Halfway through page 4 - the delay's been caused by me wanting to make sure the lingerie I put Muffin in actually works for me and isn't just your generic set of bra and tights.
Here are a couple of reference sketches for what I want her wearing.
2022-10-13 13:18:25 +0000 UTC View Post
I was going for an Ian Curtis kind of dance for Hugo in that first panel, but it's came out as more Elaine from Seinfeld.
I'll make a short PDF when this short's complete, too, for ease of reading. I know page by page every couple of days isn't ideal.
Thanks for sticking around as Patrons!
2022-10-11 09:25:59 +0000 UTC View Post
EDIT: I'm sure it probably just went by everyone, but I realised last night I'd used Maisie's married surname on the first page and not her maiden name. So I've just jumped back and edited it.
Incest isn't something I want to explore with the cast right now...
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So the exclusive Patreon content begins!
I'll aim to get two pages of this done per week. The smaller pages and panel count should help speed things up, and I've tried to write and thumbnail it so that...
2022-10-06 06:08:28 +0000 UTC View Post
If you want a spoiler, here are the fairly illegible thumbnails for the short I'm working on to follow part two up with.
I'm going to stick to the 6 panel grids. I did want to try the two panels per page grid of those old Italian s*x comics, but the style I'm using here doesn't really lend itself to two huge panels per page.
I'll keep experimenting to see if I can get two panels per page to work somehow, but for the time being - 6 panels per page.
2022-09-28 09:55:23 +0000 UTC View Post
Here's issue two in DRM-free PDF format! Thanks again for all the support with this.
Eager to get started on the Patreon exclusive short. Still sticking with the idea of what happened on Maisie's wedding night.
2022-09-26 07:46:14 +0000 UTC View Post
Here's the current working cover for part two. Once I've sorted the interiors, I'll post a PDF for download.
2022-09-25 13:54:16 +0000 UTC View Post
Here's the final page of part 2! I'm happy to end the issue on a shot of Muffin looking almost Joker-fied.
Thanks to everyone reading this. I've been having by far the most fun working on Muffin Topp than I have on anything for a while, and it's great to see the response to it.
I'll work up a cover for the collected digital edition of part two and post the PDF here before putting it up for sale in the store. Will hopefully be able to get that done over the weekend.
2022-09-22 22:42:17 +0000 UTC View Post
One more page and then part 2 is done!
Don't worry though, that's when Patreon-exclusive pages will kick off.
2022-09-20 14:36:34 +0000 UTC View PostHere's the timelapse for page 24 - the full length timelapses are taking up a lot of space on the google drive, so might stick to the 30 second versions from now on.
Not sure if anyone would want to sit through the half an hour long timelapses anyway. If you preferred those, let me know and I'll keep uploading.
2022-09-20 14:32:48 +0000 UTC View Post
Bit of exposition on a big two panel page. Having a bit of a breather.
2022-09-13 13:13:38 +0000 UTC View Post
I've done these pages in such quick succession that I feel about as exhausted as Muffin here.
2022-09-08 13:19:44 +0000 UTC View Post
I felt Red's original dress in this scene was a bit too flat and businessy, so thought I'd update it before the page went live on the comicfury site.
Also amended a couple of bits of dialogue - nothing huge, but they're things I'd continue to notice.
2022-09-05 11:25:17 +0000 UTC View Post
Let's see if Google Drive is more forgiving with explicit material!
2022-09-02 09:20:58 +0000 UTC View PostYouTube gave me a strike for uploading the timelapse for this page - my naivety thought their AI checker wouldn't pick up on the explicit nature.
Will keep looking and experimenting with where would be the best place to upload them that isn't a flat out p*rnsite.
2022-08-31 08:07:12 +0000 UTC View Post
This is without a doubt the most graphic page so far. I'm happy that I hit each of the bases I was going for.
2022-08-29 22:13:23 +0000 UTC View Post
My original idea was to have Muffin covering herself up in that second panel of page 18 - got so far as to draw her hiding her boobs when I realised it was probably best if she just opened her arms and showed everything off.
It works okay as an image on it's own, though, so tightened the rest and threw some colour on it. As she's got pig tails here, too, I can use it as part of that Dough Life strip series.
2022-08-25 14:14:08 +0000 UTC View Post
This page probably took me the longest to complete so far - I thought the sex would be quicker to draw, with less clothes and dialogue and everything. Turns out it isn't.
And so it begins.
Also included a nudie variant of the last panel, which helped me work out the hand/leg placement more effectively.
2022-08-19 21:40:12 +0000 UTC View Post
And here's the timelapse for the latest page.
If the longer versions would be better, let me know.
