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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 140 : ARRIVED ON NAMEK

This time around the damage done by the Saiyans was not that much.

the problem was that there was no big reason for Goku and others to go to Namek and fight Frieza.

Jin was thinking about this.

But later on, Vegeta said that Freiza would come to the Earth after he became immortal. Only then does the situation become problematic.

But in the end, After constantly thinking about this issue, the Z warriors decided not to go to Namek and only work hard on the earth and incr...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 139 : VEGETA LOST

Jin was watching the fight between Vegeta and Goku.

It was pretty similar to what happened in the anime.

Goku was getting overwhelmed but not by that much.

Maybe the only difference is that Goku this time around does not have the trick to increase his power.

But on the other side, he is not burning his stamina like crazy and neither he is damaging his body.

"Man this is going to take a lot of time" Jin could not help but think.

"OI Piccolo, why not go there...

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Minato Template Chapter 192 : Arrival Of The Sages (Rewrite)

Pain who had waited for a long time now was getting more and more angry and impatient.

Finally, when he was not able to take it any more, he again flew towards Tsunade.

Tsunade saw Pain coming and bit her own lips.

"Why you are taking this long" Tsunade mutters.

No one knew who she was talking about. Maybe it was Naruto. Maybe Jiraiya. Or Maybe Kirito.

But right now she was desperately waiting for them.

She too has the power to fight with Pain but the probl...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 138 : GOHAN AND NAPPA

"Gohan what do you think? Do you want to fight the bald bulky guy" Jin asked.

This question came out of nowhere from Jin's mouth but others knew why Jin said this.

Because the power levels between both of them are pretty similar.

Goku and Piccolo thought about it and after thinking a little did not say anything.

If Gohan want to fight then they will let him fight.

Both of them know how much the first-hand fighting experience is important.

Gohan looked at hi...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 137 : SAIYANS ARE HERE

"Hmm yes there" came the mourn of a beautiful girl.

"You like that" Jin pushed a little more.

"Yeah, a little more." This beautiful girl is of course Tsunade.

"Then take this," Jin said.

"Ahhh" Tsunade mourned.

"Okay okay, don't sound like that. I am just giving you a massage" Jin said with a deadpan voice.

"Bastard, you are the reason I need a massage in the first place" Tsunade shouted.

"Ah well take this" Jin said in a hurry.

"Ahhh" Tsunade m...

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Minato Template Chapter 191 : Konoha Invasion 3 (Rewrite)

Tsunade was looking at the entire village getting attacked by the Akatsuki members but she couldn't do anything for the time being.

All of her high-end shinobi are right now not in the village.

Jiraiya, Guy, Kirito. Not to mention, even Kakashi is also not there for some reason.

She did not know that currently, Kakashi was fighting with Obito.

Both of them were fighting all out at this point but Kakashi now was getting tired.

In this world, Obito doesn't rely on ...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 136 : TIME TO PREPARE 2

After the entire explanation, Jin had to explain everything to Tsunade before going to train with Goku, Gohan and Piccolo.

Explaining her was a little tricky but he did it nonetheless.

After making sure that Tsunade is well-settled in this world. And letting a little favour from Bulma and making a doctor plus in the city.

Jin was able to go and train himself.

Goku on the other side was the same. Same trouble with Chi Chi but in the end, he is able to get permission fro...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 135 : TIME TO PREPARE

Both Raditz and Jin looked at each other.

"Whatever you did to increase your power. It's nothing more than just a cheap trick.

"I know, I too don't like this technique that much. But I can't do anything about it. Anyways. Time to end this fight now" Jin said and smirked.

"What are you talking about? Do you really think that you can beat me with that power of yours? It's just a cheap trick" Raditz said.

"Not me, I am talking about him," Jin said and pointed behind him.<...

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Minato Template Chapter 190 : Konoha Invasion 2 (Rewrite)

As the chaos of Pain's attack engulfed Konoha, Kakashi found himself face-to-face with a mysterious opponent.

Unbeknownst to him, it was Obito, the one who had given Kakashi his Sharingan years ago.

Obito stood before Kakashi, ready for a battle neither of them could have foreseen.

Obito today was here to take back the Sharingan he gave to Kakashi.

He wanted it back because currently, the Akatsuki is not looking good.

He needs to increase his power.

Obito's...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 134 : JIN VS RADITZ

Jin with Goku and Piccolo came to Raditz who was holding Gohan hostage.

In the way, he never talks to either Goku or Piccolo.

He was just following them.

Not like he knows his way around this place.

"So you finally caught up," Piccolo said.

"Ah Jin, you are also here to help. Thank you" Goku said with a smile.

"More like I wanted to have a good fight," Jin said with a smile.

Which is true. After going here. He can feel it.

