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Two Hundred Dollars More: Chapter 8

And here we are with Chapter 8.

The shower scene, the 'special' spankings, the last hurrah before the rush of exams, squeezing in all the excitement they can before the clock runs out.

Cheers!

Xavier.

Two Hundred Dollars More: Chapter 7

I'm trying to keep ahead of a "at least one chapter per month" schedule and it's working so far.  This is what early Saturday mornings are for!  Binge writing and editing!

And what have we today?

Exams are about to befall our intrepid trio, and scheduling becomes a nightmare.  How can they arrange their lives to get what they need from each other without sacrificing their brilliant and promising academic futures?

Read and find out!

Cheers,

Xavier.<...

Coming Soon: Chapter 7 of "$200 More"

I've finished the chapter and it's two thirds edited.

The continuing adventures of Bailey, Kent and Laura will have to wind their way through the pressures and scheduling of their Christmas exams.

Two Hundred Dollars More: Chapter 6

Bailey has a dream, and this whole adventure is about to go meta.

I mean, if alternate reality stories can have alternate realities, can't erotic fiction contain people writing erotic fiction?

Meanwhile, Laura wonders if the spankings would get better if she could tone up a little, and wouldn't Kent like to give her lessons?

Two Hundred Dollars More: Chapter 5

A "Wild Chapter 5" appears from amid the ruins of a Gazebo.

Please don't shoot any flaming arrows at it.  It's just a story, Eric.

Bailey and Kent formulate a plan.  Laura and Baily formulate a plan. It's machination all over, but how will it unfold?  And why was Kent acting weird anyway?

Two Hundred Dollars More: Chapter 4

Bae's got her new glasses back and they seem to be adjusted correctly now, so she'll be back to her editing responsibilities in short order.

Meanwhile, the story must go on, but might have three or four grammatical errors.  Sorry.

Laura seems pleased with herself, but is perhaps a little wary from all the spankings she feels she has to endure.  Is there another way?  Can Bailey and Kent help her find it?

Stay tuned.

Cheers,

Xavier.

Two Hundred Dollars More: Chapter 03

Chapter 3, ladies and gentlemen.

Laura and Bailey, having survived the "special spankings", which Bailey has yet to place in her notebook, so we don't know what they're really called yet, are engaged in trying to make every go-round a little more interesting than the last.

Laura, with specific needs, makes a new Bargain and Bailey discovers something about her relationship with Laura.

Cheers,

Xavier.

P.S. if you have a good name for the "special spanking...

Two Hundred Dollars More: Chapter 2

Starting off our Sundays right, I suppose.  You go to your church and I'll go to mine.

Laura and Bailey, freshly satisfied that their friendship can continue while at least partially sharing Kent, return to his room, still owing him a spanking - or perhaps a spatula paddling - for their assorted sins.  The denouement, given that so many days have passed since the sins were committed, requires a special level of interest charges.

For now, I'm keeping these on the Patreon ...

Halloween Story: Through My Window

It's one of my favourite seasons, really, except that it's going to suck this year.  You know how there are like, five or ten people in every office who dress up at work?  I'm one of them.  It's the only time I year I get to wear a cape, so I take it.

That said, this story doesn't involve capes.  But there is magic, and magic sex, and a guy who thinks this Halloween also sucks.

Hope you enjoy it!

Two Hundred Dollars More: Chapter 1

Let's try this and see how popular it is.  It's certainly the most fun to write, and probably the most fun romp to read.

Chapter 1 picks up right where $200 left off - with Bailey, Laura and Kent deciding they need a new game which relies on Laura's guilt as the currency of the era.

Where will they go from here?  What strange kinks and positions will they discover?  How will the three of them change and adjust to the new circumstances?

Hopefully, we all enjoy....

Sally's Portal vs Two Hundred Dollars

$200 definitely got a lot more pickup, even right from the beginning.

I'm wondering if I might not have more success going back to that story line, vs trying to make Sally's Portal work.  We'll see, over the next few days, I'll try publishing a chapter of "$200 More" or something like that.

Cheers,

Xavier.

Sally's Portal: Chapter 6

It's making me wished I'd picked a better name for this one.

This chapter is about Kendra and Bren, dealing with Bren's demon, and less about Sally's desperate need to masturbate.

But it has a lot demon erection and ejaculation, so it's probably good.

Cheers,

Xavier.

Sally's Portal: Chapter 5

Wherein Bren has to deal with the fact that Sally might just have gotten him possessed on purpose, but also the fact that being possessed by a demon means that other, darker forces can apply pressure on him to act in certain ways and go to certain places.

Kendra, meanwhile, realizes she's the only sane one left in the group.

A New "Ulric and Anna" story.

Ulric and Anna

Tyranny of the Priests (Part 1 of 2 parts)

I don't know how many of you remember the original Ulric and Anna story - it's available still at Literotica - but an idea for a new story hit me and I wrote this up.  (I started it last month but, due to some unfortunate real-life stuff, had to shelve it for a while, but I'm back up and writing again and can make it available to my Patrons.)

Meanwhile, they're still Talla's Temple, Sally's Portal and maybe a few...

Hello, Loyal Patrons

You may have noticed that I paused billing for this month.

