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Sue Storm balcony scene Pg8

And  there is some real getting into things at last.  Really.

There is a lot to get, too.

Sue Storm balcony scene Pg7

Well, things seem to getting serious at last.

Sue Storm balcony scene Pg6

The good girls don't always win.  

Sue Storm balcony scene Pg5 cleaned up

Cleaned up the page, went over some line and redid the panel borders.

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Sue Storm balcony scene Pg5

And here is the next page.  Not sure if I pulled off the lip-biting well.

Sue Storm balcony scene Pg4 (revised)

Changed the last panel and some of what led to it.

Sue Storm balcony scene Pg4

Aaaaand... here is the fourth page, where things began to get more... touchy.

Sue Storm balcony scene Pg1 (revised)

Ok, so I just changed the expression in Sue's face in the right top panel,  
closing her eyes, and relocated some captions/dialogue to create a more controlled effect.  I think this  improves the page a tad.
 

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Sue Storm balcony scene Pg1

Maybe I should have posted this one before...

I wanted to do a clean up and straightening of lines but I think it's better to not spend so much time in just the build-up pages.

Sue Storm balcony scene Pg3

I was interested in trying to see if this could be pulled off.  I am not sure yet if I could have done it better.

Sue Storm balcony scene Pg2

From that scene from the GIRLS AINT EASY fic. 

THE REDHEAD ENCROACHMENT, WIP

THE REDHEAD ENCROACHMENT

PART 1:  HITTING THE JACKPOT 

"I don't know about this."

"Oh, you'll do great, Peter.  I'm sure."

"But...  here?  Like this?"

"I know you've got it in you, Tiger.  I know you can."

"I just never-"

"I'm here!  I'm hot!  I'm willing!  Take advantage!"

"You ARE hot, yes, but-"

"Oh, please! &nbs...

Is this love?

So here is a cropped pic of Diana and her favorite hero in the aftermath of their matching up. 

The larger one can be seen at the mailing list for reasons.

Kory design tests

This was how was experimenting with how stylized or not to go with Kory in the Betrothed comic.  Very rough of course but I am still conflicted on what would work best.  Opinions?

TT Betrothed Comix WIP 1/6 (I think)

AT LAST here is some long pending stuff.  I was very uncertain of how  
cartoony I wanted to make the artwork for this.  I did make it a little more  
in that direction than usual but not to the level of the original cartoon or  
the GO show.

Is it ok like this or would more realistic style be  better?  Or more
cartoony?
 

Karen and Starro-ed SM colored by Makverus

Really improves the piece.  The background addition makes it all much better by creating added context.

FF - Earth Girls Aint Easy, Part 14 revised

PART FOURTEEN: BUT THEY CAN BE HAD

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"I've ****ed things from other worlds before"

I actually did this sketch shortly after the BvS movie came out, along with some other versions, including the one with her on the ground with the smile she had in the movie.  But my bag was in the back of my car and hydraulic fluid actually stained the sketches!  But with her own movie being such a hit I had to try to rescue the artwork as well as I could.

I should clean it up and fix the lines and proportions further, but I rather like the setup and tastelessness of it.<...

Karen's Starroed Sex

This is the finished version.

Patron reward: Karen and Krypto surprise discarded layout

So this was a layout I sketched before the other one.  I liked the flying  
theme and the better showcase of their stretched-out bodies.  I would have  zoomed out to show their full figures in the finished drawing.

The ring in the finger is more  evident in this one, and I like the loving
gesture in her hand. I tried to  keep Karen recognizable by using the
infamous boob window in her dress, but  I think the profile view kinda
shortchanges ...

Patron reward: Karen and Krypto surprise WIP

Well, I guess he liked it so he had to put a ring on it.

This is just a very rough prelim.  This pic is something I have been trying to make work in multiple different layouts but I  am not sure it is there yet.  

The request asked for a discarded  newspaper with a shocking headline but I think the fallen invitation looked  classier.  Ha.
 

Lockjaw's Fantastic B*tch, colored (clean)

And here is the 'clean' version. 

Lockjaw's Fantastic B*tch, colored (messy version)

This awesome coloring was done by Makverus.  It took the pic to a whole different level, IMO.

Image was cropped for content reasons.  Full version can be found in the parallel mailing list.

She-Hulk vs Krypto WIP

This one is a reward I should have finished MONTHS ago.  I wanted to finish it last night and still could not, and I am still uneasy that the composition is lacking something.  So I am posting the WIP in case there are any observations I may take into account before finishing it today.  

I am not sure if Jen's left leg is bit too elongated or not, or it is just that  her foot looks smaller than her right one, which is closer to the foreground.

I wanted to add several ...

FF, EARTH GIRLS AINT EASY, complete finished story

Here is the whole thing in one single file, including the newly revised ending with some added bits, better paced, and with more hot sex, I hope.

It ended up being over 150k words, the longest thing I have ever written, but I really liked how it managed to cover the whole development of Sue's sexual awakening and how all the different characters ended up in interesting places.

Thanks to the sponsor who originally put up the hard cash for this to start in earnest, and to all the patrons h...

FF, EARTH GIRLS ARE EASY, Conclusion

Here is the ending of the FF story, the epilogue now split into two chapters for better reading.

Because of its length, I am adding it as an embedded text attachment.

This was the longest story I have ever written.  Probably the most descriptive, too.

Thanks must be expressed to the sponsor who originally commissioned this to be completed.  

FF: BUT CAN BE HAD, Update 31-may

She tried to get past the wedge of overmusc

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