Helluva Trio pg 99 draft
P1: Loona looks back up at them, fiercely determined.
LOONA (narration): Fuck that.
P2: Loona snuggles up next to Millie, who doesn't resist.
LOONA: Thank you for the wonderful night.
MILLIE: Hmm, I'm so glad you enjoyed your time with us!
MOXXIE: I admit, I really enjoyed your company as well, Loona.
P3: A shot of the trio.
LOONA (narration): I couldn't possibly be satisfied with just one night. I want this to be... permanent.
TO BE CONTINUED<...
2024-08-03 16:14:54 +0000 UTC View Post
P1: Millie begins to eat. Loona hasn't touched her food yet.
MILLIE: Blitz thinks that you spent the night at your friend's, right?
LOONA: Yeah...
P2: Millie takes a bite.
MILLIE: That's good. Probably shouldn't let him know what happened.
P3: Moxxie laughs along with Millie.
MOXXIE: Ha! Could you imagine!
MILLIE: We'll have to, because we're never letting him find out! This was a one-time thing, like we agreed.
P4: Loona, still barely moved, lo...
2024-08-01 12:41:09 +0000 UTC View Post
No morning walk of shame here.
At least she doesn't hog the blankets, right?
2024-08-01 12:39:08 +0000 UTC View Post
P1: Loona exits the room and finds Moxxie and Millie in the kitchen. Millie is sitting at the island, drinking a coffee while Moxxie is cooking.
MILLIE: Well, good morning! I was just about to get you.
P2: Loona sits next to Millie.
LOONA: What time is it?
MILLIE: Almost time to leave for work.
P3: Moxxie comes up with a plate of eggs, bacon, and toast.
MOXXIE: Not until you've had your breakfasts. Eat up.
2024-07-30 19:48:53 +0000 UTC View Post
A morning with Loona sounds pretty amazing.
I could've had a moment of post-nut clarity and have her freak out, but that would've felt regressive and contrary to this entire comic. I did consider the possibility of writing this as if it occurred between episodes, so you could argue that it could conceivably fit in the canon. But I decided to just stick to my own story and ending.
2024-07-30 19:47:33 +0000 UTC View Post
I wonder what she'll do with that.
The room has darkened and it's time for bed.
By the way, it's actually very easy to tell when I work on a piece on my home computer, using my large Cintiq tablet, or when I do it on my iPad: the coloring program I use on my iPad tends to leave a little outline around the characters when I color them. It's hard to notice on Millie and Moxxie, but if you zoom in on Loona, you can see a thing white fuzz around her outlines.
It's not that not...
2024-07-29 23:10:31 +0000 UTC View Post
That wascally Millie is up to something.
One thing that has really bothered me about this comic is the lack of details to the bedroom. I've looked around for references, and while I do have a decent look at the headboard, you can't really see the rest of the room and what kind of furnishings are there.
I would've made up my own, but it didn't really seem worth the effort of creating so much and then only having my own artwork as reference. And it'll be frustrating if they do revea...
2024-07-29 23:06:38 +0000 UTC View Post
P1: A shot of Loona's resting face. The room is brighter now, clearly morning.
P2: Her eyes open slowly.
P3: She turns to look around her on the bed. She's alone.
P4: A shot of her getting up.
P5: Loona, out of bed, puts on her bathrobe.
2024-07-29 20:51:12 +0000 UTC View Post
Because this is a two-page spread, there won't be updates for the next three days to compensate for the time it took to make this one.
I'm guessing that Millie must feel so proud of herself to have everything work out so well in the end. She's just proud of everyone involved.
Though, if I were her, I couldn't resist tickling Loona's paws. I loved doing that with my dog when they were asleep. I'm sure it was super annoying, but seeing them twitch in their sleep was adorable. Maybe I should draw that for a future scene in the next comic?
2024-07-23 15:42:07 +0000 UTC View Post
The only way I feel like I could've made Loona acquiesce to ending for the night was if she was so completely physically exhausted, she couldn't even move anymore. Otherwise, it'd be as if she was taking part in some sort of challenge to go through the entire night.
2024-07-23 15:38:24 +0000 UTC View Post
Look at 'em. Being completely comfortable with being nasty with one another.
They really are... one helluva trio.
2024-07-23 15:35:38 +0000 UTC View Post
Millie just wants to remember this night.
2024-07-21 15:39:07 +0000 UTC View Post