Most of the difference is in the last panel. I actually had to adjust Charlotte's bed because I thought it wasn't long enough compared to her in the panel.
I might need to change the shadows at least in panel two if there's a window to the right of Annie and Lucy. Unless I'm suggesting it's brighter in the room and darker outside? ...or if I wanted to reverse Annie and Lucy in the last panel?
I'm going to put some male superhero on the wall of Charlotte's room. &...
2020-07-06 22:47:05 +0000 UTC
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I've been trying to go back and look at old backup disks for the originals of old (pre-2010) comics. I'm having mixed luck about it. I figure if I make this fully a SFW and NSFW Patreon, I might want to put up all of the old stuff that I made by myself (which wouldn't include PeEVEed, and maybe some of the shorter comics), and also consider trying to made larger versions than the old 630 pixel wide versions.
Although in my search now, I'm trying to locate the originals...
2020-07-06 22:09:47 +0000 UTC
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I wanted to do something more deluxe with more characters, but ran out of time. I instead decided to try to make the coloring a little more complex.
2020-07-05 10:08:03 +0000 UTC
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Panel 1-
Added a few details to the door on the first panel. It's going to have her name, with a lion, snake, and eagle- related to her powers. I also added a height scale for her, Annie and Lucy. I'm not sure if I should have more than one for each or not.
Panel 2-
One of the two possible alternative outfits for Charlotte. I was going to make them different color schemes, but they probably should be all the same colo...
2020-07-05 09:18:40 +0000 UTC
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So, the first page of chapter 30.
What I wanted to do here is have Charlotte and Dr. Mae leave Annie and Lucy behind and go to the complex. This is still the next morning after the sleepwalker arc, so I figure all of the characters from that story probably have barely gotten any sleep.
So, a shot of Charlotte's bedroom door. I might need to add some extra decorations to the door, I figure she's had that room since she was a child, so there probably would be some childi...
2020-07-04 09:02:36 +0000 UTC
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Last page of the chapter. Next chapter will start soon after this ends, and be more about Charlotte and trying to resolve the sleepwalkers in a coma, and maybe Mira.
I want Mira to be awake first, and without Arim. So the story gets only one twin again, but the other one.
2020-07-04 02:12:18 +0000 UTC
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Almost got this done, but ran out of time to work on it at the moment. I may get some time during the day to complete it, but it might end up a Saturday page.
(Because I'm late, this WIP goes up for all Patreons.)
What's left is the dialog (although I have a vague idea what they are saying), and there need to be some fixes to the background, and Lucy's right leg is missing in the last panel.
The dialog is something like-
Panel 1: Charlotte and Annie suggest L...
2020-07-03 11:07:46 +0000 UTC
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I think I have a slightly different plan for panel three. Lucy doesn't tell them that they she deserves to dress them up, she reminds them that Charlotte had two other alternative costumes originally to choose between. That they should each wear one of them.
The deal is, I've been considering giving Charlotte a different superhero outfit. The she ends up wearing she'll comment is better than she remembered and take it with her.
2020-07-01 11:54:57 +0000 UTC
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This is still pretty early. No dialog yet, I'm still trying to figure out how to balance the page here. I feel like I need to have kind of a wrap up. Charlotte and other characters are going to be the focus of the next chapter. At this point, Annie and Lucy have barely slept since the sleepwalker event yesterday. I figure they are both about ready to fall over.
Charlotte goes to the complex and things happen there (also Dr. Mae needs more time with her). &n...
2020-06-30 21:05:35 +0000 UTC
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This isn't designed like a typical webcomic. In a webcomic, you wouldn't start out with an almost splash page just because it might be a waste of a weekly update to do something that didn't have a lot of story in it.
In this page, you'd probably not want to end a webcomic page with a question. Unless it was some huge cliffhanger.
I attached the full psd files below. They are un-flattened, and possibly need certain Blambot free fonts in places. The "a" file ...
2020-06-29 23:57:03 +0000 UTC
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Trying different things. Because there isn't much text here, I just wrote it out old-school, and I'll letter it up when I get to that point.
It'll be kind of obvious where this is going in a page or two. I might need to edit Annie's text around to make sure she's giving the right hints.
At this early phase, I'll usually just draw gutter lines. Then later I'll fill them in, and fill in the gutter border around the edges with white.
2020-06-28 11:37:52 +0000 UTC
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One more page to this chapter. I have a couple of different versions for the payoff here, not sure which I'll pick.
The next chapter will be sort of from Charlotte's point of view, and almost be kind of set up as a reintroduction of the characters and setting some some limited degree.
