Scorching delay - will be up tomorrow on Friday
Hey folks,
I'm a little swamped and didn't finish Scorching's chapter on time. Will still be doing 3 and they'll start coming out tomorrow.
Cheers
Hey folks,
I'm a little swamped and didn't finish Scorching's chapter on time. Will still be doing 3 and they'll start coming out tomorrow.
Cheers
Hey folks,
my new story is live on RR. Some of you have already seen it and since I've put it up as beta on RR, I applied some edits thanks to the feedback I've gotten. I'll address that in a bit. For now, here's the link!
The pitch (which I'm copying from a previous post):
The vibe I'm going...
2025-08-20 16:10:53 +0000 UTC View PostMaurice saw sweat beading down Fabian’s brow as his mana coalesced within the vial, and one little glowing drop fell into the dregs of glowing liquid right as the leather-ball hit him on the nose.
Fabian reeled back with a startled yelp, then stared at Maurice as the ball floated back in his hand.
“What the hell, Maurice!”
“What? You told me to distract you so you can work on your focus!”
Fabian rubbed his nose, his glowing vial still in his hand. “I though...
2025-08-20 15:13:22 +0000 UTC View Post“I’m leaving a couple of clones and here, do you have storage? Great, then keep this one on you,” Henry said as he handed Rocky a tiny Shadow encased in bone. The kraken took the orb and popped it in his beak, where it vanished. “Are you sure you’re okay with staying?”
They were on the docks. Velistraine’s ship was out of her storage ring and her crew were finishing up loading their cargo while Henry and Maurice said goodbye to their friends. Maurice was talking to Stormso...
2025-08-19 15:25:01 +0000 UTC View PostWhat the title said! we're doing three each this week, I just need a little more time.
See you tomorrow.
2025-08-18 15:19:05 +0000 UTC View PostEthan took a moment to pay the cost of the new spell and add it to his permanent inventory. It was a modifier, as he expected from its name, and he assumed it’d work on, well, stream-like spells. So [Gout of Flames], [Water Jet], and the likes.
Ethan added the modifier to the [Water Jet] combination and grinned.
[Electrified][Pressurized][Enlarged][Water Jet]
“That’s a lot of modifiers,” he said as he floated above one of the Slavugs, and aiming with an arm,...
2025-08-15 15:16:41 +0000 UTC View PostCuriously, after spending the first few minutes floating about the harsh environment, Ethan realized it was slowly growing on him. Sure, he had to keep his mouth closed and keep the spellform that changed his eyes going, but other than his mouth and eyes, he could barely feel the burn. His scales were almost pulling on the heat of the environment, and it was as if he was soaking in a comfortable, hot tub. He hadn’t done a lot of that as he rarely has had the time, but his old gym did have a...
2025-08-14 15:20:18 +0000 UTC View PostRummaging through her pocket, Velistraine pulled out a small, golden contraption that looked oddly like a pocket watch as she kept staring up at the sky. She’d taken the ring and had splayed a map of the world on the table she’d dragged out of his home, and was now trying to approximate the directions of the three remaining orbs.
Eying the device in her hand she rotated the map a little, then tapped it while Henry peered over her shoulder, trying to see what the compass was displayi...
2025-08-13 15:25:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe closer Henry got to the surface, the deeper his exhaustion was making itself known. He was still swimming leisurely and of course, by now, most of the A-rank’s essence had been flushed out of his system. But damn was he just… tired. And no matter how much his abilities had just basically jumped in potency thanks to the Aspect levels he’d just gotten, he was just looking forward to finding a pool or bed and just conking out.
Well. In a figurative way. Nowadays, his mind just di...
2025-08-12 15:32:11 +0000 UTC View PostHey folks, still working on this week’s chapter. Will be out tomorrow am.
Laters
2025-08-11 15:05:30 +0000 UTC View PostAs the magic sunk into his chest, Ethan untied the pouch from his neck and gently pulled out the riftcore he’d just earned. Compared to the others, this one was mostly green, and while he couldn’t really smell anything but the salt and decomposing algae in the environment, he felt that if he just leaned forward a bit, he’d smell the damp, earthy smell of the jungle.