His Ki really now has ...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 133 : FUCK CANNON

Piccolo literally drags Jin with him.

Tsunade too had to come with them so both of them ended up following Piccolo with Nimbus Cloud.

Jin was wondering about Piccolo's character.

He doesn't particularly remember Piccolo's character from the anime.

Jin was planning to go into intensive training after Raditz went away to better prepare for the upcoming problems in the world.

But now he has to go with Piccolo and might even have to fight Raditz with Goku and Piccolo...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 132 : RADITZ AND PICCOLO

"Finally found you Kakarot" came the voice of the burry man in front of Jin.

"Kakarot" Tsuande was confused.

"This guy is mistaking me for Goku". Jin could not help but wonder.

"Hmm, who are you? Are you mistaking me for someone else" Jin said.

Although he is not afraid of Raditz he really does not want to fight Raditz right now.

The power gap is 1 to 5.

Not to mention, this is breaking the cannon. Changing the cannon from the very start will cause trouble....

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 131 : WELCOME TO DRAGON BALL Z

Somewhere in the desert. A bright light happened and then two people appeared there out of the blue.

"What the" Tsunade shouted.

Once again, the dimension travel happened and both Jin and Tsunade appear in a strange place.

And once again both of them were naked.

Jin looked around the desert and found nothing in his surroundings.

Not even bothering to wear clothes first.

Who cares? Tsunade and he are not basically in a relationship. Not like there is anythin...

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Minato Template Chapter 189 : Konoha Invasion (Rewrite)

"SIX GATE OF JOY" Kirito shouted and immediately Green Aura surrounded Kirito.

Six gates is his limit for the time being.

And he can barely maintain it, unlike Guy or Lee. But it should be enough to One Shot Kisame.

Kisame after seeing Kirito's Aura changing like this was stunned.

"I will end this in one move" Kirito said and sheath his sword.

Armament Haki covered his hands, legs and sword.

That is the only way to maintain the six gates.

Observation ...

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Minato Template Chapter 188 : Kirito Vs Kisame (Rewrite)

After telling Jiraiya that he is leaving there is a possibility that the Members of Akatsuki might attack Konoha. Kirito immediately vanishes from his place.

He sends the message in a way that Black Zetsu following Jiraiya does not notice.

Another very important thing which he told Jiraiya was the kidnap of Gaara and he himself will not be going back to Konoha directly thus Jiraiya had to go back as soon as possible.

After making sure that Jiraiya understands the gravity of ...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 130 : END OF ONE PIECE

It was Jin, a mysterious and immensely powerful individual who appeared out of nowhere, whose reputation as a feared pirate had already begun to spread across the seas.

Jin was unlike anyone the Marines had ever faced.

After all no one uses Ki in this world except him.

His strength after the body mutation was unmatched, and his goal was clear: to save Ace at any cost.

With incredible speed and precision, Jin unleashed a torrent of devastating attacks.

He killed A...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 129 : I AM THE STRONGEST HERE

After entering into UItra Instincts Sign.

Jin stood there. He was looking around and making a plan.

Only took two seconds to form a plan and then Kuzan arrived there.

"Ice Age" Kuzan shouted.

Jin slowly turns his head towards Kuzan and vanishes.

He instantly appears in front of Kuzan. Surprising everyone who watched him because this time he really did not teleport but it almost felt like he did.

"I said that it's time to end the war. Please give me some fac...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 128 : ULTRA INSTINCTS ONCE MORE

The attack was enough to send Mihawk flying but did not actually hurt him.

"Mihawk let's fight later. I really don't have time. If you keep on delaying me then I just have to end this fight when my next move" Jin said.

Mihawk also knew that Jin held back on the last attack.

He just nodded and put back his sword.

Although he wanted to fight Jin is not exactly a swordsman. The reason he was interested in fighting Jin was because Jin just use his staff which can change si...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 127 : JIN FINALLY ARRIVED

Even Tsunade who was far away from Marine Fondo was able to see something descending down from the heaven itself.

"This looks familiar" Tsunade mutter.

And indeed it was very familiar sense to her.

It was Jin's Staff.

"Riyu Jingu Bang".

"What's that".

"Holy God"

"What the hell is going on" All the people in the summit war exclaim.

Even the strongest people there like Whitebeard, Sengoku, Garp and the admirals were not able to calm down.

Al...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 124 : ACE EXECUTION AND PARADISE HERB

A Month Time Skip

The news of Portgas D. Ace's impending execution had reached the White Beard Pirates like a thunderclap.

Jin knew that Ace was killed but he long forgotten how and why.

The news spread through the crew like wildfire, igniting shock, anger, and despair among the powerful pirates.

White Beard, whose strength had been newly revitalized by Jin's healing abilities, stared at the letter bearing the grim tidings.

