The chapter is beta read by n1ch, Shigiya and Solitary heart. Also this chapter will be available to my $1 patron on Wednesday when I post chapter 23 on fanfic.
Edit 1: TONS of edits
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It was black…
A stark contrast of color to the person’s hair color and the black miasma that poured from his being.
That was what he tho...
Beta read by n1ch, Shigiya and Solitary heart.
Also in the future this will be updated just in case I need to do some changes to improve the quality.
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I never knew that I would end up dancing with death so often, the horrible cold feeling of loneliness hit me hard. I could not remember how I had vanished from my previous reality, I may have died in an accident or even in my s...
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Hey guys!
Hope y'all doing well this fine day/evening/night.
Got some news which I'm sure y'all will like. In a few days I will post my regular chapter on Fanfiction or Webnovel (thinking on posting on other platforms as well).
Here instead everyone who pledged to me will get to receive an extra chapter every week. When I get more free time this can grow to an extra 1 chapter to 2 chapters until 3 chapters max.
Of course, I'll keep re...
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CHAPTER IS DONE!....At least the raw, unedited version of it.
+8 freaking k words my dudes!
Longest chapter I have ever written in my life!
Ha! I can't wait to see the reactions of my beta readers, they'll be done either on Thursday or Friday. Up to them.
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Hey! How's everyone doing?
The chapter is coming along well, by now I'll say I've completed about 2/8 parts.
The hardest part still remains which might be the longest but I can say for sure, it'll be out this week.
That's all
Author NimtheWriter out!
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Finished working on The legendary Saiyan in a fairy's world chapter 3.
After my beta readers are done with it and after I post it, I'll start working and finishing my Snafu X dxd chapter before the end of next week.
Happy new year!
Yep done with sorting out the ideas and will soon start writing chapter. But before that, I'll post a chapter of my DBS Broly/ Fairy tail crossover.
Best waifu is Lucy tied with Mirajane.
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Well this next chapter gonna be LOOONG, so gonna take a while to be released.
Honestly right now I haven even started writing aside making bullet points of point in the story with how many words said part will have.
I plan to make this chapter like +7k words which by now is my biggest project.
Since this will be the last chapter before canon, I'll have to take it slow and make it good.
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Working on chapter 21, nearly there gonna be ready in 24h or another day.
So Jeanne...
Y'all like her? She reminds me of Fgo Jeanne, always tried to have her but no luck.
Kinda hard to write her since the anime didn't show much of her.
By the way I'll be doing regular post updates to keep you guys in touch.
Yao Bao decision truly baffled Yao Tian, he thought for sure that he would join the same sect as Song Shou.
'Did that dangerous woman do something?'
With no person capable of answering him, he decided to just continue and focus on the assessment as with the previous intense atmosphere having died down while Teacher Wan continued calling out names of potential cultivators and evaluating them.
"Wu Wen!...'Body Reinforcement Realm' early stage of Mu...
"A special constitution!?" Cried out both the mysterious figure in the elder's booth and Teacher Wan. The former being out of joy and the latter instead being out of shock.
Some of the contestants were confused by the term and couldn't help but ask others for its meaning.
"Hey brother, do you have any idea what does this 'Special Constitution' mean?" A random person in the crowd asked an older looking man who looked to be a disciple from a sect.
"Yao Bao!"
Teacher Wan called out the next participant's name.
Yao Bao immediately stood up and prepared himself, while Yao Tian and Song Shou both wished him good luck.
Both his brother and Song Shou noticed the rigidness and nervousness around Yao Bao.
"Don't worry about the results we already know how talented you already are in cultivation. There is no way that you won't pass." Reassured Yao Tian with a wide smile.
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"Sou Kun's smithy?" Repeated Yao Tian.
After spending almost an hour wandering around the various popular stores, he did not notice such a strange smithy name anywhere.
For the guy to have made such bold claims about the many fine quality swords...
'Who is he anyways?'
"Why yes, dear friend. My establishment is known throughout Redwood and even all over the Buxiu Realm! We forge the finest of blades and the sturdiest of armours.
"Wait!"
A single lone voice exclaimed from the crowd.
Yao Tian out of shock spits out the dumpling he was eating ruining someone's clothes. "Hey! Watch out!"
He and everyone turned their heads to look at the person who dared to shout.
The crowd wanted to see who was foolish enough to interfere in the matters concerning the Lin family.
They knew that a good show would take place.
But for Yao Tian, it was a whol...
Nothing happened...
Wrong...
Wrong, wrong!
"Thi-this isn't right, something should have happened!"
Panic started to settle into Yao Tian's mind. Dozens of questions would pop up as well as reasons why he couldn't achieve a breakthrough.
Is his talent so bad that he requires even more Qi pills?
Maybe the effect would take place after a while?
Maybe he has already broken through and just didn't notice?...
" Ha! "
* Cling! * The sound of weapons clashing and shouts filled the area.
