Thanks for all the feedback on the last chapter :) I'm probably going to rework the "bike chase" scene, but the end result will be the same. Don't worry, I'm not trying to arbitrarily make Juliet lose her new bike.
Love to hear your thoughts and predictions :)
-Plum
While Angel maneuvered the car away from Evan Lopez’s place, Juliet stared at the two paralyzed operatives in front of he...
2024-02-09 16:27:36 +0000 UTC
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Let me know what you think ;)
-Plum
Erd’s “coach” was a rune-inscribed brass-colored globe the size of a small sedan that floated two feet off the ground. When he tapped a matching brass rod against its side, it rotated on hidden gears, sliding open like the aperture on a camera, revealing a spacious interior upholstered in soft red velvets. Victor and Valla had to struggle to get through the opening, but once in...
2024-02-08 16:47:13 +0000 UTC
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Thanks for reading and sharing your thoughts and predictions - love reading that stuff! I always find myself wanting to write about my reasoning for the characters' actions and thinking, but I also feel like that stuff should become apparent through the narrative, and I don't want you all to have some insight that isn't based in the text, 'cause that would mean you might not tell me, "Hey, Plum, this character doesn't make any sense."
On another not...
2024-02-07 17:15:14 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy the chapter! Thanks for everything!
-Plum
The longest part of Victor’s return trip was the slow ascent upward through the enormous brooding planet’s atmosphere. First, he had to wait for what felt like half a day for the great beetle to return. He did so in the vast courtyard of the pyramid, following the emissary from one garden to another, taking in the scenery and trying to build memories solid enough to l...
2024-02-06 16:54:10 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy today's grouping of words. I've gathered them and painstakingly organized them into something for you to read! :)
-Plum
As soon as she connected to the terminal, Athena’s image on the screen faded, and Juliet was left sitting there, feeling almost like Angel and Athena had left the room to speak privately. As much as she wanted to relax and trust that everything would be all right, her mind kept running down ro...
2024-02-05 18:30:24 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy the chapter! :)
When the vehicle or insect carrying Victor and the emissary descended to the immense pyramid’s base, depositing the glass carriage to the smooth sandstone ground, it settled with an almost delicate series of clinks. Then a dark shadow moved away, and Victor craned his neck, looking through the translucent ceiling to see a great shape rapidly climbing into the air, its precise form obscured by the streamers of bright sunlight filtering through ...
2024-02-04 20:55:31 +0000 UTC
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What's ol' Ward getting up to today? Check it out :)
Thanks for reading!
-Plum
42 – A Bath with the Law
Children’s Crossing was a busy place. Haley and Ward had to wait in line to deliver their mounts to the stable, and once they got the chance to speak to the stable manager, Haley paid the hands a few extra glories to give Nutmeg and Wind Queen some extra atte...
2024-02-03 19:07:07 +0000 UTC
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Here's your delivery :)
-Plum
To Juliet’s surprise, Frida answered the call immediately, already dressed, alert, and sitting at a table with the burgeoning Luna dome “sunrise” providing a stunning backdrop in the window behind her. “Pretty early for a call,” she said, sipping from a coffee cup. “Is something the matter?”
“Uh, yeah, kind of. Dang, you’re up bright and early, huh?”
Frida s...
2024-02-02 19:56:09 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy the chapter!
Thanks, as always, for reading :)
-Plum
When Darren left the Genesis Center, he’d had the determined mindset he often felt when he knew he had to prove somebody wrong. If he had the self-awareness to look back on his life, he might have seen a pattern—failure leading to perceived judgment from others, leading to him trying to demonstrate how he’d been right by any means necessary. He’d tried other tactics; he’d tried doing things “th...
2024-02-01 17:29:00 +0000 UTC
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Here's today's delivery :)
Thanks, and have a great weekend!
-Plum
With her knees still jittery from the adrenaline rush of the fight, Juliet approached the dimly lit secret doorway. She smelled something odd, like a hot, steamy bleach in the air, and wrinkled her nose. “Angel, what’s that odor?” Thanks to her olfactory implants, Angel had no problem identifying precisely what it was.
“There’s a lingering scent of bleach, and the moisture content i...
