Well, things are heating up. Let me know what you think :)
-Plum
The Grave installation up in the canyon proved to be a series of dome-shaped, plasteel structures nestled between two peaks in what used to be a popular hiking destination. Juliet learned from one of the local employees while they ate breakfast one morning that Grave bought the entire canyon at auction from Cybergen while they were restructuring. Now the facility wa...
2023-03-06 14:26:43 +0000 UTC
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The hunt's back in town. Have a relaxing day :)
-Plum
The hunters’ caravan traveled back to Coloss on the same route they’d used heading out, and the monsters of the waste seemed to be giving them a wide berth. Consequently, Tes didn’t take Victor and Valla on more side hunts. That said, she did spend a lot of time on the return trip tutoring the two of them. In Victor’s case, it was more that she gave him a peaceful plac...
2023-03-05 14:36:20 +0000 UTC
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Hey all,
I had a RR reader point out that I completely forgot about some loot Victor got back in book two, lol. That would bug me as a reader, so I figured I should clean up those loose ends. I mean, it's two books late, but if someone is a loyal reader, they'll get the payoff, amirite? :)
So, remember the alchemist, Shouza? Here's a bit I added to Victor's visit with her:
“Good! Here, l...
2023-03-04 18:40:42 +0000 UTC
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Have a nice weekend, folks! Thanks for your comments and feedback :)
-Plum
Juliet sat, head resting against the rattling hull of the fluttercraft, eyes closed and a million thoughts racing through her mind. There were so many twists and turns to her subterfuges that she was starting to struggle to keep everything straight. Angel was the only “person” who knew everything about her, who knew she was Juliet Bianchi from Tucson a...
2023-03-03 12:16:49 +0000 UTC
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The hunt draws to a close. Enjoy and rejoice, for tomorrow is Friday :)
-Plum
When Victor came to his senses, he stood among more than two dozen other hunters who’d similarly gone through an incredible influx of Energy. Many stood, swaying on their feet, dazed like Victor. Others, perhaps having received less, laughed and cheered, slapping the hands of their neighbors and whooping, waiting for Cayle to make her post-battle anno...
2023-03-02 18:12:48 +0000 UTC
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Let me know what you think of this little twist.
Cheers,
Plum
At Garza’s words, Juliet felt a deep, nearly unbearable dread, but it wasn’t at the mentioned aneurysm. Something told her that if she let these people put her under, she’d never wake up again, or if she did, she wouldn’t be herself. Scrambling for words or avenues of escape, she said, “Can’t they just laser it? Wh...
2023-03-01 14:22:44 +0000 UTC
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Okay, I had fun writing this one - hopefully, it wasn't just because I could picture it in my head. I mean, hopefully, you'll all be able to picture it too :)
Enjoy!
-Plum
Victor tore through the loose, dry scree scattered about the hilltop, and with crimson rage tinting his vision, he surveyed the final slope that led down into the box canyon where his quarry awaited. Despite his efforts, several challengers ha...
2023-02-28 20:12:48 +0000 UTC
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Some puzzle pieces coming together, but we still have a ways to go. Happy to hear your thoughts.
-Plum
Long before she’d entered Grave Tower, Juliet had turned off the wireless access points on her deck, so she had to physically connect her data cable to it before Angel could take a look at the information she’d copied off the little drive that had belonged to, presumably, Joshua Kyle or one of his coconspirators. ...
2023-02-27 14:21:22 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy this one, folks! Thanks for reading and for your support! As always, I'm happy to hear your feedback :)
-Plum
Victor looked through his piles of monster trophies, allowing his instinct to guide his hand as he pulled specimen after specimen out of his dimensional container and stacked them together on the sandy ground of the waste. At the bottom of the pile was the cultist crown, and he knew, in his gut, that his ancestors i...
2023-02-26 15:30:53 +0000 UTC
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I hope you're all planning a nice weekend :)
Looking forward to your feedback!
-Plum
Juliet’s fingers were shaking with adrenaline as she touched Polk’s neck, but she found a thready pulse and said, too loudly and perhaps a bit hysterically, “Polk’s hurt bad but alive. We need backup and medical ASAP.” She glanced at Houston and saw his back to her, his knees in the small of Ky...