That was, before he set fire to it.
It seemed that this specific riftcore was teeming with life essence, but i...
2025-08-09 15:25:02 +0000 UTC View PostA/N: We're back! apologies for the delay. The next one will be out tomorrow on time.
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At some point, the smell of charred insects and wildfire had stopped burning his throat and nose, and all around, the tropical island burned. It wasn’t all on fire, but there were many pits smoking and blazing and whenever a breeze happened to come by, the inferno raged hotter.
Floating above the giant red bulb and watching as another small swarm of insects was spat out...
2025-08-08 15:23:40 +0000 UTC View PostHey folks! Still working on it. It’ll be ready tomorrow am.
Cheers
2025-08-07 14:19:15 +0000 UTC View PostDeciding to go all out, Henry channeled all of what he had left in the Predation Aspect, empowering the injection of his venoms and mana with all the destructive essence he had at his disposal. He could have used Dancing Shadows and Thaumaturgy as well but… the fight wasn’t over. And once it was, he couldn’t afford to be left empty handed. Just in case something else happened to show up.
The lobster screeched, enraged, and it finally realized that keeping Henry’s shapes...
2025-08-06 15:25:02 +0000 UTC View PostThe electrical bomb hit Henry like a flash-bang that basically blinded his senses, shocked his whole body, and somehow stabbed into his soul like an iron-maiden of burning, zapping spikes that went right through his physical defenses. It was incredibly painful and for an instant, Henry knew nothing but pain. Not even his Octominds could be heard from the all-consuming shock, but a moment later the world came back into his consciousness as his green, healing Octomind pumped him full of healing...
2025-08-05 15:34:56 +0000 UTC View PostSeeing the majestic, crackling lobsters quickly grow larger in his vision, Henry was reminded of the first time he’d taken one of the Riptide sharks head on. Of that first time where he’d really thrown caution to the wind and taken the risk of baring his beak at a predator, declaring himself a predator of his own. And while his nerves and hearts were singing in his ear, he could frankly say that he wasn’t nearly as terrified as he’d been back then.
But maybe he should h...
2025-08-04 15:45:05 +0000 UTC View PostA/N: As I said in the announcement, big thanks to those who read the beta and gave me feedback.
Here's the items I intend on addressing (and where)
I'll work on Miles' characterization early: basically, show a little more of his ability/and the fact that he's been looping for a bit by have him exchange a few well practised hits with the boss, then have him take a moment to snack and have a break, introduce what he wants to do earlier. In general display him a little better...
2025-08-01 17:13:18 +0000 UTC View PostIt's done but I gotta edit, and as those who have read know, they're a bit chunkier than my usual stuff. Big thanks to those who read and gave me feedback. it's gonna be the last one tomorrow, then I'm gonna clean a few things up and prolly will launch at the end of next week (and write a few more chapters)
Cheers! See you tomorrow!
“A Custodial room, you say,” Hazel hummed, peering around the notched stele and the platform below it. She leaned over, sniffing the stone then poked it with a claw. Without looking, she asked. “You sense it, right?”
“A little,” Miles said. He’d gone back to sitting down after having pulled a cushion. He was biting into some dried meat and cheese, enjoying the late afternoon sun as Hazel roamed about. In his soul, he could sense the barely perceptible current of mana wafti...
2025-07-30 22:58:11 +0000 UTC View PostThrough my dealings with many parties and guilds, I often noted a certain reserve that seemed common in Shadows, which was often set aside when they met another fellow Shadow. This odd behavior I only noticed in higher tiered individuals--by which I mean those who had passed the tenth floor's challenge and/or earned their first circle. I believe there is a secret order of some sort. One with strict rules. For example, I believe one of these rules is that under no circumstances can a Shado...
2025-07-29 21:25:13 +0000 UTC View PostTL;DR: Easy going story about an OP, pseudo-looper MC. Looking for feedback.
Link to the first three chapters; https://www.patreon.com/collection/1631849?view=expanded
Hey folks!
