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Helluva Trio pg 56 draft

Helluva Trio pg 62 draft (script)

P1: Millie squeezes down on the sides of her head, realizing her mistake. Tears are in her eyes.

MILLIE: Oh no! I read that all wrong! I-I should've asked first!

P2: Loona is kneeling on the floor as Moxxie wraps a blanket around her. She's still crying, sniffling.

MOXXIE: Here, Loona, let's get you covered up.

MILLIE: Sweetie, I'm sooo sorry!

P3: Moxxie's wrapped Loona up in a blanket and is cradling her. He glares back at Millie.

MOXXIE: Millie! For shame...

Helluva Trio pg 61 draft (script)

P1: Moxxie and Millie are startled when Loona suddenly begins bawling, tears flowing down her face.

LOONA: Wwwaahhhhh~!

P2: Millie lets go and stands up, alarmed. Moxxie checks in on Loona.

MILLIE: Loona's crying? I-I didn't even know she could cry!

MOXXIE: Loona! Are you okay? Are you hurt?

P3: Loona is still crying profusely.

LOONA: Why... why did you do that??

Helluva Trio pg 55

Helluva Trio pg 60 draft (script)

P1: Millie pulls on Loona's hair, but still holding her head down on Moxxie's entire dick.

MILLIE: Look at this whore's face. She likes a little rough play, don't ya?

P2: Millie yanks back on Loona's hair, pulling her off Moxxie's dick.

MILLIE: I think you've had enough!

P3: Millie leans over to Loona, squeezing her snout. Loona's head is still pulled back from Millie tugging on her hair.

MILLIE: Well, what did you think? You want more, you skank?

P4: We do...

Helluva Trio pg 59 draft (script)

P1: Vertical shot of Loona with Moxxie's dick in her mouth, with Millie cradling her head.

MILLIE: C'mon now. A big girl like you can handle his whole dick, can't ya?

P2: Millie suddenly shoves Loona's head down, forcing her to take Moxxie's entire dick.

MILLIE: Then take it! Take it all, you little slut!

P3: Loona winces as Moxxie's entire dick is now in her mouth and throat.

LOONA: Mmphh!

P4: Moxxie sits up, also startled, looking at the two worried.

Helluva Trio pg 55 ink

Helluva Trio pg 55 draft

Sylara and Ares 2

These characters are super hard to draw. Probably because I don't really have references to help me.

Helluva Trio pg 58 (commentary)

Millie knows how to play the game. Dirty talk comes easily to her.

But as you might've noticed, Moxxie called Loona good while Millie is calling her naughty. And Loona is definitely reacting more to one than the other.

Helluva Trio pg 57 (commentary)

It's not really about the act, or the taste, or the sensation. It's about feeling like you're doing something right and you're being appreciated.

Helluva Trio pg 56 (commentary)

She might have gumption, but Loona is still an amateur. She's the kind of person who doesn't know how to pace herself and goes in at full speed.

Helluva Trio pg 55 (commentary)

Finally, right? Went through half the comic with depriving Loona.

But that'll just make this second half more exciting, right?

Helluva Trio pg 54

Sylara and Ares 1

Sylara and her boyfriend, Ares.

I'll have to get some practice to figure out their height difference. His head should reach her navel, so I think might've made her too tall in this one? I'll have to play around a bit.

Avatar OC design: Itan'na

A native of Pandora and daughter of the chief of the Omatikaya clan, she travels to Earth to become an exchange student, living as a host sister to Sylara.

Itan'na is meant to learn more about Earth customs to help her older sister lead the clan when they come of age, but Itan'na is very dismissive and unimpressed with human culture, and seems to look down on Sylara and her friends for abandoning Na'vi ways and becoming too romantically involved with humans.

Brief hiatus

I'll be taking a short hiatus for about three days. I had too much going on this past week and I wasn't able to keep up with my schedule. 

Posting should resume on Wednesday.

Helluva Trio pg 54 ink

Avatar OC design: Zerina

Sylara's closest friend, Zerina is a descendant of the Tayrangi clan, so those dark patches on her skin are actually the color red.

She's a little egotistical but protective of her friends, so she can be rather confrontational.

She has a crush on a human boy that's unfortunately already in a relationship with a human girl... and he doesn't seem to be fond of the Na'vi.

Avatar OC design: Talani

Talani is part of Sylara's friend group at school. She almost never talks, mostly resorting to grunts or hand gestures for responses. Is usually just listening to her music and looks for opportunities to tease her friends.

Helluva Trio pg 54 draft

Helluva Trio pg 57 ink (commentary)

Don't stare too hard or it'll stare back at you.

Helluva Trio pg 56 ink (commentary)

Should there be some dialogue in either of the first two panels? Maybe some heavy breathing from the both of them?

Avatar OC design: Sylara

Seems like Avatar was the clear winner for the next comic, so I better start designing.

The premise so far: Set 200 years after the movies, humans live on Pandora and Na'vi live on Earth, each adapting to the other's culture. This story follows Sylara, a Na'vi high school student dating the human boy Ares, as her family hosts a native from Pandora for a cultural exchange.

Helluva Trio pg 55 ink (commentary)

She might be starting to get a little full of herself.

....ha.

Helluva Trio pg 54 ink (commentary)

I really struggled with this page, and I'm not sure why. I just couldn't motivate myself to finish this one for the longest time.

It might be because in the first panel, Millie is nudging Loona's nose with Moxxie's dick, but I think it turned out really difficult to make out. Maybe it'll be easier to tell once it's colored, but I'm still ultimately disappointed with how I chose the composition to this panel.

Helluva Trio pg 53

Helluva Trio pg 58 draft (script)

Normally, Millie is very protective of Moxxie and probably doesn't handle jealousy very well. Not that she's the type to get jealous easily; she seems very secure about herself and her marriage.

But I wanted to do what I can to sell this threesome as something that she would enjoy. And lording over Loona seemed like the solution.

P1: Millie's head pokes into view as she examines Loona take most of Moxxie's dick, but still not all the way.

MILLIE: Sweet nelly, you'...

Helluva Trio pg 53 inks

Helluva Trio pg 57 draft (script)

Sometimes I struggle with drawing someone simply standing. And sometimes I can draw something complicated like it's posing right in front of me.

Normally, when I draw a character, I draw the head first. For the first panel, I drew the ass first and just built everything around those cheeks.

P1: A shot from behind Loona as she squats in front of Moxxie, revealing her ass and pussy.  Moxxie moans in ecstasy.

MOXXIE: Oh, crumbs... your mouth feels so good...