Chapter 14 of Book 3 of A New Player.
In this chapter, Cam deals with the choices made in the last chapter. He works to unlock another holocron, and begins planning for the future now he's free of the Jedi.
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The first chapter for the Bloodstone arc (and 46th overall) of Game of Kingdoms.
In this chapter, Cregan prepares to move against Bloodstone while elsewhere, his actions have drawn the attention of others.
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Part 3 of the Year 2 arc, and 30th overall, chapter for Còir Buaidh.
This chapter focuses heavily on the aftermath of the end of the last chapter, and seeing how many, including Dom, react to the incident.
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Chapter 16 of Book 3 of A New Player.
This chapter sees the start of a 6-chapter arc where Cam finally deals with one of the longest-sitting quests he has. A return to Dromund Kaas and a delve into the lore of the Ancient Sith Empire from the TOR era.
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3rd part of the Bloodstone arc ( and 48th overall) chapter for Game of Kingdoms.
This chapter deals with the clean up after taking care of the Blood Serpent and then driving back Aeron Indarys to his ports and fort.
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Chapter 14 of Book 3 of A New Player.
In this chapter, Cam deals with the choices made in the last chapter. He works to unlock another holocron, and begins planning for the future now he's free of the Jedi.
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As of April, there will be changes to the primary tier rewards. These are as follows:
Youngling: No change (Stories will remain 1 chapter ahead of public releases)
Acolyte: There will be no more drafts, and this tier will move to 2 chapters ahead for each story. However, the chapter for this tier is the chapter at full length, not draft/Mk1 length.
Apprentice: There will be no more drafts, and this tie...
Due to a change I'm implementing, there are no drafts this month for ANP and CB.
The overall structure of my Patreon will change from April, with this rank gaining new benefits.
To make up for the lack of drafts this month, when the Warrior's Access for ANP chapter comes out, I'll grant those at Apprentice access to it.
2025-03-06 12:00:08 +0000 UTC View PostThe draft of chapter 1 of 4 for the Bloodstone arc, and the 46th overall chapter of Game of Kingdoms.
In this chapter, Cregan prepares to move against Bloodstone while elsewhere, his actions have drawn the attention of others.
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fIgAzkc0wc2938uDpstGwBvx02-wEj4mPacnyOytSQo/edit?usp=drive_link
2025-03-05 12:00:10 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 9 of the Year 1 arc, and 27th overall chapter for Còir Buaidh.
In this chapter, Dòmhnall head off on travels with Arcturus, Sirius, and Regulus to the Greek Free States and Egypt. Expect a lot of world-building to be hinted at in those trips.
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Chapter 13 of book 3 of A New Player.
In this chapter, Cam entertains Anakin while Dooku is busy shopping at the Temple. After that, Cam returns to the Temple so that he and Dooku can speak with the Council.
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Chapter 5 (of 5) for the Shrouded Isle arc and the 45th overall chapter of Game of Kingdoms.
In this chapter, Cregan deals with The Bloodhawk in an attempt to take control of The Shrouded Isle, and with it all the islands on the Western Side of the Stepstones.
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The 2nd chapter of the Year 2 arc (and 29th overall chapter) for Còir Buaidh.
In this chapter, Dòmhnall and his friends head into Hogsmeade, he continues to work on securing the friendship of possibly key figures, and begins to assert himself in the duelling club.
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The 15th chapter of book 3 of A New Player.
In this chapter.... well its a continuation of the last with the first POV being from a new, but important, character. It also continues on events after Cam's departure for the Jedi Order.
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The 2nd chapter of the Bloodstone arc (and 47th overall) for Game of Kingdoms.
This chapter deals with the continuing efforts to capture Bloodstone, the last island in the Stepstones Cregan is focused on taking. There is news of his family back in Sunspear along with a major battle against one of the two major pirate lords on the island.
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2025-02-25 12:00:09 +0000 UTC View PostThe mk1/1st draft of Part 9 of the Year 1 arc, and 27th overall chapter of Còir Buaidh.
In this chapter, Dòmhnall head off on travels with Arcturus, Sirius, and Regulus to the Greek Free States and Egypt. Expect a lot of world-building to be hinted at in those trips.
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BPSxchqcB2KiWl...
2025-02-07 12:00:07 +0000 UTC View PostThe Mk1/1st draft of the 2nd chapter of a 2-chapter arc (and 13th overall) for A New Player Book 3.
