Hey everyone! I just wanted to give you all a quick update regarding the story and some recent changes.
First off, let me clarify that I’m not rewriting the previous chapters (okay, maybe two of them—more on that in a moment). Most of the story will remain the same, so no need to worry about major overhauls.
Now for the announcements: Chapters 30 to 45 have been made available to Tier 1 Patreon members. Thank you for your support!
As for the rewritten portions:
2025-01-12 19:44:02 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.55 A Knight And A Blacksmith
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Ting!
The rhythmic clang of a hammer striking metal echoed through the air as Naruto descended the stairs, the sound resonating with a steady pulse. The staircase creaked under his weight, each step accompanied by the faint groan of old wood. He found himself on a moss-covered wooden platform. Above him, the ceiling was a patchwork of stone and rotting wooden beams.
The metallic rhythm grew louder...
2025-01-09 18:47:58 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.54 The Chase
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Any normal person in an impossible situation would freeze up, hesitate, and make mistakes, choking on their own fear as death tightened its noose around their neck. But Naruto's mind worked just fine—because he had died before.
Too many times to count.
He had felt his body shatter on impact after jumping off cliffs just to go back home. Death wasn't an ending anymore; it was an annoying inconvenience. A setback. Some...
2025-01-07 18:40:20 +0000 UTC
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The Cerulean General Hospital was a sprawling, pristine building situated at the heart of the city, its whitewashed walls gleaming under the midday sun. The glass-paneled facade reflected the clear blue sky, while rows of carefully tended flowerbeds lined the entrance, giving the stark modernity of the hospital a touch of warmth. Inside, the air was sterile but not unfriendly, with soft lighting and soothing murals of water Pokémon—Goldeen, Starmie, and Lapras—adorning the walls to calm ...
2025-01-06 18:51:16 +0000 UTC
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Title: Naruto: The First Try
Description: Naruto Uzumaki’s journey takes an unexpected turn when Hiruzen Sarutobi uncovers deliberate sabotage in the boy’s education at the Shinobi Academy. Determined to right this wrong, the Third Hokage grants Naruto an early graduation and places him under the apprenticeship of a skilled mentor—a Shinobi who can teach him what the Academy never did. Unbeknownst to all, this single act sets off a chain of events that will not only redefine Naru...
2025-01-06 18:49:00 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.53 Between a Rock and a Hard Place
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Naruto’s eyes cracked open, his body heavy and weak as though he were buried beneath an invisible weight. The world around him felt distant, his mind blank and foggy, trying to piece together what had happened. One second he was trapped in Zabuza’s water prison, the next was nothing but searing pain and darkness.
His right arm felt… wrong. Numb and dead, like it wasn’t even part of his body anymor...
2025-01-05 18:40:28 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.52 The Scarlet Thorn Arrives
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Sakura sat silently in the small boat as it rocked gently over the black, still waters. The sound of the oars cutting through the surface was rhythmic, almost hypnotic. Her mind was numb, her gaze locked on the dark expanse beneath them. The water seemed endless, like a void that could swallow her whole.
The boat jerked to a sudden stop.
“Why… why did we stop?”
No one answered.
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2025-01-02 18:40:35 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.51 Politics in Darkness
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The Judgment Hall—as it was unofficially known—was unlike any other space in the Hokage’s building. It had been constructed decades ago, during the first generation of Konoha when most shinobi occasionally needed to answer for their actions. It was a room of absolute authority, designed to strip away pretense and enforce the gravity of accountability.
The chamber was vast and oppressive, its walls swallowed ...
2024-12-29 13:41:45 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.50 Team 7 Vs Zabuza Momoichi
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The mist thickened further, swallowing the world in dense, impenetrable white. Naruto and Sasuke flickered into position beside Sakura, her hands steady as she reinforced the pyramidal chakra barrier.
“We’re at a disadvantage,” Sasuke said, his voice quiet but grim.
Naruto and Sakura nodded. From power to experience, to the very environment itself, everything worked in Zabuza’s favor. The De...
2024-12-27 11:51:02 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.49 The Demon of the Mist
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The small wooden boat creaked as it pushed through the mist-shrouded sea, the soft splash of the oars barely audible against the dense fog. Naruto sat cross-legged near the bow, his arms folded as he let out a long, exaggerated sigh.
It had been two days since he’d left the campsite with no sign of Lordran due to his mission, and the thought gnawed at him. Solaire must’ve left by now, he thought gloomily, fak...
