“I desire an alternative path with the likes of the interlopers.” The interloper began, as I had to internalize and just outright deal with the sheer cognitive dissonance that came with this thing referring to humanity as interlopers. “A path which I have been patiently waiting for, observing for, and one in which I have been labeled as an outcast for.” It continued, its otherworldly inflexions giving me pause for concern. Which prompted both Vir an...
2023-05-02 16:20:34 +0000 UTC
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The rest of my tour around the manufactorium was just one big test of my ability to keep my personal desires at bay with my adherence to my professional duty. We’d walked, ducked, weaved, and meandered our way through much of the line, and throughout it all, I wanted nothing more than to describe in vivid detail all of Earth’s industrial accomplishments to Sorecar.
But that would’ve been way too much, and much too early.
And whilst I knew and appreciated that the gu...
2023-04-30 17:05:36 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! Here's the Work in Progress for Chapter 29 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
The rest of my tour around the manufactorium was just one big test of my ability to keep my personal desires at bay with my adherence to my professional duty. We’d walked, ducked, weaved, and meandered our way through much of the line, and throughout it all, I wanted nothing more than to describe in vivid detail all of Earth’s industrial accomplishments to Sorecar.
But ...
2023-04-29 21:30:48 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! So there are a few notes about the edits that I made for this chapter's revisions. The first thing is that there have been a lot of revisions made, most of it in order to better connect the flow of the dialogue as well as to break up what I felt sounded like exposition that needed to come across more naturally. So I did my best in making sure that everything was integrated in a way where both characters are more actively engaged. I suggest that everyone check out the rev...
2023-04-29 21:25:14 +0000 UTC
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Grief was the last thing I expected to be felt by a being that had done nothing to show any signs of remorse for any number of its actions. In fact, a part of me refused to even believe what was being displayed on the screens, as I shot a questioning glance towards Vir, who had likewise been staring at the screen with an exaggerated look of disbelief.
Though the limited set of expressions offered by the paradoxically limitless possibilities on the AI’s screen face left a lot ...
2023-04-25 22:07:17 +0000 UTC
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The question stumped me for a good few moments.
The fact that it had been delivered with little in the way of threatening undertones, and instead, spoken with an excitable straight face made the whole thing that much more bizarre.
“Well enough.” I responded bluntly. “I can handle an open flame at the very least.” I quickly added.
“Good, good!” The armorer spoke with an excitable clatter, as he now turned his attention to a particularly uncluttered part o...
2023-04-23 17:05:17 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! Here's the Work in Progress for Chapter 28 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
The question stumped me for a good few moments.
The fact that it had been delivered with little in the way of threatening undertones, and instead, spoken with an excitable straight face made the whole thing that much more bizarre.
“Well enough.” I responded bluntly. “I can handle an open flame at the very least.” I quickly added.
“Good, good!” The ar...
2023-04-22 15:17:48 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! So I primarily made a few changes with regards to the chunks of Emma's internal dialogue in order to make the transitions between the different pieces of dialogue and action a bit better! In addition to this I added a bit more explanation regarding the polearm and what exactly happened to the golem! And I also added a bit more of Emma's internal monologue regarding the spear in relation to how that compares and squares up with humanity's weapons! I suggest you check it o...
2023-04-22 15:04:53 +0000 UTC
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There exists an old Vanaran saying.
One that is unfashionably short by Vanaran standards, but carries a weight and a meaning that is undeniable to all that are taught it. However, as with most of these old adages and sayings, its meaning truly is subjective, and highly dependent on the life experiences of those that still even remember them past their primary education.
I was more than certain I fell into part of the vast majority that never truly, palpably, had to come face to fa...
2023-04-18 15:11:24 +0000 UTC
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I felt like I was starting a Castle and Wyverns campaign in reverse.
More accurately, I felt like I was homebrewing a scenario to hell and back, and possibly giving every dungeon master a proverbial aneurysm in the process.
By virtue of the sheer ludicrousness I, and by extension humanity, had been pulling in this world of swords and sorcery: I’d very much landed myself in anything but a typical adventure.
I assumed this was the case, as I had a hunch that a typic...
2023-04-16 17:05:38 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! Here's the Work in Progress for Chapter 27 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
I felt like I was starting a Castle and Wyverns campaign in reverse.
