So far I'm liking the second Marvel Draft more than the other two, and I'll probably go with it.
I already have a rough idea of how to start the novel and what powers the mc will go for, but I'll need some time to do research, and draw a timeline and a decent plot, so I'll resume updating this story until then.
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"Do you need help, Brook?" I asked as I approached Brook, who was busy digging from behind.
Brook s...
2022-04-25 03:01:23 +0000 UTC View PostI'm liking the second draft the most so far, but I'll need to do a lot of research before I really start making the story. Anyway here's the third and probably last draft. As you can see it's pretty vague, but I intend to make it a jump chain that will start in the game of thrones.
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I sighed as I exited the liquor store, trying to light up a cigarette and failing as the lighter produced no flame because of the rain.
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So I've been thinking, and I couldn't help but notice the first Draft could easily fit inside DC too, maybe even more than Marvel, and I just need to change the dialogue with the homeless man to change it to DC so the first draft will be for both Dc and Marvel!
Anyway here's the second preview. Enjoy and don't forget to tell me what you guys think!
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"16 years..." I muttered as I stood away from the docks, watching as numerous ir...
2022-04-24 00:18:35 +0000 UTC View PostOne of the patrons, Daniel Persholm, suggested I write several drafts for my new story and go with the one I liked the most or let you guys decide with a vote if I still couldn't make a choice, and I liked the idea, so here's the first draft! Make sure to tell me what you guys think!
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Death.
Such a fascinating, frightening concept, Don't you think? The inevitable unknown. Destined and indiscriminate, and no matter how dearly we cling to our lives, ...
2022-04-23 07:09:08 +0000 UTC View PostI'm thinking about starting a new story because the amount of support my one piece fic is receiving on Webnovel is kinda disappointing, and the lack of growth has been slowly killing my motivation for a while, so much so that I've started cutting corners in my writing.
I won't drop the one piece fic even if I start a new fic, and I'll try to keep updating at the same pace if possible. But I need a distraction, and the new story will be just that.
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2022-04-22 03:18:24 +0000 UTC View PostI barely held my laughter while looking at Absalom's mortified expression. He probably thinks Moria and the others are dead. Even an idiot could tell by looking at his expression.
'Now I've gone and picked up such a habit... I need to stop messing with people so much...'
The last cringe-worthy line you would expect from your regular mindless self-insert stories protagonists I uttered before Kuma left was also a part of my newly acquired habit.
... 2022-04-22 00:16:13 +0000 UTC View PostMy blade trailed at Kuma's midsection, creating a wide gash that revealed his mechanical insides as I slashed downward. A similar scene took place on the warlord's back as Doc copied my actions.
All the while, Wilson's fist connected, almost folding the warlord. However, despite clearly taking extensive damage, Kuma didn't even utter so much a pained groan while adjusting himself.
He spread his arms and began clasping them together, a transparent ...
2022-04-20 01:01:11 +0000 UTC View Post"If you were to go on a trip, where would you like to go...?" the owner of the shadow spoke in a slow, calm, and deliberate voice that sounded both soothing and hypnotic.
Johnny felt the fine hairs on the back of his neck standing as he heard the voice and realized who was standing behind him. He quickly let go of Moria, jumped away and turned to face the newcomer.
"Didn't your handlers in the world government teach you it's rude to sneak up on people.....
2022-04-19 00:21:50 +0000 UTC View Post"Hm? it Looks like the captain already found Moria," Laffite hummed, raising an eyebrow as he felt an earthquake, and the ground began cracking and splitting under his feet.
"Luckily, I already found Moria's treasure," he added, smiling as he looked at the piles of golden coins and jewelry littered across the room like common street trash.
"Better hurry up before the mainmast tower crumbles to dust..." Laffite concluded as the room's walls began falling...
2022-04-18 00:11:45 +0000 UTC View PostAs he fell from the mainmast with his back facing the ground, Moria scowled as he saw Johnny jump and dive towards him at incredible speed, and Before he could react, the latter had already reached him.
Johnny held Moria's collar with his right hand and began punching the warlord's face with his prosthetic left as they fell to the ground at a rapidly increasing pace.
"Don't get carried away, brat! Doppelman!" Moria exclaimed as he began punching back in rage,...
2022-04-17 00:06:55 +0000 UTC View PostI smiled at the large, finely dressed white lump of flesh sleeping on its side in a dark corner as I walked through the entrance to the dimly lit room.
