Title: The Sannin Skirmish (9)
Basic Genjutsu theory amongst true professionals informs that a Genjutsu lasts longer when two criteria are fulfilled. First, the weaver of Genjutsu must have better chakra control compared to the target. Second, the weaver of Genjutsu must have mental fortitude greater than the target.
Again, a mentally weak individual can pull a Genjutsu for a moment, no doubt. But the above-mentioned criteria are for the Genjutsu to last LONGER.
Being a G...
2023-02-13 09:10:26 +0000 UTC
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Title: The Sannin Skirmish (8)
'What is this? Some kind of Shinobi Face-off?' Jiraiya shakes his head. This feels a little off. The situation, that is. And by that, he did not mean their objective being exposed but rather Su's demand.
Still keeping his hands clasped together, Jiraiya leans forward and whispers, "What the hell, Orochimaru? Did you tell him this is no picnic?"
Not making the mistake of turning back and addressing Jiraiya, leaving herself open to a Jinchurik...
2023-02-11 15:08:23 +0000 UTC
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Title: Fatal Path (2)
Ja Sun knew well that his explanation on the path of cultivation had gripped everyone's attention. Yes, intrigue and worry can be felt by him by a few individuals around him but until now, Ja Sun has not given them any reason to fret aside from his bold statement of dying.
Gesturing towards the orb of light in his hand with his other free hand, Ja Sun smiles, "So, you guys now understand that this is the sum of my cultivation. Sure, I still need a left leg ...
2023-02-10 11:52:15 +0000 UTC
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Title: The Sannin Skirmish (7)
"Let's stop this."
No.
"You are a strong Shinobi but the age of war is behind us. I understand that people will always fear me that is why I am doing everything I can to bring more peace."
Don't YOU say that!
"And... that drug of yours is pretty great. Gave you quite the boost but I can sense your lifespan is now lowered. Your cells are aching and your chakra reserve is a little out of your control. For now, you'll spend some t...
2023-02-10 07:07:38 +0000 UTC
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Title: Contorted Welcome (2)
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A/N: So, I just edited chap 1-2. I'll also add this in the latest update but the edits are looking into these fixes—
1) Typos, as much as I can find.
2) Additional Titles at the bottom
3) Some simplification of statements to make the chapter feel more smooth.
What I won't edit is the plot itself, not heavily, at least. I realize that I made Nik a little passive early on but I don't regret that. I, in fact, enjoyed buildin...
2023-02-09 14:43:20 +0000 UTC
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Title: Fatal Path (1)
The idea behind Ja Yin's initial design was simple.
She would be the core.
But before that, her needs which led to this idea were equally simple— she desired kids. She could have offspring with any beast but that's not what she or others like Zi Ji wanted.
Sure, one may consider the fact that beasts like Zi Ji may not even desire offspring but Ja Sun believed that this is only true until the option presented itself. For all their barks about...
2023-02-09 07:39:16 +0000 UTC
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Title: The Sannin Skirmish (6)
"Our clones... have been disposed of," Orochimaru narrows her eyes and mentions the fact as Jiraiya has a somewhat steely look. Unlike what others may expect from the goofy, fun-loving, and perverted author, Jiraiya keeps a remarkable sense of cool.
"We've already found the second entrance. Let's check it out quickly and see if it has your Hero Water. Tsunade can hold out long enough. She did say she's taken up training again, after all."
Or...
2023-02-08 23:48:45 +0000 UTC
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Title: Contorted Welcome (1)
Ty Lee averts her gaze as the group leaves the single chamber they spent their night in and despite the noises and slightly slower pace... all of them were positively glowing. Too happy in fact that Ty Lee did not even face Azula's insults... she was ready for the hazing but the Fire Princess seemed entirely uncaring as she sets her hands on the railing and looks ahead at the island the ship is approaching fast.
"After so many years..." Azula adopts ...
2023-02-08 04:48:48 +0000 UTC
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Title: Using a God...
Fun, parties, rest, orgies, and even teasing Bing Bing and others, Ja Sun has done it all after his return. But he doesn't intend to shy away from more 'responsible' stuff that others hope from him. After all, he did say he wouldn't shy from banging out a family should others find a way and that's what Ja Yin did.
She found a way. She stepped on the very path Ja Sun hoped for her and Violet— to innovate stuff that even he would hard time coming up with.
2023-02-06 14:41:09 +0000 UTC
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Title: The Sannin Skirmish (5)
Hisen, Su, Sanma, and Yondu are the four elite guards of Utsu, the Fourth Takigake of Takigakure. In a village that comprises more Jonins than Chunins and Genins in terms of growth and accommodation, setting themselves out of the competition by itself places them on a higher pedestal without ever needing to show the depths of their skills.
Su, the current Jinchuriki of Seven Tails is an eccentric who loves beautiful things. But nobody knows of his ...