More accurately, I felt like I was homebrewing a scenario to hell and back, and possibly giving every dungeon master a proverbial aneurysm in the process.
By virtue of the sheer ludicrousness I, and by extension humanity, had been pulling in this world of swords and sorcery: I’d very much landed myself in a...
2023-04-15 18:27:08 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! I did a bit of sprucing up to this chapter, mainly in adding more transitions between chunks of dialogue and breaking up large bodies of it to make it a better reading experience. I've added quite a bit of back and forths here too, most of it being Emma trying to reach out to empathize with the armorer. I suggest you check it out! :D As always, the edited or additional bits are underlined for ease of reading! :D
It goes without saying that addressing...
2023-04-15 18:18:27 +0000 UTC
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Hello Commissioned Pioneers!
I've had this idea floating in my head for a while now so I'm glad I've finally been able to put it to writing! This is the start to a new type of Bonus Content! One that more or less has the same vibe as the internal correspondences, but that focuses instead on Emma!
What this is, is effectively a series of what could best be described as 'homework' material assigned by different departments at the IAS to Emma as part of her prepwork prior...
2023-04-14 13:29:31 +0000 UTC
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A disheartening realization quickly dawned on me. A feeling of foreboding disgust sent waves of nauseating discomfort that far surpassed what eeriness had been incurred by the otherworldly voice that had bellowed out from deep within the recesses of the moon we tentatively orbited.
It was a realization that was just as troubling as it was maddening, a logical conclusion that was drawn from this one, isolated interaction alone.
It was at this particular instance in time, as the int...
2023-04-11 22:32:21 +0000 UTC
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It goes without saying that explaining and addressing my particular predicament to anyone who hasn’t been exposed to a mana-less world, was going to be an enormous undertaking.
So considering the fact that every single other dimension under the transdimensional sun does in fact fall under this umbrella, this meant that every single explanation would indeed be a marathon and a half to commit to.
“A long story is it?” The armorer parroted my words, a...
2023-04-09 17:05:06 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! Here's the Work in Progress for Chapter 26 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
It goes without saying that explaining and addressing my particular predicament to anyone who hasn’t been exposed to a mana-less world, was going to be an enormous undertaking.
So considering the fact that every single other dimension under the transdimensional sun does in fact fall under this umbrella, this meant that every single explanation woul...
2023-04-08 16:17:18 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! I've made quite a few revisions as well as additions to this chapter, so I suggest you guys check it out! :D I've added more interactions with Ilunor, so that the gang can catch up with what he's been up to! Aside from that, just a few edits were made to make things clearer in the workshop scene! :D
Dragon’s Heart Tower, Level 23, Residence 30. Emma and Thacea’s Bedroom. The Tent.
Emma Booker
I couldn’t g...
2023-04-08 16:07:18 +0000 UTC
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Hello Commissioned Pioneers!
I hope everyone's doing well! Another month has arrived, and with that, I wanted to take a moment to just sit down and chat. I can't tell you guys enough how each and every one of you have impacted my life in a way that I couldn't have ever even imagined or dreamed of before. I want to thank you, all of you, for your continued support. I know I've said this before, but I can't express to you just how much I mean it each and every time I type something like t...
2023-04-04 18:47:54 +0000 UTC
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Hello Commissioned Pioneers! :D As promised as always, in accordance with the results of last month's poll, I present to you the Bonus Story of the Month! There were a total of four choices again, with a majority voting for Wearing Power Armor to a Magic School Side Story 4. Let's jump right to it then! I'd like to proudly present, Wearing Power Armor to a Magic School's fourth side story! :D
A Hero’s Visit
Aetheronrealm, Crown Dependency of Flocks...
2023-04-04 18:18:11 +0000 UTC
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The first words to ever be uttered to the wolves which preyed on our race, to the beings which lorded over us as deities for untold millennia, was perhaps never destined to be great or prophetic. This wasn’t because I didn’t want to make an impact of course, nor was it because I wanted to look modest in the history books for when the time came for someone to write our story. There wasn’t any grand rhyme or reason to it, for we weren’t looking to be what the Interlopers strive...
2023-04-04 14:14:03 +0000 UTC
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Dragon’s Heart Tower, Level 23, Residence 30. Emma and Thacea’s Bedroom. The Tent.
