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ATM Rewrite: B2 — 5. What Friends Do

Author Note:  I reworked Mary and Sora's part at the end to make Mary more critical of Sora's invasion of privacy.  It shows that Mary is still trying to help see Sora's behavior and how it could cause trouble in a social setting with other people, including Wendy.

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1. Sora Moore (Our Protagonist Fox Girl)

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Dad Is Through Surgery: Successful :)

I’m in the hospital with him right now. He’s got a big neck brace on. What does he ask the moment I get in? lol. Hey, Scott, can I have some sippage? Basically his way of asking me to help him drink some soda, haha. He is doing well.

The surgery and cause is below:

1. Reason for the treatment (diagnosis, condition, or indication): pain and discomfort caused by damaged disc or pinched nerve.

2. Treatment/procedure: This procedure achieves decompression of the cervi...

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PokéSync: B4 — 8. Slugfest

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1:  Maya (Our Steely Girl Looking For A Win!)

2:  Rhea Everhart (Our Blonde Bombshell Future Supervillain!)

3:  Nova (Our Star and Fluffy Fashion Queen!)

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Thank You 4 The Break!

I just wanted to thank all of you for the 6 days to rest and think. 🤔 I think this is the first time in over 4 years where I didn’t write anything for so long. I look forward to kicking up the process again on Tuesday with Pokesync.

o7

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Dad’s Medical Issue Solved :)

over the past few months my dad has been getting worse and worse.  He’s been unable to walk without terrible limps and falling over, which makes him hit his head while trying to take a shower or falling on the toilet.  He has no strength at all in his body and terrible pain.

He has been in the VA hospital for a bit running all sorts of CAT scans and MRIs, bloodwork and all kinds of other tests to figure it out and we just got a call as to why.

The disks in his neck had...

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1 Week Off Reminder

I'll be resuming my normal release schedule on the 2nd of Jan MST with Pokesync, followed by A Tail's Misfortune Thursday, Undying Empire Friday, and The Oscillation Sunday.  Thank you for your patience.  o7

Side Note:  ATM Audiobook.  I only just recently got through the full audiobook and am compiling the things I'd like corrected by Mari.  Once all those changes are made, then there's a likelihood that it will be ready for publishing.  It sounds amazing!...

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TO Rewrite: B2 — 6. Highs And Lows

PoV:

1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)

2. Scarlet (Our Little Fang!)

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UE Rewrite: B2 — 32. Dance, Dance, Little Flies

PoV:

1. Anala (Youngest daughter of the Great House of Tarkov!)

2. Elinor (Our Evolved Undead Spooder Warlord!)

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2023-12-24 09:04:02 +0000 UTC View Post

Update On Holiday Chapter Schedule - 1 Week Break

Undying Empire:  Changed to tomorrow night.

I planned on releasing it today, but I got wound up with other things for the holidays and also decided it would be much cooler from Anala's POV than Elinor's since we get to see our Empress' new gains from someone else's POV.

The Oscillation:  Changed to the Tuesday after Christmas.

I will be taking a week's break, starting up Pokesync again on Jan 2nd as we get into some hype content.  I planned on...

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ATM Rewrite: B2 — 4. A Mother's Failing

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1. Sora Moore (Our Protagonist Fox Girl)

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PokéSync: B4 — 7. The Rookie Crusher

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1:  Rhea Everhart (Our Bombshell Blonde!)

Pokemon Map I Loosely Use For Visual Aid:  The distance between areas might be different; some cities are somewhat incorrect, a few routes have been mislabeled, and some cities aren't listed, but it's t...

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TO Rewrite: B2 — 5. A Shocking Partnership

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1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)

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UE Rewrite: B2 — 31. A Disappointing Start

Author Note:  Val and I are having to go over a few details regarding Elinor's Equipable Feats since... she should have more.  I was going through the System Sheet when doing this chapter, which was why this one took longer than usual and saw a few inconsistencies that I'm ironing out with Val.  I'll update you on the end result when we get it finished.  In the meantime, here's the chapter!

Elinor's getting a bit of personal power now!

