Dragon Chat 23rd April 2024
Again, we have another Dragon Chat session dealing with a single story.
This session covers The Water Runs Red 5 for Game of Kingdoms (Chapter 40).
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Year 0 Part 6 (Lord's Access)
The redraft of this month's chapter for Còir Buaidh.
As always, comments, mistake spotting and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or on Discord. (To see future chapters even earlier, and if you can, consider joining the Discord server linked to Patreon. There, Lord-Master's have a private channel where I drop the chapters a few days earlier.)
2024-04-22 11:00:03 +0000 UTC View Post3.04 Training and Interruptions (Lord's Access)
The redraft of this month's A New Player in the Force chapter.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XzIQatvsvew5d6OyFfojZgIdPqc9eYfmOXJs636CJx4/edit?usp=sharing...
2024-04-21 11:00:08 +0000 UTC View PostThe Water Runs Red 1 (Lord's Access)
The redrafted version of this month's (no.36) Game of Kingdoms chapter.
As always, comments, mistake spotting and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or on Discord. (To see future chapters even earlier, and if you can, consider joining the Discord server linked to Patreon. There, Lord-Master's have a private channel where I drop the chapters a few days earlier.)
Dragon Chat April 16th 2024
This Dragon Chat is focused entirely on Còir Buaidh chapter Year 1 Part 3.
I'm going to try and have chats focus only on a single chapter of one story each time.
That should make it easier for people to listen to the chats they are interested in.
2024-04-18 18:50:30 +0000 UTC View PostService Annoucement
No, I'm not discontinuing any of my work, don't worry.
However, from this month the setup of the tiers will change.
The cost of each tier, long with the introduction of new tiers, will come into effect for NEW supporters, while some tiers will get altered benefits.
The cost of each tier - FOR NEW SUPPORTERS ONLY - will go up slightly. About £1 for each tier. This is simply to help cover living costs that have risen for me since I starte...
2024-04-15 11:00:09 +0000 UTC View PostYear 0 Part 6 Mk1
The last chapter of the Year 0 arc for Còir Buaidh.
This chapter deals with Dòmhnall scouting possible allies for the future (in ways I freely admit might come across as creepy), and him finally craving his first Flesh runic Array into his body. There's also a little bit about the difference between this Hogwarts and the canon one; at least with regards to how the students getting to the school is handled.
As always, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do no...
2024-04-12 11:00:06 +0000 UTC View Post3.04 Training and Interruptions Mk1
The draft version of chapter 4 of Book 3 of A New Player in the Force.
In this, Cam, Anakin, and Simvyl train with a Matukai Instructor, and then once the training is over, leave the planet intent on heading to their next destination.
As always, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary. I don't pay any attention to those in 1st drafts.
The Water Runs Red 1 Mk1
Draft of chapter 36 of Game of Kingdoms.
This is the start of (currently) a 6-arc run of Cregan's moves against the Pirate Lords of Redwater. Before then, however, Cregan has to bring his squires in on his secrets, as without doing so he cannot fulfil the promise to Doran Martell for teaching Trystane magic. And then have one final body join the voyage to Redwater.
As always, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes i...
2024-04-10 11:00:11 +0000 UTC View PostYear 0 Part 4 (General Access)
Part 4 of 6 of the Year 0 arc for Còir Buaidh.
This chapter focuses on Dom getting his supplies from Diagon Alley, alongside one of his cousins. During that, he meets two other students who will begin Hogwarts in his year.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
3.02 Replacements and Invitations (General Access)
Chapter 2 of Book 3 of A New Player in the Force.
This chapter deals with Cam getting his replacement arm and then getting an unexpected invitation to dinner with someone he'd never expected to meet.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
North to the Sun (General Access)
Chapter 34 of Game of Kingdoms.
This one covers Cregan's return from The Whores, a stop in Northpoint before travelling onward to Sunspear.
He also reaches 20000 skill levels, meaning new Standard and Special Traits.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
Dragon Chat March 26th 2024
Another session of the chat.
This one deals with Chapter 40 (The Water Runs Red 4) of Game of Kingdoms.
2024-03-28 18:09:45 +0000 UTC View PostDragon Chat March 19th 2024
This Dragon Chat happened, as the date states, last week but due to real-life issues, I forgot to upload it until now.
This session started off planning to deal with The Water Runs Red 4 for Game of Kingdoms. However, Eb was able to join at around the 10-minute mark, and we shifted focus to 3.07 of A New Player on the Force.
Tentatively, that chapter is called Chancellors and Royalty.
Year 0 Part 5 (Lord's Access)
This month's redrafted chapter for Còir Buaidh.
As always, comments, mistake spotting and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or on Discord. (To see future chapters even earlier, and if you can, consider joining the Discord server linked to Patreon. There, Lord-Master's have a private channel where I drop the chapters a few days earlier.)