" Ha! "
* Cling! * Two different weapons clashed again. One is an enormous spear while the other is a sword.
" Ha! "
* Bam! * The sword overpowered the spear and threw away the latter's wielder effortlessly to access the ground.
"Arg!"
"You lost again!"
In the Jade Forest beneath the verdant trees, these two people...
* Huff * * Huff * He was running as fast as he could...
* Slither *
He was all alone, no one could be seen by his side.
But he still kept running, something was approaching him...
* HISS *
He could not escape it...
...it was too fast!
* PSHHH *
He was caught!
"No no no no nonononononononono" No amount of struggle freed him from the grasp of the monster.
He kept bein...
""I don't want to die..."" The same thought passed through both of the boys.
Yao Tian's world grew dark and his mind became more focused.
Adrenaline flowed through his veins as he picked up a branch from the ground and jammed it under a large tree log on the ground.
Pressing down with all his weight and might, he kept trying to move the log down the cliff again and again with little progress.
He cursed his small stature and his la...
* RAAAAWR! *
A huge roar out of nowhere star
tled the boys.
"What the heck was that!?" Terrified by the sudden roar, Yao Tian couldn't help but ask Song Shou.
"It came from the cliff nearby, wait here while I go and see what's going on." Not even waiting for Yao Tian's answer, Song Shou ran over near the cliff.
"Yao Bao! Take your bag and go back by carriage and wait for me there, okay? I'll be back as soon as possible." Though Yao Ba...
"So those are all the 3 initial realms, any questions?" Asked Da Yu calmly.
With the amount of information given by her, Yao Tian had to take a moment to remember them by heart.
These kinds of details about realms weren't something available in any of the books he read before.
Up until now, he held no knowledge of the Immortal world. He didn't even know the existence of realms and their different stages.
Just the first realm has been...
2 days can go by in a flash noticed Yao Tian
It felt like the Tournament, his father's defeat and his talk with Song Shou happened just a few hours ago.
Yao Tian was packing his bag, and that of Yao Bao, which was filled with all the necessary clothes, medicinal plants, and even many rations needed for the journey.
His brother was expectedly the most excited these last days. Running around screaming to everybody that he would leave the village ...
"Say... Yao Tian.... do you... Wish to become an immortal? "
"What?" Yao Tian's head snapped at Song Shou.
Taken by surprise by the previous words of Song Shou, Yao Tian could not help but turn abruptly and look at his friend in disbelief.
Not shying away from Yao Tian's gaze Song Shou continued.
"Why are you so surprised? Since I have become one, then, why can't you? This is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity to change your destiny...
"It's been a long time hasn't it, uncle Tai?" Said the mysterious person. Yao Tai and even the village chief's eyebrows rose in surprise.
They recognized that voice, especially the village chief.
"Hoooo, that voice is awfully familiar, took me a moment to remember it. So you have finally decided to return, boy." Yao Tai's wide smile slowly came back on his face, but his stance did not loosen up a bit. "But of all places, you decided to have a reunion here?"
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After the spectacle the first fight offered, the following matches were quite lacklustre. But there was a special case amongst this year's combatants.
The first and foremost was Yao Tai, who was basically considered invisible at this point. Then there was the mysterious person, who had a hat and his upper clothes hiding his feature, not allowing anyone to recognize him. But no one underestimated him, as, like Yao Tai, he barely seemed to move before his opponent became unc...
The New Year's Festival was in full swing from the early afternoon, with nearly thousands of people from every corner of the region coming to enjoy various forms of entertainment.
Yao Tian was accompanying his younger brother. Since he was still too young to be left alone wondering around
Both played around the many game stalls, where each win would earn them a prize.
Yao Tian and Yao Bao already participated in many ball-throwing and some rock climbing games...
'Jiang Chen's road to immortality ' was a classic story in the Buxiu realm that parents would recite to their children countless times. For the humans, the spirit beasts, or any other species there existed no one who didn't know about this ancient tale.
One could say that most people's aspiration to the pursuit of immortality originated from this story. But strangely, despite its universal popularity, no person to this day knew who wrote this story, where it originated from, or...
"Immortal."
Along their journey, many have left countless treasures buried under lost ancient ruins of an age that has already passed.
Mortals in their ever ending journey to achieve true godhood and become immortals have scavenged these ruins and decimated countless tombs of the ancients. Just so they could end up with a treasure that had already failed its previous master.
It was funny in a morbid way, the very paragons of justice and fairness some claim to ...
I am NimtheWriter
I created this page because I want to write and use my skills to improve myself. Also because I love writing in general.
I first started working on my first work, it was called "Ending the immortal Era!" It was an existing work that I posted on sites like Webnovel and fanfiction. Unfortunately, it didn't succeed as much since my skills were still shit back then. (Don't read it, it's very bad.)
Now I am working on seven fanfics. Slowly with time, you will...