2023-02-24 12:02:46 +0000 UTC
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If any of you are wondering when the next installment of Victor will be available on Kindle and Audible, I got the official word today: June 6th, 2023.
I think the new cover art is pretty cool :)
I'll post links when the pre-order is available (I know most of you already read this content and I don't expect you all to rush out and buy it, don't worry!)
Cheers,
Plum
2023-02-24 11:34:16 +0000 UTC
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Tomorrow's Friday! Hope your week's been great.
Cheers,
Plum
Sometime around midday, Victor broke through and leveled his Core. As his Core surged and pulsed, then contracted on itself, slightly denser than before, Victor looked up and smiled with satisfaction. He’d made a lot of progress since coming to Zaafor, and he had a feeling he’d make a lot more before he and Valla left. He l...
2023-02-23 17:54:03 +0000 UTC
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Hey everyone! Things are getting complicated. Hope I haven't lost you. Let me know what you think of this one, please.
Cheers,
Plum
When Juliet and Delma stepped out of the elevator, they were met with a periodic klaxon, red flashing lights, and Kent’s voice repeating a message over and over, “Attention, Grave employees on sublevels seventy-seven through eighty-three, for your safety, all doors...
2023-02-22 14:34:44 +0000 UTC
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Words were coming slow to me today. Hope you enjoy this one! Have a good evening :)
-Plum
When Victor selected his class option, he was imbued with a sense of well-being, power, and confidence; he immediately felt that he’d done the right thing—this was his path. Energy surged through him, infusing every nook and cranny of his body, and he lifted his head back and howled at the pale blue sky, unable to contain his exuberance....
2023-02-21 18:55:59 +0000 UTC
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Here's today's installment. Enjoy, and please share what you like/dislike :)
-Plum
“I would never have considered going out to eat at five PM before I got hired by Grave,” Delma said, looking around the restaurant. The place was called, simply, Mesquite, and Juliet’s nose told her why; the signature scent of the burning hardwood filled the air, though the “about us” section on the menu explained that they use...
2023-02-20 14:40:58 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy the chapter. Let me know what you think, please :)
-Plum
“You’re level forty already?” Valla asked, her face twisted in something between admiration and disgust.
“Actually, I’m level forty-two, but the System says it’s holding two levels until I go through my Class refinement . . .”
“Ancient Fathers! Weren’t you thirty-eight back in Coloss?” Valla shook her head and then sat on a r...
2023-02-19 14:33:39 +0000 UTC
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Have a great weekend, everyone. Hope you're enjoying the story. Feedback is appreciated :)
-Plum
“So, you want me to try to get you to see what I’m looking at on this?” Juliet asked, glancing at the card she’d drawn from the deck, a sheep with fluffy black wool.
“That’s right,” Doctor Vance said. Juliet had been more than disappointed to see the man walk through her door—she’d had an almost visceral reacti...
2023-02-17 12:53:10 +0000 UTC
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Enjoy! Love to hear your thoughts :)
-Plum
The roar sounded again, and Victor ducked his head slightly so the crown of his weighty helm led the way forward. He was furious, ready to fight, eyes blazing with the deep red Energy of his rage, but still aware of the rocks and dust falling from the high cavernous ceiling. They crashed on his mighty shoulders and shattered and bounced away from his immovable helmet, and Victor shouted,...
2023-02-16 17:37:22 +0000 UTC
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I could tell my last chapter wasn't very popular with everyone; I made a few adjustments to my main document, but I think some of the concerns will be addressed in this chapter and in the ones coming up.
One of the criticisms, quite validly, pointed out that some of the secondary characters are pretty 1 dimensional in this arc. Gordon being a prime example. I think, because of the rapidly heightened stakes, it feels like we're near a climax. We're s...
2023-02-15 14:55:46 +0000 UTC
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It's an action-packed one! Let me know what you think. :)
-Plum
When Victor—hulking, furious, eager for battle—stepped into the gravel and scree-strewn cave entrance, his nostrils were assailed by a pungent scent, something like a cross between shit and ammonia. He scanned the long, craggy walls and ceiling, trying to find a source for the smell, but didn’t see it. Growling, he strode forward, brushing past the little man c...
2023-02-14 19:05:29 +0000 UTC
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Hey all!
