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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 2 : SO THE STORY BEGINS

Time Skip 5 Years Later

Konohagakure No Sato

Takashi Jin was 12 year old now.

Or to be exact he just turn 12 years old last night and now he is sitting on top of the Hokage Monument and waiting for the sun to rise.

Over the years Jin has realised that he gets a birthday gift from the system on the daybreak of his birthday.

And thus he is waiting for the sun to rise.

[Ding. Happy birthday host]

[congratulation for completing 5 years of system ac...

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NARUTO THE UNTOUCHABLE CHAPTER 1 : I AM NO SAIYAN BUT WHO CARES

Konohagure no Sato.

On the top of the Hokage monument, a 7-year-old child was sitting. Waiting for the sunrise.

His name is Takashi Jin.

Panting slightly because of the all-morning training he did.

'I have been in this world for almost 7 years now and there is nothing'. thought Jin.

'At first, I thought I will get a super cool cheat or golden finger when I came to this world but till now there is no sign of a system or a template'.

Jin was born in the...

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Minato Template Chapter 15 : Rookie Of The Year (Rewrite)

Kirito saw the fireball coming and quickly used a replacement without any problem.

Sasuke saw that and gritted his teeth and once again rushed toward Kirito.

Kirito simply avoided his first attack and caught his second punch.

Sasuke was about to continue the attack but Kirito did not let him. He kicks Sasuke point-blank in his face again.

Once again Sasuke was on the ground and seething with anger.

The entire classroom now was silent, especially Sasuke's fangirls...

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Minato Template Chapter 14 : Kirito Vs Sasuke (Rewrite)

Everyone was gossiping among themselves. Kirito is usually a passive person who doesn't like to fight but today he challenges Sasuke for the rookie of the year spot.

"Are you sure you want to fight Sasuke Kirito" Iruka ask Kirito before letting them fight.

"Yes sensei, I would like to fight for the rookie of the year spot" said Kirito and looked at Sasuke.

Sasuke did not give any reaction from the outside but from the inside, he too was a little surprised at how unexcepted t...

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Minato Template Chapter 13 : Challenge (Rewrite)

While Ino was hugging Kirito or more like crushing him to death.

Almost all of the students were looking at him. It was not something new that they had seen.

Almost every day, both of them behaved the same but even now everyone was jealous.

The boys of the class were jealous of Kirito to land the prettiest girl in the class.

Girls were Jealous of Ino because he got all of Kirito's attention. While there Sasuke Kun was not giving them any attention.

Maybe the most...

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Minato Template Chapter 12 : Ino Chan And Kirito Kun (Rewrite)

Kirito was super happy after finally learning the technique.

The only thing he wanted to do was to eat and sleep now.

Kirito then went to his home and slept without caring for anything more.

Kirito long realised that he need to find a way to increase his template progress faster.

With just training, the speed is so slow that he can't get stronger by the time the Fourth Shinobi War comes.

With the help of his Shadow Clone technique, he trains more but there is a l...

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Minato Template Chapter 11 : Rasengan Mastery (Rewrite)

Konohagakure No Sato

4 Years Later.

Kirito's Secret Training Ground.

'Why it's not working', thought Kirito.

For five weeks he has been working on this technique and still, he could not complete this Rasengan.

'The hell with this technique' thought Kirito, cursing in his mind.

Kirito was by no means an impatient person but he also had his limits.

This technique Naruto learns literally in less than a month and the same goes for Kakashi, Jiraiya, Konoha...

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Minato Template Chapter 10 : Passing Time (Rewrite)

Konohagakure No Sato.

6 Months Later.

It was 10th October again. Kirito's and Naruto's 8th birthday.

In the past year, Kirito has stayed low-key most of the time.

He makes friends with almost every student in his class.

His relationship with Ino was also improving. They are not couples but really good friends.

He is friends with all the clan's heirs at this point except Sasuke.

After the death of his clan, he stopped talking with others and got obsess...

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Minato Template Chapter 9 : Uchiha Massacred (Rewrite)

Konohagakure No Sato.

Uchiha District.

late in the night, when everyone in the Uchiha compound was asleep. There was one person who was entirely bloodied.