2024-12-24 19:26:31 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.48 First Kill
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Konoha wasn’t stupid. Missions weren’t handed out randomly or without prior scrutiny. Behind every mission assigned, especially those involving high-profile figures like Tazuna, was an entire department dedicated to reconnaissance, research, and risk assessment. They combed through details, weighing the costs and dangers, predicting possible outcomes.
When Kakashi had been handed the mission to escort Tazuna, the danger...
2024-12-22 18:35:47 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.47 Naruto Vs The Demon Brothers
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Sasuke leaned against the Hokage gates, arms crossed, his face impassive as he enjoyed the rare moment of quiet. Kakashi stood nearby, engrossed in his little orange book, flipping its pages with the kind of practiced nonchalance that only years of avoiding responsibility could cultivate. Tazuna, holding a beer bottle loosely in one hand, stared at it like it might provide the answer to all of life’s riddles. M...
2024-12-21 18:49:18 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.46 Warrior of Sunlight
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Naruto and Solaire walked into the castle, their footsteps echoing faintly against the stone floor.
Solaire’s gaze immediately shifted to the unlit bonfire in the center of the room. “Ah, this will do nicely,” he said, moving to light it.
Naruto, meanwhile, took in his surroundings. The room was vast, filled with long, broken benches and barrels scattered about like remnants of some forgotten gatherin...
2024-12-17 17:32:07 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.45 Vs the Hellkite Wyvern
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Naruto couldn’t believe it. He was fighting a dragon—or, well, a wyvern, but honestly, who cared about the technicalities when something that big was actively trying to kill you?
The Hellkite Wyvern towered before him, its scales gleaming a fiery red as the sunlight danced across its massive form. Its eyes—yellow and predatory—locked onto Naruto. For a brief moment, he caught the slitted pupil narrowing...
2024-12-15 19:01:07 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.44 Solaire of Astora
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The smell of steaming ramen filled the air as Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke sat at the counter of Ichiraku Ramen, bowls in front of them. Naruto was already halfway through his third bowl, his slurping sounds making Sakura twitch. Sasuke, meanwhile, sipped his tomato soup quietly, seemingly unfazed by the chaos around him.
“Okay,” Sakura said, placing her chopsticks down and looking at the two boys seriously. “We ...
2024-12-12 18:59:52 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.43 A C-Rank Step Forward
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A-rank jutsu, Wind Style: Vacuum Blade, was infamous among wind-users for its complexity. The technique worked on the principle of coating a weapon with a sheath of wind chakra, extending the weapon's range and drastically enhancing its cutting power due to the nature of wind itself. The problem, though, was the very same reason it was so powerful—wind's ability to cut indiscriminately.
Wind chakra didn't h...
2024-12-11 18:40:15 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.42 The Balance of Five
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The evening sun hung low in the sky, casting long shadows across the village as the day gave way to twilight. The cemetery, bathed in the warm hues of dusk, seemed almost peaceful—if not for the weight of the occasion. Kakashi stood by the unadorned casket, his face unreadable, the setting sun painting the silver strands of his hair with a faint orange glow.
Shisui Uchiha's mummified remains lay within, surrounded...
2024-12-09 18:49:44 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.41 Konoha Council.
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The Uchiha Coup d'État was a secret Hiruzen Sarutobi had vowed to carry with him to his grave. But secrets, no matter how deeply buried, have a way of clawing their way back into the light. And even when buried, their shadows linger. Long after the massacre, its weight never truly lifted from Konoha—or from Hiruzen. It was a constant reminder of the choices he could not undo, a legacy of what diplomacy, leadership, and eve...
2024-12-07 18:31:30 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.40 Friends Again?!
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Ino stood outside Sakura’s house, clutching the straps of the small bag she’d brought with her. The sun had barely risen, casting the street in a soft golden glow, and the quiet of the morning made every creak of the wooden porch and every distant birdcall seem louder than it was.
Her heart was racing, her palms slightly damp. She shifted her weight from one foot to the other, debating for the hundredth time whethe...
2024-12-06 18:00:32 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.39 Love is Trust.
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The shop was quiet again, save for the faint rustle of flower stems brushing together as Ino moved to rearrange a display. The bouquet she had just crafted sat like a ghost in her mind—a reflection of something she didn’t have. She didn’t know why it lingered, why the young man’s beaming face made her feel so hollow. She didn’t know why she was suddenly noticing these things.
Ino’s fingers hovered over a set...
