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Madison's Unfinished Artwork

So, the artist kinda bailed on me, but he did give me a promise that he would finish this eventually after he got his college life in order. I also never paid for it since he took too long with the Swind work. I was going to pay him upon completion, so yay?

This is the one I want completed:


And this is the one with the most progress: 


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SIS Book 2 Chapter 70: Teasing Maddy and Expedition to Middletown [First Draft]

 

First, Daz checked his status to see if anything major had changed. He sincerely hoped that he had more stat slots. Despite the fact that he had been against the idea previously, time and time again it had been proven that he needed the Regeneration stat, so Daz was hoping to finally buy it.


[Host's Status

Basic Information

Name: Daz

Species: Reaper

Race...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 110: Personal Request and Immortal Slaying [First Draft]

 

Lipsilk looked down at the four council elders who were dead in front of him with a saddened look on his face. "To think that we still had so many traitors..."

Now that he was fully healed, Lipsilk was able to employ an inherent Fairy skill of his, Intention Detection. Of course, he hadn't had a reason to use this skill, that was, at least until these four elders suddenly claimed that Lone was badly needed outside of the tree to take care of an approaching monster army.

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 69: Morte's Will and Racial Adjustments [First Draft]

 

A suffocating feeling was hanging in the air of the Chamber of Council. All of the higher gods found themselves holding their breath as they witnessed the scene before them.

Morte was in the centre of the pure-white room, and his screams pierced even their souls. Several hours passed like that before his nearly-lifeless body scattered down onto the ground.

Every higher god then received a message from the system.


[Punishment had been d...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 109: Fighting Royalty and Elven Lovers [First Draft]

 

King Ele'hunda led Lone to an open courtyard that was tucked away behind the palace. "This is my private training area, though I hardly use it anymore. No one may enter or observe it without my permission, which is perfect just in case I somehow end up embarrassing myself."

Lone looked around in wonder as he replied offhandedly. "There's no shame in losing to someone 'technically' weaker than you. Shame can only be found in not being humbled and learning from that experience....

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 68: Rimmy's Fighting Resolve and Unbridled Rage [First Draft]

 

Sparing not a single moment, Rimmy's colossal body sprinted across the muddy and broken field. It was hard to imagine that such a large figure could move so fast, but less than a second had passed before he was upon Mu.

Rimmy repeatedly punched the Chinese man's body over and over and over and over again. He didn't stop, no, he wouldn't stop.

Rimmy's assault only came to a halt when his core sensed that something was wrong. Abandoning his main bo...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 108: Elestia's Similarities and The King's Wrinkles [Draft]

 

Most of the people on the world tree's crown still gave Lone funny looks when he walked around with a baby on his head, but due to how adorable Kyuubi was, everyone tried to ignore it and simply continue going about their days without making a fuss.

There was also the new distraction of Lone's changed tail colour to gather everyone's attention instead of the sleeping infant.

Of course, the streets were noticeably less active in some areas and more so in others due to the new...

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Minor Schedule Update

I expect to post all of the chapters for this week on the weekend.

I've been reading Mother of Learning somewhat religiously, to the point that I am actively avoiding sleep. Not only is it an amazing read, it is giving me so much insight into being a better author.

Here's a link for anyone interested:  Mother of Learning

It is just over 700,000 words I believe which is bigger th...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 67: Negotiations and It's Not Over Yet [First Draft]

 

Daz watched this unknown Asian man as he got off of the black cloud he was sitting on and patiently stood outside of the barrier. The man looked no older than himself, and he had a loose smile on his handsome face.

"Everyone, return to Fort Skip... I'm going to go see if I can talk to him. He hasn't moved for a while now, so here's hoping he can be reasoned with," Daz said.

Crusher snorted. "We should just crush him. Do you really think he can beat me, you, Madison, Barbaros...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 107: Might Stat and Utter Shock [First Draft]

 

Sophie returned Garadia, Lone, and herself to their bedroom as soon as she was satisfied with hugging the fluffy Dragon baby.

Lone placed the curious Garadia on the sheets before he summoned Kyuubi.

Naturally, the tiny Foxkin was sleeping peacefully. Lone carefully put her down next to Garadia. "This is Kyuubi, your older sister."