Emma Booker
I couldn’t get to sleep. No matter how hard I tossed and turned. No matter how much I twisted this way and that. Not even asking the EVI for low fidelity playlists to sleep to, helped my situation any.
Wait.
The EVI.
I sprung up as I realized I still heard its passive-aggressive replies as if I still had the suit on.
Giving ...
2023-04-02 17:05:30 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! Here's the second Work in Progress for Chapter 25 I hope you guys enjoy! :D You guys didn't think I'd leave you hanging like that did you? ;D
Dragon’s Heart Tower, Level 23, Residence 30. Emma and Thacea’s Bedroom. The Tent.
Emma
I couldn’t get to sleep. No matter how hard I tossed and turned. No matter how much I twisted this way and that. Not even asking the EVI for low fidelity playlists to sleep...
2023-04-01 17:20:34 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! Here's the Work in Progress for Chapter 25 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
Dragon’s Heart Tower, Level 23, Residence 30. Emma and Thacea’s Bedroom. The Tent.
Emma
I couldn’t get to sleep. No matter how hard I tossed and turned. No matter how much I twisted this way and that. Not even asking the EVI for low fidelity playlists to sleep to, helped my situation any.
Wait.
The EVI.
I sprung u...
2023-04-01 16:25:03 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! I've made some revisions primarily to help make sure the conversation flowed well as well as revising certain small bits for overall consistency with the story, which includes the name of Thalmin's ancestor! Word choices have been revised, as well as certain large chunks of conversation that have been broken up into more bite sized bits for ease of reading! Whilst there hasn't been many changes to the actual content of it I believe this flows better so I think you guys s...
2023-04-01 16:17:16 +0000 UTC
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A numbness flooded over me as I pushed down on that button with an excessive degree of force. A disturbing realization that sent waves of sickening unease that would’ve at one point in time would’ve shaken me to my core, but at this point, I’d become worryingly accustomed to.
It was a realization that should’ve hit me earlier, especially after that encounter with the false Vanaran. However, it was only as I was met with the perpetrator’s of my species’ collective indoctrinat...
2023-03-28 21:00:56 +0000 UTC
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Dragon’s Heart Tower, Level 23, Residence 30. Living Room. Local Time: 1700 Hours.
Thacea
Perpetuity.
That was what the Nexus stood for, what it sought after, and what it fought for. In its quest to ensure the continuity of civilization, it had reasoned that all civilizations fell under its enlightened protection. Protection not from any outside power, nor any external existential threat, but from the dangers inherent within civil...
2023-03-26 17:05:20 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! Here's the Work in Progress for Chapter 24 I hope you guys enjoy! :D
Dragon’s Heart Tower, Level 23, Residence 30. Living Room. Local Time: 1700 Hours.
Thacea
Perpetuity.
That was what the Nexus stood for, what it sought after, and what it fought for. In its quest to ensure the continuity of civilization, it had reasoned that all civilizations fell under its enlightened protection. Protection n...
2023-03-25 17:25:06 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! I've made some revisions which I think you guys should check out! I've decided to remove a few of the long winded sections near the end of the chapter, as I wanted to ensure that the flow of the chapter was preserved, and that the reading experience as well as the characterization was consistent throughout! :D In addition I added a bit of dialogue before Emma shows off her weapon as she talks a bit more about the safety aspects of it! As always however the edited section...
2023-03-25 17:17:47 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! With the wait finally over, I’d like to present to you the next person to have a reference arriving fresh off of the drawing tablet!
The next person on our list, is of course our favorite power armored human, Cadet Emma Booker!
Commissioned rank pending…
This first reference of her was intended to show her more in a casual sort of context and setting, as we mostly see her in ‘work-mode’, or ‘professional-mode’ within the Nexus, I wanted to show her ...
2023-03-22 20:25:45 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! The wait is finally over! The first batch of references for our main cast are now arriving fresh off of the drawing tablet!
First on the list, is none other than our bird friend, Princess Thacea Dilani! Dressed in her titular Transgracian Academy uniform!
Consisting of a simple yet finely tailored tunic and pants colored in the Academy’s more subdued whites, grays, and blacks, the Academy uniform is nothing if not tame in the eyes of the esteemed ranks of the nobil...
2023-03-22 19:12:44 +0000 UTC
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