2023-02-05 06:46:20 +0000 UTC
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Title: The Vile Title
Ty Lee imagined Nik being... well, for the lack of a better term— crowded and rushed because of all the 'work' he must 'do' around him. But no. Maybe his evolution gave him a much firmer spine or really, it is simply the first time she is seeing him like this but he is a lot more in control than she expected.
After all, Katara, Yue, and Jin being submissive is understandable but Suki? Azula? No. Never. Suki is their trainer. No matter what she does, he ha...
2023-02-04 07:38:19 +0000 UTC
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Title: Content
Ja Sun with his Death Avatar is an understandable situation. Once the girls knew how it wasn't Ja Sun having 'another' clone but splitting his consciousness in two and experiencing twice the things at once, they were even curious about what more they can do... and fill.
So, imagine Ja Yin's frustration when one of the Ja Suns instantly chose to devote his entire being to Ah Yin!
"Hey!" the golden man 'Ah Yin' growls in annoyance as her three eyes focus on A...
2023-02-01 15:37:25 +0000 UTC
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Title: All Star and Stripe (2)
*Munch*
*Hummbh*
*Munch*
*Srrrp*
*Srrrrrrrrrppppppp*
... *Munch*
With their feet dangling off the edge of a 30-storied building as not a single gust of wind managed to knock off the wrappers of their snack or said snack itself, she stares at the puppy youth awkwardly as he strives to eat not only his share of an admittedly large serving of 7 burgers and fries but even her larger serving of 15 burgers and fri...
2023-01-31 13:50:10 +0000 UTC
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Title: All Star and Stripe (1)
One doesn't get cornered in Buffs City by a villain. In fact, being a legacy of a hero who sacrificed himself for this city a few years ago, it is a relatively 'new' hero city and thus has many young and old hero veterans flooding in to make a name for themselves.
After all, a veteran villain once said—
There is nothing more annoying to me than a large number of upstart villains. But the larger number of heroes makes me swallow my words.â...
2023-01-31 13:49:12 +0000 UTC
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Title: Drip Dawg
A/N: Btw, it may just be a harem. Like, I am 90% inclined to write Harem since it's always more interesting for me but I will try that it doesn't come at the expense of character development. I love writing silly puns and your mom jokes so character interactions are one of my favorite moments to write generally.
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Unlike his previous world, this is a world of quirks. Although... Jackal fails to see the many difference between quirks and traits. Some qu...
2023-01-31 13:48:03 +0000 UTC
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Title: Humble Store
Traits are wondrous. Consider all fantastical and fictional components be they technological or steampunk. Magical or some ancient traits. Becoming monsters of fiction. Or spewing cola for the rest of life and forming a very successful cola supply line.
If you find it and know how to use it... you're set. Of course, being willful and the need to face competition exists everywhere, but that is life— It gives limited lemons and everyone wants 'em.
But...
2023-01-31 13:46:56 +0000 UTC
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Hey guys, you all are well aware that I don't like to lie about my inspiration for fanfics. For instance, I started naruto after reading Jord's work and it got me all riled uo because of 'grind' and well, naruto. But I also don't like to copy things as you may see from my work.
Anyways, I just read Ein's new BNHA fanfic and spent the entire night writing these four chaps. It's just grounded around the protag and his encounter with his mentor so do give it a shot and if you'd like more,...
2023-01-31 13:45:17 +0000 UTC
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Title: The Sannin Skirmish (4)
Third Tsuchikage is known to have several offspring. No, he doesn't claim a harem but like the Third Raikage, he too, adopted a simpler manner of sowing his seeds far and wide to keep his heritage intact in times of war.
Unlike the well-known brutal treatment that Third Raikage places upon his children, however, Third Tsuchikage's competition isn't internal but an external one. With the first Tsuchikage being their Grandfather and the Third being t...
2023-01-30 04:43:08 +0000 UTC
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Title: Mothers Love Nik
"I'll be fine!" Katara draws in slight annoyance. Her father's circumstances were already stranded heavily on her mind and even if Yue or Jin wanted to console her, Katara didn't want to be consoled.
They'd left the island shortly after Kya, Sokka, and Katara returned and Kya only went into detail once they left the island.
The situation... was truly disheartening. And it also showed that Ozai's death means jackshit as the man had left an impressio...
2023-01-28 19:54:17 +0000 UTC
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Title: Tofu x Bitch (2)
Oscar and Jun'er feel satisfied. To say the least. Jun'er always wanted to marry Oscar, and he always evaded the topic. Even after making stern promises. It's just something Oscar couldn't wrap his head around.
And that scared him. He didn't care for the responsibility, or rather, he did not fear it. After all, Jun'er is pregnant and he didn't lose his shit.
But... there is nothing different about marriage than their current lifestyle so Jun'er's o...
