So we established that I would be adding sex scenes to Komand'r On Deck and that they will be skippable as I put a warning before them, despite myself not writing sex scene if they aren't relevant to the plot. After all, when I always do something... it has significance in the story.
But this question is for Raptor of life, sure we had sex scenes between Jean and Cindy before. But now it's going to be between Anna-Marie (Rogue) and Jean and the southern belle is a freaky little minx in ...
2023-02-17 15:12:26 +0000 UTC
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Okay, after receiving some good advices from my readers and Beta-Readers and Editors. I decided to reduce how long Raptor of life chapters are. I will stay at 9k minimum and 13k words maximum to boost the release schedule for this series. Can't do that for Komand'r with its current interlude, but once I'm done with the Injustice Jump, I will try to stay at 6k between chapter for Komand'r.
2023-02-14 00:01:39 +0000 UTC
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So Guys, what do you think about Spirit Take Over and Combat Artificer so far?
2023-02-13 14:44:55 +0000 UTC
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Spirit Take Over
Chapter 3
We must be swift as a coursing river
With all the force of a great typhoon
With all the strength of a raging fire
Mysterious as the dark side of the moon
×-X-×
Spartan Training wasn’t enough to describe what I was going through. There weren’t any words in the dictionary to describe what I was going through, only my curre...
2023-02-13 12:25:30 +0000 UTC
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Interlude 12
(Cindy Moon)
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She suddenly woke up with a killer headache, then she noticed that she couldn’t move. Cindy looked at her body, she was in a red jumpsuit with a number thirteen on her front; her wrists were held by leather scraps on the chair she was sitting on. With all her strength she pulled, breaking the restraints and she was free. That was when the fucking alarm blared and the lights turned completely red.
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2023-02-10 13:11:42 +0000 UTC
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Interlude
(Sienna Khan)
March 6th, 1980
Brook Town
Just after passing Alexandre’s portal…
She watched the portal close up with the attractive older boy looking down at her. His crystal blue eyes boring into her… and she felt inadequate somehow. Her hands tightened on the bag full of food and money that he had given her.
It wasn't pity that had driven him to give it to her, but compassion and the fact that s...
2023-02-08 21:11:33 +0000 UTC
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Interlude 3
2023-01-31 02:25:27 +0000 UTC
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Chapter 2
Outside Brook Town
Evening.
Money spent: 800 Silver Drachmas. It included food and water. I pulled the cart that I bought for cheap; it was loaded with tools of all sorts. My camping gear was there too, there was no way that I was going to sleep in an expensive inn. I would build my own house and get used to my abilities. The road leading inside Brook town was well maintained, it was next to a big flowing river with shallow clear wate...
2023-01-27 14:17:15 +0000 UTC
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Spirit Take Over
Chapter 2
The world is a book and those who do not travel read only one page.
×-X-×
X776
April 16th
1 hour later
I unins...
2023-01-25 11:13:57 +0000 UTC
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Wanted to keep you informed people!
Komand'r Interlude 3 part 5 is coming along well, i'm at 9k words already, but it's not even the middle of the chapter because I'm setting up for a big fight in the chapter.
I wanted to ask you if you were okay with me adding sex scene in the chapters, not everyone like them. Comment below to answer please!
Spirit Take Over chapter 2 is being worked on at the same time, it's currently 6531 words.
2023-01-20 13:52:59 +0000 UTC
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Chapter 1
It was dark in the church, the only light visible was passing through the stained glasses and the candlelight. The atmosphere was getting colder as my sister and I were fighting for our lives, why did we have to confront that demon in the church? We were just girls! But just because I was the second born I had to cave in to Mira's demands. If we get out of this alive I will make sis's life a living hell. I faced the ugly demonic mien of the demon who was block...
2023-01-03 14:50:10 +0000 UTC
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March 15th, 2010
Mars’ orbit, L2
2023-01-03 14:43:02 +0000 UTC
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Edited by LuluViB|99th Britannian Emperor
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Chapter 6
(Heda Dool)
Coruscant
Slum district G17
Trueping’s bar
18 hours after Destiny got back home…
2023-01-03 14:33:27 +0000 UTC
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So people like I said I would, this is the poll!
I hope you'll chose... wisely.
2023-01-03 13:48:39 +0000 UTC
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Heya guys! Wanted to give you some news.
