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Cover Update

Hey guys been slow as I dealt with a few script issues. This update is the full sized cover, plus sketches, plus all updates till now!

Cover Preview

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Patreon is doing weird things

Script Preview

Been dealing with some issues as far as the story goes. Right now Mu showed up and left pretty quick and Jess originally fucked off too quick as well making him less sympathetic and sad and more a piece of shit so i'm keeping then onboard longer till nearly the end and creating a minor conflict to create a small story arc for Jessee.

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Cover For Island Comics

I was asked to do the cover for the edition i'm being released in. Here's my initial concept!

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HEY GUYS I did the update but the pages arent 100% I have to get my ass to ANTHROCON When i come back page 7-8-9 will be review and polished again (no charge of course) as well as 10-11-12 being prepped and sent. Thanks for supporting me so far. monday or tuessday id like to have a little meeting with the top tier supporters in a private stream. I'll figure out how to do that.

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Uploaded again cause pg 5 was broken,

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Pg 6 (ignore the typos lol)

Script Review and Some changes

Initially Badge of pride was set to be 60 pages. But after hammering out the script a few times I feel the story will be better told in 30 instead. Im checking in with Image to see if this will still vibe (i'm sure it will) Initially the contrast was between the 4 characters but it became obvious to me that it would better to contrast the two polar opposites as it makes for strong story telling (jesse and taylor) with marty and mu supporting the general concepts.

Script wise ...

Updated Script to pg 15

GOOGLE LINK HEREhttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1XcHNrzy12qO2EAllsyiGxqVNZy6PpzNXeWNU-f-xxf8/pub

Update Sent

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PG 4 new dialog and fixed art

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PG 3 new dialog and fixed art

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PG 3 new dialog and fixed art

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PG 1 new dialog and fixed art

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First 3 Pages up. Please not i have an interative process to my pages so as time goes by pages may change or alter ill show you those as I change them

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BOP pg.3

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BOP pg.2

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BOP pg.1

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Charging will happen sometime at the end of this week. Im still deciding. It will either be friday or sunday. By then there should be 2-3 pages out for you to read.

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Break down of first 5 pages Making comics isn't always easy and sometimes the biggest hurdle is finding a voice for the comic. Badge of Pride has been a bit problematic so far as the art is concerned as i've had the hardest time trying pin point a decent ink style for it. Very likely I will have to redo the first 3 to 5 pages after it becomes a solid which isn't great but can happen sometimes. Additionally i'm struggling a bit between enhancing and improving the characters expressions and lo...

badge of Pride Segment

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XcHNrzy12qO2EAllsyiGxqVNZy6PpzNXeWNU-f-xxf8/pub I've linked here a breakdown of the first 5 pages. These first 5 pages are pretty much solid and set. I will be sharing with you soon the general script for you to review.

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Jesse Sketches. Just a breakdown of the concept i built on revamping Jesse for the story.