"There you are, Gecko Moria," I remarked, intentionally loudly tone as I stared at the sleeping warlord. "Get your ass off the floor so I can properly kick it," I added, crossing my arms in front of my chest.
"Who are you?!" Moria exclaimed in a high-pitched voice as he slowly sat up and lethargically st...
2022-04-15 23:26:36 +0000 UTC View Post"I see you still hold that outrageous afro dearly..." Ryma mockingly remarked as he leisurely watched Brook climb back to his feet without trying to hinder the skeleton.
"Don't you understand having such a big weakness makes you vulnerable during combat?" Ruma asked, resting Shusui on his shoulder while waiting for Brook to gather his bearing.
"Silence!" Brook exclaimed, clearly angered by the Ryuma's remarks as he brandished his weapons to the side and threw...
2022-04-14 23:56:07 +0000 UTC View PostAs he stood inside a room inside the Thriller Bark mansion, holding a scrapbook and looking around, Laffite had a strange expression.
No matter how one looked at it, this room looked like a shrine, the pictures of a beautiful blonde woman with a dazzling smile adorning the walls and leaving no unclaimed space.
'And the girl is even dead, it seems.' Laffite's expression scrunched up in confusion as he looked at an article with the same girl's picture, st...
2022-04-14 00:48:18 +0000 UTC View PostLaw heard the pig mount's words and just sighed as he activated his room ability. And with a circular 360 swing of his sword, all the surprised zombies froze, only to collapse on the ground a second later, bisected in half.
"Bepo..." Law muttered as he turned to the polar bear mink, gesturing with his chin, and Bepo understood the assignment as he started pouring slat into the bisected zombies' throats.
However, Law moved towards the mounted pig head be...
2022-04-12 21:25:16 +0000 UTC View Post"Talk all you want. You'll end up as a shadowless husk or a fellow zombie by the end of the day, monkey-monkey," Tararan replied as he straightened his posture and glared at Elvis.
Elvis merely smiled, activating his devil fruit as the stone hammer in his hand liquidized, turning into a machine gun attached to his hand.
"Now then, If I remember correctly, your kind are basically immortal and only susceptible to fire and salt..." Elvis muttered, ca...
2022-04-11 21:47:31 +0000 UTC View Post"Nice place you have here..." Doc said, eyeing the mansion's dining area they ended up in, sitting on a long table with Dr. Hogback himself seated at the edge as the host.
The dining room was spacious and luxuriously decorated with a fancy chandelier, numerous portraits of finely dressed individuals, and a giant polar bear rug, which sent shivers running down Bepo's spine.
"I'm glad you like it. It's my pleasure to host you and your friends here," Hogback rep...
2022-04-10 23:59:12 +0000 UTC View PostDoc raised an eyebrow, turning to Thriller Bark's towering mainmast as he got off his horse after hearing a high-pitch feminine scream from its direction. However, he quickly shook his head, losing interest as he looked at the mansion ahead.
"This is the place..." Hildon as he disembarked from the carriage, gesturing towards the enormous, gothic-styled mansion. "Feel free to knock on your own. Miss Cindry shall receive you," He added, spreading his wings wide.
Johnny took a deep breath, covering himself in armament haki as he stood in place, allowing the negative hollow to pass through his body.
He stood rooted in place, a blank expression on his face. However, Johnny's efforts proved futile in fending off the negative hollow's assault as he promptly fell to his knees soon after.
"It's useless... everything I do is useless, no matter how strong I get..." Johnny muttered in apparent dejection, smacking the flo...
2022-04-08 20:03:23 +0000 UTC View Post"I am Hildon," the creature behind Bepo, a round man with a bat-like body, sharp fangs and claws, and spikey blonde hair, said, bowing politely.
"I thought you people might need help, so I snuck up behind you..." he added, smiling as he adjusted his posture while looking at Bepo with a hard-to-read expression.
"Don't sneak up on people!" Bepo retorted, his beady black eyes twitching as he visibly struggled to stop himself from slapping Hildon for ...
2022-04-07 21:17:14 +0000 UTC View PostI frowned as I stood on one of the four chains going from Thriller Park's outer walls and into its gigantic main masts, taking in the sights of the wondering island.
Despite Thriller Park's huge size befitting of its epitaph as the wondering island, most of its surface was, in fact, a wasteland, a dead forest choke-full of nothing but dried up trees, with only several areas standing out from the forest.
The areas were the enormous mansion, which housed ...
2022-04-07 11:09:09 +0000 UTC View PostWe all stood in silence in the Black Pearl's dining area, staring at Brook, leisurely picking his teeth after telling us his story and how he became the only survivor of the Rumbar Pirates.