In this chapter, Cam entertains Anakin while Dooku is busy shopping at the Temple. After that, Cam returns to the Temple so that he and Dooku can speak with the Council.
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qmL3u0qTuAMif5BQSGSJvN7HwslTfahjV0ZW...
2025-02-06 12:00:07 +0000 UTC View PostThe mk1/1st draft for chapter 5 (of 5), and 45th overall for Game of Kingdoms.
In this chapter, Cregan deals with The Bloodhawk in an attempt to take control of The Shrouded Isle, and with it all the islands on the Western Side of the Stepstones.
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/12MtZ8mIA6ndyl5GHpV9QCdStF15u4kDhBRjOk0RorC4/edit?usp=dri...
2025-02-05 12:00:12 +0000 UTC View PostIn this, Dòmhnall begins his summer holidays. First up is recovering from his 2nd flesh array. Afterwards, it's time to venture into Dunscaith's forest and hunt some magical pests. Finally, it's time to head off on an adventure with Arcturus Black and his grandchildren, Sirius and Regulus.
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2025-02-03 12:00:10 +0000 UTC
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Chapter 1 of a 2 chapter arc (and 12th overall) for A New Player Book 3.
Cam heads back to Kiffu with Quinlan and details the defeat of Volfe Karkko, returns to the Lokella while considering his options for the future. He also duels once again with Dooku, getting an idea of where he stands in comparison to his former Master.
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2025-02-02 12:00:09 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 4 (of 5), and 44th overall for Game of Kingdoms, covers the cleansing and taking of the Shrouded Isle. Lucian Koros is dealt with and then Cregan moves on to facing the last pirate lord of the isle, The Bloodhawk.
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The mk1/1st draft of Part 8 of the Year 1 arc, and 26th overall chapter of Còir Buaidh.
In this, Dòmhnall begins his summer holidays. First up is recovering from his 2nd flesh array. Afterwards, it's time to venture into Dunscaith's forest and hunt some magical pests. Finally, it's time to head off on an adventure with Arcturus Black and his grandchildren, Sirius and Regulus.
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The Mk1/1st draft of the 1st chapter of a 2-chapter arc (and 12th overall) for A New Player Book 3.
Cam heads back to Kiffu with Quinlan and details the defeat of Volfe Karkko, returns to the Lokella while considering his options for the future. He also duels once again with Dooku, getting an idea of where he stands in comparison to his former Master.
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The mk1/1st draft for chapter 4 (of 5), and 44th overall for Game of Kingdoms.
This chapter continues the cleansing and taking of the Shrouded Isle. Lucian Koros is dealt with and then Cregan moves on to face the last pirate lord of the isle, The Bloodhawk.
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dLHfApwIGRPeygjVqDbekGVLCTW_Tl2H44-mIZylDXI/edit...
2025-01-05 12:00:06 +0000 UTC View PostChapter 7 of 9 of the Year 1 arc, and 25th overall chapter of Còir Buaidh.
This chapter carries on from the last, dealing with inviting two canon characters back to Dunscaith. After returning to Hogwarts, Dom has a run in with an older student, and Xeno starts to assert himself within the Slytherin chambers.
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2025-01-03 12:00:06 +0000 UTC View PostPart 2 of the arc, and chapter 11 overall of book 3 of A New Player.
In this, which borrows heavily from the relevant comic the events are based on, Cam, Quinlan, and party travel over Kiffex seeking Aayla and the dark force influencing her.
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Part 3 of 5 of the taking of The Shrouded Isle, and 43rd overall chapter of Game of Kingdoms.
This chapter sees Cregan's forces move towards encircling the fort-village of Lucian Koros. However, before they can attack the gods intervene, and an old face from Dorne appears with reinforcements.
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Those on Discord are already aware of this, but my beta/co-author wrote a treatise on the Force (you'll find it pinned in the main Patreon channel) if he lived in the SW universe.
While not 100% how Cam will describe things in ~10-15 years it's an insight that I feel many might enjoy reading/debating. As such, i present to you:
https://docs.google....
Another day, another poll.
Though this is less a poll, and more a general survey.
Do you have any specific comments or suggestions regarding my writing?
If Yes, please drop a comment
2024-12-30 09:00:07 +0000 UTC View PostAnother day, another poll.
For this one, the question is this:
Which story do you enjoy the most?
While I'd prefer you only vote for a single story, if you like two equally, I'll allow it.
2024-12-29 09:00:06 +0000 UTC View Post