2024-03-22 12:00:02 +0000 UTC View Post3.03 Upgrades and Training (Lord's Access)
This month's redrafted chapter for A New Player in the Force.
As always, comments, mistake spotting and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or on Discord. (To see future chapters even earlier, and if you can, consider joining the Discord server linked to Patreon. There, Lord-Master's have a private channel where I drop the chapters a few days earlier.)
Unexpected Additions (Lord's Access)
Redraft of this month's Game of Kingdoms chapter.
As always, comments, mistake spotting and ideas are more than welcome on the GDoc or on Discord. (To see future chapters even earlier, and if you can, consider joining the Discord server linked to Patreon. There, Lord-Master's have a private channel where I drop the chapters a few days earlier.)
2024-03-20 12:00:04 +0000 UTC View PostYear 0 Part 5 Mk1
Chapter 5 of 6 for the Year 0 arc.
Finally, after several years, Dòmhnall opens the fleshcarving tome. Of course, things are never that easy. Also, Bradley has the pleasure of meeting another pureblood beyond Dom, which sees the first admissions of Dom's intentions for the world.
As always, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary. I don't pay any attention to those in 1st drafts.
3.03 Upgrades and Training Mk1
The 3rd chapter of Book 3 of A New Player.
In this, Cam learns how Serra is doing, though he's is unable to speak with her directly, and then Raven gets examined by Raith Sienar and his engineers.
As always, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary. I don't pay any attention to those in 1st drafts.
Unexpected Additions Mk 1
Chapter 35 of Game of Kingdoms.
In this, Cregan is back in Sunspear, and discovers why his father was so happy at the end of the last chapter.
And then we get our first POVs from other characters in the story. This, like others that may occur later on, will only ever be from those who never got POVs in canon.
As always, comments and ideas are welcome here or on Discord. Also, do note that spotting grammar/spelling mistakes isn't necessary. I don't pay any attention to ...
2024-03-10 12:00:03 +0000 UTC View PostYear 0 Part 3 (General Access)
Part 3 of 6 of the Year Zero arc.
It's finally Domhnall's 11th birthday, and we all know what that entails, though before then, House Black moves to further strengthen the bonds between themselves and Clan MacLeod.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
3.01 Evolution and Adaption (General Access)
We've reached the start of Book 3 of A New Player (taken long enough, lol).
This one revolves around Cam making his choice for how he wants the Interface to evolves, and him making plans for how his and Anakin's training is to go over the next few years.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
Raiding the Wh*res Part 2 (General Access)
The second part of the arc covering Cregan's raids of The Wh*res island chain in the Stepstones.
This time around, things don't go as well for Cregan and he has to do something extreme to ensure he and his men survive.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
2024-03-01 12:00:09 +0000 UTC
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Hogwarts Students
Since the student population in Còir Buaidh is far larger than canon, I've not yet created the entirety of Dom's year. to say nothing of the other years.
What I do have is a spreadsheet with most named students added, along with a handle of others.
If you have an OC you'd like to add, be they from a Canon family or not, feel free to add them.
Provided they're not too outlandish, they'll likely be added to the story in some way, even if just as a backgroun...
Raiding The Wh*res Part 1
So, I mucked up and sent the link for Part 2 of the arc instead of Part 1.
My bad.
Here's the GDoc link for Part 1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jrLVlmrBKJGwLQcpr9uYe33ZmgWhS9R3bqCdM90zJAU/edit?usp=sharing
2024-02-06 10:52:54 +0000 UTC View PostYear 0 Part 2 (General Access)
Part 3 (of 6) of the Year Zero arc for Còir Buaidh.
This one deals with Dom seeing a memory from his grandfather, and learning that for all the traits and perks he has, he's got a very long road ahead of him to reach his potential.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
TPM6 (General Access)
Chapter 6 of the arc, and last chapter of Book 2 of A New Player.
This chapter deals with the fallout of liberating Naboo, What happened with Anakin, and cleaning up a few loose ends.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
Year 0 Part 1 (General Access)
The first part of Domhnall's Year 0 before attending school.
This chapter covers first a discussion with Sirius and Arcturus, and then attending a cousin's birthday.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
TPM5 (General Access)
Chapter 5 of the arc, which is the last part of Book 2 of A New Player.
This chapter is, I suspect, the one everyone's been waiting on.
While most of the focus is on Cam and Maul, there are shifts to others, including Padme.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.
Building From Dust (General Access)
Chapter 31 of Game of Kingdoms.
This chapter deals with Cregan working to start the development of Dustspear and then readying himself for the next leg of his adventures in the Stepstones.
As always, if you have any comments feel free to leave them here or on the Gdoc, and if you spot any mistakes or have suggestions for a slight alteration, feel free to comment on the Gdoc.