melt, no seepage.
This changed everything. He could mass-produce the ice shells ahead of time. Store them indefinitely. Carry pre-filled bombs into battle without worrying about them sweating and weakening. Logistical magic to match the alchemical kind.
Isolde Fenrir had been true to her word. While Eirik churned out ice and Olaf drilled recruits, she had leveraged her family's strained but extant mercantile connections. Discreet messages flew. Meetings were arranged.
On the morning of the fourth day, Eirik found himself on a desolate, snow-dusted plateau overlooking a steep ravine, half a day's ride northwest of Stormkeep. The wind howled like a hungry wolf, carrying stinging ice crystals. The spot was perfect: isolated, rugged, far from prying noble eyes.
Good choice, Isolde, Eirik acknowledged silently. This setting screams their pain point.
Six men huddled near a small, shielded fire, wrapped in thick furs over fine woolens. Merchant lords, not soldiers. Their expressions ranged from skeptical curiosity to outright impatience.
Beside them stood four hard-eyed men in sturdy leathers – mercenary captains, representing smaller companies known to operate near the contested northern borders. These men looked cold but alert, assessing the terrain with professional eyes.
Isolde stood beside Eirik, radiating calm assurance. Yorick hovered nearby, holding a locked iron box containing ten of Fisk's finished masterpieces. Leif stood slightly apart, observing with his newly assigned lieutenant’s detachment. Olaf and a handpicked squad of Talons formed a loose perimeter.
In the center of the plateau stood their demonstration targets: A crude wooden shield wall with four thick planks bolted together. Besides it, a mock supply cart made of a simple wooden sled stacked with straw-filled burlap sacks. Lastly, a tall post wrapped in thick furs and topped with an antlered skull.
Eirik stepped forward, wind whipping his dark cloak.
"Gentlemen," Eirik began, his voice cutting through the gale. "Thank you for braving the cold. Lady Fenrir vouches for your discretion and your need. My name is Eirik Stormcrow. I command the Talons. What I show you today addresses a problem you all face: survival against overwhelming force in this frozen hell."
The mercenary captains leaned in. The merchants watched, calculating.
"The north is vast. Patrols are thin. Raiders strike fast and vanish. Monsters emerge from blizzards. How do you purge a threat, quickly and decisively, without getting close enough for them to use their axes or claws?"
He gestured to Yorick, who opened the box and lifted out one of the Frostfire bombs. Gasps went up. A flask of seemingly clear ice, filled with dark liquid, a short cord protruding from its neck.
"What is this… thing?" demanded Silas Mender, a portly merchant known for supplying garrison outposts. "A jar of lamp oil? In ice? It'll melt!"
"It holds," Eirik stated flatly. "For long enough. This, gentlemen, is 'Frostfire'. Developed for the Talons. Exclusively."
He took the bomb from Yorick. "Its purpose is simple: deliver cleansing fire exactly where you need it. Shield wall? Supply cache? Monstrous den? This clears the path."
He pointed at the shield wall. "Olaf. The barricade."
Olaf grinned fiercely. He accepted the bomb, lit the fuse with flint and steel. A tiny ember glowed, sizzling softly. Olaf loaded it into a crude sling, spun twice, and let fly.
The ice flask arced through the air. Every eye tracked it.
CRACK-SMASH!
It hit the center plank dead on. Ice shattered instantly. Thick, sticky fluid exploded outwards, coating the wood. For one heart-stopping second, nothing happened except the hiss of the burning fuse.
Then…
WHOOSH!
A ferocious bloom of deep orange flame erupted. Not a flash – an inferno clinging to the wood, spreading with terrifying speed. Intense heat radiated outwards. The flames roared, melting surrounding snow into hissing steam. Within seconds, the mock shield wall was a blazing pyre.
The collective gasp was louder, sharper. Silas Mender gaped. Dagmar Stonefist, a grizzled mercenary captain, muttered, "Frost's teeth..."