Byron was the most affected by the story as it personally touched him. But even the usually stoic Bob was sending sympathetic looks towards the skeleton, not to mention the others, who finally realized the consequences of failure and defeat as pirates.
And with the shadow ...
2022-04-06 14:40:23 +0000 UTC View Post"That's not a ghost, is it?" Kozue remarked, tilting her head to the side as she looked at an unusually tall skeleton dressed in formal attire complete with top hat and cane, sporting a black afro.
"Seems more like a skeleton..." Wilson replied with a thoughtful expression while looking at the skeleton sitting on a barrel, holding an empty cup of tea, seemingly unaware of our presence.
Everyone went quiet as we watched the skeleton sitting while resting his c...
2022-04-05 14:22:20 +0000 UTC View Post"Full speed ahead, Elvis, keep her steady! Unfurl the sails!" Laffite instructed as he stood in the middle of the Black Pearl's deck, his eyes rapidly darting in all directions as he observed the towering waves heading towards us and the bitch black clouds above, rumbling in lightning and thunder.
"Got it," Elvis replied with a smirk, his muscles tightening as he gripped the rudder and kept it in place, preventing any deviation in the Black Pearl's steering direction. 2022-04-04 13:55:57 +0000 UTC View Post
"Good work Kozue. Take a break," I said as I looked at the open palm of my right hand, smiling at the gash in its center courtesy of Kozue's Instant Death.
It's been an hour or so since Kozue awakened her Haki, and we didn't stop our spar as she needed to get a feel for it and learn how to utilize it in combat.
Kozue was a natural fighter, and she quickly adapted to the enhanced defense and attack provided by armament Haki into her fighting style, adopt...
2022-04-02 13:29:40 +0000 UTC View PostI couldn't help smiling as I looked at Elvis, still having a nerdgasm over the Black Pearl's design, almost four hours after he saw it for the first time.
'It seems there was some truth to Kokoro's words about the Black Pearl being a work rivaling that of Tom's best.'
My smile widened as I remembered her words and how much proud old Jim was of the Black Pearl. Still, I have no idea why old Jim didn't explain this stuff to us, and Wolf too, for tha...
2022-04-01 13:06:49 +0000 UTC View Post"... And that's when Lucky Roux showed up," I said with a smile as I walked next to Elvis.
Elvis and I were strolling through the shopping district, taking the scenic route towards the Black Pearl as Elvis wanted to meet the rest of the crew.
"Man, you should have seen the looks on the vice admirals' faces. It was something else I tell you-" I added, lightly chuckling, but I suddenly frowned as my observation Haki warned of something coming from t...
2022-03-30 10:25:51 +0000 UTC View Post"I eventually managed to kill the bastard... but I was already spent at that point..." Elvis remarked, pausing as he took a deep breath and regained his carefree expression.
"I could do nothing other than lay on my back and stare at the sky..." he added, shaking his head. "I contemplated giving up and dying right there and then, but..." he said, drawing a heavy sigh.
"I couldn't do it, you know? My friends were dead, and they died because of my fo...
2022-03-29 09:07:47 +0000 UTC View Post"Yeah, that's not a mouthful or confusing or anything," Elvis said, awkwardly scratching his head as he looked at Wilson.
"Look, the point is, you'll receive no judgment or prejudice if you end up with us," I said, interrupting Wilson, who was about to say something.
"But you don't have to take word my word for it. You're more than welcome to come and meet the others yourself," I added, patiently waiting for Elvis to consider my words.
"So, that friend of yours..." I remarked, unable to contain my curiosity as I turned to Iceburg as we arrived on Water Seven's Scrap island, looking for said friend/shipwright.
Iceburg has been adamantly vague regarding his mysterious shipwright friend, telling us to wait and see for our own eyes once we met the shipwright and only revealing the shipwright's gender so far.
"We're almost there. You should be able to hear some muttering from over there..." Shru...
2022-03-27 08:59:14 +0000 UTC View PostAs he walked into a well-lit room, Johnny raised an eyebrow as he looked at a man sitting behind a fancy wooden desk, a hood covering his head and shrouding his features in shadow.
"An ambiguous hooded man for a host, Really?" Johnny muttered with twitching eyes as he sat on the leather couch next to the desk. "Couldn't the author come up with something... I don't know a little more original?" he added, judgementally staring at the host.
"Well, it's not like I wanted to be an ambi...
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