2023-01-27 14:38:50 +0000 UTC
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Title: The Sannin Skirmish (3)
"Damn... why am I stuck with you... I wanted to ask for some details from Tsunade," Jiraiya groans. It is pretty hot down here and slimy but he is used to it as the fleshy walls close down around him. There is a bit of stench, too, but it is to be expected when doing such things.
Orochimaru smirks as her body shifts subtly due to the movement. Her lips once again distract Jiraiya and he finally questions her, "No, seriously. What is the deal with y...
2023-01-25 17:52:18 +0000 UTC
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Title: Hado
Fire Nation is an archipelago named Fire Islands with the capital located around the center. The group's destination, however, is an island on the outer rings of the nations but popular nonetheless.
Located on the dormant volcanic island of Wang-Jile is a port city that ships one of the more popular products of the Fire Nation— Crusted Mangoes.
The truth is... be it industrialization, culture, economy, and even agriculture... Fire Nation is at its peak. Eve...
2023-01-25 11:10:34 +0000 UTC
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I've been sick for a couple of days but that didn't stop me from writing generally and I could push a chap or two daily until today.
It's not even me being demotivated. I've gotten back into the stories with renewed vigor. Mentally, at least. But today, the vein in my head continues to throb as I write this passage, and hurts. My eyes tire out and the constant coughs are nothing short of annoying and distracting. I'll try pushing a chapter tomorrow, or two, for Paradise and Naruto but ...
2023-01-24 12:58:03 +0000 UTC
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Title: Tofu x Bitch (1)
One bout of sleep, even if it lasted a few days, is enough to fully recharge Ja Sun. He is ready and raring to go... rail others and it doesn't even have to be Ah Yin, Bibi, and others. No.
'Again, I almost forgot about 'this' prank after so many years in the consciousness of my fourth core.'
'Wait... I was trying to avoid this but what should I name my fourth core?' Ja Sun muses for a while but refuses to spend more than necessary brain cells on s...
2023-01-23 15:29:11 +0000 UTC
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Title: The Sannin Skirmish (2)
Unlike its name— The Village Hidden by the Waterfall— Takigakure is built under the canopy of a gargantuan tree which can only be accessed through a special path past a lake. Like many, many wonders of the continent and chakra, the origins of the tree are mysterious.
Orochimaru silently stares at the thick and sturdy trunk of the tree. Easily surpassing many buildings in thickness, this beast of tree houses not only Takigakure but also a good a...
2023-01-21 23:42:59 +0000 UTC
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Title: Wanted for MORE Than a Spar (2)
No doubt, Nik is enjoying this. After all, two of his 'first' mentor are pressed to defeat him. He almost feels a little complicated to have surpassed them so quickly. One taught him the base of combat and the other taught him... strike and run. Both of which hold an incomparably profound application in combat. Especially the latter.
It's... a bitter-sweet emotion... no, just sweet. Maybe stirred with a bit of pride. Must be the evolution's...
2023-01-21 19:18:14 +0000 UTC
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Title: Plans Ahead
"What are you thinking?" Ah Yin looks rightly weirded out as Ja Sun continues to stare at her once they returned to their shared cabin. It's not just the two of them, of course. Bibi Dong can be seen humming a chipper tone in a soft voice as she continues to fix them their drink while letting a few drops of 'medicinal' poison drop into their glasses.
Of course, their beverage isn't alcohol but the refined juices of immaculate fruits yet the poison Bibi Dong ad...
2023-01-20 15:13:48 +0000 UTC
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Title: The Sannin Skirmish (1)
"Shikudo, I'm glad you could make time today," Hiruzen gives a short chuckle and looks at the perpetually tired Nara Patriarch plopping on the couch in front of the Kage without a hint of shame.
After all, Nara Clan's men are notoriously lazy. Maybe to balance out their interest in women who happen to be notoriously active.
"Well, Kage-Sama," Shikudo smiles, "It was either this or taking a nap."
"What about preparing this week's finan...
2023-01-20 09:32:23 +0000 UTC
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Title: Wanted for Spar (1)
Odd yet long cries of dog-gulls can be heard on the large Fire Nation carrier moving through the sea. Interestingly, all the soldiers of the ship wear all of their uniforms except their helmets and after they are given the reason for this disrespectful demand... they raise no more ruckus.
Unlike the higher up of the nation, the current era of Fire Nation soldiers takes no pleasure in harming others. Most of them don't. They don't consider themselves su...
2023-01-19 14:37:17 +0000 UTC
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Title: Bing Bing Wants No Imagination!
With the rigged contest ending in Hu Lana's loss, the group, or rather Oscar, soon cooks a large banquet where they are the first to fill Ja Sun in on whatever happened from the voyage of the Spirit Empire to Bibi Dong reducing the tribesmen of the five aquatic overlords and devouring Golden Crocodile to complete her first trial.
And the fact that Bibi Dong could contest with Qian Xunji through words... reveals two things to Ja Sun.
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2023-01-19 11:05:03 +0000 UTC
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