2024-01-31 20:11:29 +0000 UTC
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I know this is getting weird. I hope it's not boring; I realize this is a litRPG, and people want to see numbers go up, and so far, there's been very little of that in book 7. I have plans, obviously, but it's taking me a while to get there.
Let me know what you think :)
-Plum
The ivid emissary led them down the hill into the weird cityscape of towering, smooth, funnel-shaped buildings. ...
2024-01-30 18:13:21 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy! ;)
-Plum
Sometime after midnight, Juliet slipped out of the hangar and, with the simulated engine noise turned off, silently sped off through the empty streets toward the interdome highway. She was wearing a black turtleneck tucked into her darkest pair of blue jeans, her combat boots, and slung in a snug shoulder holster, her newest pistol, a needler similar to the one she’d given to Aya, but built by a diffe...
2024-01-29 19:52:35 +0000 UTC
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Here's a new chapter for you! Love to hear your thoughts :)
-Plum
“They’re certainly more intelligent seeming than those we’ve encountered thus far.” Valla leaned past Victor, peering down the long, gradual slope of the tunnel toward the two huge insectoid guards. Guards they clearly were—standing still, armored, holding weapons as their shiny-carapace-covered heads swiveled left to right, ever alert...
2024-01-28 18:21:51 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy! Hope you're having a great weekend :)
41 - The Crossing
They rode until noon before resting, and despite Grace’s help, Ward’s tailbone, glutes, and thighs were killing him. “Not sure how much further I can go today, at least on horseback. I can walk, though. Hell, I can jog.”
Haley looked at him from where she stood near the bank of a small river the road passed over. They’d taken a short side trail down ...
2024-01-27 21:47:44 +0000 UTC
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Thanks for reading and supporting my writing :)
-Plum
“What are you going to do?” Juliet asked, slowing down and pulling up behind a cargo van, coasting in its wake so she could pay better attention to Hines.
“I gotta lay low. Gotta disappear for a while. I might need you to move around and be my eyes and ears for a little while. I can pay a fair contract wage.”
Juliet chuckled and tsked. ...
2024-01-26 17:37:24 +0000 UTC
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Things are about to get interesting . . . maybe :)
-Plum
Thanks for reading and for all the feedback and support!
“Wait,” Lesh rumbled, nudging past Valla to better peer into the darkness. Victor felt a small surge of Energy, and then the giant warrior’s reptilian eyes began to shine with mossy green luminescence. “I see a great chasm with tunnels branching off at the bottom. It...
2024-01-25 16:53:23 +0000 UTC
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Thanks for reading! Quick note: I forgot that, at the end of book 4, Alice told Juliet that Honey dropped a present off for her. I'm going to add a quick scene into chapter 2 or 3 of this book in which Juliet finds and opens it. It's just a T-shirt, one of the ones Juliet likes, a vintage smiley face wearing sunglasses.
Small time skip here. Please let me know if anything doesn't make sense :)
-Plum
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2024-01-24 16:06:07 +0000 UTC
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Thanks for all of your support! Enjoy :)
-Plum
The ivid tunnels didn’t provide convenient hiding places. The best the three adventurers could hope for was to duck out of sight around the many corners and bends whenever they saw one of the giant insects coming their way. The magical perfume—Victor wondered if it was somehow mimicking pheromones—seemed to work very well, however, and as long as they didn’t stand ...
2024-01-23 19:38:43 +0000 UTC
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Thanks for reading! Love to hear your feedback :)
-Plum
When Juliet and Honey stepped into the reception area, they found Applebaum leaning on the counter, chatting with Frida. When they came into view, he got quiet, but the lingering smile and the mischief in his eyes told Juliet he’d been talking trash. “Oi, ladies,” he said as they came into view. “Showers work out all right?” He couldn’t have been there...
2024-01-22 19:00:21 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy your chapter :)
-Plum
When the last of the ivid had disappeared into the vast, gaping hole in the side of the hill, Lesh said, “We should wait. If they’re anything like the Kothids, the warriors will take time to settle and move back to their nooks and crannies.” When Victor nodded, Lesh produced a leather-topped camp stool and sat down. Victor and Valla had their own camp furniture, hers an upholstered, fancy chair, his a sturdy wooden one. Soon, they were ...
