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Helluva Trio 2 pg 36 (commentary)

I feel like the flow in this is a little off. Goes from Millie licking Loona's nipple to her leaning back with Loona's hand already down her pants. Loona's dialogue in panel 3 also feels abrupt and out of nowhere. Feels like there should've been an interim panel.

It's the sort of thing that can be hard to catch.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 26

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 36 inks (commentary)

If only all apologies could go so smoothly.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 26 inks

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 36 draft (script)

P1: Millie fondles Loona's breasts.

MILLIE: Oh, these would make for a very nice apology.

P2: She takes one of Loona's nipples in her mouth, sucking.

P3: Loona slides her hand down into Millie's pants.

LOONA: And I'll slide my hand down here...

P4: Loona curls her finger, fingering Millie.

LOONA: ...and stroke.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 26 draft

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 35 (commentary)

I promise, not all of my lesbian scenes will have them talking about a man. I'm sure I'll pass the Bechdel test eventually.

Also, I'm not entirely sure if there are any women in Hell that wear a bra unless it's an actual part of their attire.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 25

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 35 inks (commentary)

Making the workplace a little more fun.

With the latest episode out, "Mastermind," do they even have an office anymore? Who knows. For now, we'll just have to say that this is "set" before then, not that it really matters much.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 25 inks

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 35 draft (script)

P1: Millie squeezes her legs around Loona's head as she keeps licking.

MILLIE: Ooohh... that's good.

P2: Loona looks up, unsure.

MILLIE (off-panel): ...for a start. What else are you going to do?

LOONA: I'll, uh... I'll...

P3: She lifts up her shirt, exposing her breasts.

LOONA: I'll give him a treat as well.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 25 draft

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Thankful for your support

I just wanted to make a quick post to show my appreciation to everyone here, giving me their support.

I have spent so much of my life trying to prove that I can be creative and that I can make a living off of art, and it has been a challenge. A large portion of this time, I've been fasting every other day to save money on food. I didn't go out. I didn't pay for entertainment. For every purchase I made, I had to rationalize and justify it. There was a time I thought I would go homeless. ...

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 34 (commentary)

Roleplaying how you're going to have sex with your partner's partner probably has a term.

If it doesn't yet, then it should.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 24

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 34 inks (commentary)

She probably doesn't taste as good with her clothes on, but these are the sacrifices you make when you work in an office.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 24 inks

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 34 draft (script)

P1: Loona places her hands on Millie's crotch, miming the unzipping motion.

LOONA: First... I'll... I'll unzip him.

MILLIE: Yeah?

P2: Loona pretends she's whipping out a cock.

LOONA: And then... take out his cock.

MILLIE: Oh?

P3: Millie lifts up Loona's head, who nervously stammers.

MILLIE: You're just going to whip it out without his permission?

LOONA: No! I mean... if he'll let me, I'll...

P4: Millie smiles.

LOONA (off-panel): care...

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 24 draft

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 33 (commentary)

Millie's found a new game to play. And this time, she's putting herself in a position where Loona has much more control.

...but it's right next to Blitzo's office.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 33 inks (commentary)

I'm not sure if this scratches the foot fetishist's itch. I hate drawing feet, but hooves are so simple and almost elegant.

Loona managed to get one nipple out, so she's halfway there...

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 33 draft (script)

P1: Loona looks towards Blitzo's door.

LOONA: Should I go to him now--

MILLIE: Well, hold on.

P2: Millie re-situates herself to now be sitting on the edge of the desk in front of Loona.

MILLIE: First, I want to know HOW you're going to apologize.

P3: Millie is now on the desk, spreading her legs open for Loona.

MILLIE: Show me what you're going to do for my husband.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 32 (commentary)

You gotta boop the snoot.

I didn't want to make this comic pure sex. I would've lost interest quickly, and I don't think it would've been very engaging with the audience.

I think there's some strong satisfaction to be had to see a character grow up a little and talk out their issues.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 22-23

Since this is a double-page spread, no new updates for the next three days.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 32 inks (commentary)

Rewarding good behavior.

I think eliminating Loona's anger would be contradictory to her personality. She'll always have a short temper, she just needs to learn how to channel it more appropriately. And letting the people she cares about know how she actually feels helps them be more patient and understanding with her.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 22-23 inks

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 32 draft (script)

P1: Millie giggles, patting Loona's head.

MILLIE: That's so nice of you to say. Y'know Loona... I like it when you're nice.

P2: Loona lets go of Millie's breast to look up at her, distraught.

LOONA: I-I'm sorry I snapped earlier! I didn't mean to! I just...

P3: Loona is trying to fight back tears.

LOONA: I just can't control my anger sometimes and I--

P4: Millie stops Loona with a finger pressed against her lips.

MILLIE: Don't you think someone else s...

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 22-23 draft

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 31 (commentary)

This was a fun pose. I like how you can see Loona trying to be a little sneaky and impatient here.

It's also a little fun to draw Millie's nipples because you can see, almost like a barometer, how excited she gets.

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Helluva Trio 2 pg 21

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