P1: Zerina pats the spot next to her. She grins, revealing her large, sharp teeth.
ZERINA: There's a great view of the river right here next to me.
P2: Xander doesn't look too keen to join.
XANDER: Oh. Uh, cool. Thanks, Zerina.
P3: Wide shot of all the teens hanging out, laughing and snacking together, and being flirtatious.
2024-08-27 02:22:03 +0000 UTC View Post
Finally, some new colors! Though, it'll be short-lived for awhile.
I just realized I forgot to move the speech bubble in the first panel. I'll have to move it so you can see the car streaks better and then re-upload.
2024-08-26 23:59:58 +0000 UTC View Post
It's time we get this comic started.
2024-08-26 19:28:58 +0000 UTC View Post
Callback to the first issue and Millie and Moxxie's first appearance. But now Loona is on the other side of the door.
Moxxie continues his ability to notice other people's emotions a little bit better than Millie, but he's not particularly good at figuring them out.
2024-08-25 21:34:58 +0000 UTC View Post
A superfluous page, but a fun one. Just something to show how the trio has quickly become okay with spending a morning together and getting ready for work, perhaps hinting at a future where this becomes typical.
Loona has also that deep swagger to her step, the kind that says "I'm no longer a virgin." She's looking mighty proud of herself.
2024-08-25 16:12:12 +0000 UTC View Post
P1: Millie slams open the door to the office.
MILLIE: Aha! See, we made it in time!
P2: Blitz is in the lobby, drinking a coffee and looking over a clipboard.
BLITZ: Oh, good. Millie and fuckboi are here. Did you happen to see Loony come in?
P3: From behind Moxxie and Millie, Loona steps inside, looking ill.
LOONA: I’m here, you whiny shit, I’m here.
P4: Millie approaches Blitz.
MILLIE: Got any work for us today, boss?
BLITZ: Fuck yes, I do!...
2024-08-25 13:34:44 +0000 UTC View Post
Man, I really hate drawing vehicles. I guess the only way to work on that is by drawing more vehicles in the future.
It's fun drawing stupid expressions on Loona. It feels like drawing Minerva Mink from Looney Tunes, this hyper-sexualized, very attractive woman who also makes the goofiest faces.
2024-08-24 00:53:45 +0000 UTC View Post
I mean, if you're first time is gonna be with something the size of a zucchini, it's gonna hurt the day after.
The next scene is going to be the characters at the office, so I had to put as many sexy shots here and now in order to still get the label of "NSFW" comic.
2024-08-23 15:59:12 +0000 UTC View Post
An aaaaalmost but not quite work-safe page.
This turned out vastly different from what I had written in the script. The original idea was to emulate that meme of a girl applying makeup on another girl while laying on top of her. But there really wasn't enough space for that and the cool shot of them walking out together. I felt the last panel was more important, so I reworked the montage.
If I can remember, I'm going to change Loona's makeup to be a little more show accurate.
2024-08-23 02:15:10 +0000 UTC View Post
P1: The trio are in the van, driving to work, with Moxxie driving. Loona is in the backseat, looking very uncomfortable.
MOXXIE: Ugghh, we’re cutting it awfully close again.
MILLIE: Speed up! Speed up!
P2: Loona is hunched over, trying to prop herself up so her butt isn’t touching the seat.
MILLIE (off-panel): Hang on back there.
LOONA (thoughts): Fuck, fucking fuck, shit, fuck, my fucking crotch!
P3: Small panel of the van’s tire hitting a bump in t...
2024-08-22 23:31:52 +0000 UTC View Post
There are no shots of Moxxie and Millie's bathroom, so I just kinda based it on my own. A bit uninspired, no real Hellish imagery. Sorry about that, but when you're on a deadline, it's hard to be creative.
2024-08-22 17:24:53 +0000 UTC View Post
Oh, boy. Getting a little nervous.
Gotta plant the seeds here in the first few pages so we can fully appreciate how events and characters will change by the end of the story.