Interlude 3 part 4 is 18508 words, I am about to drop the chapter right now; incidentally, I realized that I need to make a part 5 and 6 to truly finish the interlude. Sorry about this, but they keep getting longer. And I already wrote the end of how it conclude.
I'm going to make a poll about what to write next!
It's going to be Between:
Raptor of life Interlude 12 (Cindy Interlude)
Kom...
2023-01-03 13:41:49 +0000 UTC
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Merry Chrismas guys, I hope you're going to have a good time!
2022-12-24 14:42:15 +0000 UTC
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Hello guys! It's going to be Xmas soon, so I wanted to give you some news!
Komand'r interlude 3 part 4 is currently 14695 words and it keep growing, so I think it will be over 20-25k easy. Yes, I know it's a lot but that's how I work lol. The story kinda write itself.
Once I'm done with the interlude with part 5 which will conclude it, I will write chapter 17 and then switch back to Raptor of life for a while, this include the Interlude with Cindy and chapter 22.<...
2022-12-22 17:39:17 +0000 UTC
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~/.\~
(Harly Qui
2022-12-07 13:08:43 +0000 UTC
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So guys, I'm going to post Komand'r Interlude 3 part 3 soon, it's also longer than the other parts somehow...
I'm going to give the editors free reign to look at it.
Stay tuned!
2022-12-06 01:39:15 +0000 UTC
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Koman'dr in space with her Nth metal soft-suit and sword in the scabbard.
2022-11-16 17:17:54 +0000 UTC
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A/N: Continuation of Komand'r training in the I
2022-11-02 18:10:53 +0000 UTC
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A/N: This interlude take where we left of in chapter 16. Komand'r decided to go to another universe to train for her confrontation with Hela (Because the death Goddess is too OP), thanks to her ship tech on the Murder Deck. She went to the DC Injustice universe where she will have no qualms killing the Heroes turned villains or kill the villains taking advantage of the situation.
Chapter is raw though, none of the editors touched it yet, so bear with me lol.
Edit...
2022-10-28 15:03:16 +0000 UTC
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Heya guys, wanted to tell you that I am getting Komand'r On Deck interlude 3 there, it's already 10k words, do you guy want the full chapter or should I divide it into part for you? Because the Interlude is going to be easily 30k words or more.
2022-10-25 17:29:26 +0000 UTC
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(Thor Odinson)
2022-10-19 12:20:54 +0000 UTC
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Komand'r On Deck
Chapter 16
May 16th, 2010
Hyperdimension
Bridge
The bridge raised at the top of the pyramid section of the Hyperdimension, they were hovering over the newly built Arcology. The ship was projecting even more shadow on the city of Los Angeles than the mountain sized megastructure. On the holographic screen of the communication officer, Alari, there were humans taking pictures or videos of the ship; the Tamaranean female ...
2022-10-04 14:46:08 +0000 UTC
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Interlude 11
(Betsy Braddock)
Egypt base
February 24th, 1997
14:02 (Egypt time)
Betsy was surprised by what she was seeing in that new fangled hospital. People in blue scrub kept moving machines to people that they pried from their armors in for regenerating their bodies or limbs in some sort of tank monitored by big banks of computers. The young woman had just woken up after the doctors had flushed out the drugs keeping her body under...
2022-09-21 23:44:48 +0000 UTC
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Chapter 5
(Jedi GrandMaster Yoda)
50 BBY
Core Worlds
Coruscant subsector/Corusca sector
Coruscant system/Coruscant
Senate District
Jedi Temple/High Council Chamber
The High Council Chamber, also known as the Jedi Council Chamber, was a circular room at the summit of the High Council Tower of the Jedi Temple. It was located at the peak of the southeast tower of the Temple, this circular chamber granted its occ...
2022-08-30 13:09:52 +0000 UTC
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Chapter 21 Part 2
2022-08-24 19:19:32 +0000 UTC
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Heya guys, so sorry for not having posted anything recently, Summer is busy busy. But fortunately for you a Raptor chapter is coming: 21.2 which is 22904 words so far, I am almost done!
Then I will continue to work on my Gamer story! Céleste is going to complete the Tutorial Dungeon and after that start doing them with gusto.
There's also SHP 49 which is 9k words, but I'm not happy with it and might need to rewrite it completely.
Celestial Wars is coming along well too! I e...
2022-08-21 15:52:00 +0000 UTC
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