So I know I'm supposed to be resting, and I am, in sorts, as I'm having fun with the new story. But just in case the blurb didn't communicate what I'm going for well, here's a more informal and ex...
2025-07-29 01:20:00 +0000 UTC View PostThe scent of flowers and grass rolled out of the door as Miles stared, jaw hanging open as he stared, wide eyed, at the rolling hills of swaying, emerald-green grass that had taken the place of his old room. Wrenching his sight away from the content of the room, he looked at the doorway then at the door itself.
This is what the Custodial Key does?
Miles stared back into the wide space ahead. What was this place?
Sensing the mana seeping out, he deduced it was someho...
2025-07-29 00:57:58 +0000 UTC View PostA/N: I wanted to do chapter 3 as well today, but it won't be ready. It'll be out tomorrow, and then the intro would be done.
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The circle activated, and Miles felt the spell wrap itself around him before he was funneled through a blindingly black and purple tunnel.
He was a bit on edge, and any second now, he was going to face the Surveyors. Which he planned on completely bypassing. With how long he’d spent in the Dungeon, there was likely going to be...
2025-07-28 22:22:44 +0000 UTC View PostA/N: You know, I probably should wait until I have a bunch more content before sharing this, but I want to know what you guys think. If you got 15 mins on hand, please read it and let me know!
This the pilot of the new story. I'll try to have chapter 2 ready by tomorrow or Tuesday so you'd get a better feel for what I'm going for. Hope you like it!
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Blurb:
Miles had spent a hundred years locked in the Dungeon. And he was tired of i...
2025-07-27 21:55:16 +0000 UTC View PostThe buzzing of the angered scarabs was growing louder as the flames merrily burned the twisting, coiling roots. Ethan assumed the roots might be linked to this Rootmind he had to destroy, so he frankly didn’t feel that bad seeing them wither and burn as the options hovered ahead of him.
“I’ve got a couple of minutes before the swarm of scarabs shows up,” he said to himself, though he barely heard himself. Turning away from the burning flames around him, Ethan read the options av...
2025-07-25 15:25:00 +0000 UTC View PostThe remnants buildings and homes of Charlestown were mostly quiet as Ethan and the others jogged toward Wyldrock. A few beastly calls rang here and there, and they were even intercepted once or twice by territorial rats or raccoons, but those were very quickly taken care of.
They could have flown, maybe. But not everyone had access to wings and frankly, Wyldrock was merely around a 30 minute run away. At most. With all of their physicality being augmented by stats and levels, none of th...
2025-07-24 15:23:41 +0000 UTC View PostAfter dropping off Maurice and Velistraine back in Thalis, Henry retracted a good portion of the clones he’d spread out toward the area by having the furthest clones find the nearest ones and popping them into his Maw. It was like tidying up a bunch of Matryoshka dolls, and when he got most of them, he dismissed the rest and switched himself with one of his clone near Rocky’s old territory.
Camouflaging himself out of habit, Henry swam down and made his way toward the crevice that w...
2025-07-23 15:25:01 +0000 UTC View PostA/N: Sorry for the 5mn delay! Was fixing typos
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As Henry finished recounting how he’d met Maurice and as he carefully tiptoed about revealing the existence of the turtle shells, Velistraine swam around, exploring the area while a few younger porpoises trailed after her. Henry wasn’t sure if she was hearing them, but he did keep an eye on her just in case.
“[And that’s why we came back,” he said. “[I wanted to see if I could lo...
2025-07-22 15:31:00 +0000 UTC View PostWhat the title said. Still working on them. Laters
2025-07-21 14:46:53 +0000 UTC View PostWhen Ethan woke up from his nap, it was fully dark.
He lay on his plush bed, staring up at the beams that held up the cabin’s roof.
That was a good nap, he thought. Ethan felt fresh and rested, and while he knew he could probably sleep another half hour or so, he felt good enough to get going. Taking a few seconds to stretch, he hopped off the bed and as he scratched the back of his neck, he eyed his clothes, then looked down.
“It’s gonna be a messy day,” he...
2025-07-20 15:25:02 +0000 UTC View Post