2024-08-22 17:21:42 +0000 UTC View Post
Y'know, something I rarely see in hentai doujins is just how sore you are after sex, especially if you're going crazy and having mind-blowing orgasms left and right.
You might be walking weird or having trouble sitting down. And Loona, being an amateur, doesn't know how to clean yourself if you have fun without a condom.
Just mundane things that happens your first time that most people seem to forget about, I guess.
2024-08-21 22:47:34 +0000 UTC View Post
P1: Montage shots. Millie is brushing her teeth while Moxxie hands Loona a toothbrush.
P2: We see the characters getting dressed.
P3: Millie helps Loona apply her makeup.
P4: The three walk out of the house, heading to work.
2024-08-21 21:45:18 +0000 UTC View Post
P1: Sylara gets up and hugs Ares, lifting him up in a tight embrace.
SYLARA: Ares! You made it!
ARES: Just getting supplies for everyone.
P2: Zerina looks around Ravinn to waves at Xander.
ZERINA: Xander! I didn't know you were showing up!
2024-08-21 21:44:03 +0000 UTC View Post
As I was writing the script to this comic, I had to keep looking for opportunities to add naughty moments while still feeling natural.
This moment was funny because I was intentionally going for an unnatural moment to have something naughty.
2024-08-21 00:18:30 +0000 UTC View Post
Loona instantly realizes that she might've screwed up already. So it's time to adjust the plan... despite not having one.
Trying out a new brush starting with this page. Hopefully the lines won't look so crispy from now on.
2024-08-20 21:54:52 +0000 UTC View Post
P1: Loona spreads her legs, gingerly rubbing her pussy.
LOONA (thoughts): Fuuckk... it feels like my cooch is one giant bruise!
P2: Sweating, Loona leans against the sink counter.
LOONA (thoughts): It's because of Moxxie's fucking prick. I'm going to be sore all day.
P3: Loona drops her head, exhausted.
LOONA (thoughts): Goddamn, it hurts so much just to sit.
P4: Loona looks up, her eyes peering through her strands of hair.
LOONA (thoughts): But I sti...
2024-08-20 16:53:04 +0000 UTC View Post
Forgot to post this one today. Sorry about that.
2024-08-20 01:39:49 +0000 UTC View Post
P1: Loona is in the bathroom, frustrated.
LOONA (thoughts): Fuck. That was a mistake, wasn't it?
P2: She walks over, about to sit on the toilet.
LOONA (thoughts): I don't want things to end like this. There's got to be some way to--
P3: Loona's butt makes contact with the toilet seat.
P4: As though she was being shocked, Loona suddenly tightens up in pain.
LOONA: Gaaghh!
2024-08-20 01:37:43 +0000 UTC View Post
Already, with the double meanings? On page 1?
With a new chapter, some new coloring techniques.
I've changed Loona's darker fur to be a little more accurate to the show design. I changed the texture I use for backgrounds to be a little less obvious. I've added a white glow around characters when they're breaching panels or have a complicated background around them (something I saw that the art for One Piece does, so I wanted to give it a go). And the pages are now a bit smaller (...
2024-08-19 16:13:42 +0000 UTC View Post
Millie is starting to worry that she might be a bad influence. To be clear, she's not really the time to jump to blaming others, so by "a mistake," she's wondering if maybe she did something wrong, somehow.
When I drew them together in that second panel, I got Fairly Oddparents vibe. How they kind of lean and pose together. I should start synchronizing their movements from now on.
2024-08-19 01:43:33 +0000 UTC View Post
P1: Sylara smiles proudly to herself.
SYLARA: But we're taking her to the record store first. I'm going to introduce my favorite bands to her. I want her to be able to relax while she's with us and who can do that better than the late, great Ben Gibbard?
P2: Someone off-screen holds a cold soda can to her cheek.
ARES (off-panel): Personally, I vote for Maynard Keenan.
P3: Cut to the arrival of Ares, Xander, and Ravinn, two human and one Na'vi boy. They are carrying b...
2024-08-18 20:55:57 +0000 UTC View Post