This was Itachi Uchiha and he was about to kill his Parents.

"So, this is what you choose Itachi".

Fugaku Uchiha said without any kind of facial expression on his face. He was not even looking at his son who came to kill him and his wife.

"Father".

Itachi said but did not complete what he wanted to ...

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Minato Template Chapter 8 : Training Again (Rewrite)

The following events after Shisui's death were pretty much the same as it was in the anime.

The entire Uchiha clan was in an uproar.

But this in the end brought them down from their high horse and delayed their betrayal.

While Danzo was out there hunting Shisui.

Kirito was working hard.

Besides getting Shisui's eyes and a dead body. Kirito also plans to get to Danzo's roots.

What he planned was to get a normal understanding of the layout of the place and al...

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Minato Template Ch 7 : Shisui Is Dead (Rewrite)

One of the most lethal powers or weapons which Kirito had was his knowledge of the future.

After thinking about the entire plot of Naruto. Kirito created a plan which most probably saves him a lot of hard work and trouble in the future.

The Idea of Sharingan was good but there were many problems which he had no idea how to tackle. 

Problems like how to attach the eyes and don't get all of his chakras to sucked away.

Even if he is a Uzumaki and in future he will le...

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Minato Template Ch 6 : Need To Get Stronger (Rewrite)

After a lot of talking. Finally, the end of the chat came.

Just like in the Anime. The teacher of Konoha 9 was Iruka.

After the roll call which surprisingly was similar to any normal school. The class started.

Kirito already has decided to be average in the class.

He has to be average when it comes to fighting power and he can cover that in the study section.

Nobody cares whether you got full marks in the academy test.

But it does give Kirito a little edge ...

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Minato Template Ch 5 : Meeting Ino (Rewrite)

Naruto was talking with his only friends who he knew.

Shikamaru and Choji were the only children besides Kirito who talked to Naruto.

Everyone else was either instructed by their parents not to talk to the demon brothers or they just didn't want to connect with the clan-less orphans like them.

The only other member of future team 10 (if the future remains the same that is) was in her circle.

Ino was friends with almost all the girls in the class. The most she talked wi...

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Minato Template Ch 4 : Ninja Academy (Rewrite)

Finally, the day came when Kirito and Naruto were about to attend the ninja academy.

Naruto was super happy but Kirito on the other hand was in deep thought.

The reason is, that he doesn't know whether he should show what he can do or hold back.

The upside of showing his power is that he might be promoted to Genin faster and might also get some favour from Hokage.

Maybe gets a Jutsu or two but there is hardly any Jutsu that he doesn't know already thanks to Minato's me...

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Minato Template Ch 3 : Happy Birthday (Rewrite)

TIME SKIP - 1 YEAR LATER

Kirito has grown a little in the past year.

In this past year, he has been working hard to grow stronger.

However, he was only able to learn 3 new techniques in the entire calendar year.

And with every technique he learned, he got mastery. Meaning he can do it without a hand sigh and even some variation if he so desires.

[The Replacement Technique]

[Shun-Shin Technique]

[Transformation Technique]

He learned them all. He ...

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Minato Template Ch 2 : Shadow Clone And Hyper Focus (Rewrite)

It's already been 5 months since Kirito got his template open.

Currently, Kirito is working on his Taijutsu. He also wanted to learn Shuriken Jutsu but could not because he didn't have the shurikens or kunai.

He doesn't have money either to purchase them. Even if he gets the money somehow, he doubts that he can purchase them from the village.

Another very important thing which he was working on was shadow clone Jutsu.

Pretty much all the Jutsus that Tobirama Senju crea...

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Minato Template Ch 1 : Minato Template (Rewrite)

<MC POV>

I am not sure why everything was dark. I did not have much energy either.

Every part of my body hurts.

I wanted to open my eyes but I could not. Maybe they are open but I don't think so.

I was crying, I could listen to my voice. But it was like I was a baby.

It was hard to even focus on something for more than a second.

I am so tired and my head hurts.

But I had to know what was going on. I had to focus.

I could feel I was lifted ...

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