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Helluva Trio pg 97 draft (script)

P1: Loona's eyes are swirls as she's surrounded by internal thoughts. The thoughts in the background are MOMMY, DADDY, GOOD GIRL, BABY GIRL, MOUNT ME

LOONA (narration): ...and I don't care about shame.

P2: Loona bends her legs, wrapping as best she can around Moxxie.

LOONA (narration): I just want to be right here.

P3: Millie rests her head on Loona's ass.

MILLIE: Oh, beautiful girl. My sweet little thing. Do you want to cum for Mommy and Daddy?

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Helluva Trio pg 95-96 draft (script)

P1: Moxxie is now fucking Loona.

LOONA (narration): What's happening with me?

P2: Loona's face still rests on the bed, jostling from the trusts.

LOONA: That's it

LOONA (narration): Why am I saying these stupid things?

LOONA: Push me down.

P3: Moxxie leans forward, pushing an arm down onto Loona's back. Millie situates herself next to them.

LOONA (narration): It's as if...

LOONA: M-mommy?

P4: Millie slides her hand under, rubbing Loona's c...

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Helluva Trio pg 94 (commentary)

Sex is so much better when you've got someone cheering you on and giving words of encouragement.

I wanted to portray Loona as exhausted already, struggling to prop herself up. But she's not ready for the experience to end just yet.

Helluva Trio pg 93 (commentary)

Why wag your tail when you're happy when you've got a whole ass to shake side-to-side?

Ahh, now this is a much better view. I enjoy drawing back muscles; they're so tantalizing.

Helluva Trio pg 92 (commentary)

Millie is probably thinking ahead and wanting something for the ol' scrapbook.

I'm not happy with how this page turned out. The composition isn't particularly interesting and I think there must be some anatomy and perspective mistakes on Loona, because it didn't come out as dynamic or interesting as I imagined it.

When you're making a 100-page comic, it's hard to make every page golden.

Helluva Trio pg 91 (commentary)

Millie holding Loona through her first experience.

Decent ass on Moxxie as well.

Helluva Trio pg 90 (commentary)

Size is so damn tricky when you're playing with angles. It's clear to me now that Moxxie is too big, but I'm out of time to go back and make changes. During the drawing process, I was envisioning his legs folded underneath him, which means it's a lot of flesh bunched up together, creating this illusion of more mass. I powered through and upon reflection, I would've liked to make him a bit smaller still.

But I'm falling behind on schedule and don't really have time to make that change.<...

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Helluva Trio pg 94 inks (commentary)

The final round begins. Who will win?

I decided to tweak the dialogue here from the script. Loona's scream was changed to become muffled, as her face is buried in the bedsheets. And Millie's line was originally "break this bitch," before I changed it to "tame her."

Upon reflection of the reaction of the readers, it seems the audience is a little against Millie for being a rougher player than the other two, so I'm guessing people would feel like she hadn't learned her lesson if sh...

Helluva Trio pg 93 inks (commentary)

This pose... it feels somewhat... familiar... Like a long-gone memory that has returned...

Loona is the the type that always has to push herself a bit further than necessary to kind of prove to herself and others that she's a tough gal.

And frankly, there's something hot about someone gentle getting a little rough with you.

Helluva Trio pg 92 inks (commentary)

I don't know if there's a word for that nice feeling after a sexual experience where you think to yourself "that might have been a once in a lifetime experience. I really hope I remember all of it."

Maybe Millie should consider setting up a camera for the bedroom? Something to help keep that scrapbook of memories full.

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Helluva Trio pg 91 inks (commentary)

Yeah, she definitely needed that.

But Loona isn't really the type to be satisfied with just meeting her needs. She likes to push herself and take more than she can actually handle.

Helluva Trio pg 90 inks (commentary)

Finally, some satisfaction.

If you had total the Loona on page 1 that it would take 90 pages (or about six months in real time) before she'd get off on a dick, she'd probably would've killed everyone around her first.

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Helluva Trio pg 94 draft (script)

P1: Moxxie musters up determination while Millie goads him on.

MILLIE: Do it, hun.

P2: Millie slides Moxxie's dick into Loona.

MILLIE: Break this bitch.

P3: Moxxie thrusts, now in the doggie position.

LOONA: Aahhhh!

Helluva Trio pg 84 draft

The Vast Gap Between Us pg 3 draft (commentary)

A bunch of cute girls, right?

This entire first chapter is primarily about introducing the main characters and their relationships.

If you look closely in the last panel, Talani has her tail wrapped around Haeun's back to reach her lap.

Helluva Trio pg 93 draft (script)

P1: Horizontal shot of Loona with her ass up in the air, ready to be mounted. Her hair is a mess, spilled over her face, which is completely lacking composure.

LOONA: ...just a... little... more...

P2: Moxxie and Millie look on, almost speechless.

MOXXIE: Are you... are you sure?

P3: Loona leers back at him, without moving from her position.

LOONA: I won't be satisfied... until you MOUNT me. ...daddy.

Helluva Trio pg 92 draft (script)

P1: Millie comes up to Moxxie's chest, admiring him.

MILLIE: Sweet hell, Moxxie, that was amazing!

MOXXIE: Yeah? You liked that?

MILLIE: Baby, it was so FUCKING hot!

P2: Moxxie looks back at Loona in surprise. Millie hasn't noticed anything yet, and is running her fingers through her hair, lost in thought.

MILLIE: Shit, we should've recorded this! That was a once in a lifetime orgasm! That was--

MOXXIE: Uhh...

P3: Large shot of Loona's exposed ass and...

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The Vast Gap Between Us pg 2 draft (commentary)

I love their tall, lanky forms. There's nothing here to compare sizes with, yet you can still tell they're very tall just by how long their proportions are.

Zerina is part Metkayina, the water Na'vi from the sequel, Way of the Water, so she has wide arms and a wide tail. She's also got the sharp shark teeth. She's quite fun to draw, actually.