"Fire that clings," Eirik stated over the crackle. "Fire that burns hot enough to weaken timber, warp shields, and turn any defensive position into an oven. No need to charge spears. Break their formation with fire before you draw blades."
He nodded to Yorick for another bomb. "Raiders live off stolen goods. Monsters hoard. Burn their sustenance."
Olaf repeated the process. The Frostfire bomb struck the topmost burlap sack.
SMASH-WHOOSH!
Flame erupted instantly, greedily devouring the dry straw. Thick, greasy smoke plumed skyward. Within moments, the entire mock supply cache was a blazing ruin.
"The fuel sticks," Eirik explained coolly. "It splashes wide. One hit can ignite a whole wagon."
He moved towards the fur-wrapped effigy. "And then there are the things that laugh at steel. Fur, hide, thick natural armor. Fire purifies."
He took the third bomb himself. Lit the fuse. Judged the wind. Drew his arm back and threw underhand, hard and low.
The ice flask slammed into the fur-wrapped post.
SMASH!
Sticky fuel sprayed over the furs.
WHOOSH!
The flame bloomed with terrifying ferocity. The thick furs caught instantly, fire clinging and spreading upwards with shocking speed. Within seconds, the effigy was a roaring pillar of fire, the antlered skull rapidly blackening. It was primal, terrifying.
Silence descended, broken only by the roar of three separate fires and the howl of wind. The merchants stared wide-eyed, calculating destruction against profit. The mercenary captains exchanged grim, knowing glances.
Eirik let the fires burn another minute. Then he turned back. "Frostfire. Instant, targeted, purifying flame. Effective at range. Leaves no traceable container – just meltwater and ash."
He saw greed warring with caution in the merchants' eyes. Strategic appreciation in the mercenaries'.
"So," Silas Mender spoke first, voice slightly hoarse. "This… Frostfire. What's the cost, Commander? And how is it supplied?"
Eirik met his gaze. "The weapon comes ready to deploy. Each Frostfire unit is twenty-five silver talons."
Sharp intake of breath from the merchants. Ivar the Knife, a lean, scarred captain, whistled softly. "Steep."
Is it? Eirik thought coldly. He didn't flinch.
"Steep?" Eirik echoed, voice carrying an edge. "Calculate the cost, Captain Ivar. How many men does it take to storm a Skarl shield wall? How many silver talons in blood money? How much lost revenue when a convoy is gutted?"
He gestured towards the burning shield wall. "One Frostfire bomb. One throw. That shield wall is gone. The men behind it are panicked, burning, or dead." He pointed at the smoldering sled. "One bomb. An entire season's worth of plunder, gone." He pointed at the charred post. "One bomb. A threat that might have cost a dozen lives, ended in moments."
He locked eyes with each man. "Twenty-five talons buys you victory. It buys you lives. Security for your investments. A reputation for wielding fear."
Dagmar Stonefist scratched his grizzled chin. "How many can you provide? And how fast?"
"The initial production run is limited," Eirik stated. "We prioritize reliability and exclusivity. Current capacity allows for significant, but finite, orders. First orders placed today take precedence."
Silas Mender cleared his throat, pulling his expensive furs tighter against the biting wind.
"Commander Stormcrow, that... that demonstration was... potent. But ice melts! How do you store such a thing? How do you transport it? By the time I get this back to my outpost depot, days from here, won't it just be a leaking puddle of oil with a wet wick?"
He shook his head, genuine worry creasing his brow. "What if the journey warms it? What if a warm spell hits? A leaking firebomb in my warehouse..." He trailed off, shuddering visibly. One spark near a spill, and my livelihood goes up in smoke – literally.
Others murmured agreement.
Ivar crossed his arms. "Mender’s got a point, Commander. My boys operate across the Frostfang passes. Temperatures swing. Sun hits the supply sledges. How do we keep these frosty fire-starters stable for days, maybe weeks? We can’t afford them failing when a Skarl raiding party shows up."