Due to some personal situations in my real life (the one where I'm not named Xavier and I don't write erotic fiction) I've had to spend the last little while not-quite-completing works of fiction.

While Sally's Portal and an Ulric and Anna adventure are in the works, I can't really justify your patronage for the past couple of weeks.

Fear not, though.  Things will settle down again and I'll resume writing.

Working away, and Sales Tax

I don't know how Sales Tax is going to affect any of you.  I hope it doesn't, because it looks like it won't and I don't want any of us to be surprised on that score.

That said, I started writing an Ulric and Anna story, because the first one went so well.  It'll be another short, since the two of them needed a Dr. Who episode-sized adventure again.

And I'm still working on Talla's Temple and Sally's Portal.  Those never stop.

Sally's Portal Chapter 4

Have to get this one out before the power goes out again.

In this chapter, things start to get seriously dark.  I hope I'm hitting the creepy vibe just right, because that's something I'd love to be able to do.

Let me know what you all think.

Cheers,

Xavier.

Two Hundred Dollars: Bonus Chapter!

I didn't get much feedback on this particular wild ride when I added it to the e-book, so I'm posting it here.

This is a bonus chapter I added, which fits right in between chapters 28 and 29.

I'm not going to pretend it's canon, and I can't guarantee it's part of the greater THDCU, but it is pretty funny and it has some neat dialog I enjoyed writing.

I hope you like it, too.

Cheers,

Xavier.

Sally's Portal: Chapter 3

In this Chapter, the demon becomes violent and our intrepid heroes hope to find a path to quell its tendencies.

As always, let me know what you think.  I'm ever eager for your opinions.  Am I hitting enough of a note of creepiness?  Because I've never tried this sort of thing before.

Cheers,
Xavier.

Coming soon: Chapter 3 of Sally's Portal

Thank you all for sticking with me through this "social distancing" and isolation thing we're doing.  We all need each other to stay sane, so it's good to feel like I'm not shouting into a vacuum.

I just finished the first draft of Ch 3 of the new story and I'll post it, hopefully tonight, after giving it an editing run.

Sally's Portal Chapter 2: Enter the Demon

Now things start to get exciting as Sally finally meets the thing that's been following her for the past week.

(I'm going with "Sally's Portal".  Maybe not the best choice, but I did post it to Literotica under that name, so there we are.)

Literotica Award!

 http://literotica.com/contests/archive.html 

The final chapter of Two Hundred Dollars (Chapter 29) won a monthly award at Literotica.

Woot!

Xavier.

Sally's Portal: Chapter 1

I'm not sure about the title here.  I want it to sound like a proper Fantasy title, but it's hard to say what to call it.

"Sally's Portal" is the working title, because it's going to be about how women can open a portal to hell by masturbating.  It's based on this dumb article I read.

 https://www.dazeddigital.com/a...

New Story Coming

Still working on Talla's Temple, but doing other things too, while I plan it out.

Unfortunately, the new story doesn't have a name yet.  Working on it.  Maybe you all will have an idea.

Ghosts in the Deep, Parts 1 and 2

Alright, this is at least a complete short story now.

I could easily add future parts to it, much like Ulric and Anna could have future adventures.

But, for now at least, we have partial closure for Kennedy and Kipis.

As always, I value your responses, comments and other input.

Cheers,

Xavier.

Ghost in the Deep: Part 1

Thank you for all sticking with me while I work on the next Talla's Temple book as well as some short stories in the life of Bailey, Kent and Laura.

For now, I had this weird dream about space travel, where I was dreaming within the dream.  Yeah, seriously.  It happened.  My brain works that way, including inventing the weird "we can get to Mars faster if we can pull higher accel while we sleep"

Anyway, I'm posting part one of what will probably be a three or four p...

Longest Comment Ever

 https://www.literotica.com/stories/storyfeedbackboard.php?id=1436634 

I feel like the Anonymous comment on 11/08/19  is really well thought out, and I should say something, but not give away where I'm going with my story.

1.

Yes, the Goddess of Beshenna wanted to let Zhair'lo die and become a kind of martyr, because of what she saw in his head...

On the Third Rewrite of Talla's Temple Torn

The first chapter is the hardest to get right.

Starting 200 Dollars was relatively easy.  (It's all like "Ooh, wanna spank me?".  "Sure, babe.")

Getting the characters all tied back together again and all the little subplots.  Sheesh.

Okay, though, I think this will be the good version.

I Get Comments

Sometimes I get nice comments on Literotica.

Sometimes I get critical comments.

Sometimes I get this.

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Hard to believe that the same person wrote this as the other stories

This one is imaginative, clever, well written and a master-class in dialog. The others, well, least said soonest mended.
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Which is kind of weird, because Talla's Temple takes so much more...

What next?

With Two Hundred Dollars out of the way, I can either write a few short stories, or get back to work on Talla's Temple 3 (probably "Talla's Frontier Temple" or something similar).

I read a tidbit about how some Christian pastor declared that masturbation "opens a portal to hell".  Combine that with some Powerwolf lyrics and I think we've got the basis of an fantasy world/erotic fiction novel with some punch.

I don't know if I can get any more mileage out of THD at the moment,...