"Oh, those Marines are so screwed now" ...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 126 : SUMMIT WAR STARTS

The dawn of the Summit War in the world of One Piece was a moment fraught with tension and significance, as it brought together a myriad of powerful forces and personalities in a cataclysmic clash of ambitions.

The stage was set at Marineford, the imposing fortress-like headquarters of the Marines and the World Government, located on one of the Red Line's massive islands.

The looming presence of this formidable stronghold cast an eerie shadow over the impending battle.

It wa...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 123 : RED HAIR SHANKS

One week had swiftly passed since Jin had offered his healing abilities to White Beard and began his training in Haki with the White Beard Pirates.

His initial days were spent primarily on the Moby Dick, aiding injured crew members and tending to their wounds, earning the respect and admiration of the pirate crew.

He himself has learned a lot of medical Jutsu from Tsunade too.

The healing power of Jin's ki-infused Senzu beans worked wonders, and White Beard himself experienc...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 122 : HEAL WHITEBEARD AND LEARN HAKI

"YO" Jin said as he came hovering above the Moby Dick.

Well, that only lasted for 5 seconds as someone from White Beards Pirate immediately shot at him.

Jin of course was able to dodge the bullet. He was not expecting hospitality right off the back anyway.

"Who are you" someone who White Beards Pirate asked. He had two swords.

Jin had no idea who that guy was but he smiled and said.

"I am Jin Takashi. You might have heard about me in my bounty. Right now it shoul...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 121 : FINDING WHITEBEARD

Jin had heard whispers of the legendary White Beard Pirates and their formidable captain, Edward Newgate, for years.

But being a Naruto fan, he never even searched about One Piece let alone see it.

So he had no idea about white beards. And naturally finding the whitebeard pirates was equally hard.

Their fearsome reputation had reached his ears through the various tales spun by pirates and wanderers from across the Grand Line.

He has been wandering for a week to gather ...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 120 : JOURNEY TO THE NEW WORLD

After Luffy's comical victory over Enel, the Skypiean citizens celebrated their freedom from the tyrannical priest's rule.

The Straw Hat Pirates, battered but still hungry for party and food and money, gathered to reunite.

Nami, who had been kidnapped by Enel, was safely returned to the crew.

Tears of joy and relief flowed as they embraced their navigator once again.

Which immediately followed by Nami giving them a beating of there life time. Specially Sanji.

Ami...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 119 : LUFFY VS ENEL

After the intense battle against Enel, where the powerful Skypiean god had decimated Luffy's crewmates and kidnapped Nami, the rubbery captain of the Straw Hat Pirates was left with no choice but to confront the foe on Upper Yard.

With Nami's safety at stake, there was no time for hesitation.

So Luffy was the only one who did not fight Enel because he was trying to find the so-called god to fight him. Acted as soon as possible.

After making sure that his all friends are safe...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 118 : ENEL AND LEARNING HAKI

The Milky Road was a mesmerizing cloud formation, a winding path of white puffy clouds that spiralled endlessly into the sky.

Luffy and Usopp's voyage after Jin stayed behind with Satori was a thrilling one as they climbed higher and higher, eventually finding themselves soaring amidst the clouds, an entirely new world unfolding before them.

As they ventured further into the sky, they stumbled upon Sky Island, a wondrous place filled with strange creatures, unique landscapes, and ...

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Minato Template Chapter 187 : Akatsuki On The Move (Rewrite)

After talking with Jiraiya. Kirito was thinking hard about what he wanted to do.

What he really wanted.

So he continued to travel with Jiraiya. Going towards the Hidden rain.

It took 5 days to reach the land of rain but they finally reached it.

"So we are finally here right" Kirito asked.

"Yes, I only have come here once during the third great Shinobi War," Jiraiya said.

"I also took three disciples here. They were orphans." Jiraiya continued.

For Kir...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 117 : ORDEAL OF BALLS AND MANTRA

As Luffy, Usopp, and Jin ventured further into the mystical Sky Island known as Skypiea, they found themselves facing a daunting challenge known as the Ordeal of Balls on the Milky Road.

This peculiar trial was designed to test of combat skills in a floating realm high above the Blue Sea.

However, their task became even more challenging when they encountered the Satori an weird fat ball-like man, who possessed the unique ability of Mantra, also known as Observation Haki.

Sat...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 116 : UPLIFT, SKY ISLAND AND THE MILK ROAD

The Straw Hat Pirates embarked on a thrilling after taking care of that Bellamy guy for which Jin pretty much destroyed the entire Bar.

The adventure as they set their course for the fabled Sky Island was located high above the seas.

They were going to go there through the Uplift current from Jaya or at least that's what Cricket told them.

The crew was in high spirits as they navigated the dangerous waters of Jaya.

With the knowledge gained from their time in the islan...

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