Eirik gestured sharply towards the Talon perimeter.
"Olaf. Bring a crate."
Olaf barked an order. Two Talons wrestled a sturdy wooden crate from the back of their sled towards the center of the plateau. It was unremarkable – thick pine planks nailed together, lined inside with what looked like coarse, stitched sheepskin. Yorick stepped forward, pulling off the lid with a flourish.
Inside, nestled in a bed of packed snow and rough-cut ice chunks, lay ten Frostfire bombs, identical to the ones used in the demonstration.
"See?" Olaf boomed, reaching in and pulling one out. Condensation immediately formed on the cold surface, but the flask itself was solid, the dark fuel clearly visible, the wick dry. "Kept 'em colder than a frost giant's heart all the way here. Simple crate. Packed with snow and ice. The north provides plenty of that, eh?"
"The storage crate maintains a sub-zero environment, gentlemen," Eirik explained. "As long as the ambient temperature remains below freezing – which, for us, is ten months of the year – the bombs remain stable indefinitely within their insulated cradle. For transport during the brief summer thaws, deeper ice cellars or shaded, ventilated storage suffice. The principle is sound: contain the cold with the cold itself. Your cellars, your ice houses – they already keep your perishables frozen. They will keep Frostfire stable."
Silas peered into the crate. "Huh. Simple enough." His expression was less panicked, more calculating. So, it requires dedicated cold storage... an extra cost, but manageable. Especially compared to the potential gains. "And... you guarantee they won't just... melt and leak during storage? Or ignite spontaneously?"
"The fuel blend is thickened, designed to resist seepage even during brief warming," Eirik stated. "The ice shell provides a buffer. We've tested stability for days within these crates without issue. The risk," he locking eyes with the merchants, "is minimal compared to the risk of not having this tool when raiders torch your caravans or monsters overrun your outposts."
"This was untested beyond this pretty demonstration, Commander. What proof do we have that it works consistently? In battle? Against living, moving targets? What if the fuse fails? What if the fuel doesn't ignite on softer ground?" Silas spread his hands. "We are being asked to gamble substantial capital on an invention. This... is a leap into the unknown."
Dagmar chimed in, his voice reedy. "Indeed! A track record of failure could ruin us! Our clients rely on dependable goods! If Frostfire fails when raiders hit a caravan... the reputational damage alone..."
They need a push, Eirik caught Isolde Fenrir’s eye. A subtle nod passed between them. It was her cue. She had played this game in Stormkeep's high halls for decades.
Isolde stepped forward smoothly. "Gentlemen. Your caution is understandable. Predictable." Mild disdain colored her tone. "You weigh risks like coins. A prudent habit."
She paused. "But have you calculated the scale of opportunity lying scorched before you?"
She gestured toward the smoldering shield wall. "This isn't merely a weapon. It's a paradigm shift. Imagine being the sole supplier of Frostfire to border garrisons. The premiums you could charge mining outposts desperate for defense against Ice Troll packs."
Her gaze swept over them. "This 'leap into the unknown'? It's the edge. The advantage. The difference between being a reliable supplier of lamp oil... and becoming the indispensable purveyor of security."
She let the word hang heavy. "The House that controls Frostfire controls the northern defense market for the next decade. Profits won't be measured in hundreds of talons, but thousands."
She saw avarice ignite in Aksel’s eyes. Silas's expression shifted from skeptical to thoughtful. She pressed her advantage. "Commander Stormcrow offers exclusivity. First refusal to those with vision to seize it now. But he is not a patient man."
She turned toward the mercenary captains. "Captain Borin. Captain Ivar. I know your companies operate near Skarl borderlands. Lord Arcturus Flint's garrison at Icemark Keep has been begging for better solutions after last season's losses. Imagine being the captain who gives Lord Arcturus the means to turn Skarl raiding parties into bonfires."