2024-12-04 18:56:17 +0000 UTC
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The sun was barely up, and the early morning stillness wrapped around Cerulean City like a blanket. Austin adjusted the straps of the baby carrier on his chest, glancing down at Pikachu, who was snuggled inside, fast asleep.
Adorable, the boy thought and turned his gaze back to the gym. It was just as he remembered from the anime: a massive Olympic-style pool, rows of seats for spectators, and a stage covered in plastic sheeting, likely from one of the Sensational Sisters’ performanc...
2024-12-04 18:52:21 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.38 Cut the Water, Shape the Wind
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"Sorry for ditching you at the restaurant yesterday."
Asuma waved it off, hiding the small smirk tugging at his lips. "Nah, it's fine." He had his own way of settling that score—out here, in this spar.
Then the kid pointed at him, eyes narrowing. "I know that look. You're gonna bully me during the spar, aren't you?"
That stopped Asuma cold. He blinked, caught off guard. "No," he said simply. ...
2024-12-02 20:34:17 +0000 UTC
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Misty tugged at the hem of her shorts as she sat in the center of the audience, her nerves as taut as a freshly-strung fishing line. She didn’t want to be here—not really. The Cerulean City Gym-turned-theater stretched before her, every detail dredging up memories she’d rather not dwell on.
The pool that once held fierce battles against challengers was now a glittering stage, decked out with shimmering lights and decorations designed to dazzle tourists. Banners hung from the raft...
2024-12-02 19:01:08 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.37 Seals, Power, and Dinner
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Sakura stirred awake as she felt a gentle shake on her shoulder. Her eyes fluttered open, her body groggy and heavy from sleep. For a moment, she didn't recognize where she was, but the sight of her desk cluttered with papers brought everything rushing back.
Oh no, she muttered, sitting upright with a start. Her hands flew to the stack of homework in front of her, flipping through...
2024-12-01 17:59:26 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.36 Team 10
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Sarutobi Asuma had lived a life that many envied.
The son of the Third Hokage.
Genin at nine.
Chūnin at twelve.
Jōnin at sixteen.
One hundred and fifty A-rank missions completed.
Eighteen S-rank missions successful.
It was a glittering résumé, enough to command awe and respect from anyone. Yet, none of it mattered when your father was the Professor, Hiruzen Sarutobi
2024-11-29 18:51:53 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.35 When Two Worlds Meet
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Ayame walked up the stairs to Naruto's apartment, a bag of groceries in her hand and a mix of amusement and exasperation on her face. I wonder if Naruto actually finished that milk I bought him last week. Or if it's still sitting there, curdling, she thought with a sigh.
She and her father, Teuchi, had taken it upon themselves to check on Naruto now and then. It started a few years ago,...
2024-11-27 18:23:50 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.34 Naruto vs Tenten
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Tenten ran harder, her feet pounding against the dirt path as if she could outrun her thoughts. The crisp morning air filled her lungs, but it did nothing to clear the frustration boiling inside her. She thought she was past this. After everything she'd been through—the years of training, the sacrifices, the growth—she thought she'd accepted her path.
But Naruto's words kept echoing in her mind.
"You could...
2024-11-26 11:00:59 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.33 Things are Changing
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Naruto stared at the crystal lizard cradled limply in his arms, its tiny body gleaming faintly even in its unconscious state. He couldn’t believe it had worked.
He had used a storage seal to trap the creature, tossed the scroll into the inventory, died in Lordran, and woke up back in his room. Now, here it was—a living thing from another world, safe in Konoha.
“Man, I actually did it,” he whispered...
2024-11-24 18:09:40 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.32
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Naruto tore through the remaining hollows like clockwork, his movements fluid and efficient. After so many loops, it wasn’t even worth drawing the Zweihander anymore—just fists and kata were enough. He sidestepped a clumsy slash, grabbed the hollow by the head, and twisted sharply, the sickening snap of its neck echoing through the narrow hallway.
“Next,” Naruto muttered as he made his way toward the black knight, eager to te...
2024-11-22 18:49:52 +0000 UTC
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Chapter no.31 Level Up?!
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Naruto ascended the staircase, the blue tearstone ring catching the sunlight as he emerged from the shadowy staircase into the open air.
He stopped at a landing, glancing between two paths: the familiar descent to the bonfire or the unknown climb ahead.
A grin spread across his face, his hand tightening on the Zweihander. “Forward it is,” he muttered, taking the first step upward.
The stone stairs wound ...
2024-11-21 19:52:46 +0000 UTC
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