I know most of you are here for Victor of Tucson or Cyber Dreams, but my first series is slowly making its way to Kindle and Audible - Book 2 is now available! If you'd like to check it out, there's nearly 400k words between volumes 1 and 2, so it might give you some entertainment.
The story is set in Fanwath - the same world as Victor of Tucson. It follows three main characters as they explore and help to try to start a human colony there. I won't lie - I learned a lot w...
2023-02-14 11:27:07 +0000 UTC
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Happy to hear your feedback on this chapter - Is the Gordon thing too much? Not enough? Does Juliet's stress come through? Appreciate any thoughts.
-Plum
Juliet was just stepping off the elevator to return to her room when the watchdog app began to blink, and before Angel could alert her, she selected it to see what was going on. A message was waiting for her:
Lydia Roman:
Tomor...
2023-02-13 14:21:44 +0000 UTC
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Have a nice Sunday :) Here's a chapter to help you relax! Let me know if you like/dislike something, please!
Cheers,
Plum
The next day, true to her word, Tes led Victor, Valla, and Barn—a large, gray-plate armored man with long, thick quills for hair and a very ruddy complexion that didn’t do a lot to compliment his bulging black eyes—out of camp before most of the other hunters ha...
2023-02-12 15:55:31 +0000 UTC
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Here's Friday's installment. I think the response to the current "situation" is mostly positive, but I know some people are concerned with Juliet becoming too OP, too fast. I want this to be a fun story, with some drama and some downturns, but overall fun. I do have some checks and balances planned for her, but yeah, let me know if you're hating things; I've been wrong before, and I do listen to feedback.
-Plum
When Ju...
2023-02-10 16:17:47 +0000 UTC
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A brief interlude in the action.
Enjoy :)
-Plum
Victor strode forward to retrieve Lifedrinker from the dead wyrm, but before he could grab hold of her haft, he saw great motes of purple-gold Energy forming up around the gigantic corpse. He paused and stood back, bracing himself; it looked like a lot of Energy. Sure enough, the motes coalesced into a wide, shimmering pool, and then most o...
2023-02-09 18:39:23 +0000 UTC
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My apologies for the cliff last time. This cliff is more gentle. If you don't follow Discord, I should let you all know I changed the scene in chapter 21 at the end where Rachel is speaking to WBD. It's kind of significant, so maybe check it out; it's the part after the hash mark. (#)
Happy to hear your thoughts :)
-Plum
Juliet couldn’t feel the drill when it started on her skull, and ...
2023-02-08 18:00:43 +0000 UTC
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Some new mechanics today; let me know what you think :)
-Plum
Victor followed Tes’s gaze to the giant arachnid corpse near the center of the gully and started kicking his way through the corpses toward it. Sure enough, as he walked around the lifeless body, its legs hanging in the air, curled inward, he saw a long, dark haft sticking out of the creature’s head. He recognized it as Lifedrinker’s living wood handle...
2023-02-07 17:08:29 +0000 UTC
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Here's a juicy one for you :)
-Plum
“So,” Juliet said, holding the long, sleek rifle in her hands, running her eyes over its length, from the heavy, battery-filled stock to the tip of its barrel where the magnetic coils were visible as they emerged from the plasteel forestock, “This thing certainly felt different, but what makes it so? I mean, how is this different from my bolt-thrower?”
“Well,” the r...
2023-02-06 14:35:42 +0000 UTC
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Is it Sunday again, already!? Time sure flies :)
Here's another Victor chapter. It's monster hunting time!
-Plum
Victor stood outside the city gates, watching the other members of the hunting company gather beneath the dawn-lit sky; stars were still visible, but a hint of orange and yellow painted the eastern horizon. Valla shifted beside him, also watching the procession of animals, wag...
2023-02-05 15:49:53 +0000 UTC
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Happy Friday, everyone! I hope you enjoy the chapter; you might see some hints about things to come in this one. I really appreciate all the feedback I got on the last chapter, and I'll be looking forward to how you all think things are going with the main conflict in this volume as things continue to shake out.
-Plum
Juliet stepped into the little white room. Nothing but a white, plasteel table and two chairs occupied the space ...
2023-02-03 19:22:25 +0000 UTC
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