Their weathered face hardened. The implication was clear.
"House Fenrir," Isolde continued coolly, "has placed its faith behind Commander Stormcrow. We secured the first major order." A slight exaggeration, but truth was flexible in negotiations. "Should your vision remain limited... the western clans facing more immediate incursions are far less squeamish about new tools."
Perfect, Eirik thought. She's dangling riches while holding a knife of obsolescence to their throats.
Silas Mender broke first. The image of losing the lucrative garrison contracts to a rival merchant, or worse, seeing Dagmar or Ivar become heroes supplying Flint with his missed opportunity, was too much.
He cleared his throat, trying to regain his composure. "Exclusivity, you say? For specific regions?"
Eirik nodded. "Initial orders define territory. Supply contracts for designated areas: garrison zones, key trade routes, specific clientele. First commitment secures the most valuable territories."
"How many can you supply?" Dagmar Stonefist rumbled. "And how fast?"
"Initial production capacity is one hundred units per week," Eirik stated. It was ambitious, given his mana constraints and Fisk's capabilities, but achievable with relentless focus. "Delivery to a pre-arranged location within a week of order confirmation. Payment in full upon confirmation of the production schedule."
"One hundred a week..." Ivar mused, rubbing his scarred chin. He glanced at Borin, a silent communication passing between the rival captains. "Icemark Keep alone could use twenty a month through the winter. Just for patrol deterrents."
Silas Mender saw the mercenaries moving and panicked. "House Mender would secure exclusive supply rights for the northern garrison route! Thirty units initially, with options for monthly resupply!" He blurted it out, the words tumbling over each other in his haste to lock it down.
Aksel, not to be outdone, jumped in. "Aksel and Sons demand exclusivity for the Blackroot Pass caravans! Twenty units! Guaranteed monthly orders!"
Dagmar Stonefist scowled. "Don't be fools. Garrisons and caravans need protection, but active companies need deployable weapons now. Stonefist Company takes thirty units. Immediate delivery priority." He looked directly at Eirik. "Cash. On the barrel."
Ivar the Knife smirked. "Knife's Edge takes twenty. Same terms. Priority delivery."
Leif Fenrir, observing silently from the periphery, felt a grudging respect bloom amidst his lingering resentment. Eirik and mother are playing them off each other masterfully. They turned skepticism into a bidding war within minutes. He subtly signaled a nearby Talon to bring forward the iron-bound chest containing the sample contracts Yorick had prepared.
Negotiations descended into a focused frenzy.
Prices were reiterated – twenty-five talons per unit, non-negotiable. Territories were carved up verbally: Mender secured the garrison route, Aksel the Blackroot Pass caravans. Stonefist and Knife's Edge claimed priority battlefield supply. Yorick, ever efficient, took rapid notes, translating the verbal agreements into binding clauses on parchment.
Isolde moved like a diplomat, whispering assurances to Aksel, subtly reminding Silas of the consequences of delay, affirming the captains' battle-tested pragmatism. She was the lubricant ensuring the gears of greed meshed smoothly.
As Yorick finalized the last signature – a surprisingly elegant scrawl from the gnarled hand of Dagmar Stonefist – Eirik mentally tallied the commitments.
Silas Mender: 30 units - 750 talons.
Aksel & Sons: 20 units - 500 talons.
Stonefist Company: 30 units - 750 talons.
Knife's Edge: 20 units - 500 talons.
Total: 100 units. 2,500 silver talons.
Two thousand five hundred. The number echoed in Eirik's mind like the tolling of a victory bell. But he could only collect about 1,000 talons upfront today while having to pay Fisk his share of 500. Finishing the system request hinges on timely delivery, which means he’d have to turn himself into a non-stoping Ice-machine for the foreseeable future.
Ah, the things we do for money.
2025-07-25 13:09:50 +0000 UTC
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