Garadia slowly walked around Kyuubi and sniffed at her. This continued for a few moments until she finally settled down and curled her soft ...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 66: System's Displeasure and Mu's Arrival [First Draft]

 

The instant that the ceremony to judge Daz's potential was over, Crosius approached the sleeping Reaper and tried to wake him up by touching his shoulder, however, as soon as his hand came close to Daz, the young man's eyes snapped open.

"You sensed my hand, My Lord?" Crosius asked with a warm smile on his face.

Daz nodded. "I was raised to be cautious."

"So I see, My Lord. The system should have a notification waiting to be read by you regarding your potential te...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 106: Ascending and Fluffiness Overload [First Draft]

 

Radiance took a short pause before she elaborated on her reasons.

"I can sense Darkness within you. Not just a part of him, but his entirety. Not only him, but even the second strongest Primal Essence, Sky, as well as the rogue Primal Essence, Void. A body such as yours that can house a soul powerful enough to contain so many full Primal Essences is unheard of," Radiance said with some fervour in her tone.

"I am special...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 65: Base Upgrades and Keep [First Draft]

 

With all of that city nonsense out of the way, Daz now knew that he had far more leeway to upgrade Fort Skip.

"First thing's first, system, please upgrade Fort Skip's size," Daz requested.


[Base Size Upgrade

Below-Average Base Size Upgrade

Description

Hey, look at you. Not long ago you were little, but now you can happily tell your wife that you are just below average! Congra...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 64: Future Project and Useless City [First Draft]

 

Once Daz opened his eyes, he was surprised to see that he was alone in his bed for a change. "Maddy actually woke up on her own? That's a surprise."

Daz wasn't overly concerned since this had happened every once in a while when the two were living together with Rose just a couple of years ago.

The young Reaper stretched before fixing his hair. After that, he got dressed and left the bedroom. Once he had reached the shared living room and kitchen, he saw Rose playing one...

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[Repost because idiot Lone fucked it up on his first try.] New LTW Cover Art For All Current Books + Book 4!

So I will be posting this on Royalroad as well for the free users and not making it one month early access. The reason behind this is simply because ssddx made these covers for me for free, and it would be wrong of me to essentially charge you guys to see it early when he worked very hard to do this purely out of the kindness of his heart.

I hope you can all understand that, and I hope you like them as much as I do!

P.S: The colours do have some significance. I wonder if anyone can figur...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 105: Memories and Radiance [First Draft]

 

The small seed that had escaped the wooden box flew through the outsider mansion. It completely ignored all of the doors and the walls and penetrated everything in its path before it was finally in Lone and Sophie's room.

Naturally, Lone and Sophie could sense the immense amounts of mana spewing out of this small object that was coming towards them, so they both shot out of bed and prepared themselves as it approached.

Unfortunately for them, even with their power as S-...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 104: Numerous Upgrades and Darkness' Warning [First Draft]


Status

Name: Lone Immortus

Sex: Male

Age: 26

Level: 864 [+365]

Species: Foxkin

Rank: [Up 2 entire ranks!]

Race: Golden Sky Fox of The Endless Void

HP: 16,060/16,...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 63: Reinstated Advisor and Disgruntled Mu [First Draft]


[Basic Craftsmanship [E-Rank (Middle Tier)]

Description

A skill for those who have only just begun their long and arduous journey as a craftsman.

Most toddlers affiliated with the system have this skill passively after playing with some building blocks, but hey, who am I to judge you for being a slow learner?

Level

10

Abilities

All crafting done...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 103: Questionable Methods and Lipsilk's Darkness [First Draft]

 

Sophie teleported back to the outsider mansion with Lone, and immediately, Lone's expression cracked as he looked at the state of his friends who were lying around haphazardly in the courtyard.

Everyone was covered in cuts and bruises, especially Eolande. For some reason, she seemed to be in a far more precarious situation that everyone else.

"Sophie?" Lone looked at the small girl next to him with a scolding gaze in his eyes.

Sophie whistled like it had nothing t...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 62: Multicoloured Skull and Diving Titan [First Draft]

 

"Angel's Breath," Madison said as she cured Edward of his wounds.

Before he could thank her, she flew towards the other side of the desert to heal Dorian since she'd seen him injure his arm the last time he blocked his and Daz's Sand Devil.

Madison continued to fly between the two groups as she healed them almost nonstop. She counted herself as lucky that her Stamina and Divine Power were both quite high. Any other healer in her shoes would have been exhausted ten minut...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 102: Mourning Visit and Secret Room? [First Draft]

 

Lone walking through the Elven city that sat atop the world tree and was lost in thought.