2020-06-26 06:01:48 +0000 UTC
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I don't know if I'm going to try to draw the text on Annie's shirt, or use fonts and try to distort it. I still think Annie looks weird in the first panel for some reason. I'll have to try to analyze it.
2020-06-24 10:16:56 +0000 UTC
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I feel like there's a few places where I need to be careful or this page won't make sense. Something seems weird about Annie in the first panel, but it could just be the baggy clothes.
2020-06-23 11:57:15 +0000 UTC
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Okay, so Juno and Nani tied. (if you don't know who they are, they were both characters in a webcomic I used to make with someone else.) It's hard to put them both together, Juno was one of the tallest, and Nani the shortest.
Any thoughts on any of these? I'm having trouble deciding which Nani to use. In the original comic, both of these two had huge busts. In a redesign of the characters later, Nani ended up with a huge butt and small breasts to give the c...
2020-06-18 22:05:55 +0000 UTC
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Two more pages to this chapter. But the next chapter might be at least partly from Charlotte's point of view.
2020-06-18 08:54:21 +0000 UTC
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Who should it be?
2020-06-16 10:26:41 +0000 UTC
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The page is in pretty good shape so far for this week. I need to letter it next, and see where there's room for more detail in the backgrounds.
2020-06-16 10:22:34 +0000 UTC
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Eve from Peeved in a Famicom (Japanese NES) dress.
2020-06-15 07:52:12 +0000 UTC
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A request on Twitter. Wasn't sure how busty to go.
2020-06-15 07:50:06 +0000 UTC
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There's some bits unwritten from the dialog, but I thought it's possible to follow it so far.
Kind of thought I'd go heavy on the fan-service for Annie and Charlotte.
2020-06-14 09:40:12 +0000 UTC
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If you look in panel four, there's an early shot of Charlotte's father's costume.
I'm not sure Charlotte having underclothes under her costume doesn't work with older pages (if you could see tears with skin underneath, but it makes sense she'd have something under it.
There's at least two things hinted or talked about here that are important on the next page I guess I shouldn't spoil them.
2020-06-12 00:09:12 +0000 UTC
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A suggestion from Twitter.
2020-06-10 21:37:31 +0000 UTC
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This is the comic I almost made instead of remaking Pulse in 2010. It was going to be a big space comic. There's the original paces I made, 2009ish concept pictures for two of the leads, and then 2018ish sketches where I redesigned them (Lumina is the one with the HH jacket in one, Ajax is the woman in the last one).
I made the first few pages roughly, hopefully they can be understood. She's flying her missing father's ship and the pirates fire a torpedo into the cargo...
2020-06-10 07:22:24 +0000 UTC
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Over the years, there have been other comics I've considered making, but never got anywhere with them.
This was going to be a comic about a succubus. I don't think it was going to be very long, but I wanted to portray a different kind of character. I wanted her to be afraid of her abilities.
I don't know if I've ever posted this anywhere. Only the first page has art, but the other pages have the dialog in them that could help to get and idea of what the (probably...
2020-06-10 00:39:06 +0000 UTC
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Need to remember to add the grease spots to Annie. A lot of little to work to do.
2020-06-09 10:39:21 +0000 UTC
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Any requests? I thought I should try something different than the polls, that limits responses to just a vote. If one thing is the overwhelming winner I'll pick that.
...I guess it doesn't have to be Pulse related, but it can be also. You can be specific, or just suggest a character, or just suggest a theme or something without picking a character.
2020-06-08 21:07:03 +0000 UTC
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Still trying to work out Annie an Charlotte's poses in panel 5.
2020-06-08 10:25:32 +0000 UTC
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This is an old comic I made in 2002. My idea was short sci-fi cop stories. I'm not sure why they had swords, maybe it was inspired by the recent Star Wars Prequel movies?
It was going to be about two police officers far in the future. An older officer who has secrets in his mind he doesn't know about, and a younger female with physic abilities she'll only start tapping into over time.
If I remember correctly they are betrayed by another police officer, but I don'...
2020-06-08 04:24:19 +0000 UTC
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I'm wondering if I should edit the Patreon here. My original plan was to have two Patreons, one for Pulse, one for NSFW comics and anything else. I'd let the success of each decide what I made.
I'm starting to think that might be unfair. Maybe I should stick to one Patreon. Meaning this would be a Patreon for everything I make. I wouldn't just be posting Pulse wips and big-versions here, but any art, any comics. Materia Enhanced, maybe even some of th...
2020-06-07 21:08:22 +0000 UTC
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