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ATM Rewrite: B2 — 3. Mending Bridges

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1. Sora Moore (Our Protagonist Fox Girl)

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ATM Rewrite Update

Tomorrow, I'll write the 3rd chapter!  I've been really busy going over the audiobook, looking for errors to send Mari to correct.  I'm on about Chapter 20 (out of 42) right now.  I'm trying to give more time to get the chapters up.  Thanks for your patience!  o7

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ATM Rewrite: B2 — 2. A Mother’s Resolution

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1. Sora Moore (Our Protagonist Fox Girl)

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PokéSync: B4 — 6. Worth The Fight

Author Note:  I think how I want to do this is having one (or two at most) SoL chapters between Gyms to space out the battles and also introduce some fun things, resolve some background things, and have a breather for some cute things.

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1:  Rhea (Our Bombshell Blonde!)

2023-12-13 07:37:17 +0000 UTC View Post

In 40 Min: ATM Audiobook In Discord Ch. 5-10

Update: I went through chapters 1-4 yesterday.  For those who want to follow through and give their opinions as I look for errors and things to give Mari to fix, then you're free to join!  I'll be listening to 5-10 or about 2 hours and 30 minutes.  Join here:
https://discord.gg/QS9GyXBGZP

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TO Rewrite: B2 — 4. A Bunny's Perseverance

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1. Rachel Park (Our Lunar Hare!)

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ATM Volume 1 Audiobook Audio Approval

I just got back the audiobook for approval from Mari Bee.  You can see the length in the image below.  All I need to do now is approve the product, which means I need to review the full book and make sure everything is sound!  We're getting closer to release!

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UE Rewrite: B2 — 30. Path of the Warlord

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1. Elinor (Our Undead Empress!)

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B2 — 28. Breaking Boundaries

B2 — 27. Game On!...

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ATM Rewrite: B2 — 1. A Dream on the Moon

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1. Sora Moore (Our Protagonist Fox Girl)

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A gentle pulse of power filled Sora’s mind as she surfaced from a flaming sea, flashe...

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ATM Volume 2, Major Update

First and foremost:  Mari Bee should be finished with the Audiobook of Volume 1 in two days!  Exciting!  I will need to go over it and make sure that it is all up to snuff before releasing it, and all of you will hear about it first!

tl:dr: I LOVE Volume 1 of ATM, but I have not been happy with the way I've been writing Volume 2 thus far.  So, I have to make another hard decision.  Allow me to explain:

Many of you know tha...

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PokéSync: B4 — 5. The Fanclub President

Author Note:  I want to do all of the Gym Battles with the girls, but that would be WAY WAY too long and be too many battles back-to-back between their rush to each Gym.  So, I'll mainly do the key ones that are important to the specific girl at each Gym (excluding Giovanni, of course, which will be a BIG one).  Plus, the Slice of Life elements could be lost with going battle after battle.

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TO Rewrite: B2 — 3. Soul Vulnerability

Author Note: I went through with Val and edited the chapter; Val has been busy with parenting stuff, so they've been unable to get to some of the last few chapters.  Just some clarifications of things and grammar stuff.

PoV:

1. Rachel Park (Our Recovering Lunar Hare!)

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2023-12-03 21:51:31 +0000 UTC View Post

ATM Vol. 1 Audiobook Reminder

Next Saturday is the contract date that the audiobook is set to be completed.  Well, then I'll need to verify it is all good, but I'll keep you updated!

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UE Rewrite: B3 — 6. Path to Evolution; Level 20

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1. Elinor (Our Undead Empress!)

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ATM Rewrite: B2 — 28. Breaking Boundaries

Author Note: I made a few edits to make it flow better, mainly in Wendy's section.  O_o ominous stuff, but is it good or bad... or maybe both?

PoV:

1. Sora Moore (Our Main (Side) Protagonist Fox Girl in an Otome Game!)

2. Wendy Moore (Our Brunette Fox with Stability Problems!)

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PokéSync: B4 — 4. An Unconventional Victory

PoV:

1:  Gables (Our Smooth Frog Boi!)

2:  Lori (Our Unovan Girl Overcoming Trauma!)

3:  Zyra (Lt. Flutter in the coop!)

4:  Gables (Our fight goes on with a surprise!)

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