He ignored all of the people that greeted him or tried to speak to him, and he simply kept aimlessly walking around.

'What Shan'len said about regaining the elves independence is sticking with me for some reason... Why did he believe that he could do something like that after the tree loses its spirit and they all become the slaves of the Taslo Empire? It makes no sense!' ...

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Return Announcement!

Back from visiting my mother. I had a great time down in England with my brother and his fiancee.

I was able to use my brother's laptop, but I only mostly finished a chapter of LTW, so I decided to just use that for the first chapter this week.

No more holidays for a while! I'm gonna buckle down to get content to you lovely guys!

It's almost 1am and I'm tired, so we'll start up the chapter train again tomorrow.

Thanks again for your understanding!

Love you all,

Lo...

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Final Holiday Announcement

Well, my brother wants me to stay at his place today so we can go to the airport more easily together tomorrow.

This means that I might not have enough time today to write the final promised LTW chapter this week, but I'll see if I can somehow manage to write one on my phone while I'm visiting my mother. If I can manage, I'll see if I can write the second SIS one too.

Sorry about this, and I hope you all understand.

Love you all,

Lone

<3

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 61: Battle Plan and Death Magic [First Draft]


[Boloxian Sand Devil's Status

Basic Information

Name: N/A

Species: Boloxian Sand Devil

Age: 202

Sex: Male

Class: N/A

Affinity: Neutral

Description

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 101: Confession and Rage Suppression [First Draft]

 

The Warden's eyes had flashed dangerously once she saw Lone healing Shan'len and she immediately brought her hand to the metal-encased whip at her waist.

"Nine-tails, I'd suggest you step away from my prisoner. Since you were so magnanimous to cure his wounds, he will recover his strength soon enough and become a danger," the Warden said with an authoritative and bloodlust-filled voice.

Lone turned around and curtly replied, "Fuck off."

'Really, what the hell is wr...

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Schedule Announcement + Madison's Current Sketch

Since I didn't post two LTW chapters last week, I am going to try my best to post both chapters for both stories this week even though I am going on holiday.

I feel like I can safely guarantee at least 2 LTW chapters and 1 SIS chapter. I'll try my best to squeak out the second SIS chapter.

Sorry about this, I've just had a tiny bit of writer's block, particularly in LTW, recently.


Here's Madison from SIS's sketch. I hope you guys like it.

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 60: Cleaning Up and Second Wave [First Draft]

 

Everyone immediately readied themselves and noticed that the people who looked like raiders were raising their rifles as they hovered across the sand dunes at incredible speeds.

Rimmy hadn't finished distinguishing himself in this battle, so he flew forwards and raised his arms grandly. "Rimmy!"


[Jewelled Rampart [A-Rank (Middle Tier)]

Description

A skill unique to Jewelled Mountain Golem Cores.

This...

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LTW Book 3 Chapter 100: The Warden and Cruel Torture [First Draft]

 

Lone could guess why King Ele'hunda had brought him to this place. "Foru and Shan'len?" he asked without using his insulting nicknames for the two ex-elders and traitors of the world tree.

"Yes and no." Ele'hunda's reply was ambiguous.

Lone followed the King down the dark hallway and noticed that most of the cells were empty on the first level. The few that were actually being used held mostly Humans who seemed close to death. It would seem that they'd recently been tortured...

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SIS Book 2 Chapter 59: Mountain Eruption and Greater Telekinesis [First Draft]

A/N: I've decided to change all item/skill descriptions to be written by the snarky guy that writes the base upgrades. Add a bit more character to those kinda dull things, y'know?


Daz's immediate instinct upon seeing the ten warships flying through the air was to see if they could resist or nullify ranged attacks.

He pulled his pistol out from its holster on his waist and aimed his shot. The distance was far, but due to his high Dexterity, Agility and Ingenuity stats, Daz...

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Just a Tiny Schedule Update + 2 Announcements

First, the schedule update: A SIS chapter should be out today then there'll be another one and two LTW chapters by the end of this week. Most likely 1 a day, just in case anyone was curious.


First Announcement: We'll be getting some more art very soon (if the artist keeps his deadline)! It'll be a normal full body shot of Madison McArthur from Shovels In Spades.

Second Announcement: I'm going on a very short holiday from the 4th to the 9th next month to visit my mother who liv...

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