2024-01-21 17:34:04 +0000 UTC
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It's Saturday, and you know what that means . . .
Enjoy :)
-Plum
40 – Dichotomy
When Ward woke the following day, he did so in a warm bed with a warm sleeping companion, and he couldn’t imagine feeling better about life. No, that wasn’t true, he reasoned, shifting on his pillow to better look at Fay’s slumbering countenance. Things were good at that moment,...
2024-01-20 20:12:44 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy :)
For the first twenty minutes or so, Rutger instructed them on things that Honey had already taught Juliet—how to draw the sword, how to hold it, how to sheathe it, and so on. She’d already committed many of those things to muscle memory back when she, Honey, and the crew of the Kowashi had traveled from Titan to Luna. Apparently, Honey had been taught well because Tanaka didn’t have many corrections for her or Juliet. He showe...
2024-01-19 17:45:51 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy today's chapter :)
-Plum
Victor, Valla, and Lesh stood on one of the copper discs inside the World Hall, each holding a token of travel they’d purchased from a counter near the entrance. More accurately, Erd Van had purchased them, along with some “tokens of recall.” Victor had been a little surprised at the ease with which they’d claimed the tokens; either the travel attendant was very trusting, or she...
2024-01-18 18:42:55 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy! I love sword stuff, I mean in movies, games, and books, but I'm not, like, really into swords. Does that make sense? So, when I write chapters like this, I spend a lot of time looking things up and trying to be less than exact about things 'cause I don't want to start off super technical and have to maintain that level of sword technicality throughout multiple books. That said, if I write something that sounds really dumb or doesn't make sense, I'd love it if you all pointe...
2024-01-17 19:46:45 +0000 UTC
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Love to hear your thoughts :)
-Plum
“Darren, you may stop concentrating on your Core space. We’ve finished the affinity assessment.” Y-seven’s voice cut through Darren’s concentration, snapping him out of his semi-meditative state. He wasn’t sure how long they’d been at it, but it felt like hours. He’d stared at his nascent Core that entire time. Mostly, it had sat there, unmoving, but quite a few times...
2024-01-16 18:55:37 +0000 UTC
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Sorry for the promo spam today. :) I'm hoping to make this the best VoT book launch yet!
If you haven't read any Victor of Tucson books, now's a great time to give 'em a try. If you have read them, I'd sure love your help making this launch a success. A quick rating or review, or, if you have KU, a quick download, would go a long way.
Links:
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2024-01-16 12:36:46 +0000 UTC
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Here's a little chapter for you to enjoy on this chilly winter day (chilly for me, anyway.) I hope you're enjoying Book 5 so far. I know we're dealing with a lot of personal stuff, but I'm in the mood to build up these characters some more, and I think it's fun to read stuff like this, so hopefully, I can pull it off without boring everyone to tears.
I'm tentatively calling this book "Lunar Interlude" and I'm seeing it as a kind of . . . interlude. ...
2024-01-15 16:59:34 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy the chapter :)
Have a nice day, too!
-Plum
“Victor, please.” Valla gently tugged on his wrist, urging him to sit back down. “Give the man a moment to gather himself.”
Victor glowered, and when Valla’s eyebrows drew together, mimicking his expression of irritation, it felt like someone had splashed cold water on him. He looked inward, at his roiling rage Core, at the heat in hi...
2024-01-14 17:23:38 +0000 UTC
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Here's today's delivery! Not to spoil today's chapter, but if anyone's wondering after reading this, no, I don't intend for this to turn into some kind of harem story. No, I'm not going to write explicit scenes. There will be adult topics and relationships, though.
Cheers,
-Plum
39 – The Purpose for Existence
Back in the inn, Ward sat in one of the comfortable armchairs nea...
2024-01-13 20:17:29 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy your fresh serving of Cyber Dreams :D
-Plum
Juliet stood in the open bay doors of the hangar, pacing back and forth in the late afternoon sun, waiting for Sergeant Hines, and watching Bennet and Aya devour the donuts she’d planned to save for morning. She couldn’t blame them; something about having a gun pointed at you and being slapped around by a thug made a person hungry. In fact, Juliet was contemplating ...
2024-01-12 16:00:56 +0000 UTC
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